In the National Post, I’m quoted in this nice piece by Liana Kerzner about empathy focused largely on the good folks at Minority Media.
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In the National Post, I’m quoted in this nice piece by Liana Kerzner about empathy focused largely on the good folks at Minority Media.
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Smart game writer, Susan O’Connor recommended this book to me, and I’d readily pass on the same recommendation to any freelancer. (Note: Canadians like me need to substitute some of the info, for example tax rates, and the rules that govern RRSPs.) Here’s my GoodReads review:
The Money Book for Freelancers, Part-Timers, and the Self-Employed: The only personal finance system for people with not-so-regular jobs by Joseph D’Agnese
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
A succinct, encouraging, good-humoured and easy-to-follow financial system for freelance workers of all stripes.
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The Assassin’s Creed: Freedom Cry team and I have been nominated for a 2015 Writer’s Guild Award for Excellence in Game Writing. This game meant a lot to me, so it’s a thrill to be nominated!
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Writers, I made you a board game to help with your procrastination: WRITER, GET TO WORK! It’s free to download and play.
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My latest short story, NOTHING BUT MEAT, (or maybe even my only short story? It’s not a form I usually work in…) has been published at Work Stew. Happy New Year, everyone!
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I’m leading a week-long game writing workshop with the playwriting students of the National Theatre School of Canada in the new year. The intersection of games and theatre is an interesting one and I can’t wait to see what these talented young artists create!
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I write for video games, but for some reason I get asked a lot by my peers whether I actually play games. This never happens in circles of novelists. No one ever asks me, “so do you… read?” But in gaming circles, the conversations go like this:
Colleague or Journalist: So do you… play games?
Me: Yes.
CoJ: Like what? What do you play?
Me: Recently I enjoyed [a couple of games that stood out]. But I play many games, as much as I can.
CoJ: On what platform?
Me: All of them except Nintendo for now.
CoJ: Like what? iOS?
I tend not to enjoy these conversations because I’m not much of a cataloguer, and these conversations mainly occur on press junkets or business trips, while I’m trying to concentrate on the game I’m promoting or making, through a thick fog of jet lag and often some kind of headache. And, I instinctively reject invitations to justify my existence, which can be a real conversation stopper.
Nevertheless, it’s a listy time of year, and testament to my love for this form, the first thing I want to do on my first day of vacation from the game company I work for is reflect on the games I played over the last 12 months, and link out to some games I really enjoyed. I’ll mark my favorites with a loving (*) and reserve the right to add the games I forgot when I remember them as soon as I hit “publish.”
We opened our fourth workshop with a chat about writing routines and practical goals– whether you prefer to set yourself a word count limit, or spend a set amount of time writing every day.
My routine sees me writing every weekday morning, in the same cafe, for one hour, like clockwork. I also write at other times- lunch, in waiting rooms, on trains, etc… but the morning routine anchors me to my practice. For years, I’ve accomplished this by carrying the tiniest computer I can find with me at all times. Right now, it’s an iPad with a keyboard case, and I feel very spoiled.
Canadian novelist Ray Robertson gave me the simple, magic formula that helped me get into a routine. He told our workshop group at U of T that what he did when he started writing, was to promise himself he’d write for, say, 45 minutes, twice a week. When he wrote, he’d mark it down in his agenda. Once he’d met his goal a few times, he’d gently increase either the duration or frequency, congratulating himself with check marks, every time he succeeded. He said he worked his way up to about 3 hours a day this way.
I did the same thing. (Albeit far more loudly, on a wall calendar, with markers and glittery fish stickers… hey, whatever works… you have to satisfy your inner nerd.) It was difficult at first to stay still and just write– not fiddle with anything, get up and clean, play with the dog, fix another hot beverage– and this was before social media exploded all over our lives and writing stations. I had to tell myself “well, you have to sit here for an hour… I bet the time is going to go a lot faster if you’re typing…”
And it did! And by doing that, I also taught myself to let my mind wander– to be happy with typing antyhing just to get the words flowing. To be grateful for any snippet of inspiration or memory that might wander across my desk, and “distract” me from what I otherwise thought of as work.
Of course it was all valuable work. This is what routine has to give us and teach us. Outer constraints (word count, time limits, quiet rooms with nothing but desks in them) don’t inhibit creativity, they protect and foster inner freedoms by quieting our surroundings so we can draw our attention inward to see what’s already there.
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Last week we discussed the one thing I’ve had to work hardest at in my own writing: plot.
Despite all my hard work, I’ve come to the conclusion that most of us worry too much about plot. There are very few musts as far as plot is concerned.
So yes, make sure you have one. But don’t fret too much over whether you’re doing it right.
A plot arc, at its most basic, requires just two points:
In between, the character is acted upon by forces internal and external- his own psychological makeup, and the people and circumstances of his life.
To arrive at a satisfying plot arc, you need to get real about this character and what he or she wants. You need to be honest about your motivations for writing the story. You need to care enough to get to know all the characters of your story well enough that their actions ring true.
Do that, and your characters will generally act and react together to create story. Characters are pretty good at group work if you let them do what they do.
If you don’t, you can really mess up your sense of direction, and make plot practically impossible for yourself. Plot-destroying habits appear in the following forms:
It comes down to embracing imperfection. Life is messy. A story takes disorder and conflict and builds towards resolution. It takes discomfort and turns it into problem solving. It takes a stagnant situation and fills it with new ideas. That’s what makes it satisfying. Fiction is a tool that lets us explore the great WHAT Ifs of life.
And teenagers crave WHAT IF?! In fiction we can give them a safe place to test out ideas and ideals, even the terrible and impractical ones, via our characters.
We can train ourselves to take decisions that allow plot and story flow more easily.
We got a lot done in week two.
We began with a discussion of first drafts, and how they’re supposed to be difficult and awful, but you have to finish them anyway to find out what your story’s about, and of course because it’s the only path to the next draft. I won’t share those notes in detail in this post because a lady needs at least a few secrets, and I also have too much to say about Voice.
Much is made of the importance of the authenticity of voice in YA. In reality, voice is important in all writing. It just stands out more in YA because kids have a lower threshold for bullshit. The moment something doesn’t ring true, they stop reading. They won’t soldier through because your reputation preceeds you, you won an award, or everyone’s tweeting about you.
So how do we make stories ring true to young ears?
I build my characters by first listening for them. I start with a bit of context, like “it’s about a tough inner-city girl who breakdances, and wants to win more than anything, but then her parents move her to the suburbs and she has to build a new crew with girls she is initially revolted by.” Then I try to picture this girl. Once she starts talking, I listen to what she says and build everything that. Clothes. Tastes. Her name. Hair texture. How she does at school. Who her friends are. What’s the root and nature of her toughness. Is she for real, or just posturing? What’s she afraid of? In my writing, everything begins with the sound of her voice.
Many writers have told me this is flaky voodoo advice, and not helpful in the slightest. Here’s a set of principles that are a little more practical:
We had an interesting discussion about The Hunger Games, and whether the sophistication of Katniss’s vocabulary matches the education level you’d expect her to have. It was generally agreed that she’d be wise beyond her years, forced to grow up fast, and that that could bring with it an unexpected sophistication. But we were unable to come to a consensus on whether her vocabulary is as true to her character as it could be. Food for thought!
We then read the first chapter of Coe Booth’s first book,
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Monday night marked the kickoff of the 8-week YA writing workshop I’m leading for the Quebec Writers’ Federation.
I opened the class with a reference to this Ira Glass video I love, about storytelling, and how our amazing taste mingles with our aspirations to both guide our work and inspire self-doubt.
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From the voice that brought you writing advice like “get some sleep” and “don’t worry if it takes a long time” comes a writing workshop for aspiring and practicing Young Adult writers Writing YA: Making the A Stand for Awesome.
Yes, it’s a QWF workshop by me, Jill Murray, on Monday evenings in Montreal, starting October 3rd.
Here’s the complete description. If it sounds like fun to you, head on over to the QWF’s website to register. I hope to see you in class!
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1200 Atwater Avenue, Suite 3
Workshop fee: $175; $155 for QWF members.
For more information, or to register: 514-933-0878 or [email protected]
Young Adult literature is a growing market, and for good reason. Encompassing great diversity in the genres it includes and the types of stories it tells, it attracts teen readers and adventurous adults alike.
Whether you aim to tell contemporary stories rooted in the issues that matter to teens you know, or pen the world’s first eight-volume blockbuster dystopian alternatereality zombiemermaid epic, you’ll need the same basic building blocks of the writer’s craft—brains, yes, and coffee, but also memorable and lucid plots, well-developed characters, dialogue that rings true, evocative settings, finely-tuned voice and point-of-view, action and pacing that keep the pages turning, and of course, heart.
Using writing exercises and examples from current YA literature and notable blogs, this eight-week workshop will cover all the basics, as well as important issues in the YA writer’s life, such as How To Write While Everyone Else is On the Internet, Your Options for Publication, and Trends & How to Ignore Them Without Panicking. The format will be a studio workshop, with a lecture, writing time, and weekly critique sessions. Each participant will submit a 10-20 page short story or chapter of a novel-in-progress for in-class critique.
In Week 7 (Monday, November 21), Cecil Castellucci, author of, at last count, seven acclaimed works for young adults, including graphic novels, The Plain Janes and Janes in Love, will drop by to discuss the ins and outs of writing graphic novels for teen audiences. There will be a related writing exercise, and fun will be had.
Writers: some of you are like “woo, outline, then fast but complete hair-pulling first draft, followed by hard-working but clearly sequential 2nd, 3rd (&4th, etc…) drafts.” You can schedule your manuscript to take 4, 6, 12, 18 or 24 months to complete.
I am more like “write 6 paragraphs, reread, edit, write 6 more paragraphs, reread all 12, edit, write a 6 more paragraphs… get to 107 page mark and rewrite whole novel twice…” I can schedule my process to take place 5 times a week at 8 in the morning, and the rest is a mystery.
My way is slower, but for novels, it’s the only way I can work.
I mention this for the others like me, fretting over when your manuscript will be done. Write however you need to, as long as the job gets done. “Your public” isn’t timing you.
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I’ll be reading at the Eden Mills Writers’ Festival on Sunday, September 18th, in the Young Adult venue, at 1:30, with Scott Chantler and Natale Ghent. Then we’ll sign books and answer questions at The Bookshelf outside Jenny’s Place.
I’m hoping I’ll also get to hear the second set of readings at 3:30, with Adwoa Badoe, Tish Cohen, and Richard Scrimger.
Doesn’t that sound like a great day? I’m filled with absolute YA nerdy glee- totally psyched to meet all of these authors– and you too. So if you’re near Guelph, Kitchener-Waterloo, Toronto, come on out and say hello, and help me savour one of our last great summer weekends in full-on bookish style.
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I’ll be reading at the Eden Mills Writers’ Festival on Sunday, September 18th, in the Young Adult venue, at 1:30, with Scott Chantler and Natale Ghent. Then we’ll sign books and answer questions at The Bookshelf outside Jenny’s Place.
I’m hoping I’ll also get to hear the second set of readings at 3:30, with Adwoa Badoe, Tish Cohen, and Richard Scrimger.
Doesn’t that sound like a great day? I’m filled with absolute YA nerdy glee- totally psyched to meet all of these authors– and you too. So if you’re near Guelph, Kitchener-Waterloo, Toronto, come on out and say hello, and help me savour one of our last great summer weekends in full-on bookish style.
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I made this for dinner tonight and it turned out so great, I had to write it down so we can do it again. Normally, I chase my pasta around the bowl, trying to make sure there’s a noodle in every bite. This dish had me chasing the broccoli instead!
INGREDIENTS:
METHOD:
SERVINGS: 2
SOURCE: Codejill
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I just filed a post on BookMadam.com about what it’s like juggling a fabulous new full-time job and writing novels. If you’ve ever thought to yourself “I’ll write my book when I have more time,” you might want to check it out, for a different (and I hope, encouraging) perspective.
I just filed a post on BookMadam.com about what it’s like juggling a fabulous new full-time job and writing novels. If you’ve ever thought to yourself “I’ll write my book when I have more time,” you might want to check it out, for a different (and I hope, encouraging) perspective.
I just filed a post on BookMadam.com about what it’s like juggling a fabulous new full-time job and writing novels. If you’ve ever thought to yourself “I’ll write my book when I have more time,” you might want to check it out, for a different (and I hope, encouraging) perspective.
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Last week I wrote a short play called Marc Garneau’s Moustache. It’s about a bunch of teens participating in democracy in one of the few ways they can: by defacing campaign posters.
TODAY! At Mainline Theatre, 3997 St Laurent blvd. at 8pm, there will be a staged reading of Marc Garneau’s Moustache during the Wrecking Ball– an evening of theatre devoted to the question of voting or not voting.
It sounds like it should be fun. There’s music, a few short plays, and a game show. Admission is pay-what-you-can.
As for me, I’ll be voting later today at the advance polling station around the corner from the cafe where I’m working.
**Update! – April 29th, 2011**
The Wrecking Ball was a smashing success. I had a ball, and was just completely giddy and overwhelmed by the awesomeness of the interpretation of my piece by the director and actors who had probably just a few hours to rehearse and stage it. (Whose names I will add to this post in a more organized moment than this one.)
If you’d like to read the play (do it– it’s only a few pages and they’re all silly), I’ve created a pdf you can download. Here it is: Marc Garneau’s Moustache
And if you’re Canadian, GO VOTE on Monday!
Last week I wrote a short play called Marc Garneau’s Moustache. It’s about a bunch of teens participating in democracy in one of the few ways they can: by defacing campaign posters.
TODAY! At Mainline Theatre, 3997 St Laurent blvd. at 8pm, there will be a staged reading of Marc Garneau’s Moustache during the Wrecking Ball– an evening of theatre devoted to the question of voting or not voting.
It sounds like it should be fun. There’s music, a few short plays, and a game show. Admission is pay-what-you-can.
As for me, I’ll be voting later today at the advance polling station around the corner from the cafe where I’m working.
**Update! – April 29th, 2011**
The Wrecking Ball was a smashing success. I had a ball, and was just completely giddy and overwhelmed by the awesomeness of the interpretation of my piece by the director and actors who had probably just a few hours to rehearse and stage it. (Whose names I will add to this post in a more organized moment than this one.)
If you’d like to read the play (do it– it’s only a few pages and they’re all silly), I’ve created a pdf you can download. Here it is: Marc Garneau’s Moustache
And if you’re Canadian, GO VOTE on Monday!
Last week I wrote a short play called Marc Garneau’s Moustache. It’s about a bunch of teens participating in democracy in one of the few ways they can: by defacing campaign posters.
TODAY! At Mainline Theatre, 3997 St Laurent blvd. at 8pm, there will be a staged reading of Marc Garneau’s Moustache during the Wrecking Ball– an evening of theatre devoted to the question of voting or not voting.
It sounds like it should be fun. There’s music, a few short plays, and a game show. Admission is pay-what-you-can.
As for me, I’ll be voting later today at the advance polling station around the corner from the cafe where I’m working.
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Yesterday on BookMadam, I rolled around in gasoline, and then lit a match. Felt kind of tingly.
I both regret the way I said what I said, and I’m glad it happened anyway, because there’s more progress to be gained from speaking, even if it’s completely unsightly and feels, as the BookMadam herself put it, like passing a turd full of thumbtacks. I could well be wrong. But there are worse things than being wrong– like frightened obedience. Silence is not why I got into writing, and if I have to have my nervous breakdowns in public, so be it.
Now if you’ll excuse me, I have a bunch of research to do on copyright law. I hope to get to it by the weekend.
Yesterday on BookMadam, I rolled around in gasoline, and then lit a match. Felt kind of tingly.
I both regret the way I said what I said, and I’m glad it happened anyway, because there’s more progress to be gained from speaking, even if it’s completely unsightly and feels, as the BookMadam herself put it, like passing a turd full of thumbtacks. I could well be wrong. But there are worse things than being wrong– like frightened obedience. Silence is not why I got into writing, and if I have to have my nervous breakdowns in public, so be it.
Now if you’ll excuse me, I have a bunch of research to do on copyright law. I hope to get to it by the weekend.
Yesterday on BookMadam, I rolled around in gasoline, and then lit a match. Felt kind of tingly.
I both regret the way I said what I said, and I’m glad it happened anyway, because there’s more progress to be gained from speaking, even if it’s completely unsightly and feels, as the BookMadam herself put it, like passing a turd full of thumbtacks. I could well be wrong. But there are worse things than being wrong– like frightened obedience. Silence is not why I got into writing, and if I have to have my nervous breakdowns in public, so be it.
Now if you’ll excuse me, I have a bunch of research to do on copyright law. I hope to get to it by the weekend.
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