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Patricia Nelson joined the Marsal Lyon Literary Agency as assistant to Kevan Lyon in March 2014, and became an agent in September 2014. Previously, she interned at The Angela Rinaldi Literary Agency and in the childrenâs division at Running Press.
Patricia represents adult and young adult fiction, and is actively looking to build her list. On the adult side, she is interested in literary fiction and commercial fiction in the New Adult, womenâs fiction, and romance genres. For YA, she is looking for contemporary/realistic fiction as well YA mystery/thriller, horror, magical realism, science fiction and fantasy. She is also interested in finding exciting multicultural and LGBTQ fiction, both YA and adult. In general, Patricia loves stories with complex characters that jump off the page and thoughtfully drawn, believable relationships â along with writing that makes her feel completely pulled into these charactersâ lives and worlds.
Patricia received her bachelorâs degree from the College of William and Mary in 2008, and also holds a masterâs degree in English Literature from the University of Southern California and a masterâs degree in Gender Studies from the University of Texas at Austin. Before joining the world of publishing, she spent four years as a university-level instructor of literature and writing.
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Send a query letter by email to: Patricia [at] MarsalLyonLiteraryAgency.com and write âQUERYâ in the subject line of the email. Please note that the agency now accepts electronic submissions only. In all submissions, please include a contact phone number as well as your email address. âIf we are interested in your work, we will call or email you. If not, we will respond via email. Our response time is generally 1-4 weeks for queries and 4-8 weeks for sample pages and manuscripts. We welcome unsolicited materials and look forward to reading your work.â
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Uwe Stender, agent and owner of TriadaUS Literary Agency, Inc. located northwest of Pittsburgh recently hired Brent Taylor who recently completed an Internship at The Bent Agency.
According to Publishers Marketplace, owner Uwe Stender has sold six books so far this year. Here is an opportunity to get in on the ground floor with a new agent, Brent Taylor (pictured on left), at a fairly new agency.
Here is what Brent says he is looking for: âMy tastes are eclectic, but all of my favorite novels are similar in that they have big commercial hooks and fantastic writing. I am seeking smart, fun, and exciting books for readers of middle grade, young adult, new adult, and select mystery/crime and womenâs fiction.
Middle Grade: For younger readers I am on the hunt for a humorous, intelligent fantasy; a scare-the-pants-off-me ghost or haunting story; fast-paced literary writing similar in style to Jerry Spinelli and Cynthia Lord. I have soft spots for larger-than-life characters and atmospheric setting (creepy and/or quirky).
Young Adult: Iâm always looking for genre-bending books that can be an exciting puzzlement when thinking about how precisely to market; specifically mystery and crime for teens, the grittier the better; high-concept contemporary stories with addicting romantic tension. Iâm a sucker for themes of finding your place in the world, new beginnings, and summer-before-college stories.
New Adult: My tastes in New Adult tend to be more darkly skewed but I would love a well-executed story that shares the same excitement, wonder, and invigoration of books like LOSING IT. Although I appreciate any story thatâs told well in great language, in New Adult Iâm more concerned with being entertained and gripped by the edge of my seat than in being stimulated.
Adult: I would love a psychological suspense based on actual events, i.e. CARTWHEEL by Jennifer Dubois which fictionalized the Amanda Knox trial and hooked me from beginning to end. Alternatively, Iâd love high-concept womenâs fiction; either an exquisitely told story huge in size and scope, or a less ambitious novel that simply warms my heart.â
How to submit:Â Send your query letter and first ten pages pasted in the body of the message to brent [at] triadaus.com. Or follow him on twitter: @NaughtyBrent
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Don’t be afraid of the difference between literary and commercial fiction like these Scaredy Scouts illustrated by B.L. Bachmann below. B.L. is a writer and illustrator living in Los Angeles. Her mission is to make people smile, and even giggle :) See more at http://www.blbachmann.com
I spent last week running two writer’s retreats in Avalon, NJ. The agents at the first retreat were Sarah LaPolla from Bradford Literary and Carly Watters from P.S. Literary. The agents at the second retreat were Ammi-Joan Paguette from Erin Murphy Agency and Heather Alexander from Pippin Properties.Â
It was a gorgeous week. Everyone received a full manuscript critique with an agent and a full manuscript critique from everyone in their group. I have to say, I think both of the sessions were the best retreats I have put together. The agents were top notched and each writer  in each group took extreme care with their critiques, so we walked away with lots of ideas for revisions and with many doors open with the agents. On top of that, everyone meshed well and we had a tons of fun. Can’t think of anything that was missing.Â
During the week the question came up about the difference between Literary Fiction and Commercial Fiction. Lucky for us, Sarah LaPolla had written an explanation on her blog and gave me permission to post it on Writing and Illustrating.
Here is Sarah:
I don’t think writers should get too hung up on labels, but it’s important to know what genre you’re writing. You’re expected to give an agent an immediate sense of where they can sell your book, but even more than that you should be able to know who you’ll be next to on a bookshelf so that you can read your comparison titles accordingly.
Figuring out thriller vs. mystery vs. suspense or paranormal romance vs. urban fantasy vs. supernatural horror can be difficult, I know. In these cases, it’s best to just choose the closest and let a professional decide the best way they can sell it. But the line between literary and commercial isn’t as vague. You shouldn’t claim your book is literary fiction if it isn’t. For one, it’s rare you’ll find an agent who looks for literary fiction and genre fiction with the same fervor, if they take on both at all. You don’t want to get a rejection based on a mislabel. Secondly, literary fiction is quite different than genre fiction, and not learning the difference can reflect a lack of research on your part.
The common argument, however, is that all books are technically literary. Right? Well, yes and no. Saying all books are literary is like saying all Young Adult novels are about characters under 25. The genre labels can be misleading, which is why it’s important to know what they mean.
If you’re unsure about which you’ve written, here’s a quick definition of each:
Literary fiction: The focus is on character arc, themes (often existential), and the use of language. I like to compare literary fiction authors to runway designers. The general public isn’t mean to wear the clothes models display on the runway. They exist to impress the other designers and show the fashion industry what they can do. Literary writing is a lot like that, but on a more accessible level. Many dismiss literary fiction as “too artsy” and “books without a plot,” but this isn’t true. At least not most of the time. The plot is there; it’s just incidental. Literary fiction is meant to make the reader reflect, and the author will almost always prefer a clever turn of phrase over plot development.
Commercial fiction: For the purposes of this blog post, I’ve been using this interchangeably with genre fiction. Basically, all genre fiction is commercial, but not all commercial fiction is genre. There is also “upmarket” commercial fiction, which I’ll get to later. Unlike literary fiction, genre fiction is written with a wide audience in mind (aka “commercial”) and always focuses on plot. There is still character development in genre fiction, but it is not as necessary. Characters get idiosyncratic quirks, clever dialogue, and often learn something new about life or themselves by the end. The difference is that their traits are only skin deep. The reader stays with them in the present. Rarely do we see a character’s past unless there is something pertinent to the plot back there. Genre fiction has a Point A and a Point B, and very little stands in the way of telling that story.
Keep in mind that an agent or editor will rarely prefer you to play with these formats, especially if you’re a debut author trying to find (and build) your audience. If you’re writing a plot-driven genre novel that adheres to a sci-fi, romance, or thriller structure, don’t try to load it with literary devices and huge character back-stories that aren’t relevant to the plot. It won’t impress an agent if you have a super literary genre novel. It will more likely confuse us and make your book harder to sell.
“Upmarket” fiction is where things get tricky. Books like The Help, Water for Elephants, Eat, Pray, Love, and authors like Nick Hornby, Ann Patchet, and Tom Perrotta are considered “upmarket.” Their concept and use of language appeal to a wider audience, but they have a slightly more sophisticated style than genre fiction and touch on themes and emotions that go deeper than the plot.
With debut authors, I think the main source of uncertainty tends to come from what they set out to write vs. what they actually write. Genre fiction is written with a clear purpose. The author has an idea and writes a story to accomplish their goal. Literary fiction can be more accidental. A writer may start with an idea, and then discover along the way that they don’t want to write about that anymore. They’ve fallen for their character’s personal tale or the images they want to evoke within the reader. If the writing ends up falling somewhere in the middle, then it might be considered “upmarket.” Or, it could mean it needs more focus one way or the other.
What’s important to remember is that none of these types of fiction is better than the other. It’s all about personal preference, based on what you like to read and how you write. If an agent doesn’t represent a certain genre, it doesn’t mean he or she think it’s bad. It just means you’re better off with someone else. Be aware that a genre label can influence an agent, but be honest about what your genre is. It wastes everyone’s time – most importantly, yours – if you try to guess what you think agents want. We want books we can fall in love with that fall under in genres and styles we represent, whether they’re young adult, adult genre fiction, or literary to a Proustian degree. That’s all.
You should drop by and take a look at Sarah’s blog: http://glasscasesblog.blogspot.com/ Sarah has agreed to be a Guest Blogger in the near future on a different subject, but another enjoyable post that will broaden your knowledge.
Thanks Sarah for sharing.
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Kathy
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Let’s all brew a cup of tea and join the characters having tea in this illustration by Denise Holmes. Seems like a great way to enjoy reading the critiques done by Agent Rachel Brooks for September’s first page winners.
Denise Holmes created the above illustration for a collective called The Happy Happy Art Collective. She is represented by Nicole Tugeau over at T2 Illustrators. Her first picture book was released in June 2014 – If I Wrote A Book About You by Stephany Aulenback! Here is Denise’s website: www.niseemade.com
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Agent Rachel Brooks from the L Perkins Agency critiqued the following first page winners. Hope you take the time to read. You can learn a lot from listening to what the experts have to say about a first page, even if it is written by someone else.
CODENAME FOX by Donna Maloy
PROLOGUE. London. September, 1800.
I was all of seven years old, but Noreenâs iron shovel looked to me as big as a Scots battle axe. It clanged on the stone floor, not an armâs length from my head.
âOh, please donât hit her!â my brother cried, yanking on her skirts.
But the scullery maid was determined. Her shovel banged down again, this time against the hearth behind me. A piece of stone whizzed past my whiskers.
âGet out oâ me way,â she told Graham. âNasty, dirty thing that is. Tracking flour all over me clean floor.â
With a yell like a savage pirate, four-year-old Graham chomped down on her arm. The shovel flew out of her hands, clattering to a stopâright in front of Papaâs black, spit-polished boots. Heâd come to see what all the noise was about. Now I was in a different sort of trouble.
With a sob, Graham pulled at Papaâs leg. âMake Noreen stop trying to kill Celia!â
Papaâs head jerked up and he looked toward the corner where I crouched.
âCelia?â
I couldnât see any point in lying. Shaking with fear, I looked up and nodded.
He stared at me. Of course I didnât look much like an Ashleigh right then. I looked like a small, flour-speckled mouse.
âCome here,â he said, much too calmly. I could almost feel a spanking on the way.
âMiss Ce-Celia?â Noreen frowned. âBut thatâs only a dirty little mousie, idnât it? Whatâs wrong with killinâ it?â She backed up against the chopping table, eyeing my father and me as if she didnât know which of us worried her more.
âGet out,â Papa said quietly, speaking to the girl but never taking his eyes from me. Oh, I was in for it now. That was the voice Papa used with stable boys who played dice.
HERE IS RACHEL:
CODENAME FOX by Donna Maloy
This title is intriguing! Sounds like a story filled with fun adventure, although it doesnât give me a 1800s London vibe, more sci-fi or spy.
I think this opening line could be stronger. It tells us the characterâs age, rather than showing us how old the character is through how he talks, the story, etc. Also, the diction of this character doesnât feel like a seven year old, but a much older character looking back and retelling the tale? If thatâs the case, then the diction fits, but if he is in fact seven, the language needs reworked.
When the âstone whizzed past my whiskersâ I thought it was a cat (or even fox as the title suggests) but it is actually a mouse. Maybe you can weave in some more clues that this is a mouse talking rather than telling us âI looked like a small, flour-speckled mouseâ later down the page.
Thereâs quite a bit of repetition in this one page about the mouse/person being in trouble, being âin for itâ, having a spanking on the way, etc. I donât think we need to be told so much, since the shovel and yelling definitely tell us this isnât going well.
Without knowing when chapter one starts in time and events, itâs hard to recommend whether you need this prologue or not. But the prologue camp is usually pretty divided on whether you should have one or cut it. Itâs something for you to considerâdo readers need this info for the rest of the story to make sense or is it setup that could be woven in throughout? If the answers is yes, readers do need it, then itâs good you have lots of action.
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A SPARROW IN THEHANDÂ Â MG by Darlene Beck Jacobson
Helen hurried down the dirt road, clutching her lunch sack in one hand. She reached for her sister Franâs arm with her freehand, trying to get her to move faster.
Fran pulled away from Helenâs reach and continued to plod along. They were going to be late; why couldnât Fran see that?
The sun poked out its head between two grey clouds just as they reached the schoolyard and the bell rang. Miss Thomson stood in the doorway of the one room building glaring at the sisters.
âI donât tolerate tardiness.â
Helen stopped at the door, gasping. Her heart dropped like heavy stone as she struggled to steady her breathing. âIâmâŚsorry…Miss Thomson.â She took a deep breath, feeling calmer. âMa needed our help this morning. It wonât happen again.â
Miss Thomson stared at Helen, lips pinched closed by an invisible clothespin. âSee that it doesnât, Miss Wasekowski.â She looked at Fran. âThat goes for you too.â
âYes, Miss Thomson,â Fran said, her plump cheeks flushed from hurrying.
Helenâs breathing finally settled as she smoothed her shoulder length hair from her face. Her eyes darted around the room, searching for her friend Mary. Why wasnât she here?
Miss Thomson marched to the front of the room. Her stiff, proper skirt stood at attention. Helen bet her laced up shoes pinched her toes as tightly as the bun in her hair pulled at the corners of her cold, dark, eyes. She was nothing like Miss Norton, the teacher who left last year to get married. Miss Norton was like a willow tree, bending and flexible when the situation called for it. Helen doubted Miss Thomson liked teaching or children for that matter.
It was Miss Norton who had given Helen a thirst for learning that never seemed to be satisfied. Sheâd also ignited an ember that Helen kept buried deep in her soul. That ember was dormant. Waiting. It held Helenâs hope, dream, wish, to become a teacher one day.
No one â except her best friend Mary â knew of Helenâs deepest desire. Mary also held a secret desire of her own. To become a nurse. Both girls knew their dreams were like the wings of a bird â fragile and easily broken.
HERE’SÂ RACHEL:
A SPARROW IN THE HAND by Darlene Beck Jacobson
The description of Miss Thomson is great with her pinched bun and skirt standing at attention. I can picture her for sure! But Iâd like to see what Miss Thomson looks like sooner, while she glares out the doorway, rather than waiting until the kids are seated in class to describe her. It might make their tardiness feel more threatening.
Some of the language choices donât feel MG-aged to me. For middle grade, Iâm thinking Helen and Fran are somewhere between 10 to 14 ish? For example, Iâm not sure âignited an emberâ or âa thirst for learningâ are phrases that a kid of that age would use in that way. The author voice rather than the characterâs voice is coming through here.
Iâm also a bit confused about why the dreams of becoming a nurse and teacher are so fragile? These donât seem like farfetched ambitions on the surface. I think Iâm missing something here as far as setting that would reveal why these dreams are so fragile. Itâs great to know their dreams early on, so the seeds are there, and just need a little nudge to get us to connect with why theyâre at risk of being shattered.
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Michelle Kogan Early Chapter Book Through a Sunflower
Rhea wanted to grow a sunflower house more than anything in the world. But even more then that, she wanted to grow it all on her own. She was going to enter it in the Petalpath 10th anniversary magazine contest and try to win $100.00. Ever since her dad lost his job everyone in the family was helping out. Rhea wanted to show she was big enough to help too!
âCome on sunflower, stand up!â Rhea said. âIâve replanted you three times, âcause the squirrels ate the seeds.â
âCan I help?â called her mom.
âNo, I want to do it myself!â said Rhea, âIâm growing my own sunflowers this year! Iâve been helping you for the last three years. This year you even said, I know enough to grow them all by myself!â
âYou know sunflowers, you havenât given me an easy time. This is the third time Iâve replanted your seeds, cause the squirrels kept on eating them. Now stop wiggling around so I can get you propped up!â
As Rhea wrangled with her sunflowers she noticed a caterpillar that was staring right at her. She slooowly moved closer bringing her eye-to-eye with the caterpillar, and stared right back. The next minute the caterpillar cocked itâs head and starred up, then back at Rhea, and then up again.
âHey caterpillar, whatâs going on up there?â
A goldfinch swooped down barely missing Rhea. It nosed right into her back pocket and plucked out her sketchbook. Her prize sketchbook where she had been keeping all her notes and
HERE’S RACHEL:
THROUGH A SUNFLOWER by Michelle Kogan
The idea of Rhea wanting to help out her family financially is great. It shows us how much she loves her parents, while being selfless in giving up the prize money.
Is a âsunflower houseâ a greenhouse for sunflowers? A house for one single special sunflower? Iâm having trouble picturing this.
It switches between singular and plural for how many sunflowers Rheaâs growing, so whichever it is, donât forget to be consistent. We need to be able to picture if sheâs growing a flower or a whole bunch of them!
The transition from staring at the caterpillar to the goldfinch is a bit awkward. Why is the caterpillar important if the real action is the sketchbook getting stolen? The sketchbook list could be integrated in some way sooner too, so we know what is going on with the sunflower/contest from the start.
Integrating sunflower into the title is smart, but I think it could be tweaked, since it doesnât sound as fun and grabbing for kids as it could be. Itâs all about this awesome sunflower contest, so bouncing off of that could be cool.
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Alice Golin Normal â Young Adult Novel
The calendar on the wall stares at me. Stark diagonal lines drawn through bright blue numbers. Reaching under my pillow, I curl my fingers around the thick black crayon I use to mark each day. Each daty that Dadâs been missing. Twelve so far in September. Choking back tears, I put a slash through yesterday.
Leafing back through the months I come to the end of May. A red circle like an evil eye marks Memorial Day, the day we were told of Dadâs disappearance somewhere in Afghanistan. How? Why? We get no answers. Do they even know?
My phone rings. A real call. not a text. Ignoring it, I stare at the red circle desperately hoping for some message. some sign. But the numerals 31 tell me nothing. Unless choosing Memorial Day was some hidden code.
I shudder at the thought and let the pages slip through my fingers until Iâm back to September. The box for today is fresh, unmarked.
âPlease God,â I whisper, âlet us hear today.â But unlike those early days, I have little hope.
My phone keeps ringing. Stops. Rings again. The caller has no mercy. Giving in, I grope around on the floor until I find the intruder.
âGet out of bed, Nikkia,â Micah says gently.  And then, more sharply, because he knows I donât want to listen, âNow!â
I want to shout, âNo, I wonât. Not until we hear from Dad.â But Micahâs gone and besides thereâs no point. If I donât get up, Mom will come for me. And sheâs got enough to deal with.
My phone rings again. I grip it tightly, tempted to throw it across the room. Itâs Gillian. She and Micah must have planned this.
HERE’S RACHEL:
NORMAL by Alice Golin
Itâs clear that your protagonist is in a lot of pain over missing her dad, and itâs great you let us in on this emotional connection from the first page.
Itâs not clear why she isnât answering the phone. This call seems important, but then she ignores it. Confused a bit here, since isnât she desperately wanting to hear from her dad or any news about him? Wouldnât she pounce on any call to see if it was news?
Micah appears, but where did he come from? It feels like the transition is a bit awkward from the phone to being told to get out of bed. Is he a friend, sibling? Was the door open, or did Micah have to open it, in which case wouldnât she hear him coming in? I think the author is seeing this scene more clearly than I am.
This first page overall feels slower and more repetitive than it could be. The core information of her dad disappearing and not wanting to get up are there, but then the pacing and interest-level get dragged down some by talking about the calendar then searching for the ringing phone at-length. Iâd rework this to keep the core info, but relay it in a more concise, emotion-heavy way. This will help us immediately feel for her that she wants to hear from her dad but hasnât in so long.
Shorter titles can be good, but I think this one could be more grabbing. Maybe tweak it, possibly keeping NORMAL in it, but ramping up the grab-me-factor. Then weâll be sucked in!
Thank you Rachel for sharing your time and expertise with us. It is truly appreciated.
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Kathy
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Rosh Hashanah Greetingsâ for the Start of Rosh Hashanah
Amalia Hoffman sent in this illustration to mark the day. www.amaliahoffman.com
Valerie Noble is an Associate Agent at Donaghy Literary Group, a Canadian based agency. While studying chemistry at California State University, Long Beach, Valerie mastered the art of doing proper research, particularly for technical writing. Her love of science and reading merged when she began penning her first novel in the midst of her studies. In true scientific fashion, Valerie researched all there was to know about publishing. She connected with agents, editors, and other writers, and interned for Jessica Sinsheimer of Sarah Jane Freymann Literary Agency.
An education is never finished and Valerie continues to cultivate relationships and hopes to use her knowledge and skills in finding fresh new voices for Donaghy Literary Group.
She is interested in: Young Adult, and New Adult â in the following areas:
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Valerie loves YA/NA science fiction and fantasy (think Kristin Cashore and Suzanne Collins) but reads everything under the sun. For her, itâs more about the writing and less about the genre. In saying that, Valerie is generally not interested in romance or paranormal.
Submission Instructions: Electronic Submissions only. Send the query letter, 1-2 page synopsis and the first 10 pages of manuscript â all in body of email, no attachments. Send to query(at)donaghyliterary(dot)com.
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Dow Phumiruk is an aspiring children’s book illustrator. She won the 2013 SCBWI On-the-Verge Emerging Voices Award that promotes diversity in children’s books. Please visit her newly organized portfolio site at www.artbydow.blogspot.com. The Emerging Voices Award 2014 opened for submission on September 15! Scroll to see Monday’s post about it.
ANNOUNCING THE WINNER OF DARLENE BECK-JACOBSON’S WHEELS OF CHANGE is: Drum roll please… Donna Taylor from Writer’s Side Up. Congratulations! Donna. Please send Darlene or me your email address so Darlene can send out your book.
Since I know so many in the audience love Eileen Spinelli, I thought you would want to read this interview Lora over at Words On A Limb had with Eileen. Here is the link:Eileen Spinelli Interview
Joyce Wan just received her advance reader’s copy of her new picture book, THE WHALE IN MY SWIMMING POOL, which will hit book shelves in April 2015! A WHALE of a tale that is sure to evoke giggles from little guppies! âĽ
At Running Press Kids, Lisa Cheng has been promoted to senior editor.
At Simon & Schuster Children’s, Jenica Nasworthy has been promoted to assistant managing editor.
Co-founder of start-up Ruckus Media and one-time president of Simon & Schuster Children’s Rick Richter is joining Zachary Schuster Harmsworth as an agent, working in their Boston office. Richter will represent children’s books as well as narrative nonfiction focused on history and military history.
Longtime editor Tom Miller will join Sanford J. Greenburger Associates as a literary agent on September 15. He will represent primarily nonfiction projects in the areas of diet and wellness, psychology and self-help, business, popular culture, spirituality, cooking, and narrative nonfiction. Most recently, he was an executive editor at McGraw-Hill.
Annie Nybo has been promoted to assistant editor at Margaret K. McElderry Books.
PLEASE DO NOT SUBMIT A FIRST PAGE FOR CRITIQUE IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO HAVE THE CRITIQUE POSTED. Thanks!
Agent Rachel Brooks from the L Perkins Agency has agreed to be Septemberâs First Page Critiquer.
Before joining the L. Perkins Agency, Rachel worked as an agent apprentice to Louise Fury. In addition to her industry training, Rachel has a business degree and graduated summa cum laude with a BA in English from Texas A&M University-CC.
WHAT RACHEL LIKES: She is excited about representing all genres of young adult and new adult fiction, as well as adult romance. While she is looking for all sub-genres of romance, she is especially interested in romantic suspense and urban fantasy. She is also on the lookout for fun picture books.
Sheâs a fan of dual POVs, loves both print and ebooks, and has a soft spot for marketing savvy writers.
Here are the submission guidelines for submitting a First Page in September: In the subject line, please write âSeptember First Page Critiqueâ or âSeptember First Page Picture Prompt Critiqueâ and paste the text in the email. Please make sure you include your name, the title of the piece, and whether it is as picture book, middle grade, or young adult, etc. at the top.
Plus attach your first page to the email. Please format using one inch margins and 12 point New Times Roman font â double spaced, no more than 23 lines. Send to: kathy(dot)temean(at)gmail(dot)com. Remember to also cut and paste it into the body of the e-mail, plus attach it in a Word document.
DEADLINE:Â September 19th.
RESULTS:Â September 26th.
You can only send in one first page each month. It can be the same first page each month or a different one, but if you sent it to me last month and it didnât get chosen, you need to send it again for this month. Of course, it doesnât have to be the same submission. It can be a first page from a work in process or you can use the picture prompt above.
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Genevieve Nine joined Andrea Hurst Literary Management as an intern in 2012. She has a background in professional editing and gets great satisfaction from developing authors. Sheâs a Creative Writing MFA candidate at the Northwest Institute of Literary Arts, holds a Certificate in Childrenâs Writing from the University of Washington, and graduated with honors and a B.A. from the USC School of Cinema & Television.
Genevieve loves books. Her tastes are eclectic, ranging from the classics to quirky. Sheâs drawn to the fantastic, the curious, and the unexpected. Genevieve is looking to represent authors who weave layered tales with well-developed worlds and characters who threaten to burst from the page. She appreciates smart and original plots with well-crafted twists. And no matter how zany or diabolical, every character should be undeniably human at heart.
When not reading or writing, Genevieve enjoys watching her Sherlock DVDs, planning future travels, and embarking on culinary adventures. She and her husband live in Seattle with their two naughty cats, Selkie and Napoleon.
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Fantasy (open to all subgenres except game-related)
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She also represents the following adult and new adult categories:
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ÂThriller (supernatural, historical, disaster, ecological)
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She is not interested in the following:
ÂHard SF/Military SF/Space Opera
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Follow Genevieve on Twitter (@GenevieveNine).
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Below is a double page spread from A LOVE LETTER FROM GOD that Laura Watson illustrated.
I received a wonderful update note from Laura Watson who was featured on Illustrator Saturday last year. http://kathytemean.wordpress.com/2013/08/10/illustrator-saturday-laura-watson/
Here’s what Laura wrote:
“I wanted to thank you again for the wonderful profile you did on me last fall. It led to at least one awesome job, that I know of, and tons of great exposure. Thank you so much!”
“I have a couple of recent projects that are now printed:
Farm Friends for I See Me! Inc. Personalized Children’s Books (http://www.iseeme.com/my-farm-friends-personalized-book.html#Tab-A-2 ) and A Love Letter from God by P.K. Hallinan (for Ideals Children’s Books.”
“I’ve also been working on projects for Capstone, Orca Books (in Canada) and a couple of self-publishing clients too. This has been my busiest year ever, so far. Just pausing to catch my breath and update my portfolio, etc. this week.”
Laura, congratulations on all your recent successes. I’m so happy I contributed to a good year.
Donna Taylor launch two blogs with week. Thought you might like to check them out. She has some give-a-ways on both blogs that you may like. They end Sunday night at midnight.Â
http://writersideup.com and http://2creativitycookbook.com
Agent Rachel Brooks from the L Perkins Agency has agreed to be September’s First Page Critiquer.
Before joining the L. Perkins Agency, Rachel worked as an agent apprentice to Louise Fury. In addition to her industry training, Rachel has a business degree and graduated summa cum laude with a BA in English from Texas A&M University-CC.
WHAT RACHEL LIKES: She is excited about representing all genres of young adult and new adult fiction, as well as adult romance. While she is looking for all sub-genres of romance, she is especially interested in romantic suspense and urban fantasy. She is also on the lookout for fun picture books.
Sheâs a fan of dual POVs, loves both print and ebooks, and has a soft spot for marketing savvy writers.
Below is the September picture prompt for anyone who is inspired to use it for their first page.
The above illustration was sent in by Anne Belov. She was featured on Illustrator Saturday http://kathytemean.wordpress.com/2012/06/23/illustrator-saturday-anne-belvo/ She works in oils, egg tempera, and works with printmaking.
Here are the submission guidelines for submitting a First Page in April: In the subject line, please write âSeptember First Page Critiqueâ or âSeptember First Page Picture Prompt Critiqueâ and paste the text in the email. Please make sure you include your name, the title of the piece, and whether it is as picture book, middle grade, or young adult, etc. at the top.
Plus attach your first page to the email. Please format using one inch margins and 12 point New Times Roman font â double spaced, no more than 23 lines. Send to: kathy(dot)temean(at)gmail(dot)com. Remember to also cut and paste it into the body of the e-mail, plus attach it in a Word document.
DEADLINE:Â September 19th.
RESULTS:Â September 26th.
You can only send in one first page each month. It can be the same first page each month or a different one, but if you sent it to me last month and it didnât get chosen, you need to send it again for this month. Of course, it doesnât have to be the same submission. It can be a first page from a work in process or you can use the picture prompt above.
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Illustrators: If you have an illustration you would like to show off, please email it to me. All illustrations need to be at least 500 pixels wide. Thanks!
Rachel Brooks – Junior Agent
Rachel is actively building her client list.
Before joining the L. Perkins Agency, Rachel worked as an agent apprentice to Louise Fury. In addition to her industry training, Rachel has a business degree and graduated summa cum laude with a BA in English from Texas A&M University-CC.
WHAT RACHEL LIKES: She is excited about representing all genres of young adult and new adult fiction, as well as adult romance. While she is looking for all sub-genres of romance, she is especially interested in romantic suspense and urban fantasy. She is also on the lookout for fun picture books.
Sheâs a fan of dual POVs, loves both print and ebooks, and has a soft spot for marketing savvy writers.
TO SUBMIT: Send a query letter (with an author bio in it) and the first 5 pages of the manuscript pasted into an email (no attachments) to rachel [at] lperkinsagency.com. Please only query one agent at this agency.
Email: [email protected]
Twitter: @RachMBrooks
REMEMBER:
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- We only accept email queries. We do not accept queries by snail mail, phone or social media. All snail mail queries will be discarded unopened
- We will only consider one manuscript from one writer at a time to one agent at a time. If you have written more than one manuscript, choose the one you think is the most promising and pitch that to us. Do not pitch all of them.
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Cynthia Reeg                         FROM THE GRAVE           Middle Grade Fantasy
Monster Rule #9: A monsterâs appearance should incite fear and significant revulsion to scare the socks off mere humans.
FRANKâS TALE
Shocktober 13, Year of the Scrull
Looking through the bus window, I tilted my nose up toward the skyâs âdetermined drear,â as Ms. Hagmire liked to call it. That was Uggarlandâgrim, gray, and delightfully desolate. From the bony skeleton trees, to the swampland grasses, to the lurking monsters. My itchy right palm brushed against my perfectly tucked shirt and my much too crisp pant leg. I should be an example of such determined drear, general disarray, and evil intent. Only I wasnât.
âI saw a bat flying upside down last night,â said Oliver. My mummy friend sat next to me. His unwrapped, wrinkled brown finger skimmed down the page of the tattered book on his lap. âIâm trying to find out what that means.â
âThat means trouble,â I muttered. The low rumble of voices from the other eccentric students on our bus seemed to echo the word. Trouble.
âMaybe its antennae were just damaged.â Oliver pointed to bold print on the right hand page.
I shook my head. âNo. It means trouble.â
Our special Fiendful Fiends Academy Busâotherwise referred to as OMO (Odd Monsters Only) busâlurched to a stop in front of our school. We all climbed out, but as I tilted my nose upward again, I stopped in mid-step.
HERE’S HOLLY:
From the Grave, Middle-grade Fantasy, Cynthia Reeg
I was interested in Oliver and the first-person narrator, and I think it might be smart to start the story off with the dialogue about the bat. Itâs important that the reader engage with the characters first, that we connect with them and care, before learning about the scenery of Uggarland. So I suggest moving the scenery further down in the story and pulling back on the detailed descriptions of clothing in order to laser-focus on the two kids. Hook us with them and then take us on a journey.
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Best Chocolate Cake and Other Dramatic Disasters by Julia Maranan â MG NovelÂ
Things I Am Good At
Field hockey
Music
Science
French
Chess
Baking?
Starting middle school on crutches had been about as bad as it sounds. While I was hobbling around trying to find all my classes after an âunfortunate accidentâ during field hockey tryouts, everyone else found all their friends and where they fit in. By the time I was back on my own two feet, I was pretty much invisible (except to Angie, whoâd been my BFF since, well, forever). And itâs not like I hadnât been trying things. I just hadnât found the right thing. But today, that would finally change. I could feel it.
I took another look at the picture of the expertly frosted Best Chocolate Cake our home ec teacher, Mrs. Collins, had projected in the front of the classroom, and my mouth watered.
Baking is a good thing to excel in. I mean, who doesnât love chocolate cake? People are going to ask me to bake them things all the time! Maybe I can even get extra credit if I bake something amazing. Iâll have to find out what my teachers like before midterm grades are dueâŚ
I read through the instructions one more time: grease and flour the pan, mix everything in a bowl, and pour the batter into the pan to bake. This is going to be awesome.
âDo you want to grease the pan, or should I?â I asked my partner, Kate Nichols, who was the second worst person in the room Mrs. Collins could have paired me with.
âI think maybe you should just make your own cake. Over there.â She motioned vaguely to the counter by the sink, purple nail polish sparkling under the fluorescent lights.
âBut weâre supposed to work together,â I said.
âBut I want my cake to be edible,â she said, and took her pan over to a table.
HERE’S HOLLY:
Best Chocolate Cake, Middle-grade novel, Julia Maranan
I like the idea that the main character wants to find something to make her visible. But those first days of school are not hereâthose days with her on crutches, left out of all the quick-forming friendships circles. I would like to see them. That way I would make a connection, and Iâd be rooting for this girl and her baking skills. Show us the character in her darkest moment, all those friends pairing and bonding while she canât keep up, that anxiety and pressure, and then youâll be set up to tell the story. I did like the list at the top! As for baking and home ec, Iâm not sure when the story takes place, but in our schools, they donât offer home ec anymore, sad to say, so make it clear what year the story starts.
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DOGS ON STRIKE! By Rita D. Russell – Picture BookÂ
All night long, Rufus snored and sniggled in his sleep. He dreamed about his birthday and getting super-duper treats. But when Rufus woke up⌠he got nothing.
âNot even a birthday card?â asked Dugan.
âOr pupperoni cupcakes?â wondered Nugget.
âNothing,â said Rufus. âNot even the Happy Birthday song.â
The three mutts mulled over the situation while burying bones in the backyard.
âWhatâs the world coming to,â they groused, âwhen a dog gets less love than a mouse?â [Art: Rufus, Dugan,and Nugget watch a man mowing the lawn with his pet mouse peeking from his shirt pocket.]
âNo walking in the park.â
âNo dancing in the dark.â
âNo purple pupsicle treat.â
âNo cruising in the front seat.â
Something had to be done.
STRIKE???  [Art: Dogs vote at a meeting of the neighborhood dogs association.]
Rufus strode to the podium and proudly proclaimed, âToday dogs are changing the rules of the game. Our smiles and affection are no longer free. We demand nicer treatment. So until families agreeâŚâ
[Art: Families are shocked to discoverâŚ]
âNo greetings at the door?â
âNo footrests on the floor?â
âNo herding cows or sheep?â
âNo guarding while we sleep?â
âDOGS ON STRIKE!â
The cool cats stayed back. (They were not impressed.)
HERE’S HOLLY:
Dogs on Strike, Picture book, Rita D. Russell
This is a cute concept and I like the idea of turning the dog-people relationship on its head. That said, I donât know why this dog is surprised that he doesnât have a birthday celebration. Has he had them in the past? What is the context? If you can figure that out and keep this very simple, with excellent dialogue, you might have a winner. Check out David Ezra Steinâs IâM MY OWN DOG, just published, for a fantastic example of role reversal.
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Carol Foote           FOREVER MAGIC                  Middle Grade
The hint of a whisper.
At first Elena thought it might be trees sighing or a faucet turned on somewhere else in the house. But the sound grew louder, as if coming at her through a long tunnel. She tilted her head to listen just as it burst out, filling the room.
âEl-e-naaaaaaâŚâ
Elena almost dropped the pickle jar she was preparing for a science experiment. Her knees wobbled, and she leaned against the kitchen counter.
âEl-e-naaaaaaâŚâ The whisper swirled around her. Then it was gone.
She ran to the window and nudged aside the white lace curtains. Outside, her ten-year-old brother Connor was tossing a plastic bag in the air and attacking it with a stick.
âFor the king!â Connor cried, slashing at his flimsy opponent. âVictory is ours!â
âDid you call me?â Elena shouted. Her voice sounded high and thin.
âNo.â Connor impaled the bag and didnât even look toward her.
âDid you hear that?â
âHear what?â
Elena eyed the woods beyond the lawn. Not even a leaf rustled. Gramâs car wasnât in its usual spot at the top of the long dirt drive. Elena crossed the kitchen and peered into the living room. The solid, stuffed chairs and dark, polished tables sat undisturbed. Only the steady ticking of the grandfather clock broke the stillness. Breathing in the familiar smell of old books and fireplace ashes, Elena forced her shoulders to relax. See? It was nothing.
She returned to her experiment where vapor rose from a tray of dry ice. Like a genie from a lamp. Her hands shook, and she spilled rubbing alcohol as she tried to pour just enough to saturate the black felt sheâd glued inside the jar. Tightening the lid, she glanced around the room.
HERE’S HOLLY:
Forever Magic, Middle-grade novel, Carol Foote
I think this is a fantastic opening page! Keep going. I want to know more. But get a better title. Well done.
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Thank you Holly for sharing your time and expertise with us. It is a huge help to read you comments.
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About Siobhan McBride at Serendipity Literary Agency:
Siobhan McBride grew up in the New York Hudson Valley and studied painting, drawing, and ceramics before receiving her Bachelor of Arts in English and Creative Writing from SUNY New Paltz.
She began her career in Publishing as an intern for the literary agency Objective Entertainment, and from there went on to work as a writer in the Editorial departments of various magazines including MovieMaker and Chronogram, before joining Serendipity Literary Agency in 2014.
Her passion for music and film led her to becoming the Music Editor of CriticalMob, eventually moving on to do freelance work with their parent company, Company Cue. Recently she has been tutoring young adults as a volunteer with 826NYC.
Siobhan looks forward to creating lasting relationships with her clients and wants to work closely with them to give life to the vision of their work. Holding positions on both sides of the editorial field gives her a strong grasp of what an audience is looking for and the knack to balance that with a writersâ artistic drive.
Siobhan is seeking voice driven narratives for Fiction, Memoir, or Non-Fiction. She has a strong interest in Literary and Gothic Fiction, Horror, Paranormal, Adult Dystopian, Mystery/Crime, Historical, daring Young Adult, Thrillers and narratives with philosophical undertones. She say she gives bonus points if your thriller has a psychological bent.Â
For Memoir and Nonfiction titles, she seeks Investigative, True Crime, and dark/bizarre History. Siobhan enjoys the dark, macabre aspects of life where paranormal fiction and horror are viewed an under appreciated art forms deeply rooted in psychology, and looks for authors unafraid to delve into these inner workings of the human psyche.
How to submit: Visit the submissions page on Serendipityâs website: serendipitylit.com. You can direct your submission directly to Siobhan by requesting her in the body of the submission form. The average response time is 4-6 weeks.
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A new book titled, CATCH THE COOKIE has hit the bookshelves written by Hallie Durand, a.k.a. Agent Holly McGhee and illustrated by David Small. I have the book and can truthfully say it is a very fun picture book. I scanned in a few interior shots and Holly sent a picture of the real Marshall to add to the interview questions. I also added a quick blurb to whet your appetite:
Marshall knows one thing for sure, despite what all the stories say: Gingerbread men cannot run. Cookies are for eating, and he can’t wait to eat his after spending all morning baking them with his class. But when it’s time to take the gingerbread men out of the oven . . . they’re gone! Now, to find those rogue cookies, Marshall and his class have to solve a series of rhyming clues. And Marshall just might have to rethink his stance on magic. Catch That Cookie! is an imaginative mystery, deliciously illustrated by Caldecott Medal winner David Small. It’s sure to inspire a new classroom tradition . . . and maybe even a few new believers!
I wanted to know more about the book and Holly, so below is the interview I had with her. If you want to read more about David Small and read about the process of creating the book cover for CATCH THE COOKIE, he was featured this past Saturday on Illustrator Saturday - definitely worth reading. Here’s Hallie/Holly:
Most people know you as Holly McGhee. Why did you decide to write under another name?
A: On that first submission especially, I needed to know whether my writing could speak for itself, in no way connected to me as an agentâcould I get published just because an editor and publisher believed in my work? Iâve kept with a pen name to separate my writing from agenting, though at this point itâs not a secret that Iâm Holly McGhee & Hallie Durand.
When did you start writing your latest book, Catch That Cookie!?Â
A: I started Catch That Cookie! in earnest over the Christmas holidays of 2011. My son Marshall had been a preschool student of Mrs. Grayâs (the teacher in my book) in the fall of 2009, and he had gone on a gingerbread hunt at school. Heâd come home with a recipe for gingerbread men, and he was obsessed with making the cookies. He kept nagging me, and so I finally borrowed the cookie cutters from Mrs. Gray and we made them for our class picnic in June of 2010, in ninety-degree heat. We put them in the van to bring to the picnic, and then Marshall started locking the van doors. I realized he thought the cookies would escape, ha ha ha ha! I knew there was a story there, and I wanted to know what Mrs. Gray had done in class to make Marshall believe those G-men could escape. So I interviewed Mrs. Gray and that inspired my picture book.
How did it find a home at Dial?
A: When I finally had a draft that I liked, I shared it with my agent, Elena Giovinazzo, who sent it out to editors. Lauri Hornik and Kate Harrison at Dial made an offer.
Were you the one who chose David Small to illustrate the book?
A: No, that was my editor, Kate Harrison, and the art director Lily Malcom. I couldnât be happier about the choiceânot only is David my client but he is one of my very close friends. (I was nervous he would turn it down though, and thrilled that he liked itâheâs picky!)
How long did it take David to do the illustrations?
A: He started early in 2013 and finished that fall. I sent him a picture of Mrs. Gray to inspire him and also pictures of Marshall, Avery, and Henry, who all appear in the book (they were Marshallâs classmates).
Do you plan any book signings or other marketing things now that the book is sold?
A: Yes, David and I are doing a little mini tour to celebrate both the book and our friendship. I am going out to Kalamazoo, Michigan on September 10 and we are doing one appearance for adults at the Kalamazoo Library and one for kids at the Book Bug, and then heâs coming back with me to Maplewood, NJ. Weâll have a big gingerbread hunt with Mrs. Gray at the Maplewood Library on September 13, and an event for writers and artists (together with Anna Kang and Chris Weyant of You Are (Not) Small and Richard Morris of This Is a Moose) on the 14th. Weâre going to talk about collaboration. Then weâll have an appearance at our local bookstore on the 15th as well as a private event for the preschool four year olds (all at Words, Maplewood). David will share some of his drawing secrets. Iâll have more details for you soon.
When did you write your first book and what was the title?
A: In 2007 I wrote my first chapter book / novel, Dessert First, and I wrote two more books in that series. Dessert First was published in 2009, Just Desserts in 2010, and No Room for Dessert in 2011, all illustrated by the amazing French artist Christine Davenier.
Were you an editor at that time?
A: Nope, I had been an agent for nine years already (though Iâve never stopped being an editor reallyâas an agent Iâm often the first set of eyes on a manuscript, helping polish it enough to be acquired).
How did the idea come to you?
A: It started at a dinner with one of my best friends at the River Run CafĂŠ in NYC. We ordered dessert to share, and as always I angled the plate so that the best part of the dessert âhappenedâ to be directly in front of me. My friend had had enough of my bad behavior and she said, âWHY DO YOU ALWAYS TAKE THE BEST PART OF THE DESSERT?â And I, with nowhere to hide, said, âBecause I thought I was getting away with it.â That honesty marked a turning point in our friendship. A few years later, we were sharing a slice of Iced Lemon Cake at lunch, reminiscing about our fateful evening at the River Run. And that very evening, on NJ Transit, Dessert Schneider barged into my life and wouldnât be quiet till I wrote her story. Iâd never experienced anything like thatâshe was really bossy!
How did that book get published?
A: It was multiply submitted, under my pen name, and was acquired in a two-book deal.
It looks like most of your books have a food element. Is that because you like to bake?
A: Funny you bring this up, because it hasnât been intentional. Food has been a continuing thread throughout my life, and as a kid I always went grocery shopping with my dad (we still like to go together when we can); we like to see what new products there are on the shelves and whatâs on sale. I was the New York State 4-H Bread champion (not kidding!) as a seventeen year oldâbaking bread was something to do in an otherwise pretty boring summer in farm country, so I went for it, baking bread every day for the entire two months that school was out. Cooking and baking are relaxing for me like nothing else, and when Iâm not writing, Iâm usually in the kitchen. I even like chopping leeks, just as thin as I can get them without slicing off my thumb in the process . . .
Do you feel that writing your own books helps you relate better with your writer clients?
A: I think my writers and artists appreciate that I understand what theyâre thinking and how theyâre feeling in a way that you only know if you are a writer or artist yourself. We talk . . . a lot.
When I heard David Small and Kate DiCamillo speak at SCBWI conferences, it sounded like you were not only a great agent, but a great critique partner for them.
Over the years, thereâs a trust that builds, and with David and Kate and most of my clients, Iâm a gatekeeper; they can share work with me before anybody else sees it, and they know that if Iâm willing to share it with the world, I believe in it.
Why did you decide to leave HarperCollins to open a literary agency?
A: Iâd been an executive editor for six years, and I had developed my own taste in books. Iâd begun to believe that if I loved reading a book, maybe somebody else in the world would too. And so I was ready to set out of my own after a time, especially when some of the projects I tried to acquire were rejected by an acquisitions board. I wanted to succeed or fail based on my own taste.
What was your biggest success as a literary agent?
A: Biggest successes can run the gamut. There are the seven-figure deals with film rights and foreign licenses sold simultaneously, and there are the original books by new authors that become franchises, with television and live-stage deals coming along the way. But there are also the smaller deals that come with huge personal satisfaction, such as bringing a beloved book back into print decades after first publication, or placing that book Iâve always believed in, months after first submission. I think the biggest fun is finding an editor who loves a book, acquires it, and publishes it well, whether itâs snapped up in a pre-empt an hour after submission or acquired after months of waiting. They all matter.
On top of that, the feeling of comraderie I have with my colleagues is one I cherishâwe root for each other and have a fabulous time together. That matters too.
Do you have any words of wisdom for writers from an authorâs pointâof-view?
~Be discerning but donât be precious about your work.
~Take your work as far as you can on your own before showing it; your agent only gets a first read once.
~Let your work speak for itselfâno need to tell your agent how much your neighbors and other writer friends love it first; that can set unrealistic expectations before that first read.
~Go to your laptop or drawing board every day. Itâs easier to stay with the story youâre trying to write or illustrate than it is to reintroduce yourself after an absence.
~Think about a problem you are having with your book right before you go to sleep, and keep a pencil and notepad by your bedside table; you might get an answer during the night or first thing in the morning (it happens!).
~Donât worry about how many books you have published / are publishing; Robert McCloskey did seven in his lifetime.
~Donât get obsessed with Amazon rankings, etc. The secret is that a bad ranking will make you feel worse and a good ranking or review wonât make you feel much better.
~As long as you can say to yourself, when youâre looking back at your work, I did the best I was capable of at that time in my life, youâll be a bit more impervious to negative comments. But make sure you can say that before your book goes out into the world.
Would you answer differently with your agentâs hat on?
A: No, but some of these things I only know from being a writer, inside information J.
Holly, thanks for answering the interview questions. I will remind people when they might be able to see you in September. It was such great fun to share the picture of your son with everyone. It looks like David really captured his looks and personality.
Best of Luck with the book!
Talk tomorrow,
Kathy
PS: Remember to check back next Friday to read the four first pages critiqued by Holly.
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Leon Husock – Associate Agent at L. Perkins Agency.
Prior to joining the L. Perkins Agency, Leon was an associate agent at Anderson Literary Management. He has a BA in Literature from Bard College and attended the Columbia Publishing Course.
Leon is actively building his client list.
He has a particular interest in science fiction & fantasy, young adult and middle-grade novels filled with strong characters and original premises, but keeps an open mind for anything that catches his eye.Â
He is also looking for historical fiction set in the 20th century, particularly the 1980s or earlier.
He is not interested in non-fiction at this time.
Email: [email protected]
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How to submit:
Please email a query letter containing the following:
- AÂ brief synopsis
- Your bio
- The first five pages from your novel or book proposal in the body of your email.
Please keep in mind:
- Attachments will not be opened unless specifically requested.
- We only accept email queries. We do not accept queries by snail mail, phone or social media. All snail mail queries will be discarded unopened.
- Please only query one agent at this agency. They will only consider one manuscript from one writer at a time to one agent at a time. If you have written more than one manuscript, choose the one you think is the most promising and pitch that. Do not pitch them all.
- We have a strict NO MULTIPLE SUBMISSIONS policy within the agency, so please be sure to only submit to one of us. (Though simultaneous submissions to other agencies are expected.) We work together closely, often passing projects along to other members of the team.
Send to leon [at] lperkinsagency.com.
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The SCBWI put out this alert with writers. Didn’t want you to miss it:
Agents have been writing to us about a new type of “scam” they are seeing: agent middleman services. These are companies that, for a fee, will query agents for you. Agents overwhelming ignore queries from these companies. If you are having trouble getting an agent to represent you, your best plan of attack is to work on your manuscript and research the field. Join a critique group, attend an SCBWI event and make sure you are querying the right agents by searching though the agent directory in The Book. Paying a third party to query for you is not a fast track, it is just a waste of your money. How Not to Seek a Literary Agent: The Perils of “Middleman” Services
Posted by Victoria Strauss for Writer Beware
I know I’ve written about this before. But I’m seeing an increasing number of these kinds of “services,” and they are all worthless.
What am I talking about? Agent middleman services–services that, for a fee, purport to contact agents on your behalf with the aim of snagging representation and, hopefully, a publishing contract.
A particularly egregious example: Bookmarq.net’s Finding a Publisher service. (All errors courtesy of the original.)
Worth reading the full article. Here’s the link:
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Agent Holly McGhee is our Guest Critiquer for August. Holly McGhee opened Pippin Properties in 1998, after being an executive editor at HarperCollins and has built one of the most prestigious Literary Agencies in the Childrenâs Book Industry.
Holly says, âAt Pippin we embrace every artistic endeavor, from picture books to middle-grade novels, nonfiction, young adult, graphic novels. We donât follow trendsâwe encourage our clients to follow their hearts. Our philosophy, the world owes you nothing, you owe the world your best work, hasnât changed, but as an agency we have evolved to keep pace with our clients.â
Among Hollyâs celebrated clients are Kate DiCamillo, David Small, Doreen Cronin, Jandy Nelson, Kathi Appelt, Harry Bliss, Peter H. Reynolds, Sujean Rim, Jon Agee, and Hollyâs very own big sister, Alison McGhee. Holly lives with her husband and three children fifteen miles west of the Lincoln Tunnel, and she also writes under the pen name Hallie Durand.
Here are the submission guidelines for submitting a First Page in August:
Please âAugust First Page Critiqueâ in the subject line. Please make sure you include your name, the title of the piece, and whether it is as picture book, middle grade, or young adult, etc. at the top.
Please attach your first page submission using one inch margins and 12 point font â double spaced, no more than 23 lines to an e-mail and send it to: kathy(dot)temean(at)gmail(dot)com. Also cut and paste it into the body of the e-mail and then also attach it in a Word document to the email.
DEADLINE:Â August 21st.
RESULTS:Â August 29th.
Use inch margins â double space your text â 12 pt. New Times Roman font â no more than 23 lines â paste into body of the email
You can only send in one first page each month. It can be the same first page each month or a different one, but if you sent it to me last month and it didnât get chosen, you need to send it again using the Augustâs directions. Of course, it doesnât have to be the same submission.
Talk tomorrow,
Kathy
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Alexander Slater from the Trident Media Group is looking to build his client list.
When asked how he became an agent at Trident, concentrating in the expanding children’s, middle grade and young adult businesses, Alex simply replies, “It was only natural.â While karma is not an established business concept, Â it is clear that Alex’s career arc led him in this happy direction.
Start with Alex’s love of fiction, and in particular the stories that captivate the minds and imaginations of young people, from those so young that books are read to them, to young adults who get captivated by creative fiction. “I love to let myself go, and become the reader, whether the story is directed at a ten-year-old or a teenager,” says Alex.
Next is Alex’s experience at Trident, where he has been since 2010. He became a very successful agent representing the company’s children, middle grade and young adult authors in many licensing arrangements in the global marketplace for translation and in the English language in the U.K., having placed books with publishers in dozens of countries. Alex was Trident’s representative at the Bologna Children’s Book Fair in Italy, as well as the broader-based London and Frankfurt book fairs. His experience in representing fiction in these areas showed him what elements in stories work well, and how to maximize the value of what an author has created.
He is now building his list domestically at Trident, while keeping his focus on these areas. As a Foreign Rights Agent, he sold international rights for authors such as R.J. Palacio, Louis Sachar, Jessica Sorensen, L.J. Smith, Rebecca Donovan, and many others.
Alex’s plan is to, “Look for stories that will rise above the rest with characters that will be remembered well past childhood, with the potential to cross over to other media and formats,” such as programming, games, motion pictures and merchandise. “Trident is the leader on taking advantage of the latest opportunities presented by changing technology,” says Alex, and, “I will be there to help make the latest innovations happen for my authors.”
“I believe that the most successful writers have a bit of the dreamer in them.” And Alex passionately believes that he can help turn their dreams into reality.
What Alexander is looking for: Alexander is interested in childrenâs, middle grade, and young adult fiction and nonfiction, from new and established authors. As he says, âIâm looking for projects that will rise above the restâŚcharacters youâll remember well past childhoodâŚbooks that translate well to film because within them contain incredible stories, not because theyâre the latest trend.â He particularly loves authors like Frank Portman, Jim Shepard, Jenny Han, and Rainbow Rowell.
How to submit: Send a query letter, pasted in the body of the email, to aslater [at] TridentMediaGroup.com. Your query should include only a paragraph about yourself, a brief plot pitch, and your contact information. Please do not send a manuscript or proposal until you have been requested to do so.
Follow him on Twitter: @abuckslater.
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A few weeks ago, Agent Carly Watters on her blog talked about after you write a great manuscript, how does an agent decide to work with someone after that? She has seven tips.
7 Ways To Make Yourself An Easy Author to Work With by Carly Watters:
1. Open to revisions
Right away, I know if an author is going to be a fit for me based on how they react to revision ideas. Agents are looking for writers that are open to feedback and collaboration. If I gave you an R&R did you connect with my notes? Did you ask questions that take my notes from suggestions to big picture changes that make the novel better?
2. Always wants to get better
A line I like to use is âtrust your future self.â What that means to me is if you can write good novel, you can write many more. Getting defensive about your novel means you are holding on to it when really you should be willing to let it go and work on the next. Agents are looking to represent authors for the long term, so what we need is the faith that you want to be the best writer, every time you write a new book. We know there will be ups and downs, but itâs that drive to succeed that will separate many writers from the ones that donât make it.
3. Treats assistants and senior industry members alike
From time to time we get people who respond to our query letter auto-response with condescending and mean emails. It doesnât matter who is on the other end of those emails, our principal agent or our assistant, you have to be friendly to everyoneânot just the people who influence your career. Those mean emails just reinforce our decision to pass without a second thought.
4. Asks questions
I love it when authors want to know more about the process. Donât be shy about wanting to know how the business works. Whether itâs a Twitter #askagent session or when youâre on âThe Callâ with an agent, make sure you ask the important questions that help your understanding.
5. Trusts us
The number one way to work with an agent for a long period of time is trust. I know this isnât built over night, but you have to trust your agent to have your best interests at heart. This is one of the most important long-term author/agent relationship requirements. Only query agents that you see yourself working with and that you already trust (whether itâs a referral, their taste or client list).
6. Communication
This is part of trust, but authors have to be up-front with agents. Did you self publish before? Have you had an agent before? Can you share your sales numbers from your previous book? Itâs the little things that add up when it comes to communication. We need to know everything if weâre going to represent you well.
7. Professional on social media
As easy as it is for authors to Google agents to see if we might be a fit for you, when we fall in love with a query or manuscript the first thing we do is Google you back. What agents love to see on social media is a personality (not just link blasts). You donât have to have a ton of followers (but points if you do!) to get our attention. Itâs all about the balance between promotion and personality. We love it when authors are part of writing communities and support other authors. That means, when the time comes, those other published writers will support you too.
You should check out Carly’s Blog: http://carlywatters.com/blog/
PS Literary is looking for an intern. Carly has information about working remotely for them. If you have any aspirations to become a literary Agent, this would be something to consider.
Talk tomorrow,
Kathy
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I am very happy to announce that Agent Holly McGhee has agreed to be our Guest Critiquer for August. Holly McGhee opened Pippin Properties in 1998, after being an executive editor at HarperCollins and has built one of the most prestigious Literary Agencies in the Children’s Book Industry.
Holly says, “At Pippin we embrace every artistic endeavor, from picture books to middle-grade novels, nonfiction, young adult, graphic novels. We donât follow trendsâwe encourage our clients to follow their hearts. Our philosophy, the world owes you nothing, you owe the world your best work, hasnât changed, but as an agency we have evolved to keep pace with our clients.”
Among Hollyâs celebrated clients are Kate DiCamillo, David Small, Doreen Cronin, Jandy Nelson, Kathi Appelt, Harry Bliss, Peter H. Reynolds, Sujean Rim, Jon Agee, and Hollyâs very own big sister, Alison McGhee. Holly lives with her husband and three children fifteen miles west of the Lincoln Tunnel, and she also writes under the pen name Hallie Durand.
Here are the submission guidelines for submitting a First Page in August:
Please âAugust First Page Critiqueâ in the subject line. Please make sure you include your name, the title of the piece, and whether it is as picture book, middle grade, or young adult, etc. at the top.
Please attach your first page submission using one inch margins and 12 point font â double spaced, no more than 23 lines to an e-mail and send it to: kathy(dot)temean(at)gmail(dot)com. Also cut and paste it into the body of the e-mail and then also attach it in a Word document to the email.
DEADLINE:Â August 21st.
RESULTS:Â August 29th.
Use inch margins â double space your text â 12 pt. New Times Roman font â no more than 23 lines â paste into body of the email
You can only send in one first page each month. It can be the same first page each month or a different one, but if you sent it to me last month and it didnât get chosen, you need to send it again using the Augustâs directions. Of course, it doesnât have to be the same submission.
Talk tomorrow,
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This Goldilocks illustration was sent in by Patricia Pinsk. It was done as a paper collage with ink, watercolour, digital textures. Her work includes multi-media drawing, illustration, photography, glass-work, sculpture as well as Web-based graphics for the corporate world. Website: http://www.patriciapinsk.com Twitter: @PatriciaPinsk
Below are the first page critiques done by literary agent, Jenny Bent. We can all learn a lot from what Jenny had to say.
Deena Graves – TERRAZA â Young Adult
Pizza sauce, garlic, and beer did not mix. Not when all three meshed, creating a gag-inducing stench in the faded black fibers of my Perky Pepper T-shirt. Dixie would shoot me dead for sure. The last time I came home from the pizza shop smelling like a garbage disposal, she threatened to hose me down in the front yard before Iâd âever step one soiled footâ into her home.
Shrugging into my fleece jacket, I ignored the stink of my shirt and shoved my dark-framed glasses back up my nose. I scowled down at my beat-up Mongoose and the flat tire forcing me to walk my happy ass home.
âHey, Luc!â a voice called from behind. I kept walking, stealing a quick glance over my shoulder. Max jogged toward me, holding up the sides of his pants. I snorted. If he didnât wear them so low, maybe the stupid things would stay up.
âWait up, man,â he panted, pulling up beside me. âYou know bikes were designed to be ridden, right?â Max eyed my flat and sucked in a breath. âOh.â
âYeah.â I tossed him the souvenir Iâd found wedged in the rubber tread. âAnd they ride better when the tires arenât shredded.â
He inspected the chunk of weird black glass about the size of a half-dollar, tossing it from hand to hand. It weighed next to nothing, and no thicker than my pinkie, but its wicked, chiseled edge had almost cut my finger trying to dislodge it. âThis was in your tire?â
I nodded. âI bet it was Manager Mike, the douche nugget.â I scowled out at the dark, Edison Square of squat, brick buildings. The stretch of small-town antique shops, specialty clothing stores, and trendy eateries had long since closed for the night. A brisk October wind cut through my fleece jacket.
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Terraza
Lively voice which is great, I’m seeing too many flat voices in YA contempt these days. Not sure the voice is always completely authentic– “gag-inducing stench” doesn’t feel to me something like a teenaged boy would say. I did like the voice overall however. And line by line the writing is strong here.
I would like to see this author push themselves a little more to write a really “wow” first page. The skill level is there. But I am not sure from reading this that the book is beginning at the right point. I like the hint of mystery that someone sabotaged his bike. But the writer is starting with a conversation, which can be a tricky way to start a book, particularly when the conversation is not necessarily a very interesting or illuminating one.
I would try instead to either start in a place that is a bigger moment for the character or a place with perhaps more emotion for the character.
Alternatively, the author could perhaps have the character show/feel a little more here. What is his mental state as the story opens? We don’t know, beyond annoyed, and I’d like a little more on that. What is his general frame of mind as the story opens? What is he thinking about as he leaves work, is there anything significant on his mind? How does he feel about his friend Max beyond the thought about his pants, I can’t tell. If the author gave us more access to thoughts/feelings, we could get a better sense of him right away. Also, perhaps these two could banter a little more and we could get a sense of their personalities and relationship that way. Right now their conversation isn’t that interesting. It’s there to convey information about the bike, some of which we know already (there’s a flat tire) but it should serve more purpose than that–it should also illuminate character and it should also entertain. And is there a different way he could react to the flat tire? Something funny or unusual that would really intrigue the reader?
And finally, I would love the author push him/herself a little more with the opening line. The opening line to a book should be the best sentence the author has ever written. It doesn’t have to be necessarily super action-packed or dramatic, but it should instantly intrigue, or amuse, or create thought. I fear that this one is a bit of a throw-away.
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Helen Landalf â CLEO – YA novelÂ
The minute I slither into my sequined tank, Joan starts to disappear. I yank it down to show a little cleavage, slide on my black lace over-the-elbow gloves, and she fades even more. Then I squeeze into a pair of velvet leggings that hug her queen-size thighs, top them off with a flirty skirt, and step into my red stilettos. Sheâs almost gone.
âJoan,â comes Momâs voice from outside the bedroom door. âAre you in there, honey?â
Elizabeth Taylor, in her Cleopatra gown and headdress, gazes down at me from the poster above my dresser. Ignore her, she seems to say. Youâve got work to do.
I glance at my phone, but thereâs no text from Matt. Grabbing the bottle of foundation, I slather the cold, sweet-smelling liquid along my skin. The little potholes left over from Joanâs acne outbreak back in middle school? Gone. Next comes blush, the soft brush whispering glitter and bone structure onto Joanâs chipmunk cheeks, followed by eyeliner that sweeps into a dramatic V at my temples, adding flair and width to Joanâs squinty eyes. I glance up at the poster again and paint it thick and black, just like Lizâs.
The doorknob wiggles. âJoan?â Mom says.
âBe out in a sec.â I fluff my limp brown hair to create the illusion of fullness and then dim the lights on my makeup mirror. Leaning forward, I suck in my cheeks and survey my work. Not bad. All I need now is a dab of lipstick, and my transformation will be complete.
Just as Iâm snatching up the tube of Burgundy Plum, the Lady Gaga ringtone blares from my phone.
âHi, Matt,â I say. âHang on, Iâm coming.â
HERE IS JENNY BENT:
CLEO:
This is another one with strong writing that could have a stronger opening line. For inspiration, here’s a link to 20 great opening lines in YA fiction:
http://www.epicreads.com/blog/20-amazing-opening-lines-in-ya/
I like the concept here that we are watching someone’s transformation. And there is a great use of physical detail here. But again, as with the last critique, there’s not enough information about this character’s state of mind as this is happening. I want to know more about her and I’m not getting anything about her personality from this–all I’m getting is physical characteristics and perhaps that she is pretty hard on herself about the way she looks.
I love the part where the poster of Elizabeth Taylor seems to talk to her, that gives this a little edge that it really needs. But let me learn more even about this character from her inner thoughts or her dialogue, make every line really work. Maybe she could say something funnier or more interesting to Matt? To her mom? Think something interesting while she is doing this that lets me know something about her or her state of mind while she is doing this? Why does she need to transform? What about transforming makes her feel strong or special? Why does she love Elizabeth Taylor?
I think adding this level of detail and characterization, as well as working on the opening lines, will give this already strong first page some extra added oomph. Remember that you never have much time to hook the reader and focus on making this character as vivid and lively as possible.
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Mieke Zamora-Mackay              SHADOW                                    Young Adult
The hall is buzzing. Not the usual humdrum of the first hour of school. Itâs a serious buzzing. Whispers about someone. Murmurs about something thatâs happened.
In the woodsâŚ
JunkieâŚ
HuffingâŚ
DeadâŚ
These are the words that float above the din.  No one looks my way, but thereâs enough space for me to walk through the sea of bodies. Iâm used to it. Everyone always walks around me, like Iâm encased in some bubble. Protecting their personal space, theyâre probably afraid that if they brush up against me, Iâll know everything they keep hidden inside. See into their dark hearts and thoughts, their misdeeds, acts of violence and carnal desires. It comes with being the daughter of a self-proclaimed medium; the local town kook.
The truth is, I donât know any of their secrets. I donât see anything they have to hide. Instead, I see spirits, ghosts â lost souls.
I see the part of every person that has left their physical body. Usually, theyâre just trying to find their way home, or revisiting a part of their life they wish to say goodbye to. Some just really donât know whatâs happened to them.
I reckon thatâs how the fresh one walking in my direction is feeling.
I keep my eyes down low. I donât want him to catch me looking. Heâll know instantly that I can see him, and that wonât do. Lost spirits are never up to any good. The fact that they donât have a clue about whatâs happened to them in the first place is an indication of that. And this oneâs got trouble written all over him.
HERE IS JENNY BENT:
SHADOW
I like this one a lot! The voice is strong, the first line is good and the opening page shows us a lot of information about this person and their place in the world of the school without “telling” us too much. There’s a real attitude to the writing, which I like. I also like that the author sets up the character and tells us about who she is in an interesting way and then starts right into the action. It’s great that she sees this particular dead person and immediately forms an opinion about him that is intriguing to the reader. I want to read more because I want to know more about this ghost and why he’s trouble and what will happen between these two. I also like that the writer starts at a moment of interest in the action–the school is buzzing about something–what is it? And then he/she gives us a lot of information about the character by telling us that she’s an outcast–everyone is buzzing about something, but she wouldn’t know because no one tells her anything. This is a more interesting way of showing us something about her rather than simply telling us that she’s an outcast. There are plenty of question marks to keep us reading but enough information is provided that we don’t feel confused, which is an essential balance.
If the writer wanted to go a little further, she could give us a little more info about the particular state of mind that this character is in as the book opens, or how she feels about the fact that she is an outcast, but overall this is a very strong opening page indeed.
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Peter McCleery       THE STAND-IN          Contemporary Middle Grade
Middle-school is a lot like prison. There is a precise routine and schedule overseen by an all-powerful warden (the principal). There are authority figures who roam the halls and enforce strict rules (guards/teachers). You are allotted a certain time and place to eat grub. Thereâs a Supermax cell block for repeat offenders (detention). Thereâs even a rec yard and communal showers. And, of course, there is a very specific hierarchy of cliques and social groups among the inmates. You better know who you can trust and who you canât.
In my line of work, I canât trust anyone. If this were prison instead of Glenview Middle School Iâd be called a Fixer. The guy who runs the black market. I like to think of myself as a businessman. Or entrepreneur, if you want to be fancy about it. I sell things to the inmate-students that make their 3-year stint here a bit more comfortable. At a fair price, of course. In prison, a fixer deals in cigarettes and shivs. Here, I deal in contraband junk food and fake doctor notes. Now, some of these things may or may not be âappropriateâ or âlegalâ per se, but they do fill a need. I provide a valuable service. There is supply. There is demand. And thereâs good, olâ Digby Fisher in between making a little money. Is that so wrong?
The answer is no, by the way.
Shortly after my mom and I moved to Glenview (which should just be called The Affluent Town of Glenview because thatâs always how they describe it the newspaper.) I knew I had a good thing. These kids get more allowance money than my mom gets in her paycheck. One day the vending machine went out of order (I had nothing to do with it, I swear! Just a lucky coincidence.) It just so happened that my mom was doing a Costco run that day. I added a few items to the shopping list. Snack-size Doritos, gum, M&Ms. The next day I sat next to the broken vending machine with a backpack full of snacks and sold out before third period. I provided a needed service. In many ways I was a hero. After maintenance fixed the machine
HERE IS JENNY BENT:
THE STAND-IN
I love the idea of this one and this is a good first page in that it has tons of voice and sets up an interesting, resourceful character that the reader will want to spend time with. However, to my ear, the voice was a little older than middle-grade at times, slotting into that awkward 14/15 year old territory, and in the second paragraph maybe even more 16. Examples of places I would loosen the voice are, “precise routine and schedule overseen ” and “a very specific hierarchy of cliques and social groups” – phrases like this feel a little formal for the target market. The age issue might just be because of Digby’s very in-depth knowledge of how a prison runs, even down to knowing the word shiv. It left me wondering whether he knew someone in prison or just watched a lot of old movies. The opening has a journal feel to it, but I would lose the direct talking to the reader halfway down as this can pull you out of the story. I liked some of the examples of the things Digby can source, like doctor’s notes, and the story about how this ‘job’ started was short enough not to feel like too much up front backstory, although I’d hope the present day plot starts on the next page, with the inciting incident following shortly after.
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Agent Mary Krienke: Mary joined Sterling Lord Literistic in 2006 after receiving her MFA in Fiction from Columbia University. She now lives in Brooklyn.
Mary works with Sterling Lord and represents literary fiction, creative nonfiction, and realistic YA that pays close attention to craft and voice. She is especially drawn to new and emerging writers who seek to push boundaries of form and content, and she responds most strongly to writing that reaches great emotional and psychological depths. She is equally interested in work that illuminates through humor or by playing with genre. Her other interests include psychology, art, and design.
How to submit: You can email Mary with your submissions. For fiction, please send a synopsis and the first three chapters or a 50 page sample. If submitting non-fiction, send a detailed proposal.
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One of the questions I asked Editors and Agents was about the Indy Book Stores. Over the last year, I’ve heard so many writers and illustrators voice their concern about the stores future. We’ve seen some of our favorite book stores shut their doors and every publishing professional knows how lost we would be without them out there to help promote our books, so I had to ask.
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Since, agent Jill Corcoran is such a good marketer, I am sure most of you already know about the video series that author of the PLOT WHISPERER, Martha Alderson and literary agent Jill Corcoran released three months ago.
You can watch the first video in the series for free, which I did last week. It was very good and since I watched it, I’ve been wondering how I could come up with the money to rent the rest of the series.
Today, Martha and Jill lowered the price to $75.00 to rent the 8 part series for a whole year, so now I can afford to buy the series and learn from what they have put together.
If you are a picture book writer, they even have something for you. You can pre-order: How to Write & Sell A Picture Book- Pre-Order and SAVE $25 https://vimeo.com/ondemand/writesellpicturebook
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In this 8 Video (5.5 hours) Series, Plot Whisperer Martha Alderson and Literary Agent Jill Corcoran provide step-by-step instruction on how to revise your
⢠Concept
⢠Structure and design
⢠Tension and conflict
⢠Character growth and transformation
⢠Pacing
⢠Cause and effect
⢠Meaning
⢠Hook
⢠Polish
⢠Prose
in preparation for a major rewrite of your novel.
To complete the course in a month, watch two videos a week. Or, work at your own pace and take more or less time on the step-by-step exercises. You decide your revision pace as you explore and complete each video exercise based on your own individual needs in preparation for a major rewrite.
⢠8 videos (available for viewing as many times as you would like for 1 year)
⢠30 writing exercises- one for each day of the Revise Your Novel Month
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I. TRAILER
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a. Video #1: HOW TO REVISE + CONCEPT & CHARACTERS
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b. Video #3: CONCEPT + ENERGETIC MARKERS
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⢠Energetic Markers
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a. Video #4: SCENES AND THEMES
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⢠Themes
⢠Character Motivation
⢠Antagonist
b. Video #5: CLIMAX
⢠Review
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⢠Anticipation
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c. Video #6: BEGINNING & END
⢠Review
⢠Beginning
⢠Traits, Skills, Knowledge, Beliefs
⢠Cause and Effect
⢠Antagonists
V. WORD LEVEL
a. Video #7: MANUSCRIPT VOICE + CHARACTER & ACTION
⢠Voice
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⢠Crisis
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⢠Tension and conflict
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⢠Meaning
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To complete the course in a month, watch two videos a week. Or, work at your own pace and take more or less time on the step-by-step exercises. You decide your revision pace as you explore and complete each video exercise based on your own individual needs in preparation for a major rewrite.
⢠8 Instructional videos (available for viewing as many times as you would like for 1 year)
⢠30 writing exercises- one for each day of the Revise Your Novel Month
Who will benefit from PlotWriMo: Revise Your Novel in a Month:
⢠Writers seeking to write a great novel
⢠Writers with a draft of a novel and uncertain how to proceed
⢠Writers with story problems
⢠Writers who feel blocked
⢠Writers who wish to move from where they are to where you wish to be
⢠Writers committed to improving your craft
⢠Writers interested in digging deeper into your story
⢠Writers needing help organizing for a major rewrite
Dolly D. Napal watched the series and said, “Don’t let the title fool you. This is not only a revision course. It’s a fully comprehensive writing course for PB, MG, YA, and Adult writers, at any point in their career.”
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The Artist Showcase from the NJSCBWI Conference continues with this wonderful illustration of the sand and the surf in Cape May, NJ by illustrator Colleen Rowan Kosinski. Colleen is an author/illustrator that has worked as a fine artist for over fifteen years and has artwork hanging in homes across the country. She is a member of the SCBWI and, along with writing and illustrating picture books, she writes MG and YA novels. She is a graduate of Rutgers University. Website: www.colleenrowankosinski.com
MY STATE OF THE MARKET REPORT and AGENT/EDITOR SURVEY CONTINUES BELOW:
Check back tomorrow for more from answers to question asked in the 2014 State of the Market Report I gave at the NJSCBWI Conference the other week.
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The NJSCBWI Art Show Continues: I think you will enjoy this cute little sea monster in this illustration by Angela Padron. Angela was born and raised in Freehold, NJ but moved to Florida in 2002. For over 15 years, Angela taught bilingual, ESL, Spanish, and Art in public schools before becoming a freelance writer and illustrator. Now she writes and illustrates children’s books, including board books, picture books, chapter books, and middle grade novels.
Below is the slide I made up after tallying the answers to the survey I sent to a total of 38 editors and agents. I asked each whether they thought the genres below where increasing, decreasing, or staying the same and if they expected this to continue for the next year.
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This wonderful illustration is by Claire Lordon, who exhibited her work at the New Jersey SCBWI Art Show. If you would like to see more of Claire’s art here is her website: www.clairelordon.com
It is my pleasure to let you know that Jenny Bent has agreed to be our critique our first pages in July. Each month four first pages are picked for critique.
See Bottom of Post for submission Guidelines.
Jenny represents literary and commercial adult, young adult, and middle grade fiction. She also represents nonfiction in the areas of memoir, humor and select narrative nonfiction.
In 2003 Jenny joined Trident Media Group, where she was promoted to Vice President before leaving to found the Bent Agency in 2009. She lives in Brooklyn in an apartment full of books and while there are not quite so many lazy reading afternoons, she manages to fit one in now and then.
My list is varied and includes commercial and literary fiction as well as memoir and select humor titles. In adult fiction, I particularly enjoy women’s fiction and crime/suspense. I also love novelsâfor grown-ups or childrenâthat have an element of magic or fantasy to them or that take me into a strange and new world, whether real or imaginary. All of the books that I represent speak to the heart in some way: they are linked by genuine emotion, inspiration and great writing and story telling. I love books that make me laugh, make me cry, or ideally do both.
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Thought the writers on the West Coast might be interested in this Writer’s Retreat.
It certainly had two great industry professionals on the faculty with:
Editor Melanie Cecka is Associate Publishing Director at Knopf Books for Young Readers.
Agent Scott Treimel heads the full service SŠott Treimel NY Agency, established 1995. The agency represents exclusively childrenâs books and it give the attendees a chance for a full novel critique.
FEES: Basic seminar is $769 (Early Bird, extended to July 5th); adultsâ critiques are additional (15 to 30 pages, or full novel; all $3 per page). Basic fee includes Thursday through Saturday nightsâ beachfront, double-occupancy lodging and most meals.
WHOLE-NOVEL SEMINAR & RETREAT
12th Annual Pacific Coast Childrenâs Writers Workshop:
October 17-19, 2014 ďľ Coastal Santa Cruz, CA.
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Here are the submission guidelines for submitting a First Page in July:
Please âJuly First Page Critiqueâ in the subject line. Please make sure you include your name, the title of the piece, and whether it is as picture book, middle grade, or young adult, etc. at the top.
Please attach your first page submission using one inch margins and 12 point font â double spaced, no more than 23 lines to an e-mail and send it to: kathy(dot)temean(at)gmail(dot)com. Also cut and paste it into the body of the e-mail and then also attach it in a Word document to the email.
DEADLINE:Â July 24th.
RESULTS:Â August 1st.
Use inch margins â double space your text â 12 pt. New Times Roman font â no more than 23 lines â paste into body of the email
You can only send in one first page each month. It can be the same first page each month or a different one, but if you sent it to me last month and it didnât get chosen, you need to send it again using the Julyâs directions. Of course, it doesnât have to be the same submission.
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