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1. New Voice: Shari Schwarz on Treasure at Lure Lake

By Cynthia Leitich Smith
for Cynsations

Shari Schwarz is the first-time author of Treasure at Lure Lake(Cedar Fort, 2016). From the promotional copy:

An epic adventure—that’s all Bryce wants this summer. 

So when he stumbles upon a treasure map connected to an old family secret, Bryce is determined to follow the map, even if it means risking his life and lying to his grandpa while they're on their wilderness backpacking trip. 

Bryce must work together with his difficult big brother, Jack, or they...and the treasure...may never see the light of day again.

What was the one craft resource book that helped you most during your apprenticeship? Why? 

How would you book-talk it to another beginning writer in need of help?

One of my very favorite craft resource books is Writing Irresistible Kidlit by Mary Kole (Writer’s Digest Books, 2012).

I took it everywhere with me for a few months and read through it twice as I was writing Treasure at Lure Lake. One thing I struggled with in my book was giving the brothers, fourteen-year-old Jack and twelve-year-old Bryce, the right level of interiority, as Mary Kole calls it, which is access to the character’s thoughts and feelings about what is going on.

I wrote Lure Lake from the perspective of two boys, and if you’ve ever spent a lot of time around teenage boys, they aren’t always the first to share their emotions and deep thoughts. Of course, there are some that do—I do have four boys myself—but it was definitely a challenge for me to get into each of the boys’ heads and get their internal voices just right in my story.

Mary Kole’s book teaches about the importance of interiority.

She writes, “First we should see characters in action, and then we get some Interiority to really drive home the author’s intentions…With this one-two punch we can move on with a solid understanding of what we’ve just witnessed and learned.” (p. 59)

Another lesson I learned the hard way (through many revisions and trial and error) was how to make the reader care about Jack and Bryce at the beginning of the book. If the reader doesn’t care about their journeys very early in the story, then what would be the point of reading it? On p. 90 Kole writes, “…introduce not only a great character but a character with Objectives and Motivations. Then imbue the character’s life with enough conflict, both internal and external, to really get the story engine humming.” And, of course, there has to be interiority if we are to know the character’s goal, objectives and motivations.

Shari's boys
I also listened carefully to my own boys and their friends. I listened to anything that would point to their hopes, dreams, goals and motivations. It is still a constant learning process to perfect these story elements that make or break a good book.

Another element is creating a complex, layered character. One who seems real. There are books I’ve read where I was certain that the story was biographical, in large part because the main character was so invested in the plot.

Mary Kole not only stresses interiority, objectives/motivations to create a real character, but she also helps writers by taking them through creating a character with a complex core identity full of strengths, weaknesses, virtues, roles, emotions, responses, boundaries etc… She writes on p 109, “If you can create a strong character with a strong sense of core self, then thrust him through a plot that attacks those pillars of identity, and surprise the reader with some of his choices, you will have an amazingly layered protagonist on your hands.” And she doesn’t leave it just at protagonists. She advises the same for the antagonist.

I highly recommend this book for all writers, those new to the craft and also those who are well-experienced. I can’t imagine that anyone has “arrived” when it comes to writing. I know I will be writing and revising and learning over and over again with each new book I write.

It’s a challenging but inspiring process, and I’m thankful for the inspiration found in books like Writing Irresistible Kidlit by Mary Kole.

As a librarian-author, how do your two identities inform one another? What about being a librarian has been a blessing to your writing?

Cody (Corgi) and Jasper (puppy)
Before I started writing seriously, I received my elementary teaching degree with an emphasis in literacy, and then I worked as an elementary school librarian. I had the privilege to study children’s literature in-depth for my teaching degree which carried over into being a librarian where I was able to share with children my love of reading.

I didn’t begin writing Treasure at Lure Lake until a couple of years later. I think being a librarian allowed me to see and understand in general what kids love to read. There are those books and series that a lot of children gravitate towards, but they’re not for everyone. There are always at least a few outliers who don’t follow the trends and find their own niche in books they love.

There is also a difference between books that adults want children to read and books that children themselves want to read. Yes, there is a bit of a crossover, but there are many books that children love that adults roll their eyes at or worse.

As a librarian, my job was to connect readers with books. And the only way to do that is to find books they love based on their interests, reading level, prior books read and sometimes just a bit of luck. Part of connecting children to books meant that I needed to be up to date on new books coming out. How could I gush over a book to a student if I’d never read it?

American Lakes, Northern Colorado
Reading so many children’s books also helped me in writing Lure Lake. There is such a wide variety of readers which is one of the reasons why there are so many different types of books out there.

As a new author, it can strike fear in my heart to think that some people will not like my book. Some people may judge it harshly. Of course! No book is the perfect book for every reader out there. This has helped me realize that my book will not be for everyone which is a good reality check. But there are children who identify with parts of my story, whether it is the plot or the characters or the themes…and that is who I wrote my book for.

Being a librarian allowed me to have numerous conversations with students who loved reading. They would tell me about why they loved the books they did, what they wanted to read next and how the book impacted them.

I also was able to listen as students told me about what made a book hard for them to get through or why it was boring. And, best of all, I was able to work with those students who just hadn’t found a love for reading yet. They were the children who came back, week after week, still searching for a book that they might finally like.

There isn’t anything more gratifying as a librarian than to finally find that one book that makes a reader’s eyes light up for the first time. Seeing a reluctant reader finally devour a book, especially if it’s part of a series, is an amazing process to watch and the greatest blessing of all in being a librarian.

One of my own sons struggled with reading throughout elementary school. But when I placed The Lightning Thief by Rick Riordan (Hyperion, 2005) in his hands when he was in fifth grade, he was hooked for the first time and read straight through that series and into the next.

Helping a child find the joy of reading is why I started writing Treasure at Lure Lake in the first place. I wanted to write a fun, exciting adventure that would be easy to read and would hopefully catch the imagination and hearts of reluctant readers that resonate with its story.

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2. Klutz Activity Kits | Book Review

Klutz’s book based activity kits are exceptional for providing inspiration and convenience and for allowing children to explore and uncover new interests and talents.

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3. QotW: What is Your Favorite Book on the Craft of Writing?


Happy Saint Patrick’s Day, everyone! Before you head out to that parade, why don’t you take a couple of minutes to answer the new Question of the Week?


Pretty much the only thing writers love as much as writing is talking about writing. So each week here at Adventures in YA Publishing, I post a question for you to answer. The questions cover all topics important to writers: craft, career, writers’ life, reading and books. Together we’ll become better writers by sharing tips and discussing our habits and practices.

Question of the Week for March 17, 2013:
What is your favorite book on the craft of writing?




As writers, we all probably have at least one bookshelf filled with books about how to write. Which of your craft books do you consider mandatory? To which one do you refer over and over again?

My answer: Yikes! Why did I have to ask such a hard question? How can I pick just one? Let’s see… after much deliberation, I’ve made my choice. While I value many, many craft books and reference them often, my favorite would have to be SAVE THE CAT! by Blake Snyder. Written for screenwriters, the advice and tips work perfectly for novelists too. The book is a quick and humorous read, and Mr. Snyder uses personal anecdotes and analyzes popular movies to illustrate his points, which makes them easy to learn. I reference this book dozens hundreds of times while I’m plotting my manuscripts.



I also love the follow-ups: SAVE THE CAT GOES TO THE MOVIES, which breaks down fifty well-known movies according to the STC plotting method, and SAVE THE CAT STRIKES BACK, which expands upon each point in the original book and offers even more advice. While Save the Cat isn’t the only craft book I use, it is my favorite.

The only negative side effect: my family loathes watching movies with me now because I’m always labeling the plot points according to Save the Cat!


YOUR TURN: What is your favorite book on the craft of writing? Why do you love it?


I can’t wait to go buy a whole bunch of new craft books based on your suggestions!
~Clara Kensie

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4. Happy Poetry Friday! Poem-Making!

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Howdy Campers, and Happy Poetry Friday!

PF is hosted by Sheri Doyle this week--thanks, Sheri!  Poetry Friday hosting can be a big job, folks, so make sure you help Sheri put away the chairs and stack the dishes before you leave.


I'm continuing the TeachingAuthors thread we're calling Books We Recommend On Writing which Esther began, reverently offering M.B. Goffstein's A Writer...(which I, too, have on a golden altar in my bookshelf!)  On Poetry Friday, Carmela continued with her top three books on the art and craft of writing poetry, and then Mary Ann offered her favorite one or two books in three categories: Inspirational Books, Craft Books and Craft Books for Kids.  Jill gave us three writing books packed with great information and inspiration, while Jeanne Marie focused on books about plotting...and one on writing "Hit Lit."

I'm going to recommend one of Monkey and my favorite books on writing poetry, POEM-MAKING ~ Ways to Begin Writing Poetry by Myra Cohn Livingston.
We like it because it's written for a ten year old--just about my level. For more on this book, read Elaine Magliaro's really excellent review of it on The Wild Rose Reader--I couldn't review it any better.

Myra Cohn Livingston was the "Mother of Us All," as Janet Wong writes.  She was Poetry Mentor/Mother to me, Janet, Ann Whitford Paul, Sonya Sones, Hope Anita Smith, Alice Shertle, Kristine O’Connell George, Deborah Chandra, Madeleine Comora, Joan Bransfield Graham, Tony Johnston, Monica Gunning, Karen B. Winnick, Anita Wintz, Ruth Lercher Bornstein and many, many other children's poets (Who am I missing? Let me know!). 

I have previously talked about two books I require in classes I teach through the UCLA Writers Program.  One of the books is Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott, about which several TeachingAuthors have waxed poetic in the past. 

Here's a poem from that blog post inspired by Lamott's chapter on jealousy:

ANYTHING I CAN DO YOU CAN DO BETTER
or
CAN OF WORMS
by April Halprin Wayland

Varda once told us
we were all cans on a shelf.
.
Cans of chili, kidney beans, split pea soup.
I decided that I was a can of apricot halves.
 
She said that the shelf was only one can deep
but that it stretched out forever
.
so there’s always room
for one more.
 
“You don’t have to be afraid that adding another can means 
there isn’t enough room for you,”she said.
.
“You can even help a new can
onto the shelf next to you.”
.
And she never talked
about jealousy again.
.
poem (c) 2013 April Halprin Wayland.  All rights reserved.

My brilliant teacher Barbara Bottner taught me to write about my greatest fear...because chances are, we all share it.
Monkey is writing about his fear
of writing something stupid in a blog post.

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5. Plotting and Planning

Unlike the other TAs, I don't think I have a "favorite" craft book per se. I have dozens that I have found quite helpful at particular times for particular purposes.  Recently most of my reading has focused on that thorny area of plotting, particularly internal vs. external plot.  Some texts that have been esepcially useful:
20 Master Plots and How To Build Them by Ronald Tobias
The Plot Whisperer: Secrets of Story Structure Any Writer Can Master by Martha Alderson
Steal This Plot: A Writer's Guide to Story Structure and Plagiarism by June Noble and William Noble

I want to mention another book in this vein that may not exactly qualify as a craft book but that I have been reading with great interest.

Hit Lit: Cracking the Code of the Twentieth Century's Bestsellers, by James W. Hall, provides an academic's literary analysis of 12 common qualities of 12 top-selling (adult) novels, from To Kill a Mockingbird to Gone with the Wind to The Godfather

Whether or not one is intentionally setting out to write a "commercial" novel, this is an informative and fasciating book.  Some of Hall's conclusions are certainly subject to debate, but I think I will always view popular literature (and perhaps my own ideas) through a different lens now that I've read this book. --Jeanne Marie

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6. Craft Book Connoisseur

From Where You DreamIf you’ve spent a little time on this site, you probably know that I LOVE CRAFT BOOKS! I’m not sure if this is because if I’m one of those daft people for whom information goes in one ear and out the other and I actually need to read 800 craft books to “get it”, or if I just like hearing the same things over and over again.

Of course, I jest.

In actuality, I like to read so many craft books because different authors discuss the same concepts differently. I like to get multiple perspectives. Every book you write is different, and some concepts apply more to one project than another. There is no “bible” for craft books (in my opinion). I think you need a library. A library that’s ever-expanding! And yes, it’s possible I’m a little obsessed.

I thought I’d share the favorites in my current library, so you can add to yours!

Ingrid’s Top 10 Craft Books:

(as of right now, and in no particular order)

1. From Where You Dream: The Process of Writing Fiction by Robert Olen Butler

2. Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft (Eighth Edition) by Janet Burroway

3. Story: Substance, Structure, Style and the Principals of Screenwriting by Robert Mckee

4. The Anatomy of Story: 22 Steps to Becoming a Master Storyteller by John Truby

Books 1

5. The Art of Fiction  by John Gardner

6. Aspects of the Novel  by E.M. Forster

7. A Poetry Handbook by Mary Oliver

Books 2

8. Words Overflown by Stars: Creative Writing Instruction and Insight Edited by David Jauss

9. Alone, With All that Could Happen by David Jauss

10. Reading Like a Writer: A Guide for Those Who Love Books and  For Those Who Want to Write Them by Francine Prose

Books 3

I’d love to hear what some of your favorite craft books are too. So, please share!


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7. Craft Book Connoisseur

From Where You DreamIf you’ve spent a little time on this site, you probably know that I LOVE CRAFT BOOKS! I’m not sure if this is because if I’m one of those daft people for whom information goes in one ear and out the other and I actually need to read 800 craft books to “get it”, or if I just like hearing the same things over and over again.

Of course, I jest.

In actuality, I like to read so many craft books because different authors discuss the same concepts differently. I like to get multiple perspectives. Every book you write is different, and some concepts apply more to one project than another. There is no “bible” for craft books (in my opinion). I think you need a library. A library that’s ever-expanding! And yes, it’s possible I’m a little obsessed.

I thought I’d share the favorites in my current library, so you can add to yours!

Ingrid’s Top 10 Craft Books:

(as of right now, and in no particular order)

1. From Where You Dream: The Process of Writing Fiction by Robert Olen Butler

2. Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft (Eighth Edition) by Janet Burroway

3. Story: Substance, Structure, Style and the Principals of Screenwriting by Robert Mckee

4. The Anatomy of Story: 22 Steps to Becoming a Master Storyteller by John Truby

Books 1

5. The Art of Fiction  by John Gardner

6. Aspects of the Novel  by E.M. Forster

7. A Poetry Handbook by Mary Oliver

Books 2

8. Words Overflown by Stars: Creative Writing Instruction and Insight Edited by David Jauss

9. Alone, With All that Could Happen by David Jauss

10. Reading Like a Writer: A Guide for Those Who Love Books and  For Those Who Want to Write Them by Francine Prose

Books 3

I’d love to hear what some of your favorite craft books are too. So, please share!


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8. Writing Craftily

     Asking me about my favorite writing books is like asking me about my favorite movie. I mean really, how can one have a favorite movie? I probably see as many movies as Roger Ebert.  I have to categorize my favs: war/adventure: The Great Escape; comedy: Annie Hall, Airplane, Blazing Saddles; musical: Cabaret, All That Jazz: too bloody to fit in a category: Godfathers I & II, Donnie Brasco, Good Fellas, Pulp Fiction. Also anything with Tom Hanks, Meryl Streep or Johnny Depp. (Yes, I paid money to see Joe and the Volcano in a theater.)

   When it comes to my favorite writing books, I pare it down to three categories of one or two books. (Aren't you relieved?)

   Inspirational books. Marcia Golub is a woman I would love to have as a next-door neighbor. Anyone who can write a book called I'd Rather Be Writing about how those of us without nannies, housekeepers and writing retreats in the Caribbean manage to write anyway, is someone who has my number. Lesson taken away from Marcia' book:  if you have a family and a writing career, you're always going to feel conflicted. Get over it. Oh and don't bother also trying to live the Martha Stewart life (even Martha Stewart doesn't live the Martha life without a platoon of assistants.) Alas, Marcia's book is out of print. I'd loan you mine...but then I don't loan books. (I never get them back.)

   If you have been following this blog for awhile, you probably know that my favorite book after Charlotte's Web is Anne Lamott's Bird by Bird. I re-read Bird by Bird on a continual basis. (All right...I keep it in the bathroom for moment of "unavoidable delay.") Anne is funny and profane (for those of you who object to the occasional profanity in your how-to books, this might not be for you.) Anne taught me two important lessons: 1) first drafts are always crappy. That's why there are second, fourth and seventy-fourth drafts. You aren't going to get it right the first time. 2) You don't sit down to write with an entire story arc in place, any more than you would sit down to eat one of those 64-ounce-steak joints (finish it and it's free....and you have probably just had a coronary so the point is moot). The title Bird by Bird is Anne's shorthand for writing only what you see before you right this minute. Don't worry about that elusive center section, or that fuzzy ending. Write what you see clearly now.

     Craft books.  Darcy Pattison's Paper Lightening: Pre-Writing Activities That Spark Creativity and Help Students Write Effectively was written with the middle school writer in mind. Therefore, it is perfect for me, when I find myself with big story problems I can't solve myself.  There are exercises here for developing characters, settings, plots, dull language....you name it, Darcy and Paper Lightening can solve it. I have always wanted to teach a full-year class just to have the pleasure of sharing all of Darcy's common-sense suggestions and solutions. However, since I am currently relegated to teaching six session workshops, Paper Lightening is my atlas to writing sanity.

     Craft books for kids:  The classic book I hand a student who wants a book "that tells me how to write a book" is Marion Dane Bauer's What's Your Story: A Young Person's Guide to Writing Fiction.
Although this is geared to a slightly younger crowd than Paper Lightening, it was my fiction writing bible in the Vermont College MFA program (and not just because Marion Dane Bauer was one of my four mentors.)  Unlike Paper Lightening, which is designed to be a textbook, Bauer's book can be read and understood without teacher assistance.

    My six-session workshops can be problematic. It is not reasonable to expect any student, adult or child (and I teach both) to complete more than a rough draft in such a short time. I focus on writing exercises that are fun and have the possibility of  "growing" into a larger work. Ralph Fletcher has written more books on writing with kids than I can count, but my favorite is the one he has written for teachers, Craft Lessons. Fletcher takes students Pre-K through middle school through the components of fiction writing. The exercises and lessons can be used as stand-alone lessons. Each exercise is tailored to the skills and understanding of that particular age. My kids' workshops are for grades 4-8, so this is perfect for me. And if you like this book, check out the rest of the Ralph Fletcher bookshelf; you won't be sorry.

    Tune in Wednesday when I share my favorite writing exercise that I did not learn from any of my favorite writing books!

Posted by Mary Ann Rodman

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9. TeachingAuthors indeed!



It never fails, no matter the Workshop or class I teach, no matter my students, their ages and/or experience:  I always learn as much as my students,
most times even more,
courtesy of those students.

Pictured below are seven of the eight talented writers enrolled in my Chicago’s Newberry Library Summer Workshop “The Write Place,” a facilitated children’s book writers group, who literally became my TeachingAuthors June 6 through July 18:


back row, left to right - Debra Mitchell, Nancy Lee Wells, Philippa Norman, Susan Halko, Sarah Hoban; front row, left to right - T. Kari Lewis, (Susan Bazargan in absentia) and Carrie Golus.

Became, as in my June 6 post “It’s never too late!”

We were definitely watched over. 
The uncharacteristically-small class size, the commonality of story subjects and formats, the previous Newberry Workshop attendance and overlapping work experiences made for a palpable positive group dynamic.
Two Chicago students lived but two streets apart, and didn’t even know it!

The variety of formats my students were writing demanded I fill my Summer ReadingPlate to overflowing, with picture books, early chapter books, middle grade fiction, graphic novels and Readers Theatre scripts.
It was mind-boggling, the bounty the right and successful children’s books offer when read aloud and/or showcased, then parsed for Teachable Moments.

There are always considerations when telling a goo

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10. Connecting with Your Reader through Theme part II: Theme and character

Originally published at Through the Tollbooth. Please leave any comments there.

This week we’re talking about theme, a concept not talked about nearly enough in writing, I think. In term papers (ugh) and literary criticism (double ugh), it’s discussed quite a bit. But among writers, not enough. On Monday I defined theme as the answer to the following question: What is your story’s truth? The answer to this question lies in the subtext of your characters’ actions, their dialogue, thoughts. In other words, within your characters themselves.

Characters are a reader’s anchor in a story. They drive everything, including theme. If a reader does not connect with or feel for acharacter at all, a writer has lost the chance to connect with her reader. Any craft book on writing will teach a writer how to create convincing characters. And once fully realized, these characters can breathe life into your story, and into your reader as well. Ultimately, it is they who will bring the theme to light.

Take, for example, J. D. Salinger’s Holden Caulfield. I reread The Catcher in the Rye often, and each time I fall in love with Holden’s voice all over again. It’s his combination of sharp wit and cynicism so deeply ingrained, it’s almost palpable. Holden is funny, straightforward. He speaks his mind, despite the consequences.

Therefore, it is easy to be enchanted by Holden and his story, to laugh hard enough to miss what is beneath the surface. This is exactly what happened when I read TCITR in the tenth grade: I thought it was funny when Stradlater sat on Holden’s chest and, thanks to Holden, I went around calling everyone a bastard for a solid two weeks. Ah, the ignorance of youth. I decided to read Salinger’s masterpiece again when I was 20, paying more attention now to Holden’s voice, his tone, and there I found sadness and a long dealt-with pain I was oblivious to as a tenth grader.

Dude, Holden is depressed!

He’s angry!

He’s breaking the $@*& down!

It was when I realized all of the above that Holden ceased to be a character for me and instead became a real person, someone I cared about and to whom I—and millions of other people—could relate. Were we as readers unable to do either of these things, Holden’s journey would mean nothing to us. It is because we are able to feel for Holden that we are able to feel with him, and ultimately understand the greater purpose of his story.

Therefore, when we come to the second to last page of The Catcher in the Rye and discover that Holden has been in a mental institution for the duration of the novel, his story ceases to exist outside and instead becomes a part of us. We feel this moment. And the realization is powerful. All this time we have spent with Holden, we have in fact been witnessing his breakdown. At once, the subtext comes alive and the themes of self-alienation and loneliness come to light.

In his book on writing fiction, From Where You Dream, Pulitzer Prize-winning author Robert Olin Butler compares this moment in literature to “omnisensual cinema,” the experience we have during a film in which what is on the screen ceases to exist as something separate from ourselves. The moment when feeling and meaning engulf us simultaneously and the narrative moves from outside to in.

11. The Bridge Between Us: Connecting with your reader through theme

Originally published at Through the Tollbooth. Please leave any comments there.

This week I’d like to talk about theme. Like most of you, I spend a lot of time writing, thinking about writing, and discussing writing, which means I’ve had countless conversations about plot, character development, suspense. There was even one very long—and surprisingly tense—conversation about the appeal of says Teresa vs. Teresa says. Well, Teresa says we writers don’t discuss theme enough, though I’m kind of obsessed with it. Like, I wrote my masters thesis on it at Vermont College, from which I will crib generously this week because, as it turns out, my brilliance is finite (says Teresa, sarcastically).

But back to theme–What exactly is it? Well, I’ll first tell you what it is not. Theme is neither a message nor an agenda. These elements exist on the outside of a novel, pushing and pulling the narrative in whichever direction they sees fit to fulfill their purpose. Theme, on the other hand, is a natural part of the inner-workings of story, growing organically from the elements of fiction. In his craft book The Art of Fiction, author John Gardner writes,

Theme, it should be noticed, is not imposed on the story but evoked from within it—initially an intuitive but finally an intellectual act on the part of the writer. The writer muses on the story idea to determine what it is in it that has attracted him. . . . He toys with various ways of telling his story, thinks about what has been said before . . . broods on every image that occurs to him . . .trying to figure out—before he writes, while he writes, and in the process of repeated revisions—what it is he really thinks . . . Only when he thinks out a story in this way does he achieve not just an alternative reality or, loosely, an imitation of nature, but true, firm art—fiction as serious thought (Gardner, 177–78).

In this way, theme is as much part of the writing process as characterization and word choice. It is the end result of what a writer has to say, the answer to one question: What is this story’s truth?

The answer comes from within. Theme should never be stated outright. It exists in subtext, lurking in the meanings of the words we choose, the things our characters say, their actions, even the silence on the page. Subtlety is key. Subtext should exist in an ethereal form. If the story is the body, the subtext is its soul.

And what, pray tell, is subtext? It is what is not on the page. A character may cast a wayward glance, or reprimand with a short, sharp word. The subtext is the why, the motivation and meaning that a reader must discern for himself with the clues provided. Of these elements from reality that contribute to the creation of subtext, Wallace Stegner writes, in his brilliant craft book On Teaching and Writing Fiction, “the parts are reassembled in such a way that the architecture, the shape of the action, is meaningful. And if that fiction is good enough, that meaning will stretch, [and] the building will throw a shadow longer than itself” (6).

I like to think of a novel as two stories. There is the story that is visible, told entirely through the words on the page. And then there is another story, more difficult to discern, made up of what lurks beneath the surface, driven by what is left out, insinuated, and implied. Aristotle called this the metaphysical story, and an actual story cannot exist without one. Imagine then that a work of fiction is a lake, and on either shore sits the reader and the writer. The actual story is the bridge between the two. The metaphysical story—the theme—is the

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12. Time to Get Crafty: Five Craft Books Not to Miss!

As a writer I’m always pushing myself to improve my craft. After all, as a writer in the big fancy publishing machine, it’s the only power I actually have: be the best writer I can be! It’s empowering to know this is the one place where effort and results are self-made. So in the spirit of inspiring you all to become the best writer you can be, I thought I’d share a few craft books that have really made an impact on my writing journey in the last few months.

1) The Art of Fiction by John Gardner

A classic for any aspiring or working writer, The Art of Fiction covers the gamut of writing techniques from the fictive dream, the importance of character, and point-of-view, to structure, plot, and profluence (and I’ve only hit the tip of the iceberg). Some dislike Gardner’s “God-like” and cocky attitude, but if you’re willing to ignore his gravitas and listen to the finer points there is really a lot to learn from this book. I find myself constantly referring back to it for advice and instruction, not to mention the great exercises outlined in the back of the book.

2) From Where You Dream by Robert Olen Butler

Robert Olen Butler approaches writing from the state of unconscious creation, and boldly states that if you are thinking about your writing then you are not really tapping into the heart of your work. From Where You Dream is a compelling book on how the craft of writing is an act of creation done in the subconscious, a world of sensuality and deeply felt emotion. Each chapter is a near-transcription of his writing lectures (including discussion of student work) and pushes the boundaries of how one could (or should) work. Some people will really connect to these ideas, and others will find it difficult. Those who like to write from intuition will really enjoy this book.

3) Alone With All That Could Happen by David Jauss

For those who have a strong foundation in writing craft and are looking to push themselves into new territory David Jauss’ book Alone With All That Could Happen is the craft book for you. A series of essays on writing craft, Jauss challenges common craft concepts  and pushes the reader (and writer) to really dig deeper. He claims that first person point of view can be omniscient, or that epiphanies in books are over rated to the point that they ruin perfectly good stories. He takes the common craft wisdom andputs it to the test with insight and examples. A must-read for anyone interested in taking the next step with their work.

4) Steering the Craft by Ursula Le Guin

If you are new to writing (or want a nice brush-up) Le Guin’s Steering th

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13. The Best Description Exercise…Ever?

Originally published at Through the Tollbooth. You can comment here or there.

I recently read Tuck Everlasting for the first time—blasphemous for an author of books for children, I know—and let me tell you, I was absolutely blown away by Natalie Babbitt’s gift for description in each and every scene. And almost instantly depressed at my inability to do the same, as evidenced by my use seconds ago of the overused term “blown away.” How would Natalie Babbitt describe the emotion of being blown away? Well, I’ll tell you:

Into it all came Winnie, eyes wide, and very much amazed. It was a whole new idea to her that people could live in such a disarray, but at the same time she was charmed. It was . . . comfortable. Climbing behind Mae up the stairs to see the loft, she thought to herself: “Maybe it’s because they think they have forever to clean it up.” And this was followed by another thought, far more revolutionary: “Maybe they just don’t care!”

Natalie Babbitt on cleaning house.

Winnie had grown up with order. She was used to it. Under the pitiless double assaults of her mother and grandmother, the cottage where she lived was always squeaking clean, mopped and swept and scoured into limp submission. There was no room for carelessness, no putting things off until later. The Foster women had made a fortress out of duty. Within it, they were indomitable. And Winnie was in training.

On a road. And cows:

The road that led to Treegap had been trod out long before by a herd of cows who were, to say the least, relaxed. It wandered along in curves and easy angles, swayed off and up in a pleasant tangent to the top of a small hill, ambled down again between fringes of bee-hung clover, and then cut sidewise across a meadow.

What I would give to be able to write descriptions like these. Oh, what I would do! Since I can’t sell my soul (can I?), I settled for the next best thing: I read as many craft books as my schedule would allow, in search of the best exercise on creating descriptions I could find. And that exercise comes from Michael Seidman’s book simply titled, Fiction.

This is an exercise designed to make you as a writer use all five of your senses to craft one description. First think of a scene, any scene. Then—and brace yourself for this—write it six times. The first five times, write it using only one of the five senses each time: smell, taste, touch, sight, sound. Then, the sixth time, pull the strongest lines from each of the five one-sense descriptions and lace them together into one lush quilt of narrative beauty. It’s that easy!

No, it’s not, but it’s a step for any writer who struggles with description like I do. And, honestly, what writer doesn’t? Of course, I’m not going to write each description in my novel six times—nor should you. But let’s just say we use this exercise once in a while, and maybe the descriptions we create will be those that remain with our readers long after the last page is turned.

–Teresa Harris

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14. The Teacher as Student, and a Giveaway Reminder

I love learning. If I had unlimited resources, I'd be a full-time student for the rest of my life. Instead, I'm a teacher, which is the next best thing.

[Speaking of teachers, if you're a teacher, librarian, or homeschooling parent, be sure to read the end of this post for an update on our current giveaway contest. And if you're not a teacher, librarian, or homeschooler, please help spread the word to those who are.]

For me, being a teacher is as much about learning as it is about teaching. To prepare for my classes, I not only reread the assigned text, I also research supplemental resources. Currently, I'm reading Stephen King's On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft. I don't read horror stories, so I'm not a fan of Stephen King's fiction. However, I've heard wonderful things about this craft book for years. Ten years, to be exact, as the 10th Anniversary edition came out this past July. So I decided it was about time I read it.

I have to say, the timing is perfect. I'm currently teaching a six-week "Craft & Critique Workshop." The first aspect of craft I discuss in the workshop is characterization. Last night I shared with my class two things about characterization that I learned from King's book:
“Everything I've said about dialogue applies to building characters in fiction. The job boils down to two things: paying attention to how the real people around you behave and then telling the truth about what you see. You may notice that your next-door neighbor picks his nose when he thinks no one is looking. This is a great detail, but noting it does you no good as a writer unless you’re willing to dump it into a story at some point.”
And,
"Skills in description, dialogue, and character development all boil down to seeing or hearing clearly and then transcribing what you see or hear with equal clarity . . . ." 
These aren't exactly new ideas for me. I received similar instructions from my teachers at Vermont College. But sometimes, I forget. That's why I consider myself fortunate to be a teacher--it forces me to remember, and it prods me to "practice what I preach."

Last week, Esther posted about Signature Quotes. The following is another quote from Stephen King's On Writing. It's rather long for a Signature Quote, but it really spoke to me when I read it:
     "You can approach the act of writing with nervousness, excitement, hopefulness, or even despair – the sense that you can never completely put on the page what’s in your mind and heart. You can come to the act with your fists clenched and your eyes narrowed, ready to kick ass and take down names. You can come to it because you want a girl to marry you or because you want to change the world. Come to it any way but lightly. Let me say it again: you must not come lightly to the blank page.
     I’m not asking you to come reverently or unquestioningly; I’m not asking you to be politically correct or cast aside your sense of humor (please God you have one). This isn’t a popularity contest, it’s not the moral Olympics, and it’s not church. But it’s
writing<

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15. The Unique and Unusual: 10 Novelty Books and Craft Books/Kits

Holiday unique books


Magical Menagerie, by Junzo Terada, Chronicle Books, $24.95. Build 20 enchanting animals with this unique kit of 3-D sculptures by Japanese artist Terada. Punch out paperboard pieces and fit them into slots to make whimsical stand-alone designs, including a lion with a heart-shaped mane, a deer holding its baby and songbirds sitting in a tree. Envelopes are included for mailing or storing designs. Terada's pattern and color combinations are spectacular!


The Encyclopedia of Immaturity: Volume 2, by The Editors of Klutz, Klutz, $19.95, ages 8 +, 200 pages. In this hysterical followup to 2007 manual of immature pranks and skills, The Encyclopedia of Immaturity, Volume 1, the editors of Klutz present an array of silly how-tos, from making a toiletgram to playing indoor Frisbee golf, and explore all manner of taboo subjects, including the truth about wedgies and the art of picking diary locks. (Couple this with the first volume and your 10-year-old boy will be deliriously happy.)


Made by Me, by Jane Bull, Dorling Kindersley, $14.99 respectively, ages 4-8 +, 48-62 pages. Girls will squeal with delight when they flip through this charming book of crafts with colorful tutorials that are easy to follow. Dress up a plain t-shirt with embroidered flowers, felt cupcakes and a button-trimmed collar or hand sew a two-sided doll with embroidered faces. Pair this with Annabel Karmel's Cook It Together (DK, $12.99) for a wonderful gift set.


Eragon's Guide to Alagaesia, by Christopher Paolini, Alfred A. Knopf, $24.99, ages 9 +, 32 pages. Wannabe dragon riders will delight in every page of this magical guide to the mysterious land of Paolini's Inheritance Cycle series by the creators of Dragonology. Explore a map of Alagaesia stolen from the elves' library, ink drawings of shape-shifting cats and wind-vipers and the training regimen of dragon riders, and touch the scarlet gem that lives in the chest of dragons.


My Little Fire Truck, Simon & Schuster, written and illustrated by Stephen T. Johnson, $19.99 ages 4-8, 16 pages. A wonderful segue into child play, this interactive book by Caldecott Honor-winning author Johnson encourages little ones to practice telling time and move sturdy parts on a fire engine: lift a gas nozzle and fuel the truck, test tire pressure, put away fire tools, start the ignition and steer, turn the siren light and ring the fire bell. Johnson is the author/illustrator of Alphabet City and My Little Red Toolbox.


Open Me Up: Everything You Need to Know About the Human Body, Dorling Kindersley, $24.99, ages 9-12, 256 pages. Open Me Up makes a trip through the human body feel like a walk through an amusement park with exciting

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16. Princess Tea: Parties and Treats for Little Girls


Sarlin, Janeen A. with Noelle Shipley. 2009. Princess Tea: Parties and Treats for Little Girls. Photographs by Sheri Giblin. Chronicle Books. (Cook and craft book)

Technically, this one is more for parents than young readers. But it's for parents of young readers, so I'm going to share it with you here. What is it about? Creating parties for young girls. In this case, themed-tea parties. The themes are "Lotus Princess Tea" (China), "Underwater Princess Tea" (South Sea Islands), "Cowgirl Princess Tea (Southwest United States), "Fiesta Princess Tea" (Mexico), "Country Garden Lavender Princess Tea" (France), "Indian Princess Tea" (India), "African Princess Tea" (Africa), and "Fairy Princess Tea" (fairyland). Each theme offers suggestions on how to decorate, suggestions on dressing up, recipe suggestions, and craft and activity suggestions/instructions. Some activities are more complex than others.

I probably would have enjoyed this one more if there had been more photographs. I'd have liked to seen photographs for each recipe and each craft. (That could be me, but I like to see what it is supposed to look like. That way I can judge how I'm doing. Also for recipes, food almost always looks more appetizing, more appealing, if you can see it. Exceptions for this rule do exist, however.)

© Becky Laney of Young Readers

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17. Memoir and Remembering

Craft books can be a huge help, but I don’t always read them straight through. I often find some nugget that inspires me enough to make me go off to write instead. I figure the more helpful the book, the less I have to read, and I save the rest for later.

This semester, I’m teaching a class on writing memoirs. As I usually do when I’m preparing to teach, I checked out a stack of books from the library. A couple of them are familiar, reliable resources—I’ve read them before and found them useful: Natalie Goldberg’s Old Friend from Far Away: The Practice of Writing Memoir and Writing the Memoir: From Truth to Art by Judith Barrington. Others were new to me, and I enjoyed exploring the subject from their varied points of view.

Even if you are not writing a memoir, such books can help in several ways:

  • by providing a glimpse into another writer’s approach
  • by reminding you that writers keep writing in spite of obstacles
  • by bringing up true stories that can inspire leaps into fiction, memoir, or something else
  • by sharing exercises that might help you move forward
One book grabbed my attention not only for its playful tone but also for its helpful format: Thinking About Memoir by Abigail Thomas. Instead of suggesting exercises and then giving examples of how they might be done, Thomas tells stories first and then provides writing prompts on topics that flow from the stories.



She writes about seeing a buzzard far away on a beach. After watching it awhile, she decides to walk up for a closer look and discovers a stick with a plastic bag tangled around it. Her instruction is to write about mistaking something for something else.

She says her sister suggests that “a good way to get going on memoir is to write your will. You have to decide who gets all your treasures, and this involves looking at them, and remembering where you found them.” Her assignment: write about your treasures.

She describes a trip with her sister after they had each been given a box of six truffles. “The tiny print said two pieces contained 310 calories,” she writes. “We were sitting on the bus headed downtown, quietly doing our calculations: Judy was dividing by two and I was multiplying by three.” This story cracked me up; the assignment that follows it is to write about a time when you recognized a difference between you and another person.

In the spirit of Thinking About Memoir, I’m including a memory from my childhood and a choice of writing prompts that stem from it.

Writing Workout: Begin with a Memory

One Sunday morning when most of my family had gone to church, I decided to make everyone breakfast. My father was asleep upstairs. I remember scrambled eggs and bacon, so I must have been old enough to use the stove on my own.

I was thinking about how surprised my family would be when I heard a loud crash outside. I ran out and saw a car halfway up our front steps.

My father came out and discovered that the driver was a woman whose husband had recently died. She was on her way to the cemetery with a vase of flowers on the seat next to her. When the flowers started slipping off the seat, she reached to grab them and lost control of her car.

As soon as he found out she was not hurt, my father told her not to worry. He would fix the steps himself. I don’t remember the woman, the car, whether anyone called the police, or what happened when the rest of the family came home, but I do remember his kindness.

Assignment:

Write about a time when you were home alone.

or

Write about someone being compassionate to a stranger.

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18. 1, 2, 3 I can collage!


Luxbacher, Irene. 2009. 1 2 3 I Can Collage! (Starting Art series). Kids Can Press.

This book is part of a series, the Starting Art series. Earlier titles include 1 2 3 I Can Draw, 1 2 3 I Can Paint, 1 2 3 I Can Sculpt. Granted I've only read this title--1 2 3 I Can Collage--but if the other titles are anything like this one, I must say that they'd all be must-haves for the classroom, the library, and the home.

(I think they'd be great to have if you homeschool your children. They might make you feel more comfortable, more confident, in introducing art to your children's day without feeling overwhelmed because you yourself are not an expert.)

We have within the book step-by-step projects. Everything sounds so simple, so straightforward, so direct...and so fun.

I love the note she includes for parents and teachers:

3 Tips to ensure a good collage experience every time

1. Use inexpensive materials and make sure your young artist's clothes and the work area are protected from spills. This way it's all about the fun, not the waste and the mess.
2. Focus on the process rather than the end product. Make sure your young artist is relaxed and having fun with the information instead of expecting perfection every time.
3. Remind your young artist that mistakes are an artist's best friend. The most interesting collage ideas and paper combinations are often discovered by mistake.

© Becky Laney of Young Readers

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19. Books at Bedtime: Fairy Tales

frogprincecontinued.jpgIt’s been a while since we read any fairy tales but our local library has recently added a goodly number of fairy tale books to its collection so we thought we’d delve in. We came home with an armful… some of them are traditional, others are modern (re)tellings or parodies.

I knew that Jon Scieszka’s The Stinky Cheese Man and Other Fairly Stupid Tales and The Frog Prince Continued would both go down well – they are funny and wittily illustrated (by Lane Smith and Steve Johnson respectively); and both depend on the kind of superior knowledge that children delight in - all the stories would be somewhat lost in the telling if you didn’t already know the originals.

losthappyendings.jpgThe Lost Happy Endings by Carol Anne Duffy and illustrated by Jane Ray was visually irresistible. Duffy’s rich eloquence also lives up to all expectations: but a word of caution. Although this is a new story, she takes the fairy tale genre back to its grass-roots level. No wishy-washiness here. The retribution meted out to the thieving witch is absolute. It is more suitable for slightly older children: and should be cherished for that, for it sometimes seems that the older children get, the harder it is to find beautifully illustrated picture books for them. Certainly both my children relished both the pictures and the wonderful, descriptive language and each bore the book off to read independently after I’d read it to them.

rapunzel.jpgThere were several anthologies of traditional fairy tales to choose from and I have to admit I was slightly dubious as to how my boys would take to several nights in a row of traditional “happy-ever-after” tales: they assure me every time romance is mentioned that all that stuff is yeuch… But of course, I had fallen into the trap of equating fairy-tale with romantic and there is so much more to the traditional stories than that. Anthea Bell’s name is a talisman for me so her translation of Henriette Sauvant’s selection of Rapunzel and other Magic Fairy Tales was the obvious choice (helped by the surreal cover illustration)– and has been bourne out. We have so far enjoyed stories we know well, as well as come across some new to us all.

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20. Jon Scieszka & Odyssey award-winner Jazz

As luck would have it, Jon Scieszka visited my school district today. So I grabbed a chance to have the newly-appointed “Ambassador for Young People’s Literature” pose with Jazz, by Walter Dean Myers. Here's what Jon said, “Audiobooks are great! I love audiobooks – they are perfect way to have a story told aloud, and are a great way for kids, especially those who need a little help, to experience good literature.” I know Live Oak Media, the producers of Jazz, will be glad to know that Jon will be playing their outstanding title on his CD player tonight!

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21. Jon Scieszka--Children's Ambassador extrodinaire


If the UN can have a goodwill ambassador, then why not children's literature? In a super-cool move, The Library of Congress has appointed Children's Author Jon Scieszka as the first National Ambassador for Young People's Literature. He doesn't have the status of Children's Laureate, a title which is used in the UK. But he will spend the next two years stumping for reading. The LC have made a great choice. His off-beat sense of humor, and his dedication to keep boys reading in particular(check out his Guys Read site) works in his favor. Scieszka understands that an emphasis needs to be placed on reading as much as on books. Not every kid wants to read War and Peace (Yes! I was the exception!) But most kids want to have fun. Scieszka wants to connect kids with fun things to read. All the power to him.

Some Scieszka faves:

Cowboy and Octopus (a NJFK Book of the Week)
The Time Warp Trio series (a great choice for kids looking to move away from Captain Underpants)
Seen Art?
The Stinky Cheeseman and Other Fairly Stupid Tales

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22. National Ambassador for Young People's Literature

I'm a little late to the announcement of this, but, just in case you didn't know it yet, Jon Scieszka has been named the National Ambassador for Young People's Literature.

Jen Robinson has a couple good posts about this, here and here.

Congratulations, Jon! Good luck with this new role.

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Recent Children's Publishing News (just in case you haven't seen it)...

  • Christy Ottaviano Books. Joining the likes of Richard Jackson, Wendy Lamb, Megan Tingley and others, Henry Holt's Christy Ottaviano has been promoted to editorial director of her own eponymous imprint, Christy Ottaviano Books, publishing "literary and commercial picture books and fiction for all ages. Books that encourage imagination and free-thinking, foster a sense of family and community, target the feelings of children, and speak directly to children’s interests as they explore various milestones. Books that are reassuring as well as those that challenge readers--intriguing books for inquisitive kids."
  • Jon Scieszka's new post. Children's book author (and funniest author I've ever seen in person) Jon Scieszka has been named the U.S.'s first national ambassador for young people's literature by the librarian of Congress, James Billington. He'll act as "an evangelist for reading." This is a deserving post for Scieszka--check out his Guys Read site, a web-based literacy program to help boys find stuff they'd like to read.

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24. Perfect!

Jon Scieszka has been named the first National Ambassador for Young People's Literature.

Great article in the New York Times profiling Scieszka and his new role.

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25. U.S. Ambassador for Young People’s Literature

Jon Scieszka (”it rhymes with Fresca”) was declared the first ambassador for Young People’s Literature, today. The position is the children’s book equivalent of the Library of Congress’s poet laureate program. The new role will entail promoting the importance of reading by reaching out to parents, teachers and children everywhere and, in particular, Scieszka says, “to children who are considered reluctant readers.” Author of many children’s books, including the very successful Time Warp Trio series, The True Story of the 3 Little Pigs and Stinky Cheese Man and Other Fairly Stupid Tales, Scieszka is also the founder of Guys Read, a literacy program and website aimed at encouraging boys to read.

What should we expect from a guy whose Little Red Hen questions the presence of the ISBN number in the volume she appears on, and who allows her, later on, to be eaten by the giant from Jack and the Beanstalk?… Well, lots of gutsy energy to impart momentum and backbone to his important mission.

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