Meet Andy Golay who has a totally awesome, completed novel! 707.
How do I know?
Because I've read it!
I met Andy over two years ago in
Bisbee, Arizona.I was leading a writer's workshop at the local library and Andy was one of the attendees. Later that night we ran into each other in town. It's not hard to do in a town as small as Bisbee, which I believe to be the inspiration for B Town in Andy's novel. We started talking about writing,and two hours later we had exchanged emails and have been in touch ever since. Andy is one of the brightest, most delightful human beings I have ever met. I think its cool how the world of writing brings like minded souls together. And I'm honored to feature Andy today on my blog.
So now to my interview with Andy.
How long have you been interested in writing?I remember in childhood writing and performing song parodies, and enlisting my younger brother Jeff to sing back up. He was a good sport, though I was a tyrannical director, as evidenced by one extant recording. Later as a seventeen-year-old during a substance abuse related/psychiatric hospital stay, I wrote the beginning of a short story, as well as a few poems about addiction. That was the first time I recall endeavoring to write for writing's sake, and I do still enjoy reading those little pieces.
I know you write music as well as fiction. Is the process different or the same? I'd like to get more poetic with my fiction, and we have some of that in 707, parts that aren't really "prose," but if I write another novel, I'd like it to read more like poetry than prose, more rhythmic and elevated, which would be akin to writing music. It would be kind of cool to produce a novel that could also be performed as an opera, straight from the text. I'm not saying I intend to do that.But playing music with other people-- "jamming" is so fun, and different from writing literature, for me, because it's a social activity, we make eye contact and smile with each other, in the same room while producing sonorous vibrations, whereas in the written medium, much of the "eye contact" and smiles are asynchronous and happen on more of a telepathic level, though perhaps the eyes of the heart can be engaged even more fully at times, because
readers can pause, reflect, ponder, and get a Klondike bar or some berries, then come back and finish the chapter.
When you were writing 707 did you write pretty much every day and how long would you write?Once I got serious, I wrote just about every day, for several hours a day.
Hello Internet World. It's freezing cold here in NYC, but not where Liz Beth my featured Young Aspiring Aurthor lives. I'm jealous.
Liz Beth not only writes poetry (see below two of her poems) but takes awesome pictures that are also featured here. Wow.
Okay to my interview with Liz Beth...
What is your full name?My Full name is Lizbeth Lomeli, But i like to space the Liz and the Beth so that it seems like i have a middle name!
Where do you live?I live in a very dry area where almost nothing happens, Hesperia California.But i do love this place, i just won't stay here when i am older. see photo above
Are you in school?I am Currently home-schooled and i am a Junior so yes i am in School.
*Wow. Home-schooled. I happen to know a fiction character that was home-schooled too.
What are your favorite subjects?My favorite subject is English (of course), it is the subject my parents know i'll get an A in. even though my grammar isn't the best, my work always earned me A's. But of course it wasn't always my favorite i remember being in 7th grade and hating the subject so much, always focusing on theatre, but obviously my interests changed.
How long have you wanted to write?Hm, Well i began to have an interest in books in eighth grade, when i read this book called "Fame Glory and other things in my to do list" since at that age i wanted to be an actor when i read the fame part in the title i quickly picked it up. It turned out to be a romance. i was glued (staying up till morning...and sometimes not sleeping at all). i remember how proud my teacher was. But anyways i began to get curious as to how they came up with things that made people not sleep. Then i remembered my friend wrote poems and i asked her how she came up with them. "It comes from in here" she had said pointing to my heart she taught everything from when to start another line, to how to get inspired. Ever since then i started writing poems about my everyday preteen life in junior high and until now when i write about other things, not just boys. (:
One of Lizzie's favorite bands is the Eels. See photo.What is the funnest part of writing for you?The funnest part i would have to say would be coming up with the material, i can't plan things before-hand, if i do it will end up different anyways...so i go with it. i come up with something and just go along. i don't have notes or anything that involves planning, except ofcourse for the characters. but that's just about it. So as i am typing i come up with what the character will say and stuff like that. So you can imagine how crazy and weird some of my stuff comes out.
What is the hardest part?Well when it comes to Poems nothing is really hard it as my friend said supposed to come from the heart. If you are feeling emotion you write it down and you most likely will have a poem in front of you. But for stories maybe, just the simple things like comma goes
Hello out there in Internet World. Today I'm posting an interview with another Young Aspiring Author. I have to thank all the YAA (Young Aspiring Authors) Who have contacted me and are willing to be featured. I think the bravest thing an aspiring author can do is to share their work. Put it out there. So cheers to all of you, and I look forward to interviewing each of you! Now let me introduce Brianna who found me she said because she googled "writer tips." Oh my! Am I happy. My daughter, who is also a journalist and helped me ramp up my blog said, "Mom if you put writer tips in the tags on your post more people will find you." And it worked!Okay and a big shout out to Canada. (Side note***). My father is Canadian and I found out recently that I can claim dual citizenship because of that. Did you hear that Karen Fisher-Baird? My dear Canadian friend from my MFA at Vermont College days. So given that information I would sincerely like to welcome and introduce my fellow country person, Brianna. # 1) My name is Brianna Buschen
# 2) I live in Ontario, Canada
***Tell me the truth Brianna, do you write about Malibu Beach--see Brianna's story below--because the Canadian winters are so so so cold and you can at least get warm in your imagination? # 3) I am in high school, in the ninth grade, and have been home-schooled with my sister since the second grade. (These kids now a days...) I am fourteen (and a half ;)
#4) My interests are, on the top of the list, definitely writing, shopping, (can be very competitive and exhausting trying to keep up on the latest fashions, if you know what I mean!) and hanging out at my youth group.
# 5) Funny little story on how I got interested in writing, (grab a cup of coffee, this could take awhile...) When I was eight, I was extremely bored after I had finished my school work, so my mom told me to write a short story, after I wrote it, I found out how fun it was to write, and haven't stopped since then. (Life sure would be a lot easier if I had my own laptop!)
# 6) My favourite authors are
Carolyn Keene and
Karen Kingsbury
I am having trouble finding authors who don't write in a trashy sense, or crude language. (That's why I write my own stories . . . seriously!)
# 7) I would eventually like to see myself going to college or university to learn more about writing, so I can be an author as a career.
Also, just throwing it in there so you know what direction I want to take my writing in the future, is my faith in Jesus Christ. Right now, I'm not that into writing about that, because first I would like to learn and develop my faith and beliefs, before I can bring Him into the character's life in my stories. But as of right now, I just want to focus on writing short, fun stories, without having to think too, too hard!
***Side note from interviewer.I know I really cannot keep my mouth shut! Which is why I
Greetings Fellow Writers
It's me again. Still in my office. Still in my apartment in NYC. It's raining today. And cold. But I'm warm because I'm dog sitting my daughter's two Yorkshire Terriers and they like to cuddle!
So I've decided it's time to talk to you about where to start your story or poem, it's time to talk to you about beginnings.
Did I ever mention that when I decided I wanted to learn how to write a novel, I went back to school? I was 42 years old and I enrolled in an
MFA Masters In Fine Arts Program at Vermont College.And it while sitting on a very uncomfortable white plastic chair in a crowded class room, watching snow fall outside, in Montpelier, Vermont on a cold January day that I heard
Adam Rapp give a life altering lecture about beginnings.
*Warning Sidetrack ahead. When I was in college the first time around,18 years old, and my hometown was Phoenix, Arizona, I loved the poem
Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening by Robert Frost, so much that I had a copy of it along with a photograph of the Vermont Woods hanging abov my bed in my apartment. I told people I was going to live in Vermont after college--nor more desert for me. Ha! Well I finally did sort of live in Vermont for a month each year for two years exactly 22 years later while I did my residency part of my distance program at Vermont College. Sometimes dreams take a long time in coming.
Cough, sputter. Okay now back to the main story, while at Vermont College, one of my mentors, (full time authors who worked with students one on one for six months at a time), was Adam Rapp, a young playwright and author. Yes, if you go to college at my age, there is a good chance your professor will be younger than you. Adam was much younger than me. He still is! Adam has written many great books and plays. My favorite is
Under the Wolf Under the Dog. Adam taught me how to find the beginning of my story. Here is his famous question. What makes this day different from every other day? And that is where you start your story.
For example in my book
Converting Kate which Adam reviewed, edited and critqued, I began Kate's story on a certain day. Now a lot of new things happened on that day.
She started a new school
She met some new friends.
She decided to join Cross Country.
But the reason that this day was diffrerent from every other day in Kate's life is that this is the day she told people "No I do not belong to the Church of the Holy Divine." That statement made by Kate made this day different from every other day because up until that point in her life, Kate had been a member of the Church of the Holy Divine.
About six weeks ago I was privledged to read an ARC (Advanced Reader Copy) of
Mockingbird by
Kathryn Erskine which will come out in hardback in April 2010. I read it in one sitting. I laughed, I teared up and I didn't want the story to end. To say it is wonderful, is just an understatement.I was already a fan of Kathy's writing after reading her great YA Book,
Quaking.Here's a bit about
Mockingbird from
Amazon:In Caitlin’s world, everything is black or white. Things are good or bad. Anything in between is confusing. That’s the stuff Caitlin’s older brother, Devon, has always explained. But now Devon’s dead and Dad is no help at all. Caitlin wants to get over it, but as an eleven-year-old girl with
Asperger’s, she doesn’t know how. When she reads the definition of closure, she realizes that is what she needs. In her search for it, Caitlin discovers that not everything is black and white—the world is full of colors—messy and beautiful.
Kathryn Erskine has written a must-read gem, one of the most moving novels of the year.
And two reviews from Good Reads (which is also hosting a giveaway of this book by the way--
http://www.goodreads.com/giveaway/enter_choose_address/1753-mockingbird)
Beckie Weinheimer (um me)rated it: 5 out of 5 stars
Read in September, 2009
I adored this book. If it doesn't win the newbery, then something is wrong at the top! It's perfect!
Moira Rose Donohue (Author of Penny and the Punctuation Bee)rated it: 5 of 5 stars
bookshelves: kid-lit
Read in November, 2009
Watch out, readers of kidlit - this will be one of THE books to talk about next year when it officially debuts. But I've read an ARC (and the manuscript, as it was written as well) and I can tell you, it is truly a gem. I've never read a book that took a main character who was as difficult as this one and made me love her anyway. It takes a brilliant writer to make an Asperberger's girl who is trying to come to terms with the tragic loss of her brother someone you just adore, cheer for and rejoice with. Erskine does this all the while holding you hostage in a fascinating tale. A winner for sure!!!!
So now to my interview with Kathy Erskine.
Can you tell us how the idea for Mockingbird came about?I'd been wanting to write a book about a child with Asperger's, since I have one, to help people see what it's like. It can be both fun and frustrating for everyone, including the kid with Asperger's. I wasn't quite sure of the framework for the novel, though, so I was letting it mull around for a while. After the Virginia Tech shootings on April 16, 2007, I felt truly stunned, shaken, and I had to do something. In my m
Thanks to all of you who signed up for the contest! Carol has written such a great book and its doing so well in its first month of life! Here's to
Star in the Middle!!
We're featuring another author for December. Kathy Erskine and her new book, not quite out yet, but she's offering a signed copy of the ARC of
Mockingbird, win a copy before its out!
Each month I interview young adult authors about their latest books and give away a free signed copy of the book to one lucky reader. To learn more about my monthly book contest feature, e-mail me at [email protected] to win this month's free YA Book or leave a comment on the blog below this month's interview! Or, if you're an author who'd like to be interviewed you can reach me the same way by e-mailing me at [email protected].
Just e-mail me at [email protected] with the following information:
1) Send me two poems or up to five pages of creative writing
2) Tell me a little about yourself
Want an example? Continue reading to see past featured young adult and teen author writing samples.
So, hello, it's me again. Still in my New York City apartment, and it's still Autumn outside. Last time (in part I) I chatted with you I chatted about
setting scenes.
Now today I'm going to talk about dialogue--with you. Yes, you are going to talk back to me. Hey, I
write fiction, I can make your part up, easy as pie. Oops,
easy as pie is an overused
metaphor--avoid them at all costs, rack your brain think until you can come up with a unique metaphor of your own, it helps if it relates to what you are writing about. For example, I am writing about writing, so perhaps off the top of my head
as simple as a poet penning a two line poem--hey, cool I also organically added some alterations-- "poet," "penning" and "poem,"--all p words. Cool!
**Wikipedia tells us that alliteration is a literary or rhetorical stylistic device that consists in repeating the same consonant sound at the beginning of several words in close succession. An example is the Mother Goose tongue-twister Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... I even picked P at random and so did Wikipedia. Okay, I'm getting all jazzed about this writing thing. And oops I haven't even mentioned dialogue. Sometime soon I'll have to do a writer tip blog about
rewrites and cutting out the boring, unimportant parts of your writing, which would mean, if I was practicing what I preach that this entry would begin right here...
But then that would contradict the whole message of
voice, which is basically this--ignore the rules of writing, listen to your heart, write from your soul, use your unique way of saying things, to thine own self be true....
Okay, so my authentic voice is chatty, and often digresses from the point, but I happen to think my diversions are fun, sometimes entertaining and hopefully informative.
I also like myself, did you notice?
Okay to Dialogue.
Once again a definition from Wikipedia. Sorry, Maria (My friend Maria is a librarian and she absolutely hates Wikipedia because it is often--shock--not accurate!).
A
dialogue (sometimes also
dialog in
North American English) is a conversation between two or more people. It is also a literary form in which two or more parties engage in a discussion.
I am sort of a British Wannabe, hence I spell dialogue with a "ue" on the end.
To explain dialogue, I'm going to steal an idea from a writer I admire, because she was so cool when I heard her explain it and besides that's what writers do, we copy ideas we read about, we are like tape recorders eavesdropping on interesting conversations that we will later use in our stories, in short we are thieves.
But I will give credit for the floating dialogue--to the great and famous and wondrous Jane Yolen.
So here is an example of "floating dialogue." The kind you don't want to have in your stories.
"Hello," I say.
"Hi," you reply.
"So you want to know about dialogue?"
"Um, sure."
"Okay do you want the short story or the long story on dialogue?" I ask.
You r
Friday Night
At the Santa Monica Promenade
I hear its mournful sound
Beckoning in the distance
So Faint I wonder. . .
I push through throngs of
teenage girls in spaghetti-strap tops and skinny leg jeans
young men in pants belted below their boxers
a homeless man huddled by a lamppost
shaking coins in a paper cup
around two lovers arm in arm
past the buzz of the outdoor cafes
with their chinking of glass and table chatter
I am not tempted by the aromas of basil and garlic
But press on past the onlookers gathered around the clown
shaping balloons into animals
beyond the young boy, maybe ten years old,
dressed in a tux too big for his body
break-dancing to music
from a boom box rusty and splattered with paint
I do not pause to gape at the contortionist escaping his chains
nor to listen to the woman with long braided hair
Strumming her guitar
Humming a melancholy tune
But only stop when I see him—
Yes, he is here
Beyond the dinosaur vine fountain
He stands legs apart with his bag and pipes
Under the lit doorway of a store now closed
The sound fills my ears
And suddenly
The ground is green
The hills are purple with heather
An ancient stone castle sits before me
The wind, salty and wet
Whips through my hair
And brings a thousand voices from the past
I see their kilts and plaids
And hear the names of those before me
Stewart and McMinn
My eyes grow wet with the foggy mist
My heart swells with feeling
For a hidden part of myself
I do not know
People ask me if I’ve ever been to Scotland
And I don’t know what to say
Because I’ve been to the Promenade in Santa Monica on a Friday night
And heard the bagpipes play
By Beckie Weinheimer
-- Post From My iPhone
I have known Livi for about two years. We met online, she read
my book and I soon became a fan or her art and
poetry. Though I've never met her in person I have a piece of her in my house. She sent me this beautiful art piece in exchange for a signed copy of my book. What fun! I'm sorry Livi that there are shadows on my iphone photo of your art. I framed my pretty black girl with the purple eye and she sits beside me on my desk watching me write.
I thought Livi lived in Forks, Washington at first, because that was on her profile. Then I learned about
Twilight and realized Livi is a fan. I'm not sure what her last name is. She's known as black dream stream and other online names.
Her poems and her art are full of light and darkness, beauty and pain, and always vivid, always moving, always making my day.
Here's another one of her art pieces from her collection on Deviant Art. I must admit I am a fan of anything that has purple in it, so I picked her pretty purple girl piece, as I call it. But Livi has named it Tea Dress.
Here's an interview with Livi, two of her favorite poems and her two favorite pieces of art.
How long have you been drawing? Writing?basically the best answer to this would be,since i could hold a crayon.my mom says she could tell i was going to be an artist the first time i picked a crayon up by the way i looked at it.
Is poetry your favorite type of creative writing? not necessarily, its my fave to MAKE, not to read,i enjoy anything thats well done,paints good images in my head,and makes you think.i mostly read short storys because i have a short attention span.
What inspires your art?just about everything;primarily feelings,if i am in a public place feeling bad,you will always see me drawing on napkins and writing on candy wrappers.sometimes i feel as if i was filled with a hot,sticky,infection,boiling in my body,and the art is like a cool water cleansing me.sometimes i feel as if i am as light as air,and all the world is bathed in light,the art then is the magic required to lift my feet from the ground.
Where do you write?mostly on my bed,i also paint on my bed.my sheets are covered with ink and paint.
Are there certain times you write more?i go through phases,im usually painting a lot,or writing and sketching a lot,not sure what controls that,it can be frustrating though when i don't feel productive because i have no finished products,i just have to remind myself that its all just practice for the next time i DO finish something.
Are your visual and written art inter related?i really wouldn't know,i don't know much about why i draw or write what i do,i just put the pencil down and it turns into something.s
I am so excited to be able to interview Carol about her book
Star. I have had the opportunity to be a part of Carol's entire journey from manuscript--to submission--to lots of waiting--to book contract--to more editing--and to the final copy process.Carol's manuscript sat waiting on an editor's desk for a year before she heard back and then finally no it hadn't been lost or forgotten or even rejected, she waited and got what we all hope for--a book contract! Getting to know Carol through emails and through reading
STAR has been a joy and high in my life. When Carol sent me a copy of her manuscript,
Star in the Middle, I couldn't stop reading. Presenting the challenges of teen pregnancy from both young parents points of view gives this novel a depth not often found in young adult literature. Star’s dark secret is addressed with compassion in vivid and realistic detail.This is a wonderful first novel and a riveting story, written with lovely, poetic language.
And now for an interview with Carol Larese Millward, who's book
Star in the Middle is out new this month from WestSide Books.
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Why did you decide to write for young adults?I think teens make a great audience. They are such savvy readers. I became interested in writing for this group while working with young adults, because I have so much respect for them and the issues they voiced. There are several YA authors that I admire. I think they help bring focus to so many challenges facing teens.
Why did you decide to write a novel about teen parents?When I worked with teen mothers, I was struck by a sense of underlying sadness and guilt in many of our conversations as they talked about their lives, both past and present.
In that same sense, even the most articulate young mother was often unable to talk about what hopes and dreams she had for the future: Life was diaper-to-diaper, day-to-day. But at the same time, they were determined to care for their babies.
I wanted to write a book that demonstrated the challenges teens encounter when faced with an unplanned pregnancy and birth of a child. The reality of raising a baby is not about choosing a name and cute clothes; it’s about the constant care and feeding of a very dependent human being.
What audience do you hope to reach with this book?I wrote this book for teens, as well as parents of teens. I hope that the characters, and the experiences they encounter in the pages of Star in the Middle, will help young adults ask themselves some tough questions about what they want for themselves. It’s so important to have dreams, and a plan on how to make those dreams come true.
While writing the book, I visited bookstores and was so pleasantly surprised to find both mothers and daughters in the YA section buying books. They shared with me that reading the same books helped start dialogues about topics that were not always easy to talk about. So, I hope that this book will provide those positive interactions between teens and their parents – as well as teens and their peers.
Can you give some examples of dialogue topics you hope the book will inspire?There are so many, really. I think the most important is to talk about choices, and the consequences that come with making both good and bad choices. Ultimately, a poor choice made on some random Friday night could result in facing a painful decision about what to do about an unplanned pregnancy, or dealing with a life-long STD, or facing someone you don’t feel quite the same way about on Monday morning.
Star was dealing with a painful secret in her life.
Why did you choose to add that particular storyline?Sometimes things happen in a girl’s life, against her will, that put her at a higher risk for becoming a teen mother. Research shows that Star’s secret is one of those indicators. It is a very serious problem that all too often targets both genders. Star kept a secret that she should have not have kept. This type of abuse can escalate and should be reported immediately.
Abortion is such a controversial subject. Did you worry about how teens would view your characters’ points of view on this issue?Absolutely. Because it’s a very personal decision, and it’s so important not to judge anyone for the tough decisions they feel they must make for themselves. But, again, I think that teens are very savvy readers. They understand that this is fiction, and that there are lots of real stories out there in the world with different outcomes. I think the dialogue should be less about right and wrong and more about making good choices. This is something that you can control. If you choose to become sexually active, choose to protect yourself against an unplanned pregnancy and/or STD’s.
Do you think that Star made the right decision to keep her baby?I hope readers will ask themselves that question. The reality is that many teens that become pregnant keep their babies – that’s the story I wanted to tell. I thought it was important to talk about the care and commitment it takes to be a parent. There are also couples that want to adopt and give a baby a good home. Adoption would be a very positive outcome for any mother that is not ready, or doesn’t have the resources to raise her child.
Do you think Star and Wilson should get together at the end of the book?Another reality, and a harsh reality at that -- teen mothers more often than not end up raising their babies without the help of the babies’ fathers. So, without giving anything away, I will let readers come to their own conclusions about how this story should end. There are lots of clues throughout the story to help readers understand the probability of Star and Wilson’s relationship lasting.
Thank you, Beckie, I appreciate this opportunity to talk with you and your readers!
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I'm so glad to have my critique buddies. Each of them has different strengths so it makes for a great group.