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Natalie Fischer has recently moved from the Sandra Dijkstra Literary Agency to the
Bradford Agency. While she isn't accepting submissions yet, she expects to get rolling soon. In the meantime, we've been lucky to have her answer a few questions on the topic of voice, one of the hardest things for most writers to nail down. She also has a
great blog with more information, and she tweets at
@Natalie_Fischer.
First Chapter Critique Giveaway
Want to know if your voice is right for your manuscript? For the market? Comment and fill out the form below! To help us celebrate the one year anniversary of this blog, Natalie has generously donated a 1st chapter critique for a random winner. We'll draw the name and post it Saturday.
Interview
Question: How would you describe the difference between voice, style, and language in a manuscript?
Natalie: Language is diction: the word choices, the literal language of nationality. Style is the form: short, choppy, flowing, poetic, lyrical. Voice is the personality, the person behind the words that makes the reader forget about the author, and dive into a life. It’s what you remember about the characters long after you’ve forgotten their names.
Question: What mistakes do you see writers make when trying to develop or show a “voice”?
Natalie: I think the biggest mistake is to try and show voice through style or language. Using heavy slang or methods like “Southern dialogue” are annoying, not effective. Voice is a point of view, a perspective that is unique to only one person. It has emotion, history, a sense of place, and senses. These things are shown in unison with style and language, but not reliant on them to be clear.
Question: What is it about a voice that makes you sit up and take notice, and what makes you stop reading?
Natalie: I think what makes me fall in love with a voice is one that I can relate to. What makes me stop reading is one I can’t. Very simple, really, and oh so subjective!
Question: What kind of voices are being done too often or not well enough?
Natalie: I think the most common voice is snarky in tone (and my personal favorite), and the hardest voice to do well is middle grade.
Question: As an agent, what is more important to you: concept, character, action/plot, or voice--and why?
Natalie: Voice, voice, voice! It’s the hardest to fix. If you have voice down, the rest can be thought up.
Question: Name three books that you love for their plot.
Natalie: Am I allowed to use the Harry Potter books – all of them? Is that a cop-out?
Question: Name three books you love for the memorable characters.
Natalie: Jane Austen and Charles Dickens were masters of memorable characters. I’d also have to say Ella from ELLA ENCHATED is one of my favorite characters of all time.
Question: Name three books where the voice blew you away.
Natalie: I’d rather pick a genre: Romance. Romance novels are ALL about voice; from the first page, first sentence, it hits you with a “bam!”
To combine these all up, I think Time Traveler’s wife was the ideal blend of plot, character development, and voice; that
The results are in for the
top ten finalists in our
Line-by-line novel opening contest, and our generous guest judge,
Natalie Fischer, has gone above and beyond the call of duty by providing comments on each of the top 25 entries that did not make the final cut. She wanted us to let everyone know that this last round was very difficult to judge. She also pointed out that opinions are highly subjective when it comes to writing. What may appeal to her over another entry may appeal less to another agent, or visa versa. Natalie reviewed entries based on her individual tastes and client list, and without a query letter describing the overall story direction, she often had to guess where things were heading.
Since Natalie pointed out the difficulties of judging these entries without an accompanying query, we are going to do something a little different with this week's critique clinic. First, we are going to expand critiques for the top 11 to 25 to include a full page (250 words). Second, we are going to invite those writers to include a query letter as well as the first 250. Our guest critiquers will not be required to critique the queries, but they will take them into consideration while giving their feedback on the novel opening. We also invite any of our guest authors or followers who wish to do so to provide respectful input on the page, the query, or both together.
To participate in the clinic, please add your first page, or your query and first page, along with your name and entry number in the comments below by Monday, July 19 at 6:00 pm. We will recreate them as individual posts and open them for feedback on Tuesday morning, July 20th.
The eligible entries are posted below with Natalie's comments underneath in bold.
#1 Kat ZhangAdie and I were born into the same body, our souls’ ghostly fingers entwined before we gasped our very first breath. Our first few years were our happiest-then came the worries: the tightness around our parents’ mouths, the frowns lining our kindergarden teacher’s forehead, the question everyone whispered when they thought we couldn’t hear.
Why aren’t they settling?
We tried to form the word in our five-year-old mouth, tasting it on our tongue: Set-Tull-Ling.
NF: The last line did it for me; I worried about having to deal with the “our” voice (possessive first) the whole book***
#2 Creepy Query Girl"How do you punish someone who’s already dead?" Gretchen Grey tightened her grip around an umbrella handle while she waited for her parents to arrive. Her haunted blue eyes examined the London townhouse where she had grown up. Thick green ivy cast shadow around the entrance and spread towards the outer corners, almost reaching the top floor panes.
NF: Interesting, but not sure if this is supernatural or if she’s angry at someone who’s dead; also, “haunted blue eyes” is telling, and telling right up front worries me… ***
#14 cchant
My hope of living a normal life in Lindenville faded faster than my fifteen dollar jeans the moment I got to the school bus stop. How could anything be normal after you hear you’re living with a dead girl?
"That’s Laura’s house--you don’t belong there."
I stared at the tall blonde who’d launched herself
Round Four judging for our Line-by-line novel opening contest is now complete. The top ten opening sentences are in, and literary agent
Natalie Fischer says the entries are getting harder and harder to pick--there are too many great beginnings. Without a query letter to clue her into the plot, she's having to rely on guesses about where she thinks the novel is going. And she also points out that evaluating writing of any kind is a highly subjective process.
Without further ado, the finalists are listed below. At the end of the contest,
each of them will receive at minimum a 3-page critique from one of our participating authors. If you are one of these lucky ten, please add the first five sentences of your manuscript along with your entry number and name into the comments of this post by 6:00 pm Monday, July 19th for the final round of judging.
If you didn't make it to the last round, we will be holding the promised critique clinic for you. There will be an announcement posted about it this afternoon.
Finalists
#11 L.J. Boldyrev There’s a dead girl in the trunk and all I can think about is how white the trees are. There ain’t no street lamps on this stretch of road, but still the trees glow like they’re lit from the ground up.
“Not much farther,” Jack says.
I want to tell him he’s driving too fast, to slow down so I can get a better look at the trees, but I know we got to hurry.
#18 Jenn FitzgeraldMadame Bhut’s Finishing School in the town of Whut was known across Amalthea as a respectable place to send your daughter if you were hoping to marry her to a gentleman; not for producing evil queens with ideas of world domination. That is, until Priscilla Martin escaped.
Even before she escaped, Priscilla was less than a model student. Miss Birch, the embroidery teacher, had been horrified to find that during her second week at the school Priscilla had started embroidering skulls and crossbones instead of flowers on all her projects.
#28 Cambria DillonWhoever said cell phones made life easier was full of BS. If it were true, then I wouldn’t have spent the past fourteen minutes sitting on my bed, half-naked, wondering why my thumb couldn’t do something as simple as press a button.
Girls did this sort of thing every day. Probably every minute at Pembroke, which meant I had just wasted fourteen—no wait, fifteen—opportunities to prove to Tommy that—damn it Kendall, just do it already.
#47 Margaret NicholsThe bonfire in the middle of the grand plaza of New Tikal sent sparks up to greet the low-hanging stars; the stars Mau B'ah-Pakal hoped were still speaking to him, because no one else was. He had failed his friends, offended the Emperor, and worst of all - he could barely think it - had he really shoved his grandmother?
The plaza was full of people celebrating the equinox, but Mau couldn't hide in the crowd. Although he had the chocolate skin and thick black hair of his people, his forearms and the back of his hands were covered with tattoos.
#54 shanini3 There was no mistaking the darkness on the eastern horizon; they were coming.
Malaysa clutched the balcony railing as she stared out over the land in the predawn glow from the sky. The tinkling of metal tubes continued to ring out in the air; they were what had woken her up.
Her mother, standing by her side, bore a terrified expression.
#57 SheilaJacob shook the bamboo bars of his cage agai
The results are in! Literary Agent
Natalie Fischer has picked the top 25 finalists in our
Line-by-line novel opening contest.
If your entry
is not listed below and you are one of the 25 that didn't make it through this round, we invite you to join our
Round 3 Critique Clinic to find out why. The critique clinics are an amazing opportunity to get feedback from agented, published, and debut authors who are donating their time and expertise to help you. Please see the list of participating authors and post your entry number and first five sentences in the comments by clicking here.
If you your entry
is listed below, please add a comment to this post including your entry number and the first four sentences from your YA or MG novel.
TOP 25 FINALISTS
#1 Kat ZhangAdie and I were born into the same body, our souls’ ghostly fingers entwined before we gasped our very first breath. Our first few years were our happiest—then came the worries: the tightness around our parents’ mouths, the frowns lining our kindergarden teacher’s forehead, the question everyone whispered when they thought we couldn’t hear.
Why aren’t they settling?
#2 Creepy Query Girl ‘How do you punish someone who’s already dead?’ Gretchen Grey tightened her grip around an umbrella handle while she waited for her parents to arrive. Her haunted blue eyes examined the London townhouse where she had grown up.
#11 L.J. BoldyrevThere’s a dead girl in the trunk and all I can think about is how white the trees are. There ain’t no street lamps on this stretch of road, but still the trees glow like they’re lit from the ground up.
“Not much farther,” Jack says.
#14 cchant My hope of living a normal life in Lindenville faded faster than my fifteen dollar jeans the moment I got to the school bus stop. How could anything be normal after you hear you’re living with a dead girl?
“That’s Laura’s house. You don’t belong there.”
#18 Jenn FitzgeraldMadame Bhut’s Finishing School in the town of Whut was known across Amalthea as a respectable place to send your daughter if you were hoping to marry her to a gentleman, not for producing evil queens with ideas of world domination. That is, until Priscilla Martin escaped.
Even before she escaped, Priscilla was less than a model student.
#20 HeatherAmidst the never-ending fires and screams of defiant terror, Abby collapsed to the ground – feet twisting inward, eyes unwilling to stay open, and desperately wishing to pass out. Exhausted from the chase, tired of the hiding. For fifteen years, she had never felt her stomach cave in from hunger like it did now; even the stench of death and decay rooted beneath her skin as if it were her own that was blackened with Consumption.
#27 salarsenッThe challenge began like all the rest, although the dead corpse-look was different. Ana wished she could ignore it, pretend it didn’t exist, but that never worked. She could feel them.
#28 Cambria Dillon Whoever said cell phones made life easier was full of BS. If it were true, then I wouldn’t have spent the past fourteen minutes sitting on my bed, half-naked, wondering why my
As promised, here are the entries in the first round
of our Line-by-Line contest. Literary Agent Natalie Fischer is judging these now, and the top 75 entries will be announced on 6/24/10 and the lucky winners will be asked to submit the second line. In the meantime, please post your comments, encouragement, and suggestions for the following brave writers! And keep your comments kind, respectful, and snarkless.
#1 Kat ZhangAdie and I were born into the same body, our souls’ ghostly fingers entwined before we gasped our very first breath.
#2 Creepy Query Girl‘How do you punish someone who’s already dead?’
#3 Pam Harris"It's not that I'm ugly or anything."
#4 JayceeKayceeThe shriek of my cell phone in the quiet classroom meant only one thing: the killer had found us again.
#5 Natalie Aguirre“You don’t know what it’s like not knowing if you’re like your real mom or dad,” Jasmine said.
#6 ChristineMary Kate Stewart secretly hoped that her Calculus teacher would get hit by a taco truck.
#7 Hanna C. HowardI am told it is wonderful to be beautiful.
#8 Stina LindenblattIt was like leaping off a ten-meter platform when you’re terrified of heights.
#9 Vicki Tremper “All cockroaches step forward,” a voice barked.
#10 Robyn Campbell Anna threw open the barn door and smiled at Fancy, who stamped her foot and stuck her head over the stall opening.
#11 L.J. Boldyrev There’s a dead girl in the trunk and all I can think about is how white the trees are.
#12 Marquita Hockaday I’m in hell.
#13 Sangay Glass Yeah, it was gross, but with only seconds to spare Aleksandra really had no choice.
#14 cchantMy hope of living a normal life in Lindenville faded faster than my fifteen dollar jeans the moment I got to the school bus stop.
#15 Dunnes in UK Ellen’s forehead cracked painfully against the window as her Aunt’s ancient pick-up hit a huge hole in the questionable country road, waking her from the most bizarre dream.
#16 JaniceAnn stood in the foyer, pulling off her gloves and then her coat, and considered how little the war had changed things at home.
#17 Courtney Lowe "Screams ripped me from sleep."
#18 Jenn Fitzgerald Madame Bhut’s Finishing School in the town of Whut was known across Amalthea as a respectable place to send your daughter if you were hoping to marry her to a gentleman; not for producing evil queens with ideas of world domination.
#19 Nicole Zoltack My papers scattered everywhere, and my books fell with a loud thud.
#20 Heather Amidst the never-ending fires and screams of defiant terror, Abby collapsed to the ground, feet twisting inward, eyes unwilling to stay open, and desperately wishing to pass out.
#21 Buffy Andrews I have a secret.
#22 Margay"I always knew my name would get me into trouble one day."
#23 Michele Shaw It was a knock--the harmless rap of knuckles against wood--that broke open my wounds.
#24 Natalie C. MarkeyWater churned all around like a water sprout encasing me in a prison.
#25 C DavidThe old van in the woods had been rooted in middle school lore since ages past.
Ready to know more about our contest this week? Here is the basic information:
What you need:
- The best possible opening sentence for your completed MG or YA novel.
- A compelling opening sequence of five sentences that each make the reader itch to keep reading.
When you need it:
- First sentence by Thursday 6/10 at 8:00 a.m. Eastern Time, first 50 submissions, or Thursday 6/10 a.m. at noon E.T., another 50 submissions.
- If you pass, you'll be invited to submit the second sentence, and so on.
The prizes:
- Natalie Fischer of the Sandra Dijkstra Literary Agency will judge and offer a 25-page manuscript critique to the 1st place winner, a 10-page manuscript critique to the 2nd place winner, and books from SDLA authors to places 1-3.
- A 5-page critique by P. J. Hoover, author of The Forgotten Worlds Trilogy for the 3rd place winner.
- Three-page critiques for finalists by debut authors who have recently fought their way through the submission process and won. Authors include Kirstin Hubbard, Cole Gibsen, Michelle Hodkin and more....
Okay, enough peeking. The full contest rules will go up at 6:00 a.m. on Thursday, the first submission window starts at 8:00 a.m. Now back to our regularly scheduled Tuesday "How-to" program,
The Scene Conflict Worksheet--Developing Tension in Your Novel. Scroll down, the worksheet is right below.
Get your openings ready!
Martina & Marissa
Well, I swore I'd give contest-entering a rest, but I can't resist the critique ones!! I need all the help I can get there. lol
Great interview and so timely. I need to revise my manuscript one more time for voice. I follow Natalie's blog. It's really helpful. Thanks for the contest.
Excellent interview - and what an opportunity with the contest!
Awesome interview!! Thanks for the contest :)
Great interview. I have had some very nice rejections from Mrs. Fischer in the past. Her criticism is spot on. I'd love to win this critique. As she said, MG voice is the hardest to nail. Good luck to all participants.
Such great information, thank you :-) I hear so many different views on voice, but this one just rings true with me ^_^
I've been thinking a lot about voice lately, so I appreciated this interview. Thanks for the great contest opportunity!
Thank you for the interview and for the contest. It is a great opportunity with a great agent!
What a great interview! Thank you. And thank you and Ms. Fischer for such a great opportunity. I'd love a first chapter critique.
What a great opportunity! Thanks guys. And a wonderful explanation on voice, language and style. I agree voice is the hard part.
Fantastic interview! I love your posts. You guys do such a great job keeping us informed on all things Kid Lit!
I love that she said "Don't be afraid to let parts of yourself shine through into your characters." I don't see how I COULDN'T put the smallest bit of myself into each of my characters.
Great interview! Thank you so much!
This interview was excellent, and thanks for the opportunity to win a critique. :)
Sounds like some good advice. I'll give it a go.
Excellent interview...it's so great to get inside an agent's head, isn't it? And thanks to you both for the critique giveaway!
Thank you for this interview, and thank you Natalie for offering up a critique!
Fantastic interview and I think I just fell even more in love with Ms.Fischer - the Fifth Element is one of my faves too :)
Great interview - thanks for the opportunity!
Thank you! Voice it the hardest thing to nail, especially if I try to hard. Hope I'm getting it right!
I'm learning so much about voice with Natalie's interviews and with your workshop. You all rock! Thanks for supporting us writers by offering wonderful workshops, contests, and guests like Natalie Fischer. :D
Great interview! Every time someone talks about how important voice is, it makes me feel better, because while I'm still agent-hunting, I've been given great feedback concerning my voice. It makes me hopeful and motivates me to keep trying :)
Thanks for the interview and the opportunity Natalie!
Happy writing all!
Great interview - and contest opportunity. Sign me up! :_
This was a great post and interview. Voice is definitely the most pulling-your-hair-out hardest thing to get straight.
Um, and I gave my given name when I signed up (it looked official, so I went with my legal name) for the chapter critique, so when there are no comments from Stephanie Marchi, I'm her...
I loved The Fifth Element! It was a great combination of quirkiness, visual beauty, and mayhem.
Hi Marissa and Martina - and hi Natalie
Really interesting interview. I think the most difficult part of creating a voice, is creating one that is different from your own natural voice - or at least convincingly different. Writing in character is like acting - takes skill and practice.
:Dom
Great tips! And can I say that I love Natalie just because she loves the Fifth Element? Such an under-rated movie. It has a high cheese factor, but still....gotta love it. One of my faves.
I think voice has got to be one of those elusive things to define but which I rely on to hook me into a story. Lovely contest. I'm in!
I love the Time Traveller's Wife. Such a fab book. Thanks for the contest :)
Nice interview -- thanks!
J.K Rowling's gift was to create voice without being in the first person. That is damn hard.
Voice can be such a tricky thing. Thanks for these tips!
Excellent advice, Natalie! Voice is definitely the hardest to nail down, but one you do, everything else kind of falls into place, so it's worth spending time on.
And I love the fact that you love ELLA ENCHANTED!
Thanks for the interview and the contest! I completely agree with the part about Southern dialogue being annoying - I like a little, but a lot makes it sound like the author has never actually been to the South. I read a YA book (won't say which one) that's set in contemp Virginia and all the girls were basically saying, "Why, I do declare!" I think the author must have written the book after watching Gone with the Wind.
A great interview and fabulous contest!
Great interview! That's the best description of voice I've heard so far.
I've learned so much for this interview! Thank you so much!
Michael
Hmmmm.. a six figure deal is on my wishlist for 2011 as well. Coincidence? =)
Thanks for this! Great explanation of voice. :)
Awesome interview. I loved the explanation of voice and style. :)
Great interview, her blog is also an awesome spot :)
Ah, voice. Everyone wants it, no one can define it. Thank you, Natalie, for your perspective. You've definitely given this writer some ideas about what makes a writer's voice shine.
Are you kidding me? A critique from Natalie Fischer? How awesome is that??? And this interview is sooo helpful. Off to check my WIP now :)
Thanks for the great look at voice. I hadn't heard someone talk about how voice is different than just language or style, but that concept makes a lot of sense. Thank you!
You guys are so awesome!
Fantastic prize, hope I win :)
Thank you for the wonderful interview--and the great prize opportunity. Happy blogoversary!
Great tips on voice. I find it easy in some chapters, and much harder in others.
I love the point about the voice being what makes you remember those characters - so true!! :)
"Voice is a point of view, a perspective. . . emotion, history, a sense of place, and senses."
This is brilliant definition of voice. It's so concrete. I've never heard it put this way. Thanks Natalie!
The interview was helpful. I thought to give contests a break, but this one is worth it.
Great insight on voice! Thanks!!
Great interview, great contest, great opportunity. You kind of rule. :)
Awesome! Thanks for the great interview. ;)
Great interview and great contest! Happy blogiversary!
Great interview! And great tips on voice too (which is, imo, the hardest thing to work on in writing)!
Thanks so much for giving what you do to the writing community! Great interview. Great prize!!!
Great interview. Thanks for the contest
Great discussion on voice. Thanks for shedding more light on the subject.
I've never been one to reread a book but I am one that will forever be swayed by a personal recommendation. Fifth Element is now in my queue, many thanks.
Great opportunity :)
I love finding blogs with so much great information--happy anniversary! I blogged about your contest, but I didn't see a cutoff time/date, so I just said you were planning on awarding the critique on Saturday.
Thanks for the opportunity!
One of the best posts on voice I've seen! It's such a hard thing to define or even put into words... so thanks! Awesome contest too!!!
Wow. That is the best explanation of voice I've seen! Most people just say something like, "Well, um, it's kind of just how you write, you know?"
Great advice and just what I needed right now. I'm editing my novel and trying to get a unique voice down is more difficult than I realized, but this explanation helps.
This is great article. It's good to know that 'voice' is FTW! I think that's what's so hard about 3rd person POV...how do you combine the author's voice with the character's? So complex, but so obvious when you see it done right!
Great interview and advice. Thanks Natalie!
Great interview. Very helpful. I love that Natalie is all about Voice. If I can read a book and not get caught up in all the little things, but have the voice carry me through them, it's a winner! What an awesome giveaway! Thanks and congrats on one year :)
Wonderful giveaway...Congrats on the blogaversary! Here's to many many more :)
Great blog. Glad I found it.
Great interview, very informative, and thanks for the contest. :) Major WOOHOO for the FIFTH ELEMENT! One of my fave movies.
I'm in! Thanks for a great post.
Terrific tips and contest - thanks for hosting :)
What a great interview and an awesome contest!
Voice is so hard to master! And like Natalie says, it's so subjective...
Interesting interview. Thanks for the opportunity to win a critique. I need it!
Awesome opportunity! A first chapter critique from an agent would be overwhelming. Thanks!
Marie at the Cheetah