I often joke about how irritating good copyeditors are.
Of course, I jest.
Good copyeditors are the saviors of the book world. It takes an editor to see the forest, but the copyeditors see the trees.
I am grateful for them.
Below is a sampling of the latest irritating, um, I mean, brilliant comments from my copyeditor, the savior (from The Fantastic Secret of Owen Jester).
Notice how many of the queries address the problem of repetitious words.
My bad, as they say....
And notice the comment about page 124. I was so fascinated by this one because I use that expression "A lightbulb went off" all the time. OFF? *forehead thwack* What the heck is wrong with me? Of course, the lightbulb went ON. Duh...
p.5, 2nd paragraph: “The very idea of that poor sick old man up there in the bed not able to do a thing but sleep and eat applesauce and you down here thinking up ways to make my life miserable.” Rep of “up” OK?
p.11: ‘ “Besides,” Viola said. “Frogs only eat bugs…” ‘ OK to change to: ‘ “Besides,” Viola said, “frogs only eat bugs…” ‘ (to show she’s continuing her sentence)?
p.22, 3rd para: ‘ “I know y’all are up there.” That irritating voice slithered up the ladder…’ Rep of “up” OK?
p.22, middle of page: “What’re ya’ll building?” This should be “y’all,” as throughout, so we’re fixing.
p.22, 2nd line from bottom: “…he looked at Owen in a what-now? kind of way.” C says this should be: “…he looked at Owen in a What now? kind of way.” (italicized, cap on “What,” no hyphen)
p.24, middle of page: “First of all, he said it all the time.” Rep of “all” OK?
p.26, middle of page: ‘More than anything, he wanted to say, “Where?” ’ There shouldn’t be a comma after “say” here, so we’re deleting it (‘More than anything, he wanted to say “Where?” ’). Same goes for the sentence below it, which will now read: ‘But he knew that Viola wanted him to say “Where?” ’
p.28: “And they found an old metal thing with a rusty bolt sticking out of it.” And next line: “But none of those things seemed like something…” Rep of “thing’/”things” OK?
p.29, line 6: ‘ “I mean, maybe it was farther up that way.” Travis nodded up the tracks.’ And just below: “Owen looked up the tracks.” Reps of “up” OK?
p.30, middle of page: “…the boys made a pact to go farther up the tracks the next day, if they could ditch that nosy Viola.” C says: “But they don’t go farther up the tracks the next day. Instead, they plan and start building a cage for Tooley. Breaking a pact is a serious thing for boys? Change here to something like “…the boys made a pact to go farther up the tracks as soon as they could.” Or change something later?”
p.32, middle of page: “Clatter. Clatter. Clatter.” Change here to “Clatter, clatter, clatter.” (with commas, lower case), to match usage on p.10? Or change p
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Tonight is my monthly cartoon screening at the CineFamily / Silent Movie Theatre so I’ll be spending my birthday doing exactly what I love to do: screening 35mm Technicolor film prints on the big screen to an appreciative audience. The theme of the evening is Valentine’s Day and we’re calling it Toonstruck: Cartoons In Love. To reserve tickets or more information, check the website or our new Cartoon Tuesday’s Facebook page.
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1. My new column went up last week at Bookslut and included several titles of the "coming-of-age" variety. In particular please note Tales From the Madman Underground by John Barnes, a recent Printz honor recipient that I have not heard nearly enough about around the blogosphere. Go. Read. You will fall so hard and fast for this one that you really will not believe it.
2. Other titles in the column (all of them fabulous) are: Age 14 (gritty WWI drama); Stunt (spec fic/family drama mashup from one of my favorite small presses all about missing parents, bad parents and a discovered grandparent who is a trapeze artist); Shine, Coconut Moon (or what I like to think of as an Indian twist on the Gilmore Girls, including post-9/11 drama); A Very Fine Line (manages to be about clairvoyance, home schooling, cross dressing and family secrets all at once - plus BONUS crushing on the teacher); and the Colors gn trilogy from First/Second which is as pretty as it gets and very funny and also all about growing up in Korea. Nicely done, each and every one.
3. In the midst of January chaos there was also a new issue of Eclectica. (Read here to see how my editor is still waiting on one of his adopted children to arrive from Haiti - they have been in the process for Evans for about two years now). I had three review pieces for kids up in the issue, including one on Myths, one on learning books (that you don't realize are teaching you things and thus are supposed to be boring) and one on biographies of many people I did not know much of anything about. Amazing what you can learn reviewing picture books!
4. Oh - and bonus, another review of Shine, Coconut Moon from Eclectica contributor Niranjana Iyer.
5. I just finished reading Raina Telgemeier's delightful MG graphic novel Smile. I didn't intend to do more than give it a quick glance (it showed up unrequested) but after turning just a few pages I was completely sucked into this one. It follows the real story of the author's trials and tribulations after falling and severely damaging her two front teeth at the age of 12. All through middle school she is alternately tortured and healed by a variety of dentists, orthodontists, etc. and must deal with the physical discomfort and all too familiar emotional dramarama. Nothing truly exceptional happens in this book except growing up but it's told so well that you can't resist it. In terms of plot it is a perfect MG vacation book - add a sandwich, some chips and lemonade and this the 2010 winging in the hammock version of The Penderwicks. The bonus here is the fantastic multicultural cast - Telgemeier has truly drawn Raina's school in about the most realistic manner I've ever seen with all shades of brown and beige portrayed with great fun and aplomb.
Smile is a true winner - could very well be a dark horse award winner later this year (I'm thinking the Cybils are doing to love this one.)
6. Bonus - See much more about Smile at Raina's website.
7. Cory Doctorow YA SF alert! F
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An Itch to Scratch is back! The big, daft gorilla went out of print for a short while there, but he's back - hurrah! He's only available in paperback these days, but is a snip at £5.99, I'm sure you'll agree...

As always, if you would like a signed copy with a little, hand-drawn pic of our uncomfortable, hairy friend, just drop me an email. I found good homes for both those Danish copies of Stinky! by the way, so that's great.
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I had a rousing, roaring visit yesterday at the Mallett School in Farmington, Maine! I gave a short presentation and read Hot Rod Hamster to a gym full of preschoolers through third graders. It was a joy to see how much they got into the book.
I came with Kenny from DDG Booksellers, a wonderful independent bookstore in Farmington. I arrived a little early, and Kenny showed me some great new books at the store. One book we talked about sounded perfect for my daughter's birthday, so I even came home with a birthday present!
At the school, I was greeted with lots of enthusiasm and this great display that Betsy, the school librarian, had made from the F&G pages I had sent Kenny. I felt very welcomed!
Hot Rod Hamster has "choice pages" where the child who is being read to is asked the question, "Which one would you choose?" For a big audience, every child can't tell me his or her individual choices or the book would take too long. And sometimes, small children feel left out if they don't get a turn.
So when I read to a big group, I couple the choice pages with actions (I wrote up the directions on how to do that recently and added them to the Teachers' Guide).
For example, there's a page where the children pick from an array of cars. I have the kids put their hands up like they're gripping a steering wheel when I point to the car they would choose. "Show me your steering wheel, if you would pick this car."
When I get to the page where the kids choose parts for the car, we talk about what sound some of the parts might make. After we guess a few sounds together, I say, "Let's make our engine roar! When I turn the key, make the sound your part makes!" The whole gym was roaring!
Then there's a choice page with various flames to be painted on the hot rod. I ask the kids to flicker their fingers like flames when I point to their choice.
Here are a few of the kids choosing flames. This was obviously not when I was pointing to the green with red flames choice. . . I think 90% of the kids picked that one! Which was fun because that's the one Hamster chooses. "He picked mine!" Kids are always excited when Hamster chooses the same one they chose.
It was a fun time! I especially loved when I clicked my remote and the last page flashed on the screen. The kids burst out laughing. As a former teacher myself, I'm glad the school had scheduled me last in the day, though. The kids were so into it that I think it would've been hard to settle them down for math or spelling afterward!
I answered a few questions at the end. One question really made me smile. The little boy was probably a first grader, and he wanted to know how authors work.
"So do you, um, like, go to work on Mondays?" he asked.
I think he was asking me if writers have a regular work schedule. I explained how as a writer you can choose wh
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Speaking of audio for the studio, Sidebar is a fun way to learn about the artists whose works you've been looking at. Dwight Clark and Swain Hunt do extended interviews with the likes of James Jean, Adam Hughes, Peter de Sève, Brad Holland, Paolo Rivera, Berni Wrightson, and a million others in their "Barchives".
Well, they had a slow day recently, and, having pretty much exhausted the A-list, they dug down to the bottom of the potato barrel and found me! So if you don't have anything else to do or you need something to amuse yourself while you clean brushes or cut mats, check out this link to the official Sidebar Gurney interview!. Thanks, guys! You do a very thoughtful interview, and it's a real honor. Above, watercolor sketching in Yellowstone, photo by Mr. Fujimoto.
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This whole thing started in the summer of 2008, when Neil Clarke reported the results of that year's Locus award poll, as published in the July 2008 issue of the magazine, and noted with alarm a retroactive change to the award's vote counting system. "Non-subscribers outnumbered subscribers by so much," the magazine's writers explained, "that in an attempt to better reflect the Locus magazine
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You know what I have loved most about the Zuma love-child debacle? The media is now using the phrase concurrent partners in conversations. When I first started to develop copy for the OneLove web site, I hadn’t even considered that someone you’re having an affair with could be called a multiple concurrent partner. The term is logical, when you think about it, but we usually used other phrases.
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Nothing to Envy: Ordinary Lives in North Korea by Barbara Demick
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There is no shortage of books on North Korea. Thanks to its nuclear ambitions, it attracts a surprising amount of attention for a country whose population and economy are roughly the same size as Ghana's. But little is said about average North Koreans. They come across as faceless people who obediently follow the orders of their Dear Leader, as Kim Jong Il is officially known, and his opaque inner circle. Nothing to Envy, by journalist Barbara Demick, rounds out the picture. Working in Seoul and Beijing as a Los Angeles Times correspondent, she interviewed numerous people who had fled North...
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I have heard from two different people this week that reading is in decline. One was a friend on a writing forum who just had a feeling he was right. The second was in the Guardian, so I took it slightly more seriously... for about two seconds.
The theory is, that there are so many other forms of entertainment these days, the internet, video games, text messages, Sky plus boxes, bionic arms... that there’s no time left for books. We are all assaulted from every direction by things that yearn to amuse us. Our time is no longer our own and that like-it-or-not we will find ourselves playing Resident Evil 4 for three hours a night before switching on Celebrity Come Dining on Ice. The world has gone to hell in an electronic handcart.
But, it’s not true, is it?
For a number of reasons.
First of all, I’m not convinced that there ever was a time when we spent all our leisure time reading. Yes, sure, maybe some Victorian families read to each other after dinner, but only the ones who weren’t working shifts down in the cotton mines. Certainly, when I was growing up in the 1980s in Wales, the idea that we should sit down and read aloud to each other after a meal would have been met with disbelief, then laughter. After all, Coronation Street was on.
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id have leisure time for reading, I’m not sure how many people read for fun. My guess is that it has always been a minority interest. I was definitely the only one in my junior school who did. Admittedly, it was a very small school; there were 10 people in my year. So, 10% of us (me) read for fun; All the other kids had BMXs and He-man figures and Mr Frostys and there was one wondrous day when even I put down my book because Hayley got a ZX-Spectrum and we could play Space Invaders. I never saw anyone else in my street read anything other than the Beano for fun.
Finally, most crucially, just because we have Facebook and Avatar and iPads doesn’t mean you have to surround yourself with them. If you want to read a book, well, what’s stopping you? The digital world isn’t being beamed onto the back of our eyeballs just yet! As another of my favourites shows from the 80s said, ‘why don’t you just switch off your TV set and go out and do something less boring instead?’
Like read a book.
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One of the most common things I hear from writers lately is, "You've told us a lot about what makes you say no to a book. Now tell us what makes you say yes." So yesterday I wrote that I love when I can sense the writing is authentic and true.
Today I want to take it further and identify three basic things that are immediately apparent to agents and editors when we read and evaluate your work, and they make the difference between yes and no.
Craft.
. . . . .Story.
. . . . . . . . . . Voice.
Of course, the elements are intertwined, but it's helpful to artificially separate them in order to understand why a book is either working—or not.
Craft refers to the mechanics of fiction: plot, characterization, dialogue, pacing, flow, scene-crafting, dramatic structure, point-of-view, etc. I think craft is pretty easy to teach and it's easy to learn. It's technique, the foundation upon which writers use their artistic skill to build their story. Knowing the mechanics of craft enables you to use it to create the effect you want.
Story refers to the page-turning factor: how compelling is your story, how unique or original, does it connect with the reader, is there that certain spark that makes it jump off the page? Is it sufficiently suspenseful or romantic (as appropriate)? Does it open with a scene that intrigues and makes the reader want to know more? Story comes from the imagination of the writer and is much more difficult to teach than craft (if it can be taught at all).
Voice is the expression of you on the page—your originality and the courage to express it. Voice is what you develop when you practice what we talked about yesterday—writing what you know. It's the unfettered, non-derivative, unique conglomeration of your thoughts, feelings, passions, dreams, beliefs, fears and attitudes, coming through in every word you write.
Without a doubt, whenever I read a new manuscript and fall in love with it, the deciding factor most of the time is the voice.
So how do you find your voice? You can't learn it. You can't copy it. Voice isn't a matter of studying. You have to find it. And the way to do that is by writing, and experimenting, and seeing what kind of response you get from others, and writing some more. And some more.
Putting it All Together
I receive numerous projects that show strong technique, but no originality or heart. In a way, this is good because it shows that writers are paying attention to their craft. They're taking the time and making the effort to learn to write, which is fantastic. But some of them lack a strong story, and others don’t have a compelling or unique voice. These writers just need to keep working on it.
I think some writers find craft easier, and others find story comes more naturally. A few writers have a strong voice right out of the box; most writers have to work for years to develop one.
When you read published books that don't seem to "follow the rules" of craft that you've worked so hard to learn, instead of getting mad and throwing the book across the ro
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Checking the Macmillan catalogue, I just noticed that Mokie and Bik has won two awards that I hadn't known about: Bank Street Best Children's Book of the Year;
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CCBC Choice (Univ. of WI)
A nice little discovery!
(I already knew about - and celebrated - the NYPL Book for Reading and Sharing. But it's still nice.)
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I've finally sold my first novel. Eleven books, but only one novel as such. I wrote it some years ago and nearly - nearly! - sold it several time. And each time, I got comments and re-wrote on the basis of those comments and sent it somewhere else and almost sold it.
This time it has happened. Leonie Tyle, who used to work for UQP, knows me because I actually sent her the first three chapters some years ago and she rang me - rang Melbourne from Queensland! - to say that she liked it a lot, but they didn't publish this genre and did I have anything else? I wrote something else, but it didn't work out.
Now, I got a totally unexpected email from her saying she had heard I had a novel and could she look at it? Is the Pope Catholic?!? ;-) She heard because of an as-yet unpublished interview in Magpies magazine, by Edwina Harvey, meant to promote Crime Time: Australians behaving badly, which Magpies had reviewed favourably in 2009. Apparently, she had a hole in her schedule due to a novel that had had to be put back to 2011.
Only a few days after that interview, the thing has gone through the acquisitions committee and it will be out later this year. It does need re-writes, but hell, I'd stand on my head to get this one out! I cared about it when I was writing it and had planned to get it out and re-work yet again and see if I could sell it this time.
Who would have thought the publisher would approach ME?
And just for the record, after all I have said about fantasy novels, this one is a fantasy novel, a YA werewolf tale. But it's not fat and it's not part of a trilogy! And it's inspired by a mediaeval romance. Yay!
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On October 7, 2009, INK THINK TANK: Nonfiction Authors in Your Classroom launched a FREE, searchable database of hundreds of in-print books written by 22 award-winning I.N.K. authors. The database is designed to produce lists of books for every grade level covering content mandated by National Education Standards and state curricula. Instead of feeding kids material from bland, uninteresting books, INK offers a cornucopia of delicious, appetizing titles guaranteed to nourish both reading and learning. No single book can be all things to all students, but the LISTS of books generated by our database will come close. We believe that if kids learn through high-interest, well-researched books that have been vetted for accuracy, they will perform better on the required assessment tests.
Now our big news is that INK THINK TANK has formed a partnership with Mackin Educational Resources , a well-established educational distributor with 26 years in business. Their job will be to fulfill your book orders directly from the INK Database. Currently, if you want to buy a book from our database, we include a link to Amazon.com as a convenience. Each link produces a separate browser window and there is no way to build a shopping basket if you want to purchase all the books on a list produced by the database. This will all change when the Mackin/INK shopping basket goes live at the end of February. During this interim period, if you log in to use the database, you will be prompted to update your profile. This will please a lot of our out-of -the-country users who have told us that they can't register because there was no place to enter a foreign country. Now there is.
In addition, Mackin will be featuring INK THINK TANK in its promotional materials and catalogues. All of this will help focus attention on the best in children's nonfiction and will help get it where it can do the most good--classrooms.
Kitty and Randal Heise, the owners of Mackin sent us this welcoming message:
All of us a Mackin are very excited about our new partnership with the wonderful folks at INK THINK TANK. And what a wonderful partnership it will be as we are truly in concert with one another! As the owners of Mackin, Kitty and I would like everyone to know that our dedication to education has always been on the individual teacher level. We know how important it is for educators to have great resources and to know that they can count on us to assure their value and usability.
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Widely linked-to already, but well worth a look: Toril Moi writes about the new (and the old) translation(s) of Simone de Beauvoir's The Second Sex in the London Review of Books, in The Adulteress Wife.
Some horrifying stuff about how publishers (oh, how I love and admire them ...) treat translations -- as, for example, with regards to the first translation:
It was the publisher, not Parshley, who insisted on cutting the text; in the end he cut 145 of the original 972 pages, or almost 15 per cent of the original.And, of course: "Demand for a new translation gathered force, but the publishers resisted."
And while they finally were convinced (and bribed -- they even got the French government to kick in a translation subsidy, as if they weren't earning enough off this title ...) to give it another go:
Now we have the new translation. Many will turn to it with high hopes. Is it the definitive translation? Does it convey Beauvoir's voice and style? Unfortunately not.Read on -- pretty shocking stuff (so much for quality-control on the part of publishers ...). What's sad, of course, is that this will reflect badly on all translation-endeavors, and make many publishers even less inclined to have a go at some.
Pre-order the new translation by Constance Borde and Sheila Malovany-Chevallier (or don't ...) at Amazon.com,or get your copy at Amazon.co.uk. Or get your copy of the old, radically cut version at Amazon.com or Amazon.co.uk. Add a Comment
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Hey, where do the days go??? Among other things, I've been busily prepping for a school visit tomorrow. Why is it middle-schoolers make me so nervous? I could talk to 4th graders day after day and never get anxious about it, and the younger grades are just so adorable and happy -- I want to write some books for the little ones, because school visits to them are so much fun! But start getting up to 5th... well, they're still pretty easy, but I don't know, 6th, 7th, and -- ulp -- 8th? They're too cool for me. They're actually way cooler than me. That must be the problem. So hopefully they will be interested tomorrow. It's almost midnight, and I'm as ready as I'm going to be! (I have a high school visit coming up, and that's even scarier!)
And hey, Clementine turns 6 months tomorrow! Where do the months go??? It's been a half a YEAR already?!?! Madness.
That's all. See ya later.
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In a few short days, Vancouver will host the 2010 Olympic Winter Games. What better time than this to highlight a book on one of the city’s most well known landmarks — Stanley Park. Warabe Aska’s Who Hides in the Park is a multilingual book about Vancouver’s municipal gem — a four hundred hectare urban park located on an almost island-like peninsula surrounded on three sides by the Pacific Ocean. The book explores the mysteries of the park in four different languages: English, French, Japanese and Chinese.
Aska, whose books I’ve posted on before, loves to play with hidden images. Each page presents a familiar picture of the park while at the same time, containing images of hidden animals, people and spirits. It’s always fun reading an Aska book with a child because of the pleasure one gets in finding the hidden creatures! For example, a leafy shrub scene portraying a peacock in the front reveals multiple ‘hidden’ peacocks in the the shrubs that have leaves for feathers. A forest path scene with frolicking children has embedded within it rabbits and squirrels and even two police officers on horses.
While the image is presented on the right hand page, the left hand page contains the text in the four different scripts of each language. The text is easy to read and follow, and makes for a good study of languages relevant to Canadians, especially those living on the West Coast. At the back of the book is a delightful map of the park and a list of facts about it. This is a good book to take along to the park or buy as a souvenir of a visit to one of Canada’s most delightful, natural urban treasures.
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These two are a very special couple... they are known as "dream whisperers"... ancient magical creatures very rare, indeed... and with magical powers to make things appear or dissapear... Britta makes your wishes come true meanwhile Ambrosius will make all your sadness go away... you just have to whisper at night, before going to sleep all what you want them to do for you and... it will happen! it´s true!!!
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Estos dos seres son una pareja muy especial... son conocidos por los ancestros como los "susurradores de sueños", muy legendarias creaturas mágicas raras de encontrar... y con poderes magicos para aparecer o desaparecer ciert
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Raise your hand if you'd like to win some free books?
Wow! Okay, I didn't expect everyone to raise a hand, but that's great! I love enthusiasm.
This is a contest to win Advance Reader's Copies of two new books which have been getting a lot of buzz. The contest entry info is at the end of this post, but first, here's what you'll be winning:
Suzanne Young's The Naughty List was released last week and is the first in an extremely fun series. Not only will you receive the ARC (which is a collector's item now that the book is out), you'll also get three rare Naughty List items: a postcard, a bookmark, and a sticker. Yes, a sticker! After you read the ARC, you may still want to buy an official copy of the book so you can check out the acknowledgments page. There, you'll notice that a very recognizable name has been mentioned (at least, it's recognizable if you've ever checked out this blog).
Description of The Naughty List:
As if being a purrfect cheerleader isn’t enough responsibility! Tessa Crimson’s the sweet and spunky leader of the SOS (Society of Smitten Kittens), a cheer squad-turned-spy society dedicated to bringing dastardly boyfriends to justice, one cheater at a time. Boyfriend-busting wouldn’t be so bad . . . except that so far, every suspect on the Naughty List has been proven 100% guilty!
When Tessa’s own boyfriend shows up on the List, she turns her sleuthing skills on him. Is Aiden just as naughty as all the rest, or will Tessa’s sneaky ways end in catastrophe?
The Naughty List. Is your boyfriend on it?
Lauren Oliver's Before I Fall comes out March 2nd and is going to make my life so much easier. When people say they liked my book and are looking for a similar reading experience, I always toss out way too many ideas. Now I can just say, "If you liked Thirteen Reasons Why, you definitely have to check out Before I Fall." Your free ARC, should you win it, comes signed by Ms. Oliver!
Description of Before I Fall:

What if you had only one day to live? What would you do? Who would you kiss? And how far would you go to save your own life?
Samantha Kingston has it all: the world's most crush-worthy boyfriend, three amazing best friends, and first pick of everything at Thomas Jefferson High—from the best table in the cafeteria to the choicest parking spot. Friday, February 12, should be just another day in her charmed life.
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Rosaura Sánchez and Beatrice Pita. Lunar Braceros 2125-2148. San Diego: Calaca Press, 2009.
ISBN 978-0-9843359-0-9
Michael Sedano
Just as U.S. imaginative culture begins shifting its focus from the undead world of blood-sucking vampires to yet-to-be-born sci-fi worlds, along comes Rosaura Sánchez and Beatrice Pita’s Lunar Braceros.
Standing at the forefront of this shifting literary interest, Lunar Braceros not only numbers among the very few Chicana Chicano sci-fi fantasies, the novel also flies against the wind of other-worldly super warriors and 3D special effects.
The braceros of the title, Lydia and Frank, are grunts, nothing fancy. Like their 20th century namesakes, tomorrow’s braceros are being being ripped off by their employers behind promises of building a better life. The couple labors on the moon burying nuclear and toxic wastes ferried into space from a dreadfully dystopic earth. Unlike the braceros of 1950s U.S. agriculture--who were Mexican migrants--Lunar Braceros come from the chronically unemployed residents of Cali-Texas. In their time, gente unable to support themselves within the norms of surrounding culture become wards of the Cali-Texas state and are shunted off to large prison compounds, like the Fresno Reservation where Lydia comes from.
The future, according to the authors, will be just like the past, only worse. Much worse. Political power will split along a bicoastal axis. The eastern US coast will align with Europe. The western US will align with China while extending its geographical hegemony south, gobbling up most of Mexico and points south as far as Colombia.
In one sense, the future sees the fruition of today’s drive for diversity and inclusion. Power is as likely to reside in the hands of a brown-skinned person as an anglo. Conscienticization does not accompany such access. Vendidismo does. Society’s dregs—the residents of the closely guarded reservations--are much more likely to be brown, black, and asian than not. Los de abajo—“cholos” in the language of the res--are also the typical bracero working the lunar mines and hazmat bunkers. In their world, people imprisoned on the res can be bought free if an outsider can deposit sufficient cash in a bank.
Sánchez and Pita tell their story using a variety of voices. The narrative builds upon chunks of recorded text. One moment transcribes a home movie. Another text chunk reads like a fugitive’s letter to the folks back home. Another paragraph intrudes a narrator filling in the historical blanks for the reader, as a way to sustain the central plot and build the authors’ fantasy world. Text style signals the switches, bolded sans-serif, then italics, then standard serifed font signals the various voices. In addition, each voice chunk is separated by a typographical “bug” suggesting phases of the moon from dark to full. Line art by Mario A. Chacon provides some eye candy visual variety from all those text shifts.
Lydia and Frank are members of the third set of braceros sent to the moon on multiyear contracts promising rich bank accounts upon return to earth. They stumble across a hazmat container filled with mummies, i
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Without a doubt, the hardest part for me is craft. The mechanics of structuring a plot so that it matches the lyrical, heart-pulling ideas that sparked the story in the first place. I know I need that structure in order for the story to be fully realized. It's hard. But it IS satisfying to see that that skill can grow! Trying it. Doing it imperfectly. Trying again. And then seeing progress makes me want to keep going!
Which is hardest? For me it's craft, though that's the easiest to fix, so I'm grateful.
Story concept is a cinch, it's delivering snappy, effective, efficient writing on that story that's the hard part.
Voice is me. Good, bad or otherwise, it's there and it's too late to change it.
Do you write Rachelle? Which did / do you struggle with the most?
In my case, story, I guess. I struggle most with my plots (I'm totally driven by character). One day, I'll learn it.
I struggle the most with story...I think. I think I've studied enough craft books to make any normal person's head spin right off their neck. And I've been told I have a strong voice (and it just continues to evolve the more I write). It's the story that gets me. Trying to come up with something that feels unique, original.