As Anne Rice points out, writing is putting ourselves out there, taking chances, stretching ourselves. To help us all remember that and capitalize on it, we’re going to start a new feature on the blog. Every Tuesday, our new Craft & Teasers Contest post is going to focus on a particular element of the writing craft, provide you with some links for more information on that element, and give you a photograph for writing inspiration. Anyone who wants to write a brief (250 to 1000) word story based on the photo and share it with us will get triple points toward a book giveaway. Comments on the stories or craft tips will receive a single point. We’ll draw winners at random and post the winner the following week along with the new writing prompt.
My fabulous critique buddy, Cambria Dillon, will be joining us for this regular feature. She and I will work on the craft aspects together, and she will coordinate the prompt photo and the giveaway—including the excellent prizes. Please welcome Cam to the blog! You can read her bio in our About Us section, which includes her blog and twitter links.
And now, on to this week’s craft tip and prompt. Last week, Shannon K. O’Donnell did a
to add specificity to your fiction writing. RENNS stands for
, and the system is often taught in schools for helping to enhance student work in essays and papers. Applying it to fiction is a stroke of genius.
In any given scene, you have to know why every character is acting and reacting the way they are. Every sentence in your story has to move the story forward, add complications, and provide something new for characters to scramble to fix—or fail to fix. And if, in each scene, the motivations of the characters are opposed to each other, or if the main character has several goals that conflict, you have tension. Tension is what keeps a reader turning pages.
is when your character or narrator makes a statement about what is going on or how they feel. This can usually be replaced by
to increase immediacy and make the story stronger. However, even choosing what to show contributes to the voice of your story. It adds perspective and depth. Be specific and deliberate about:
Mary Elizabeth Summer is a Portland, Oregon-based writer who spends her days writing training materials for various companies and her nights racing pell-mell across the keyboard after her rampaging imagination. She writes novel-length stories with occasional forays into shorter fiction, and she writes for young adults, except for when she doesn't. She has a BA in creative writing (she BSes everything else), and she haunts bookstores for fun. Her current writing project is a young adult novel about a girl on the grift. Non-writing interests include volunteering at a horse-therapy program for autistic children and learning the fine art of parenting from her newborn daughter.
interview by Marcia Peterson
WOW: Congratulations on placing as one of the Runners Up in our Spring 2010 competition! What inspired you to enter the contest?
Mary Elizabeth: Thank you! I was very honored to be chosen from among such talented writers. Actually, I was inspired to enter the contest when I read that I could receive a critique of my entry. I didn't expect to actually place in the contest. I was happily surprised when I did, but also happy to get a professional opinion about the story.
WOW: Glad your expectations were exceeded! Can you tell us what encouraged the idea behind your story, "Of Crepes and Constancy?"
Mary Elizabeth: It's kind of a funny story. My writing group decided to try a variation of the exquisite corpse exercise in which each of us put two sentences into a hat and then draw two sentences out. One sentence was to be used as the first sentence of a story, and the second sentence was meant to be the last sentence of the story. The first sentence I drew was "How many times can you burn a crepe before it really does mean something?" In my original version of the story, I managed to end it with the second sentence, but in the revision process, I had to cut it, because it didn't quite work. As for the substance of the piece, at the time I wrote it, I was noticing a pattern in the relationships of people around me--a certain sort of insincerity that led to mind games and dissatisfaction. I had actually meant it to be a comical story, but it didn't turn out that way. Funny how characters sometimes take a story and run in completely the opposite direction with it.
WOW: For writers who may be interested in what you do for a living, could you describe what it’s like writing training materials for various companies?
Mary Elizabeth: It can be challenging at times. I have to take a bunch of information about something I know absolutely nothing about and shape it in a way that makes sense to someone else who knows nothing about it so that they learn. It involves a lot of adult learning theory and subject matter experts and ridiculous budget constraints and unrealistic turn-around times and blah blah blah corporate blah. It is a pretty sweet job, though. I essentially get to write for a living, which is the golden apple, right?
WOW: It sounds like a demanding but interesting job. How do you switch gears to write fiction at
I'm in Scottsboro, Alabama. I drove up today from Birmingham. As I wound into the north Alabama mountains and rounded the soft corners of a low mountain range, late-afternoon sunlight dappled the windshield. I spotted a gorgeous body of water spreading out on my left, serene and full of greenery -- even lilypads -- and thought, Yes. A little bit of beauty everyday, that's all we need....
Then I topped a rise and saw this.
You can read more about it
here. And here you can read the latest (the TVA plans to revive construction/completion as of August 2010)
here. You can even read about the current controversy,
here.
Wowee. That's enough to shut me up for the day. More on why I'm here and what I'm doing, after some sleep.
Photo credit: Matt Fields-Johnson for the Chattanooga Times Free Press.
Mostly photos today, with a little narration, to catch up the summer, and swing into fall. We are about to make our annual trek to the beach. Remember last year's photos with one-word headings?
There was the
writing prompt idea at the end, with the daily headings of
work,
hope,
fishing,
honoring,
weather, and
morning. Photos for each day with a one-word caption. I'm going to attempt that again this year. Want to do it with me? Take your camera with you, and at the end of each day, decide what one word you'll use to describe the day. You can turn it into a piece of personal narrative writing later, if you want, but for now, let the photos do the talking -- a visual storytelling. If you blog this, please send the link in comments, so we can all appreciate your handiwork... and storytelling.
In the meantime... or until then.... this past weekend, I worked at the Decatur Book Festival, on a panel with Shelia Moses, presenting Countdown (that's our fabulous moderator, Vicky Alvear Shechter, in the foreground, and yeah, I'm just snappin' photos while Shelia talks):
We had such a nice crowd. If you look hard, you can pick out my Jim, Nancy Werlin, Elizabeth Dulemba, Nancy's husband, Jim, and in the row in front of them, good friends Frank and Mary Hamilton.
It's old home week at the DBF, since I live in Atlanta, and it's such a pleasure to work at a festival that doesn't require an airplane ride!
I got to finally meet Alora Rose Plemmons! Her dad,
Andy, is the media specialist at Barrow Elementary School in Athens, Georgia, and we have stayed in touch ever since I visited Barrow a couple of years ago, and now -- Alora is in the world! Talk about life all around me... here it is, beginning again.
By Jill Earl
Don't know about you, but with temps soaring into well over 100 degrees here in the East, the only thing on my mind has been the cooling blast of AC. So when I recently trolled the 'Net for some ideas to get my heat-baked brain moving, I found the CreativityPortal.com site, with dozens of ways to awaken or boost your creativity.
Clicking on the ‘Writing & Prompts’ link located near the top of the homepage directs you to the site’s writing guide, with more links to choose from. Then click on the ‘Writing Prompts’ link within this listing and scroll down for the 'Seasonal and Holiday Prompts’, where writer Chris Dunmire offers up a selection of summer prompts, like the one below:
Writing Prompt 3:
What is your favorite summer memory? How old were you when it happened? For 10 minutes relive that memory through writing about it as if you were right there recording it in real time.
While I’m not crazy about summer, I do remember my days at sleepaway camp, by far my favorite summer memory. During those 10 minutes, I recalled horseback riding and archery lessons, the camp carnival, canoe trips, nature walks, even an encounter with a skunk and thankfully, I wasn’t the unfortunate victim! With the exercise over, I now have some experiences ready to be used in a story, or perhaps inspiration for a future article or blog post. Besides that, it was fun to revisit those carefree days.
For the rest of Chris’ list, head over to CreativityPortal.com. Stay motivated during these sizzling summer days! Grab a prompt or two and get to writing!
They change us, these everyday moments, like airing the linens or making limeade. They enhance and make possible our momentous occasions as well. Along the way, we use all our senses to make connections with one another and our stories -- what do we see, hear, taste, touch, smell, in each moment? Yesterday, for instance....
Breakfast dishes drying:
Linens sunning themselves. Feel the breeze, taste the spring air. And listen to the stories:
The bedspread my daughter brought me from Greece, and the joy in her face at being so smart to know how I would love it. And there is her childhood kitty blanket she slept with for years. I would find her wrapped in it in odd hours, her hair smelling of fresh perspiration, her snores even and calm.
The quilt my mother's mother made by hand every stitch, from old shirts and dresses. I never knew this grandmother, but I remember the longing in my mother's voice when she said, "I never had a mother to help me raise my children..." and I would entreat my mother to tell me more about this grandmother I never knew.
The blanket I wrapped my first babe in. Oh how my heart pounded! Could I keep her alive? How tiny she was! How young I was! The first time she cried, I did, too.
The Freedom Summer quilt my friend Cindy made for me. What a celebration! My first book! Everyone came for a party. I saw that babe of mine walk into the room with
her first babe, and felt we'd come full circle. Now I was a grandmother, like my mother's mother was never able to be.
The signatures of all those I met in my travels, that Freedom Summer year. (Did you sign this quilt?) So carefully did young readers sign their names. Some drew me pictures. Some gave me advice. Some congratulated me. How many airplanes did I carry that quilt on? It became a security blanket, as I made m
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Going back to earlier posts about handwork, I'd like to request you write a post about how to make clover/daisy necklaces. I am resting and writing at our vacation home in North Carolina and my yard is FULL of clover. (Clover necklaces = good memories!)
Danette! I shall! Where in North Carolina? xoxoxo
Brevard. You and Jim would love this place. Yo-Yo Ma performs here in August! http://www.brevardmusic.org/
we'll visit! A clover chain tutorial in person. how long are you there?
Alas, we are only here for the week. But we should make plans to meet up another time, clover or no clover. (There's always something in bloom!)