Welcome all you dedicated writers committed to your craft! If you're just now joining the 3rd Annual International Plot Writing Month, scroll down to Day One and work your way back.
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If you're just joining us for the 3rd Annual PlotWriMo, also known as PostNaNoWriMo, we're about to enter the analyzation phase.
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For those of you just finding us today, scroll down to Day Twelve for the steps to take and then work your way forward.
For those of you who are preparing for the next draft of your novel, memoir, or screenplay by following the day-by-day suggestions here, how did the read-through go?
I trust you found moments of brilliance. I'm sure you also found lots of clunky writing, passages that at one time made so much sense and now make absolutely no sense at all.
Whatever you found, be gentle with yourself. The first draft of anything is suppose to resemble vomit-on-the-page. The first draft is all about getting words on the page.
Now, take time to rethink your story.
The best way to begin is to reread the Beginning (1/4) and the End (1/4). Look for any connections to deeper meaning and make notes on how best to expand those connections. Search for opportunities to foreshadow in the Beginning what comes at the End.
Forget the Middle for now. The Middle (1/2) is the exotic or unusual world of the story world itself and territory of the antagonists which generally functions in its own unique way. However, the Beginning and the End need to link up. See what you can find.
Scroll down and recheck the list of scenes you created on Day Three. Of the scenes that read in the story, but were NOT listed, which ones can be cut altogether? Of the scenes that WERE listed, how many can be cut altogether?
Check the Plot Planners you created for the Beginning and the End. What scenes do you wish to include that you had forgotten earlier? Add those now.
Keep your focus on the overall meaning of the story while you analyze the Beginning and the End.
Good luck....
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If you are just now joining us on this month-long journey of analyzing the plot and structure of the Dramatic Action, Character Emotional Development, and Thematic Significance of a draft of your screenplay, memoir, or novel, Welcome!
To gain the most out of this month, please follow along day-by-day, beginning at Day One (scroll down to find Day One and get started).
The Beginning
The work you did yesterday -- Day Thirteen -- creating a Plot Planner for the Beginning (1/4) of your story -- comes in handy today.
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- Does the Climax of your story rise to the greatest intensity of the entire story?
- Think of your story as energy. Does the Climax deliver an energetic impact?
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Today, your assignment, if you choose to say yes, is to carry your Plot Planner index cards and a pencil or pen with you everywhere.
- Story is all about character transformation. How has your protagonist been transformed by the Dramatic Action in the story?
- What is your story really saying? What do all those words you wrote add up to?
- Your story is a reflection of a truth. Not necessarily true for all time, but true for the story itself, and likely for yourself, too. What is the deeper meaning? The truth beyond the physical?
- How do the secondary plot lines support the major plot line thematically?
- How do the secondary character's journey mirror the protagonist's journey?
- Does the setting support the theme?
- What elements in the Beginning (1/4) echo back in the End (1/4)
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If you're just joining us for the 2nd Annual Plot WriMo, we're about to enter the analyzation phase. Wait... before you click away, I admit what we're doing here is not very romantic, especially if you've just emerged from under the spell of creating a new story. Still, what you do here for this month, rather than strip away, actually strengthens and builds your story's vital essence and clears a path for a dynamic rewrite.
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Today, make a list in order of all the major scenes or events you remember writing (don't go back into the manuscript to locate the scenes and/or events. Remember: no reading yet).
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Welcome to the 2nd Annual International Plot Writing Month
Today begins a month-long opportunity to craft a draft of your writing into a story.
If you participated in NaNoWriMo, first take time to congratulate yourself! You've done what many have talked and dreamed of doing -- you've written an entire story from beginning to end. Celebrate!
Next, craft the project into a coherent piece worthy of publication.
During December, take the steps needed to analyze what you've written and brainstorm for an effortless draft two in January '10.
Revision your project before actually rewriting the manuscript. (This also works for writers without a first draft. Whether you merely have an idea for a story, a few chapters or scenes, just tweak the assignments to make them work for wherever you are in the process.)
Everyday this month, I'll provide plot tips and tricks and inspiration.
No writing required.
Following are a couple of caveats for our month together:
1) Do NOT show anyone what you've written so far. The first draft of any writing project is considered the generative phase. At the end of the generative phase, a writer is often faced with a manuscript full of holes and missteps, confusion and chaos. This is part of the process in that editing and/or an unbridled internal critic in the generative phase risks stifling the muse, which often results in stagnation.
Your first draft is a fragile thread of a dream. You know what you want to convey, well, maybe and sort of. Few writers can adequately communicate a complete vision in the first draft of a story, especially when writing by the seat of your pants. Allow others to read your writing now and you risk losing energy for your story and becoming overwhelmed by the task ahead of you.
2) Do NOT read what you've written. I know, I know. You're anxious to read your hard work. However, the longer you give yourself before actually reading your first draft, the better. If you read your manuscript now, you're still close enough to the work that you'll automatically fill in the gaps. Give yourself distance first. This allows you to read your work more objectively later.
Let's get started!
By now, you know who the protagonist of your story is. Stories are about character transformation. The character who is transformed by the dramatic action in your story is your protagonist. Fill out the following for your protagonist. If the major antagonist in your story is a person, fill out the following for that character as well. If you have more than one point of view character, fill out the form for that/those characters, too.
CHARACTER EMOTIONAL DEVELOPMENT PROFILE
Character’s name:
Dramatic Action Plotline
Overall story goal:
What stands in her way:
What does she stand to lose:
Character Emotional Development Plotline
Flaw:
Strength:
Hates:
Loves:
Fears:
Dream:
Secret:
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I really hate the expression 'vomit-on-the-page'. It turns me off reading your blog. I'm sure you can think of a much more interesting expression than that.
Swinging by to wish you Happy Holidays!
Great post full of great tips!!!
Hugs, JJ