I revised my hospice story one final time for ICL course Assignment #7. It amazes me that a story can deepen, grow, and come together so powerfully when reworked. The advice I receive from my instructor is invaluable. The critique from my peers helps me with final polishing. I worked today on a new ending to replace the previous, too-abrupt finish. I will send it in to Kristi (ICL instuctor) once I complete a proposal ready for a publisher.
All the paperwork for purchasing our new house has been completed. We await approval of the mortgage, an interview with the home owners association, one tiny repair, and the closing. We decided to reduce the asking price on our present home. The great room, hall, and trim are newly painted. Finishing touches have made the house just lovely. It awaits discovery by a new owner!
