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Got a great first paragraph?
Share it on author Nathan Bransford‘s site and you could win the chance to have InkWell literary agent Catherine Drayton read part of your manuscript. All the Ultimate First Paragraph Challenge finalists will win a query critique from Bransford himself–the former literary agent has been helping aspiring writers polish pitches for years.
Check it out: “Please post the first paragraph of any work-in-progress in the comments section of THIS POST. If you are reading this post via e-mail you must click through to enter. Please do not e-mail me your submission it will not count. The deadline for entry is this THURSDAY 7pm Eastern time, at which point entries will be closed. Finalists will be announced… sometime between Friday and the year 2078.”
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The goal of query letter is to elicit an invitation from an agent (or editor) to send in sample chapters or the whole manuscript.
A query letter is a ONE PAGE letter with three concise paragraphs: the hook, the mini-synopsis, and your writer’s biography. Don’t stray, if you want to be taken seriously as a professional writer. Keep it simple. Stick to three paragraphs.
Paragraph One—The Hook: A hook is a concise, one-sentence tagline for your book. It’s meant to hook your reader’s interest, and reel them in.
Example: Bridges of Madison County
When Robert Kincaid drives through the heat and dust of an Iowa summer and turns into Francesca Johnson’s farm lane looking for directions, the world-class photographer and the Iowa farm wife are joined in an experience that will haunt them forever.
Agent Query suggests using the when formula: “When such and such event happens, your main character—a descriptive adjective, age, professional occupation—must confront further conflict and triumph in his or her own special way. Sure, it’s a formula, but it’s a formula that works.”
Note: Many writers use the “when” formula, so use it as a starting point. Write your basic hook and then spice it up.
Example: Non-”formulatic” fiction hook:
The Da Vinci Code
A murder in the silent after-hour halls of the Louvre museum reveals a sinister plot to uncover a secret that has been protected by a clandestine society since the days of Christ.
Paragraph Two—Mini-synopsis: This is where boil down your entire novel into one paragraph and expand your hook. Put in the hard work of practicing and revising, until you get that paragraph to sing the same tune as your whole book. Read the back flap of books you like to get a feel for how to create a juicy paragraph.
Paragraph Three—Writer’s bio: Keep it short and related to writing. If your book revolves around a hospital and you are a nurse, then say that. If you have a published book, been published in some magazines, etc,, or won a writing contest or award, then let the agent know. if you’ve never been published, never won any awards, hold no writing degrees, and have no credentials to write your book, then don’t say it. This just gives you more space for Paragraph Two.
The Closing: Thank the agent for their time and consideration. Let the agent know you have the full manuscript available upon request. Note: Never query an agent unless you have written, revised, and finished your full manuscript.
TIPS:
1. Always address your query to a specific person.
2. Make sure you mention the title of your book.
3. Mention the word count and genre of your book.
Note: Novels should be 80,000 to 100,000 words. Young adult novels can be significantly less: 40,000-60,000 words. Insert word count and genre at the end of your first “hook” paragraph.
If your novel is 200,000 words – Cut before you query. No one wants an overweight manuscript. AgentQuery reports unless your manuscript is a historical family saga or an epic science fiction battle, agents hit DELETE on proposed first-time novel over 110,000-120,000 words.
4. Share the reason why you are querying this particular agent. Let the agent know that you have researched them and have a reason for choosing them for representation.
5. Have someone you know check for typos and grammar mistakes. It is very easy when e-mailing a query letter to click the send button before throughly checking your text. Writers seem to be in the mode to triple check everything when they snail mail their queries, but since we send so many personal e-mails without closely checking every word, that “Send” button can be easily clicked. The mistake snail mailing query writers make is forgetting to include their contact information – something you don’t need to include with an e-mail. I know that sounds crazy, but I have seen it when writers have sent me submissions for editors and agents.
Need to see an ACTUAL query letter before you’ll know how to write one? Here is the query letter Author (at the time agent) Nathan Bransford:
Dear Ms. Drayton,
As a young literary agent with Curtis Brown Ltd. I have long admired Inkwell, as well as your strong track record. To paraphrase Douglas Adams, if you searched for a book that was almost, but not quite, entirely unlike THE BOOK THIEF (which I absolutely loved), you might just have JACOB WONDERBAR AND THE COSMIC SPACE KAPOW, a middle-grade-and-up science fiction novel that I just completed. Still fun! But no one dies – Mr. Death would be lonely.
Jacob Wonderbar has been the bane of every substitute teacher at Magellan Middle School ever since his dad moved away from home. He never would have survived without his best friend Dexter, even if he is a little timid, and his cute-but-tough friend Sarah Daisy, who is chronically overscheduled. But when the trio meets a mysterious man in silver one night they trade a corn dog for his sassy spaceship and blast off into the great unknown. That is, until they break the universe in a giant space kapow and a nefarious space buccaneer named Mick Cracken maroons Jacob and Dexter on a tiny planet that smells like burp breath. The friends have to work together to make it back to their little street where the houses look the same, even as Earth seems farther and farther away.
JACOB WONDERBAR AND THE COSMIC SPACE KAPOW is 50,000 words and stands alone, but I have ideas for a series, including titles such as JACOB WONDERBAR FOR PRESIDENT OF THE UNIVERSE and JACOB WONDERBAR AND THE VACATIONING ALIENS FROM ANOTHER PLANET. I’m the author of an eponymous agenting and writing blog.
I’d be thrilled if you would consider WONDERBAR for representation, and a few other agents are considering simultaneously. Thanks very much, and hope to talk to you soon.
Nathan Bransford
Here are a few other places to look:
Nathan Bransford dissects a really good query letter and extoll its virtues.
Click Here to Visit Galleycat. They have 23 Agent Query Letters That Actually Worked.
Nonfiction writers don’t need to have a completed fiction manuscript. They only need a proposal before seeking representation from an agent. Here’s are books and places to help with writing a proposal:
- “How to Write a Non-Fiction Proposal” Former literary agent, Nathan Bransford.
- Agent Sharlene Martin’s book, Publish Your Nonfiction Book: Strategies for Learning the Industry, Selling Your Book, and Building a Successful Career By Sharlene Martin and Anthony Flacco
- How to Write a Book Proposal, 4th Edition By Michael Larsen
Talk tomorrow,
Kathy
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Author Nathan Bransford put together something a little bit special and a lot funny this week. It's been doing the rounds on facebook amongst those of a writerly persuasion and is well worth a watch for anyone who hasn't seen it! (And a second, third and fourth watch, come to think of it.) Seeing as even we on the Slushpile couldn't put it any better, here's the link: http://
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Here’s my selection of interesting (and sometimes amusing) posts about writing from the last week:
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Agent turned author, Nathan Bransford, has been kind enough to promote my blog post (about an agent's possible response to the query letter within the lyrics of the Beatles, Paperback Writer), from his forums to his main blog today.
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I'm a big fan of Nathan's blog. he does a lot to help and promote other writers (which is probably why he has about a gazillion regular readers). Currently, he's invited folks to share a funny scene from one of their novels or stories (click here for more info) - Please note, you must be over 14 and less than 189 years old to enter.
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Here’s my selection of interesting (and sometimes amusing) posts about writing from the last week:
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Reading a Moby Lives article this morning (fantastic blog BTW) and they posted two surveys taken by author Nathan Bransford where he asked people what they thought an ebook should cost if the hardcover retailed at $25.
He ran the first survey on June 14 2010:
And then ran the exact same survey again on February 2, 2011:
The polls are entirely unscientific but it appears that all the $9.99 pricing pushes that have been going on for the past year or two are really leaving their mark.
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How much should an eBook cost? To give publishers and authors some guidance, we’ve collected spirited defenses of seven different eBook prices–choose the price that works best for your writing.
According to a new and unscientific poll, Nathan Bransford found that 51 percent of his readers thought eBooks should be priced between $5 and $9.99. What is your favorite price point?
$0.99 Novelist John Locke sold more than one million eBooks with this price point: “When I saw that highly successful authors were charging $9.99 for an e-book, I thought that if I can make a profit at 99 cents, I no longer have to prove I’m as good as them … Rather, they have to prove they are ten times better than me.”
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What with the elderly relatives visiting from England last week, I got a little behind on blog reading (and posting), which is why I only just noticed that the amazing Nathan Bransford featured my post, 10 Things You Shouldn't Say To An Agent, in his Friday roundup.
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Here’s my selection of interesting (and sometimes amusing) posts about writing from the last week:
Is the second novel really easier? (Douglas W. Jacobson)
Launching a Book (Elizabeth Spann Craig)
The Case for Putting a Manuscript in the Drawer (Nathan Bransford)
10 Signs of a Typical Writing Day (Elspeth Antonelli)
Asking a Published Author to Read Your Work (Rachelle Gardner)
Do You Really Need an Author Blog if You’re on Facebook or Twitter? (Judy Dunn)
My Inevitable Prologue Post (Sarah LaPolla)
Reader Impact: Why you should preorder (Mike Kabongo aka onyxhawke)
Penguin’s Book Country (Jim C. Hines aka jimhines)
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I LOVE reading good query letters, Kathy. They are SO helpful. I find I’m often surprised that, although we’re told to be SO professional in our approach (not overly friendly), that some of the best have a more casual tone. Makes you wonder!
Thanks for the examples and formula. I need to rework my query and this will be very helpful.
Lots of exceptionally helpful information here, thanks Kathy. I will be printing this out and keeping it handy for all my submissions.
Thank you for your generosity.
Mandy,
My pleasure! It makes me happy when someone says they find a post helpful Good Luck!
Kathy
Kathy…I keep forgetting what amazingly helpful posts you do. Julie Hedlund steered me to this one. Great tips and really needed by me right now.:)