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Blog: An Englishman in New Jersey (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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Blog: An Englishman in New Jersey (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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Here’s my selection of interesting (and sometimes amusing) posts about writing from the last week:
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Blog: An Englishman in New Jersey (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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Here’s my selection of interesting (and sometimes amusing) posts about writing from the last week:
Taking a Good Idea and Elevating It (Nathan Bransford) [Jon’s pick of the week]
The First Line Hook (Heidi M. Thomas)
Podcastle Wants You! [Narrators wanted]
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Blog: Galley Cat (Mediabistro) (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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Curtis Brown agent Nathan Bransford told his online community today that he will no longer be a literary agent.
He explained in a post: “I am leaving the world of publishing to work at the tech news/review site CNET, where I will be helping to coordinate social media strategy.” His clients had included Rebecca S. Ramsay, Brad Geagley, and Barry Gifford.
He also explained that his bustling online community will continue: “The blog and Forums will live on. The topics will change just a bit as I will no longer be in the query trenches, but I still plan to continue to post about writing, books, and whatever strikes my fancy (monkeys) and hope you’ll stick around for the next phase in the blog’s evolution. One thing that has not changed and will not change is my passion for books and writing and I hope this will continue to be a friendly place where writers come together to talk writing and help each other out. This has become such an amazing, positive community thanks to you, and I feel honored to be a part of it.” (Via Colleen Lindasy)
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Blog: Kristi Helvig YA Author (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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If you're looking for something to read today, Valerie is the guest post on agent Nathan Bransford's blog today!
Check out her post on the All Important First Chapter!

Blog: A Fuse #8 Production (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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- Comic book bloggers and children’s literature bloggers are two sides of the same coin. Our interests often run parallel. The degree to which the academic world regards us is fairly similar (though admittedly we get to have Norton Anthologies while they are sorely lacking any such distinction). I don’t read my comic book blogs as frequently as I might, but once in a while the resident husband will draw my attention to something particularly toothsome. Such a case was this series on Comic Book Resources. A fellow by the name of Greg Hatcher makes a tour of the countryside each year, finding small towns with even smaller bookshops and thrift shops. This year his has posted his finds and the children’s literature goodies are frequent. In part one he pays homage to a surprise discovery of Kieran Scott’s Geek Magnet and shows the sad state of Sacagawea-related children’s literature in gift shops today (though I sure hope the Lewis & Clark gift shop also has the wherewithal to carry Joseph Bruchac’s Sacajawea: The Story of Bird Woman and the Lewis and Clark). In part two Greg discovers the oddly comic-less Janet Townsend novel The Comic Book Mystery, finds the name Franklin Dixon on a book that ISN’T a Hardy Boys novel, and waxes eloquent on the career of illustrator Kurt Wiese. In part three he locates some very rare and pristine Trixie Belden novels (which I adored as a kid). And finally, in part four he introduces us to the Danny Dunn series, shows us a hitherto unknown Three Investigators cover, and discusses Henry Reed (with illustrations by Robert McCloskey, of course). If you enjoy bookscouting in any way, these posts are a joy. Take a half an hour out of your day to go through them. Greg writes with an easy care that I envy and hope to emulate. Plus I loved the idea of giving photographs inserted into posts colored notations the way he does. I’ve already started to try it myself. Thanks to Matt (who, I see, recently credited Better Off Ted, for which I am grateful) for the links.
- I sort of view agent Nathan Bransford with the same wary respect I once bestowed upon a toucan I found in the London department store Harrods. I’m grateful that he’s there and I can’t look away, but there’s something unnerving about running across him. And now he appears to have a book coming out with Dial in 2011, which is nice except that I keep misreading the title as Jacob Wonderbra and the Cosmic Space Kapow. For the record, I would give a whole lot of money to any author willing to name their titular character (childish giggle) after a bra, a girdle, or even a good old-fashioned garter. Okay . . . why am I talking about Nathan Bransford again? Oh righ
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Blog: Adventures in YA Publishing (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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A couple of days ago, I blogged about Nathan Bransford's Agent for a Day experiment. On Wednesday, he posted the first thirty pages of the five random queries used in the experiment on Wednesday, and then yesterday he posted his takeaway from the experiment. What I found most striking was that he had picked the five queries at random from a sample submitted for the contest--and they were all pretty good. From the sample pages provided, the manuscripts themselves also had promise. But Nathan mentioned that they all needed "some work and polish before they'd be ready." In other words, the writers queried too soon. Which isn't to say that he would necessarily take on any of the writers down the road, only that they didn't give themselves the best possible chance.
This is something I struggle with, too. I've come to look at the process of getting a manuscript published as if I am the agent for my characters. It pains me to think I'm not doing a good job representing them as much as it pains me to think I might not have written their story well enough. But how do you know?
How do you know when you've done the best you can do? How do you know when you are ready to query?
Does anyone else have this problem?
I've found a couple of good posts on the subject, but I'm still waiting for the epiphany that will keep me from doing it again. Janet Reid recommends that we succeed in writing a brilliant one-page synopsis and write a second novel before querying the first one. What do you think? Does that resonate?
Here are the links:
http://jodyhedlund.blogspot.com/2010/01/how-to-know-when-to-query.html
http://www.genreality.net/2-years-3-manuscripts-and-50-rejections-anatomy-of-an-agent-search?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=feed&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+Genreality+%28GENREALITY%29&utm_content=Google+Reader
http://jetreidliterary.blogspot.com/2009/06/how-soon-is-too-soon.html
Cheers,
Martina
P.S. - Here's a great post by Write It Sideways about the 25 Reasons (Janet Reid says) Your Query Letter Gets Rejected. (Janet Reid is the Query Shark for those of you who haven't seen her fantastic blog site).
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Blog: Adventures in YA Publishing (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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The ever intrepid Nathan Bransford has come up with an intriguing experiment: shuffle a slushpile in an agent's shoes. He has randomly chosen five queries from the 150+ submitted by willing participants, and we, his minions, are instructed to pick one that we (in our slinky agent's footwear) would choose for a submission request. In truth, he will post the first thirty pages of all five submissions so that we can see how well the queries match the writing.
Fascinating, no?
Check out the queries and cast your vote at:
http://blog.nathanbransford.com/2010/04/be-agent-for-day-ii-queries.html
Then check back on Nathan's blog tomorrow to read the partials.
Happy voting,
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Blog: Adventures in YA Publishing (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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Three different blog posts this morning got me thinking about the parallels between marketing a book and marketing a manuscript. The Intern blogged this morning about whether a writer should bother to do a website or a trailer for a manuscript before the book is picked up. Then I read the BookEnds query recap. And after that, I took a break to watch an interview with bestselling author Casey Sherman on the BubbleCow blog.
Now, as you may already know, I am NOT the queen of the query letter, and my fondness for the dreaded synopsis ranks right up there with cow tripe in my list of all time favorite things. I don't have a website for my work, nor do I have a movie trailer put together. That said, I have no lack of enthusiasm for my stories. I could talk about my characters all day, and I'm fortunate that the people who have read my manuscripts have done so not just once but several times and are almost as crazy as I am. Which is to say that they talk about my characters as if they are real people, too.
So when I think about some of the bland, boring queries I've sent out, I cringe. And I realize that part of the problem was that I knew too much about the story to identify the selling point. Fortunately, I've learned a little bit since I started querying. For one thing, I already have the one sentence pitch done for my current WIP, and for the next one on the list. I'm not letting myself get derailed by other aspects of the story that I've fallen in love with along the way. I'm also making darn sure I nail down the BIG concept before I write in the future.
Writing a book is a different job from selling a book, according to Casey Sherman. You have to put aside your Hemingway hat and put on your P. T. Barnum hat, and it's up to you to be able to do that to make your writing pay.
Hmmh. Making your writing pay. Novel concept.
Sherman also made a couple other great points:
The goal is to tell a story, and if you are a good storyteller your success will come.
And,
If you can't articulate the synopsis of your book very quickly, then the reader won't as well.
I put those thoughts together with the takeaway from the other blogs I read this morning, and here is my epiphany: the need to write a query letter isn't just some arbitrary punishment agents inflict on writers because they're mean. It's an important rite of passage for the work.
If we can't articulate the reason why an agent should read our manuscript well enough to get a request for more material, how are we going to convince a potential reader to buy the book? And no, I don't believe that's the publisher's job. Hopefully we are going to have interviews and school visits and book signings to do. That's where our enthusiasm and our ability to tell a story, and to tell it well, are going to have to shine.
So what's your book about? What's your selling point? What makes YOU love YOUR story enough to need to write it? If you can't answer that question, take time out to figure it out before you query, before you continue writing. I am convinced you will end up with a better book and a better bottom-line because you did.
Nathan Bransford asked for opinions last week about whether the query process worked. I said I thought it was probably better to have the agent read the first part of the manuscript before reading the query letter. Now I think I'm going to change my mind. I do think the query is important. But I think it works only when the writer takes the time to make the query truly reflect the work.
Someone on the BookEnds blog this morning wrote:
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Blog: Book Binge (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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Hullo there.
Er, sorry for not blogging last week. I’ve been polishing up my new project. I’d tell you about it, but I’d have to shush you. Permanently.
Anyhoo, let’s see a show of hands. How many of you writers out there have doubts about your writing? How many of you wake up everyday knowing you’re a genius scribbler?
Hmm…
My friends sometimes give me a hard time about this, but I must confess: Aside from Scarlet Whisper, Librarian/Rock Star/International Jewel Thief, I also have ANOTHER alter ego. Yes, I am the (not so super) hero known as UNCERTAIN GIRL.
Uncertain Girl has one ridiculous ability, the Paralyzing Power of Indecision. Twenty times a day, Uncertain Girl changes how she feels about her own writing. One minute, she’s onto something good. The next, she doubts she can string a first rate sentence together.
Uncertain Girl has never had a day in which she felt totally, completely, utterly brilliant about a WIP.
Is that a bad thing?
According to Nathan Bransford (one of the galaxy’s most kindly and crazy cool agents), it’s okay to be uncertain. Here’s why.
See? I don’t have to think I’m awesome. I just have to be passionate, committed, and ready to grow as a writer.
I’m happy to be imperfect me. I’m (maybe) good enough. I’m (probably) smart enough. And doggone it, (some) people like me!
I’m enjoying this unpredictable up and down journey. How about you? Please don’t leave me hanging. I’d love to know how you feel about uncertainty.
Hungry for more?
If you’re feeling anxious, try working out your issues by making these Aggression Cookies. Stress was never so yummy!
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Blog: Kelley and Hall (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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…but you can’t make him drink. I was just reading agent and writer, Nathan Bransford’s blog, and he makes an interesting and often widely overlooked point. No one person, publisher, or business can turn any book into a blockbuster success. No one in this industry has the power to turn any book into a bestseller. Yes, publishing houses can make business deals with bookstores and have their “BIG” books placed in prime, front-of-store, realty. They can have cut-out, life size displays and ads in every paper and magazine from here to Timbuktu. But if the book doesn’t build the ever elusive “word of mouth” or “buzz” that we so frequently hear about, it is not going to move off those carefully picked shelves. And what builds that buzz? Strong, compelling, well-written work that connects with readers. Because guess what? Readers talk! As Bransford says, “Lots of books get marketing dollars. Not all books become TWILIGHT or THE DA VINCI CODE or THE HELP or HARRY POTTER.” What Bransford doesn’t mention in his piece is that sometimes great books don’t get any help out of the gate and the author has a long, hard road of spreading the word about a book they believe in. It took years before Jenna Blum’s THOSE WHO SAVE US to get the recognition it deserved. It wasn’t until it was out in paperback, years after its initial launch, that it made it onto The New York Times Bestseller List. This is why publicity is so important in the world of publishing. It can’t make a bad book a bestseller, but it can help an overlooked book rise up and shine.
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Blog: Faeriality (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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Happy New Year everyone! Welcome back to the Monday Marvelous Marketer Series. The series will evolve with some new features this year. To provide your input, please take my poll on the side and give me your ideas on what you would like to see in the series this year.
We start the year off with the one and only Nathan Bransford. I'm sure we all follow his famous blog as he steers us through the publishing world. Today, he's here to share some of his Marketing knowledge.
Hi Nathan, thanks for joining us. As if you are not busy enough! Pretend that some people here don't know who you are and tell us about yourself.
Hi Shelli.
Curtis Brown Ltd. is a New York-based agency that has been representing authors since 1914, and over the years has represented an incredible array of legendary/bestselling authors. I was fortunate to have joined Curtis Brown out of college in 2002 as an assistant in the San Francisco office. I had grown up in a small town in Northern California (my parents are farmers), and living in San Francisco and working in publishing was a dream. I’ve been with Curtis Brown ever since, including a few years in the New York office, before I returned to San Francisco and began building my list in earnest.
I also recently wrote a middle grade novel called JACOB WONDERBAR AND THE COSMIC SPACE KAPOW, which will be published by Dial Books for Young Readers in 2011.
Nathan also runs a very popular blog - if you have not checked it out yet. It is a valuable resource! You can also follow him on Twitter and Facebook. It's OK he likes to be cyberstalked! ;)
Congrads on your book deal. Give me a corn dog and space any day! Thinking with both an author hat and agent hat, what do you think are the top 3 things authors should do to promote their book?
I actually only have one thing on the must do list, and that’s to have some sort of Google-able, professional web presence, whether it’s a blog, website, Facebook page… anything that is th
Blog: Kelley and Hall (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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“Whatever big events have recently occurred, sure enough, I’ll see projects that are trying to capture that lightning in a book.”
-Agent Nathan Bransford on the trends he sees in queries.
Bransford wrote last year about a wave of chick lit with heavy protagonists. Sure enough, fast forward one year and that is exactly what we are seeing on the bookshelves.
From the article:
In this brave new ‘chick lit’ world, women realize that weight loss and dieting isn’t the way to happiness. If these new heroines lose weight in the books, they do so incidentally, as a result of finding genuine happiness and fulfillment in more substantial areas of their lives.
The ultimate fantasy for most women today is simply accepting themselves, whatever their body weight.
Blog: Kelley and Hall (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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“People are deciding what media they want to consume out of a bewildering array of choices, and the ground is constantly shifting.”
-Literary agent, Nathan Bransford, at The Huffington Post, on why it is getting harder and harder for books to make a splash these days.

Blog: Musings of a Novelista (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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I usually don’t blog on the weekends, but here I am at the fabulous Main Library up the street from my house. I’m working on creating a spreadsheet to help me with my revision process (I’ll share that in an upcoming post).
Anyway, of course the library has Internet access and so I felt the need to “ease” in to my revision process (i.e,. provide myself with a procrastination tactic).
I read some blogs, including the latest This Week in Publishing post on agent Nathan Bransford’s blog. He highlighted a publishing-related article in the NY Times, Book Sales are Down, Depsite Push. Just makes up want to jump up and sing right?
Nathan also pointed to a related blog post, Book Sales and Wails by Jane Dystel, of Dystel & Goderich Literary Management. Here are some things she said in her post that struck a chord with me:
“Readers are becoming used to the fact that they will be able to find the books they want to read either in their originally published form or through used book sites or e-book editions. Just because these people are not in the bookstore the day a book is published doesn’t mean that that audience, if marketed to correctly, can’t make a title a bestseller six months after publication.
Despite this, publishers are still overpaying for a tiny percentage of books and then rolling them out as if the entire business depended on them, and they are invariably disappointed when they don’t sell by the truckload within a couple of weeks.”
I also think Ms. Dsytel makes a good point in her post about how the book industry isn’t necessarily like the movie industry where readers are going to bookstores on Tuesdays to purchase new books (okay, maybe I do, but you know what I mean, LOL). Some of the best books I didn’t even know about until several years after publication.
Maybe I’m being naive about this whole thing but I do understand that publishing is a business. But if a book’s survival is based on its sales performance in the first few weeks rather than giving it time to build an audience—these are going to be some tough times indeed for writers.
Okay, back to the spreadsheet and revision.

Blog: How To Be A Children's Book Illustrator (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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What does this short animated clip have to do with John Singer Sargent or children’s book illustration?
A quoi ca sert l’amour, a short animation by Louis Clichy, with thanks to illustrator and animation/game artist Amanda Williams for finding this. She called it “brutal and adorable.”
If a child-friendly story had illustrations with these lines — and visual characters as memorable as these, and color the way John Singer Sargent used it in his painted scenes, it would be some picture book, right?
I’m assembling my fantasy football — I mean illustration project — team here.
So, starting with the cartoon: What makes these stick figures tug at your emotions as they do?
The honesty? That we know these people? And been these people?
The “simple” (but oh-so-sophisticated) graphics with their varied perspectives and 360 degree “camera revolutions”?
All the fast cutting and surprise transitions?
The song? Edith Piaf’s and Theo Sarapo’s singing?
The subject?
Could some of this aplomb be translated into picture book illustrations?
Are these enough questions for now?
OK, so let’s add some color and texture. John Singer Sargent had a knack for these.
Thanks to Chicago based painter Raymond Thornton for finding this.
I know. Sargent is the painter who gives all other painters inferiority complexes. We don’t now a lot about how he made his palette choices. (We know that he looked carefully.)
So enough with dream teaming. We’ve got some housecleaning items today.
Two powerhouse chapters of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI) have announced their 2010 pow-wows — both set for early next year.
It’s Time to Mingle in Texas
Awesome Austin
Austin SCBWI comes first with Destination Publication featuring a Caldeecott Honor Illustrator and Newberry Honor Author, along with agents, editors, more authors, another fab illustrator, critiques, portfolio reviews and parties.
Mark the date – Saturday, January 30, 2010 from 8:00 a.m. – 5:30 p.m. Get the full lowdown and the registration form here. Send in your form pronto if you’re interested — more than 100 people have already signed up. Manuscript crtiques are already sold out. But a few portfolio reviews are still open at this writing!
Destination Publication features Kirby Larson, author of the 2007 Newbery Honor Book, Hattie Big Sky and Marla Frazee, author-illustrator of A Couple of Boys Have the Best Week Ever, which received a Caldecott Honor Award, and more recently All the World penned (all 200 words of it) by Austin’s own children’s author/poet Liz Garton Scanlon.
Frazee teaches children’s book illustration at Art Center College of Design in Pasadena, CA. She and Scanlon plan to talk about their collaboration. You can read wonderful essays by them on this very topic here.
The faculty also includes: Cheryl Klein, senior editor at Arthur A. Levine Books/Scholastic, Lisa Graff, Associate Editor at Farrar, Straus and Giroux Books for Young Readers, Stacy Cantor, Editor, Bloomsbury USA/Walker Books For Young Readers, Andrea Cascardi agent with Transatlantic Literary Agency (and a former editor), another former editor, Mark McVeigh who represents writers, illustrators, photographers and graphic novelists for both the adult and children’s markets, and agent Nathan Bransford.
The conference also features authors Sara Lewis Holmes, Shana Burg, P. J. Hoover, Jessica Lee Anderson, Chris Barton, Jacqueline Kelly, Jennifer Ziegler, Philip Yates, and illustrator Patrice Barton.
Read more about everyone here.
Happenin’ Houston
Houston SCBWI has announced the (still developing) lineup for its conference just three weeks after Austin’s: Saturday, February 20, 2010. Registration is NOW OPEN.
It headlines Cynthia Leitich Smith, acclaimed author of short stories, funny picture books, Native American fiction, and YA Gothic fantasies, Ruta Rimas, assistant editor Balzer & Bray/HarperCollin, and Patrick Collins, creative director at Henry Holt Books for Young Readers. Collins art directs and designs picture books, young adult novels and middle grade fiction.
Among the recent picture books he has worked on: Baby Bear, Baby Bear, What Do You See?, Old Penn Station and Rosa, which was a Caldecott Honor book.
The conference also features Alexandra Cooper, senior editor at Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers, Lisa Ann Sandell, senior editor at Scholastic Inc., and Sara Crowe, an agent with Harvey Klinger, Inc. in New York.
You can download Houston conference info and registration sheets from this page.
No, you don’t have to be Texan to register for either of these big events. You just have to be willing to get here for them.
Remember that just about any SCBWI conference or workshop is a great education for a very modest investment.
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Speaking of great educations for a very modest investment, Mark Mitchell, author of this post and host of this blog teaches classes in children’s book illustration at the Austin Museum of Art Art School and online. Learn more about the online course here — or sample some color lessons from the course here.


Blog: The Poisoned Apple (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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AgentExtraordinaire Nathan Bransford has declared this week Writer Appreciation Week, and he wants us to say something nice about one or more of our fellow writers. Oh goodness, I have so many people I'd love to say something nice about.
There's Katey Taylor who I imagine will one day do a book signing on the steps of the Capitol in Washington, and traffic will be backed up for miles. Then there's Aaron Polson who will have former students declaring in book shops that he used to teach them - and they'll be buying his books for their children.
Natalie Sin who will be notorious when her characters escape from the page and kidnap members of a Korean boy band. Carrie Harris, unofficial Queen of the Undead, who will make a fortune for the needle and thread industry, when her books are released. (Splitting sides - groan, if I have to explain). And as to the most wonderful, Kate Shaw, I know she will save me a seat at the premier of Jack of All Trades when the movie is released and I can't wait to buy a plush version of Pepper.
We have Jamie Eyberg who will construct a barn, paint the ceiling and mow the lawn on the day his book is released and won't even break a sweat. Barry Napier, this Birdwatcher from Mars will have so many strings to his bow he'll sweep the boards at award ceremonies. Brenton Tomlinson and his Nathan Steele series will have pundits crying, 'Harry who?'
Jeremy Kelly and Jeremy D Brooks, who will go battle to battle in the 'Best Jeremy' awards, a sparkling affair that will take place in railway carriages and casinos, and will end with them both the victors.
And what about the editors (who also be writers), Jodi Lee, Mark Deniz, R Scott McCoy and Nate Lambert - well they'll be busy polishing their Stokers and practicing acceptances speeches.
I love these guys. They've beta read my work, they've edited me, they've supported me when I'm down and cheered me when I'm up, and they're not alone. There are so many, many, many writers I'd love to appreciate (which sounds a little weird and dirty - huh!). So who have I missed out? Is it you? Then post your own Writers Appreciaton post and make sure you don't mention me.

Blog: A Sound from My Heart (Login to Add to MyJacketFlap)
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Our Western Washington SCBWI conference is two weeks in the past now, and still some of the wonderful snippets of wisdom and tantalizing tips stick in my mind, and continue to to nourish me.
I'll not forget Nina Laden (ROMEOW AND DROOLIET) reminding us, "If you don't make mistakes, you may not make anything."
And Deb Lund (MONSTERS ON MACHINES) reading her unforgettable poem about that inner voice that harasses us as we write, and summing it up by telling us, "Sometimes we have to revise our own story, that story we tell ourselves."
Krista Marino, Senior Editor at Delacorte, reminded us to take cute out of our dictionary, when talking about children's books.
Nathan Bransford (Agent, Curtis Brown Ltd.) gave us his pet peeves for story beginnings: Don't start your book with
- the weather
- your character waking up
- looking in the mirror
- sarcastic characters (too flip and negative)
He also advised us to be nice to everyone, not only because it's the right thing to do, but also because you never know when that editorial assistant may become the Senior Editor.
Kelly Sonnack (Agent, Andrea Brown Literary) told us to avoid
- forced pace-building (suddenly, quickly, at that moment)
- copious tears (only one tear per story)
- faces draining white or blushing
- exclamation points!
Justina Chen (NORTH OF BEAUTIFUL) encouraged us to "say yes to the emotional truths of your heart."
And Sundee Frazier (BRENDAN BUCKLEY'S UNIVERSE AND EVERYTHING IN IT) told us she has to write, that she cannot deny that creative part of her being. "I could not deny the One who created me."
I've offered just a few nibbles of that wonderful feast that was spread before us at our unforgettable Feed Your Genius conference. Now fully fueled, it's back to work. Happy writing, everyone!
Picture above: Some of my favorite people in the whole world--Molly Blaisdell, Janet Lee Carey, me, Katherine Grace Bond, Holly Cupala, all members of our Diviner Writing Group, all of us enjoying the Conference Feast
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For me, one of the hardest things to do is to revise my own work. It’s difficult for me to see the flaws, because I’ve usually read the words so many times that they become natural for me. Also, I’m usually so close to the writing that it just “feels” right. But I do understand that in order to get my best piece out there, I will have to do some major revisions.
My WIP right now is undergoing a massive revision. After attending the Prairie Writers’ Day conference in Chicago this fall, I realized that I needed to inject it with voice. The way it was, no one reading would really get to know the main characters, and that is key for good writing. I decided that the best way to do this is to rewrite it in the first person, thus hearing the story directly from the character herself.
The writers’ conference really helped me to look at my novel in a new way, but there are other ways to do this too. The best way is to have other people read it. Lots and lots of other people—and not just your mother and grandma, because as much as they love you, they might not be the most critical voices. I am a part of an amazing writers’ group—amazing because of the wide range of genres that we work in. There’s a children’s’ poetry author and fellow blogger, Kelly. Cathy has the eye of an editor, and she writes short stories. While Angela is part memoirist, part children’s storywriter, part editorialist. This range of eyes on my words can only make my work more scrutinized.
Another way to have your writing seen by others is to follow blogs such as Miss Snarks First Victim, and Nathan Bransford, or Legend of the Protectors, and hope that you enter their contests in time. On these blogs, you’ll get constructive criticism from other writers.
I have really appreciated all of the invaluable advice I’ve received from my readers, and my WIP is transforming from a lump of coal into something maybe just a bit shinier.

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Agent Nathan Bransford (the literary not the 007 kind) is running a first paragraph contest – 654 entries at last count – and the prize is a partial critique or a query critique of your WIP. Deadline is this Thursday. Post your first paragraphs people.
I’m just over 7,000 words into the second draft of Theatre of Curious Acts and all is going well so far despite a serious case of the procrastination virus. Fingers crossed. As per usual I am convinced that this is the one. Gee, I’m stupid. I had a list of anthologies I wanted to write for before I got back into it but impatience got the better of me. I’m thinking 57 stories is plenty for one year though so I only kicked myself twice.
A Poisoned Apple contest coming up in a few days, though it doesn’t promise to be as fun as Natalie's.
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Checking in, I achieved yesterday’s goal this morning and went further, editing chapter 15 and 16, but they were both straight edits without much reworking needed. Tomorrow’s goal: chapter 17, which will need a bit of a rewrite to fit my new outline.
Also yesterday, I put out the request for starter lines for our community story to start in the new year. Thank you Mand, who offered a great one in a comment on yesterday’s blog. Anyone else got some? I’ll have a think too, and we can vote in a couple weeks.
On the subject of starters, agent Nathan Bransford is holding his second Stupendously Ultimate First Paragraph Challenge. You can post in a comment the first paragraph of any work in progress for the chance to win your “choice of a partial critique, query critique or 15 minute phone conversation in which we can discuss topics ranging from reality TV shows to, you know, publishing. Your choice. Runners up will receive query critiques and/or other agreed-upon prizes.”
A lot of writers have already posted some brilliant first paragraphs. The deadline is Thursday at 4pm Pacific time and the winner will be announced on Friday (guess what Nathan will be doing Thursday night!). So dig up all those WIPs and post those first paragraphs. I’m going to do mine today.


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by Garth Nix HarperCollins 2007 In his introduction Nix introduces us to a lucky boy who loved to read all kinds of stories, especially ones with monsters and adventures and all sorts of fantastical things. He then explains that he was that boy, and that when he writes he likes to write the sort of things he'd like to read. This book was written for that boy. This collection brings together
Current wine, of which the minister himSELF was partial to a glass.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED THAT RASPBERRY CORDIAL.
I currently live in cordial-land, and still have never found raspberry.
Nor currant wine, either. Which is probably a good thing. Erg.
I’ve had that cordial! They sell it at the Anne of Green Gables living history-type village on PEI! That was such a cool place to visit.