I liked
Amy's idea and Hope's spoon so much last Friday
that it carried me
like a weebling egg
to this:
Scoop
scoop of my heart
in a crude wooden spoon
scoop of my heart
soured and soon there
will be nothing left
no sweetness or cream
bowl will be empty
empty will dream of
scoops of white foam
spoonfuls of fizz
filling my heartbowl
where yearning is
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Live Your Poem today with Irene and the rest of the Poetry Friday crowd. How I miss you all between Fridays!
Poetry Friday people, help spread the word during this gift-giving season by linking, posting, Tweeting and facebooking about the poetry e-books out there. Here's my little commercial...Folks, there could not be an easier, cooler stocking-stuffer for your iGeneration kids than
p*tag, the downloadable poetry anthology for Kindle, Nook or iPad. For a mere $2.99, you can send a collection of fresh, original poems for readers 12 and older straight to their digital devices!
In addition to
p*tag for teens, there's
Poetry Tag Time, perfect for your elementary teacher friends, and
Gift Tag (pictured here), which features poems about presents. All can be enjoyed on iPhones, Kindles, Nooks, computers and interactive whiteboards.
For a taste of p*tag, here's my piece "The Wishing Tree," introduced this way:
People (adults, mostly) say that “money doesn’t grow on trees, you know,” like it’s no work at all to produce a crop of juicy peaches or shiny acorns. Other people (little kids, mostly) think that lots of things grow on trees, like corks and popcorn. This photo came with the title “Wishing,” so it was easy to embrace the intriguing idea that wishes grow on trees. Does that mean there’s a Come-True Tree somewhere?A Wishing Tree
on every star
every puff of birthday breath
every penny down the well
you wish for the same thing
on every four-leaf clover
every loose eyelash
every turkey’s furcula
you wish for the same thing
(can’t tell us, can you?
if you do it won’t come true)
you wish it every day
until one day you’re walking along,
secretly wishing on random things:
cloud shaped like a duck
three green punch-buggies in a row
your own lucky-left blue shoe
and you find—who knew?—a wishing tree
hung with white wishes as light as popcorn:
“I wish I could fly”
“I wish for a slumber party with a rock star”
and of course
“I wish to have three more wishes”
reaching deeper between the leaves
you find riper, heavier wishes:
“I wish my dog was still alive”
“I wish I had stuck up for myself”
and then—no way!—
“My wish is the same as yours”
this one you pluck, fold in half and
tuck into your right shoe,
waltzing away on the soles
of twin wishes
Heidi Mordhorst 2011
from
p*tag
Poetry Tag continues with a book review of a new book of poetry connected to yesterday's book review.
Today’s tagline: More poems about African American history
Featured Book: Greenfield, Eloise. 2011. The Great Migration: Journey to the North. Ill. by Jan Spivey Gilchrist. Amistad/HarperCollins.
This new poetry picture book from NCTE Poetry Award winner, Eloise Greenfield, is a very personal work with a powerful, historic reach. She opens the book with a one-page narrative explaining the meaning of "the Great Migration," the mass movement of African Americans from the southern part of the U.S. to the North between 1915 and 1930. She situates her own family and her own "migration" in this context and the final poems weaves in details of her own family's story. Her frequent illustrator, Jan Spivey Gilchrist, has a similar story-- also noted-- and I wondered if some of the images of people (particularly their faces) were drawn from her or Greenfield's own family trees. Possibly!
This is an interesting use of poetry to convey a chronological history with key poems numbered and titled as follows:
I. The News
II. Goodbyes (Man; Girl and Boy; Woman; Very Young Woman)
III. The Trip (5 page stanzas)
IV. Question (Men and Women)
V. Up North
ending with:
My Family
Greenfield uses free verse, but sets up a structure that gives each poem reading a strong rhythm. Here's the opening poem as one example:
I. The News
by Eloise Greenfield
They read about it, heard
about it, in letters and newspapers
sent down from the North,
from visiting cousins and brothers
and aunts: there were jobs up there,
nice houses, no Ku Klux Klan
everywhere you turn, burning down
schools and homes and hope.
They thought about it, talked about it,
spread the word. "Did you hear the news?
Can it really be true? Well, I'm going
to see. How about you?"
Gilchrist's illustrations incorporate watercolor along with collage to blend scenes of landscape and personal portraits (often faces "lifted" from actual photographs), many set against a stark, black page. Thus, most of
Poetry Tag continues with a book review of a new book of poetry connected to yesterday's book review.
Today’s tagline: Poems about a pair of sisters
Guest Reviewer: Karla Phipps
Featured Book: George, Kristine O’Connell. 2011. Emma Dilemma: Big Sister Poems. Ill. by Nancy Carpenter. Clarion. ISBN 978-0-618-42842-7
Karla begins:
“Mom, she is bothering me!”
“No, I’m not!”
“Are too!”
“Are not!”
This has been an argument heard at many houses all around the world and will continue as long as siblings strive to build relationships with each other. The relationship between sisters is a very special one. Many of us have at one time viewed our little sisters as pests and would like for them to leave us alone, instead of constantly interrupting us. The poems in this award-winning book do an amazing job of introducing the reader to the unique and often hard to understand relationship between sisters. The author, Kristine O’Connell George, uses her experience as a big sister to give a unique perspective in her writing.
The author uses the connection between Jessica and Emma to appeal to the emotions of the reader. Each person at one point in their life has seen their younger sibling as an ally, a playmate, but also as the enemy. Each of the poems has a natural cadence and rhythm, and is not written in rhyming format. This format would be excellent for choral reading. The language used by the poet can be easily understood by the reader and each of the poems, along with the illustrations by Nancy Carpenter, stimulates the imagination of the reader.
In the following poem, “Emma Dilemma,” the poet presents an interesting description of dealing with the frustrations of having a pesky younger sister.
“Emma Dilemma”
by Kristine O'Connell George
Sometimes Dad calls my little sister Emma Dilemma.
Dad says a dilemma is an interesting problem.
I know Dad’s joking but sometimes Emma is my dilemma.
Each of the poems included in this book shares different facets of the relationship between two sisters and helps to reinforce the purpose of this book, which is to show the love and sometimes intense dislike between two siblings. As much as our siblings do things to drive us crazy, such as trying to copy each thing that we do or embarrass us in front of our friends, we still love them. The
Poetry Tag continues with a book review of a new book of poetry connected to yesterday's book review.
Today’s tagline: Poems about animals in pairs
Guest Reviewer: Sarah Razer
Featured Book: Singer, Marilyn. Ills. by Lee Wildish. Twosomes. New York, NY: Alfred A. Knopf. ISBN: 9780375867101
Sarah writes: These fifteen poems may be only two lines long each, but they are sweet and specific to the animal the poem describes. Whether adding an animal trait, such as chameleons changing color, or a word pun ("Come leap with me and be my wife. You're the porpoise of my life" in "Dolphins"), these short poems are fun for children and adults alike, so the book appeals to all ages. While younger audiences will enjoy the funny rhymes that focus on love, the adults will catch the wittiness and puns. Poems have a natural flow with short, simple rhymes that are still clever. It evokes silliness and happiness in what appears as childlike rhymes, but are actually clever and knowledgeable rhymes. These love poems are consistent for each animal from around the animal kingdom and it will certainly put anyone in a loving mood, and possibly lead someone to spend some extra time with a pet.
The illustrations are cute and colorful, small and comical. It's a sweet little book that could be given to anyone of any age as a Valentine's present or simply for the love of poetry.
Sample Poem
Porcupines
by Marilyn Singer
"Hugging you takes some practice.
So I'll start out with a cactus."�
Connections
The poems are only two lines long which provides young children an example of poetry on a level that they can grasp. It also offers examples a child could mimic. Five year olds can think of rhyming words and would possibly be able to take a trait from an animal they like and create a brief poem. It centers on the emotion of love, but also on the popular topic of animals. Both of these are elements a child can understand. Sometimes the explanations can be short and direct and the poems in Twosomes are short and clear examples of a type of poetry that all ages can understand.
Tomorrow’s tagline: Poems about a pair of sisters
[You can still purchase your own copy of PoetryTagTime, an e-book with 30
Poetry Tag continues with a book review of a new book of poetry connected to yesterday's book review.
Today’s tagline: Poems about animals of the air
Featured Book: Yolen, Jane. 2011. Birds of a Feather. Ill. by Jason Stemple. Boyds Mills Press.
FYI: I'm reviewing this one myself, since we did not obtain a copy in time to share it with my students.
It's another in the developing collection of photo-nature-poetry picture books that Yolen has created, particularly focusing on BIRDS:
- Wild Wings: Poems for Young People (2002)
- Fine Feathered Friends: Poems for Young People (2004)
- An Egret’s Day (2010)
In her new anthology, she features
14 different birds including the eagle, chickadee, kingfisher, wood duck, great horned owl, tern, northern mockingbird, oystercatcher, eastern kingbird, hooded merganser, cedar waxwing, sandpiper, rufous-sided towhee, and marbled godwit-- what great names, right? These are almost as fun to say as dinosaur names! And Yolen's poems make good use of the sounds of the bird names, their unique attributes, and key vocabulary. In addition, she includes brief prose passages to accompany and parallel each poem. Plus, she includes several different poetic forms including haiku, free verse, rhyming quatrains, and even a question poem-- a nice variety to model poetry writing, too. Let's look at one poem and prose pair example:
Cedar Waxings Unmasked by Jane Yolen
Who are these masked birds?Not Robin Hoods,for they live inthe open woods.They only dealin stolen goodslike berry futures,cedar cones,and sweet, sweet fruit(but leave the stones).Insects they catchon the flywhen swarms of themgo buzzing by.No need to worry,moan, or fret.Your valuablesthey will notget. (p. 26)
And the accompanying
Poetry Tag continues with a book review of a new book of poetry connected to yesterday's book review.
Today’s tagline: More poems about all kinds of animals
Guest Reviewers: Mary Pharaoh and Melisa O’Rear
Featured Book: Gibson, Amy. 2011. Around the world on eighty legs: Animal poems. Ill. by Daniel Salmieri. New York: Scholastic. ISBN 9780439587556
Mary writes: Finally, after much technical difficulty...recorded and edited, added the images and loaded it to a faulty flash drive... twice... the camera battery died on me... this was a challenging assignment. I hope you like it. I am pretty proud of it. Here's my digital trailer.
Melisa writes: In Amy Gibson’s first book of poetry, she takes us skipping across the continents to explore five regions as we learn of the animal inhabitants, when added together, have a total of eighty legs. Gibson’s witty use of wordplay is impressive as she weaves bits of information about each animal throughout the short verses. The watercolor, gouache and colored-pencil illustrations by Daniel Salmieri continue the humor found throughout the brightly colored pages. In addition to the sixty poems featuring popular and lesser-known animals, there is a fantastic “Menagerie of Facts” located in the back. Here readers will find a list of animals in alphabetical order, a small picture of each animal along with one or two interesting facts. This would be a fun and entertaining book for young elementary age children. Here’s a sample poem:
Macaque
(muh-KAK)
by Amy Gibson
Most monkeys
like it hot, but not
the Japanese
macaque.
He lives in snow
where cold winds blow,
for fur runs
down his back.
But coats of fluff
are not enough
when winter is
a doozy.
And so he hurries
when it flurries
into the
Love this poem, Heidi. Especially the way you describe lightness:
every puff of birthday breath
hung with white wishes as light as popcorn:
So great to see you at NCTE, btw!
wishing is hard work, too, sometimes. especially if you want it to be just right.
this photo seems to want to trigger a memory of something one of my classes did a long time ago where we... did we messages of peace? hang paper cranes? the memory flickers so much i can't even be sure it isn't imagined, like roger ebert realizing that a treasured childhood memory is really a scene from a movie he'd forgotten about.
anyway, well done. now off to checl out this p*tag thing...
I wish I were funny.
I wish I could sing.
and I wish, I wish I could write poetry.
Love the poem! I also love the idea of a poetry e-book for kids. I'll check it out later. Have to work now!
Janet over at The Write Sisters
I wonder if students would write beautiful poems if you just offered the prompt, 'wishing tree', then after, read your poem? I love that you used so many 'wishing' pieces. We always wished when seeing the rainbows, but I think my grandmother made that up. Thanks for the books; they will make excellent gifts!
"waltzing away on the soles
of twin wishes"
soles, or souls? could be either, methinks.
Fun snapshot from today's Poetry Friday in my classroom -- new principal was there to witness two girls reading aloud a poem...from our new classroom Kindle! (Gift Tag and Poetry Tag Time are favorites to Kindle-read alone or with a buddy!!)