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1. Terrific Pep Talks

energyEven if you didn’t participate in this year’s November National Novel Writing Month, you can still have access to their NaNoWriMo pep talks that were sent throughout November to participants. Many of them are excellent!

Here’s what it says on their website: “We recruited an all-star team of authors to share their advice and thoughts on writing. Their pep talks will be emailed to participants throughout November. We hope their insight and encouragement help you on your way!”

Here you’ll find pep talks from some of the finest and best-selling writers of our time. Some are serious nuts-and-bolts advice talks while others are tongue-in-cheek funny. Either way, they’re an encouragement to those of us who are challenged on a regular basis with our writing.

Here are a few quotes to whet your appetite:

From Chris Baty: “Incite change. If your story is losing momentum, juice it up by inflicting some major changes on your characters. Crash the spaceship. End the marriage. Buy the monkey. Change is scary because we have to figure out what comes next. But feeling afraid is ten times better than feeling bored, and your book will benefit from your risk-taking. Go big this week! You won’t regret it.”

From Aimee Bender: “What we hold in our heads before we write is RARELY in sync with what shows up on the page, and if I were standing and saying this in front of you with a megaphone, I would say this next part especially loud and clear: The Page is All We Get. What shows up on the page? Well, that is your writing. The full-blown perfectly-whole concept you may have in your head? Is just thought.”

From Holly Black: “Here are some things I wish someone had told me when I was writing my first book. I want to say them to you in the hopes they will help and encourage you. Even if you’ve heard them before, it doesn’t hurt to be reminded.” And then she follows this with seven tips that are right on the money.

From Lindsey Grant: “You’ve been carrying around a story for a while now and you finally started writing it. Getting started is hard enough, but then you went on to write for a full week, bringing your story to life and making your noveling dream a reality. You’re well on your way, writer, and you have come so far already! Don’t let your inner editor convince you that this isn’t worth your time, or that you should start over, or-even worse-that you should start over some other time. For this novel there is no “later.” There is only now.”

From John Green: “All of us harbor secret hopes that a magnificent novel will tumble out of the sky and appear on our screens, but almost universally, writing is hard, slow, and totally unglamorous.”

From Mercedes Lackey: “I can’t think of anything more intimidating than a blank page. Especially the firs

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2. 10 Steps to Improving your First Draft

Every now and then I attend workshops in which I am forced to write for three minutes from a prompt that draws virtually no story from me.  Such prompts can take the form of a bunch of unrelated words that should never appear in the same novel let alone on the same page like “chrysalis, gun powder, athlete’s foot, schizophrenia and acidophilus.” Or they can be an unlikely premise such as, “A fire ravishes your apartment building. You are the only survivor and are forced to take custody of your deceased neighbor’s pet aardvark.”

I write my heart out.  I really do.  For three full minutes, I am convinced that my banter with my new aardvark is pitch perfect.  That I’ve made a strong case for an OTC athlete’s foot medication (made from gun powder, acidophilus and the chrysalis of a rare African butterfly), which has been discovered to cure schizophrenia.  I think, “See Kirsten – you should push yourself more often.  Look how talented you are!”

And then we have to read aloud.

This is the point when it becomes obvious that my classmates have seen this prompt before – that I’m the only one who didn’t cheat.  Because what they read is good.  They have fresh imagery, innovative symbolism and three-syllable verbs.  Some of them receive applause.  I, on the other hand, get a reaction only from my teacher.  And it’s usually delivered two octaves above her normal voice.  “…Interesting….OK…Who has another?”

I wish I could blame the prompts.  But the truth is, my first drafts have historically been terrible.  That is, until I attended a prompt-free workshop that suggested the Rule of Ten (which I believed was first created by John Vorhaus, but lots of people have ripped it off as I’m doing now, so I can’t be sure).

The idea is that for every one great idea a writer has, he has nine crummy ones.

Your first several ideas are usually cliché — you’ve plagiarized from books or movies without even knowing it.  So every time you have to make a decision, write out ten ideas.  Your only decent idea should be somewhere near the end.

I am not kidding when I say this saves me hours of revision in each scene.  I use this technique on almost every page to decide anything from defining character motivation to determining who goes in a scene to choosing setting.

Do you have any tricks to write a better first draft?  Please share it in the comments.

P.S. I know this is technically only one technique and not ten as the title insinuates (but does not promise if you read closely!).  But Barbara of Writing Time just taught me that the easiest way to get a reader’s attention is to put a number in the headline and I wanted to try my new trick.  The number one just didn’t impress.  Question is – did it work?


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3. 2nd Annual International Plot Writing Month -- Day One

Welcome to the 2nd Annual International Plot Writing Month

Today begins a month-long opportunity to craft a draft of your writing into a story.

If you participated in NaNoWriMo, first take time to congratulate yourself! You've done what many have talked and dreamed of doing -- you've written an entire story from beginning to end. Celebrate!

Next, craft the project into a coherent piece worthy of publication. 

During December, take the steps needed to analyze what you've written and brainstorm for an effortless draft two in January '10. 

Re
vision your project before actually rewriting the manuscript. (This also works for writers without a first draft. Whether you merely have an idea for a story, a few chapters or scenes, just tweak the assignments to make them work for wherever you are in the process.)

Everyday this month, I'll provide plot tips and tricks and inspiration.

No writing required.

Following are a couple of caveats for our month together:

1) Do NOT show anyone what you've written so far. The first draft of any writing project is considered the generative phase. At the end of the generative phase, a writer is often faced with a manuscript full of holes and missteps, confusion and chaos. This is part of the process in that editing and/or an unbridled internal critic in the generative phase risks stifling the muse, which often results in stagnation.

Your first draft is a fragile thread of a dream. You know what you want to convey, well, maybe and sort of. Few writers can adequately communicate a complete vision in the first draft of a story, especially when writing by the seat of your pants. Allow others to read your writing now and you risk losing energy for your story and becoming overwhelmed by the task ahead of you.

2) Do NOT read what you've written. I know, I know. You're anxious to read your hard work. However, the longer you give yourself before actually reading your first draft, the better. If you read your manuscript now, you're still close enough to the work that you'll automatically fill in the gaps. Give yourself distance first. This allows you to read your work more objectively later.

Let's get started!

By now, you know who the protagonist of your story is. Stories are about character transformation. The character who is transformed by the dramatic action in your story is your protagonist. Fill out the following for your protagonist. If the major antagonist in your story is a person, fill out the following for that character as well. If you have more than one point of view character, fill out the form for that/those characters, too.

CHARACTER EMOTIONAL DEVELOPMENT PROFILE

Character’s name:

Dramatic Action Plotline
Overall story goal:
What stands in her way:
What does she stand to lose:

Character Emotional Development Plotline
Flaw:
Strength:
Hates:
Loves:
Fears:
Dream:
Secret:

Good l

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4. International Plot Writing Month -- Day Twenty-two

The Middle (cont.)


Consider the "middle" of the Middle of your story. 

The scenes in the middle of the Middle of a story often line up looking like below. So long as the unusual and/or exotic world is intriguing and mysterious and fascinating enough, you're in good shape. By the time the reader is at the middle of the Middle she has surrendered to the dream you've created. The story and the characters have actually replaced parts of the reader's world and become real for her. 
The early Middle and middle of the Middle are the honeymoon stage. The reader likes the character as revealed so far. The reader wants to hang out with the story and the characters. The middle of the Middle the protagonist is still on her best behavior -- relative to her and her alone. 

Eventually, later, closer to the 3/4 mark and when the Crisis hits, the character opens up more and more to the reader as the stakes rise higher and higher. Under pressure, the protagonist reveals who she really is, flaws and all. 

But, that's for later. For now, here, in the middle of the Middle, the character has settled a bit into the new world and no longer feels so much like a fish out of water. She begins to catch on to the rules of the new world. 

In other words, the story can slow down a bit here (keep in mind, however, a sort of major shift or "hit" usually occurs at the exact 1/2 of the entire page count mark.) 

Homework:
  • Continue to plot out your scenes on the Middle of your Plot Planner
  • Research the unusual world for authentic details. Take notes for your next draft. 
  • Consider how the Middle and the End work together. What in the Middle is contributing to the overall character transformation of your protagonist at the End? 
  • How many of the following antagonists** are you using to create conflict, tension, and suspense. The antagonists must arise out of the story itself and contribute to the overall meaning or thematic significance of your story overall. (If you do not know the thematic significance statement for your story, continue the exercises on: Day Four and Day Seven.)
**Antagonist List
Other people: friends, family, lover, co-workers, boss, children
Nature: flooding, earthquakes, hurricanes, tornadoes, freezing temperatures, drought
Machine: anything mechanical or electronic
Society: rules, laws, customs, traditions, expectations, religious institutions, dogma
God: spiritual beliefs
Self: flaw, hatred, prejudice, fears, past mistakes

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5. International Plot Writing Month -- Day One

Welcome!

Today begins a month-long opportunity to craft a draft of your writing into a story.

First, take time to congratulate yourself! You've done what many have talked and dreamed of doing -- you've written an entire story from beginning to end. Celebrate!

Next, craft the project into a coherent piece worthy of publication. During December, take the steps needed to analyze what you've written and brainstorm for an effortless draft two in January '09. Revision your project before actually rewriting the manuscript.

Everyday this month, I'll provide tips and tricks and inspiration.

No writing required.

Following are a couple of caveats for our month together:

1) Do NOT show anyone what you've written so far. The first draft of any writing project is considered the generative phase. At the end of the generative phase, a writer is often faced with a manuscript full of holes and missteps, confusion and chaos. This is part of the process in that editing and/or an unbridled internal critic in the generative phase risks stifling the muse, which often results in stagnation.
Your first draft is a fragile thread of a dream. You know what you want to convey, well, maybe and sort of. Few writers can adequately communicate a complete vision in the first draft of a story, especially when writing by the seat of your pants. Allow others to read your writing now and you risk losing energy for your story and becoming overwhelmed by the task ahead of you.

2) Do NOT read what you've written. I know, I know. You're anxious to read your hard work. However, the longer you give yourself before actually reading your first draft, the better. If you read your manuscript now, you're still close enough to the work that you'll automatically fill in the gaps. Give yourself distance first. This allows you to read your work more objectively later.

Let's get started!

By now, you know who the protagonist of your story is. Stories are about character transformation. The character who is transformed by the dramatic action in your story is your protagonist. Fill out the following for your protagonist. If the major antagonist in your story is a person, fill out the following for that character as well. If you have more than one point of view character, fill out the form for that/those characters, too.

CHARACTER EMOTIONAL DEVELOPMENT PROFILE

Character’s name:

Dramatic Action Plotline
Overall story goal:
What stands in her way:
What does she stand to lose:

Character Emotional Development Plotline
Flaw:
Strength:
Hates:
Loves:
Fears:
Dream:
Secret:

Good luck! And remember, as tempting as it is, do NOT read your first draft. That will come later. For now, use what you know about your characters to fill out the form.

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6. Varcarel Jade Bonus Update! “Kings Road to Thesia” Prologue


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“The Prologue for the Varcarel Jade story was published, and so now we got two pages on the web comic site!”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl

“Okay, so like how do you get from one page to the next?”

Talitha Hayashi a shy and brilliantly intelligent girl
“There are ‘Previous Page’ and ‘Next Page’ links at the bottom of each page.”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl

“Sweet! Bonus update action, folks! Have fun!”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Ja!”

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7. Jessie’s Letters!


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Talitha-chan helped me fix my e-mail page so we got Jessie’s Letters working again. If you have questions or comments or just wanna say ‘Hi Jessie!’ you can go to my super-neat Jessie’s Letters page to send us e-mail!”

Shannon Ka Yoru an artistic and thoughtful girl
“We love to answer questions about our stories or the site or our events.”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“Don’t forget to vote! We want to hear what you think. Left side, red box. We out.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Ja!”

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8. LadyStar Quiz Answers!


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“We got a LadyStar champ too and his name is Michael!”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“Yep, aced it. Five for five.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Now Talitha-chan gots all the answers ’cause she’s the smartest girl in our whole school! Did you know that Talitha-chan has a computer that she programmed all by herself? She even showed me how to make unicorns my wallpaper on my computer time at school!”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“She’s programmer girl.”

Talitha Hayashi a shy and brilliantly intelligent girl
“Hi Jessica. Hi Ranko.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Okay what were all the answers so we can make our quiz all official and stuff?”

Talitha Hayashi a shy and brilliantly intelligent girl
“Okay for question one, wildflowers grow alongside the walkway at your house.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Right! My mom loves her wildflowers.”

Talitha Hayashi a shy and brilliantly intelligent girl
“Question Two, Cici found the Chronicler’s Lantern in Collins Park near the topiary and statues of forest animals. The closest statue was a deer.”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“Good thing Little Bit found that lantern or the Ajan Warriors would have been sunk pretty quick.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“I know the third one! Our band room is number 74! I know that ’cause I almost got lost on the first day and Dr. Strings helped me find it. He’s a nice man. I want to take science classes where he’s the teacher ’cause he knows lots of stuff about science.”

Talitha Hayashi a shy and brilliantly intelligent girl
“Question Four, we found the Goldenwood Shield in the Venom Deeps in talisman form.”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“Then the Professor got the POWA and zap zap zappity! The baddies were toast.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

*giggle*

Talitha Hayashi a shy and brilliantly intelligent girl
“Question Five, The LadyStar fought the Vulture Crest at a place called Kulnas Forge.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Yeah, that dream was super scary too.”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“There you have it folks. We’re going to do quizzes for all of our Ten Update days, so if you missed this one, study up, read all the chapters and you’ll be ready for the next one. Maybe you can be a LadyStar champ!”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Yeah! Ja ne minna-san!”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“Oh, and don’t forget to VOTE! Over there on the left side of all pages at the top. Only takes a second. We’d like to hear what you think!”

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9. Introducting the Storyteller, Keeper of the Goldenwood Shield, The Ajan Warrior of the Forest!

Warrior of the Forest a Girl with the powers of trees flowers and plants

And it shall come to pass
that a gentle voice shall be heard
in the Golden Wood

Telling tales of wonder
and guarded by the Living Forest

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“Let’s hear it for the PROFESSOR!”

Shannon Ka Yoru an artistic and thoughtful girl
“Woohoo!”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“It’s Talitha-chan! And she’s got some of the bestest powers of all. Her treasure is the Goldenwood Shield, which is the only treasure that we got that’s actually alive just like a real tree!”


Alanna Kawa a loyal and compassionate girl

“In Palace in the Sky, Hayashi fought that demon in the Venom Deeps that was casting fire spells at us.”


Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“But the Warrior of the Forest can call on plants and trees to fight for her and she zapped those baddies for us. Tough fight.”

Shannon Ka Yoru an artistic and thoughtful girl
“I think she’s going to get some new powers in Call of the Huntress too, and one of them is called ‘Autumn Canopy.’”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Ooh, that’s a pretty name. I wonder what it does?”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“So go check out Forest Girl’s page and get all attuned with flowers and gardens and all that good stuff. Say a few words, Professor.”

Talitha Hayashi a shy and brilliantly intelligent girl


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“She’s real shy and stuff, but Talitha-chan is our best friend and we’re glad she’s a warrior just like us! Ja ne minna-san!”

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10. What is LadyStar? It’s Two Free Fantasy Adventure Novels!


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“I think there’s lots of people who come to our site and want to learn all about LadyStar but they get confused ’cause we have so much stuff going on!”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“I know I get confused and I’ve been here for a while now.”

Hikousen a big sleepy cat
zzzzzzz….

Shannon Ka Yoru an artistic and thoughtful girl
“Do you realize Hikousen’s been asleep for six years?”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Heheee.. he’s our guard kitty.”


Alanna Kawa a loyal and compassionate girl

“Okay, do the update. You guys always run off on these crazy tangents and we never get the update done.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Okay Alanna-sama. We’re gonna tell you all about a page that new people might not know about ’cause it’s a click that Talitha-chan put in the site instead of in our menu which we don’t have any more.”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“And if you understood that, you are WAY more mentally focused than me, because my brain just turned into mashed potatoes.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“See, looky! This is one of our buttons, and it’s on all of our articles no matter where they are on our whole site. It’s the red heart button with our logo and it’s called the Crimson Thunder Heart logo. This is what it looks like:”


Free online books epic fantasy adventure stories about girls who become powerful magical warriors

Shannon Ka Yoru an artistic and thoughtful girl
“Clicking that button will always take you to our What is LadyStar? page, which will give you a good introduction to our site and our story.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“If you look on the left column under the poll question we got right now…”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“don’t forget to VOTE!”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Yeah! Anyway, there’s four book covers in the left side column. Those are all of our books, and when you click on them you get to read them for free right here on our site. We did that ’cause we want everyone to read our stories and join in all our neat adventures!”

Shannon Ka Yoru an artistic and thoughtful girl
“So if you’re new to our site, welcome to LadyStar and be sure to read the What is LadyStar? page. Then you can jump right in to our stories. We just got through updating the Call of the Huntress Preview Page (which is my book *happy dance*), with all six of our current previews of the third book in our series. The first two books are complete and published and you can read them all for free.”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“See you all in the story, folks. Ten Update Friday continues! Don’t miss out!”

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11. The Warrior of Snow and Ice! The Winterdancer Page Updated!


Alanna Kawa a loyal and compassionate girl

“Updated the Winterdancer Page too.”

Ranko Yorozu an athletic and strong girl
“Awesome. I love that chapter with the bang, pow, zap. I can’t wait until we get our powers. We’re going to have some great battles.”


Alanna Kawa a loyal and compassionate girl

“Yeah, we had a bit of a disagreement. If you like combat action, you’ll probably like this preview called Valor of the Winterdancer.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Alanna-sama’s the Winterdancer, ’cause that’s her title of lore when she gets all her neat powers. Did you know the Warrior of the River’s powers are all from snow and ice? It even says so on her warrior page! Looky!”


The Ajan Warrior of the River

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12. Call of the Huntress Page Now with Six Previews

Shannon Ka Yoru an artistic and thoughtful girl
“Okay, Hayashi and me fixed the Call of the Huntress page, and we got all of the links linked and the pages where they’re supposed to be.”


Jessica Hoshi a cheerful and optimistic girl

“Goody, ’cause I wanna read more about Shannon-sama and her big magical kitty cat named Kishi. There’s six previews now, huh?”

Talitha Hayashi a shy and brilliantly intelligent girl
“Yes, and they’re all linked from the Call of the Huntress Preview Page. The four-part Plot Against the Vicereine Story is linked together as well, so you can read all four parts in sequence.”


Alanna Kawa a loyal and compassionate girl

“Sweet.”

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