Writing is such a unique journey for each and every writer. Some find it easy to meld their chapters one into another; others find it easy to get just the right ending, with some kind of twist or surprise that gives it a great edge; others still, find it easy to jump right into a story and write a grab-the-reader beginning; and there are other aspects of writing a story that some writers just breeze though effortlessly.
I find it relatively easy to start a story. I can create a beginning that jumps into the action, which is what most stories, especially children’s stories need. But…ah, that BUT…But, I find it difficult to end my stories. I have no idea why. I can start it, bring it along toward an ending, but, then I fizzle out. My endings are initially weak and definitely lacking.
This happened to me with a manuscript I submitted to a children’s publisher, 4RV Publishing. I pitched the story to the publisher during the Muse Online Writers Conference in October 2009. The publisher allowed me to submit a synopsis and the first three chapters, which was also a bit lacking, but that’s another story.
The editor who read the chapters and synopsis liked the storyline, but was confused about my ending in the synopsis. As I mentioned above I have trouble with my endings. Aside from that, the editor recommended the publisher request the manuscript so they could look it over. They did advise I edit it first and work on the ending. I created an entirely new ending and sent it to Lea Schizas to have edited (thank you, Lea).
It’s funny, but I think there are at times some form of inspiration that can take us where we don’t usually tread...that helps us overcome our obstacles or mountains. In the case of my story, Walking Through Walls, I came up with a pretty good ending that tied everything together and afforded a surprise. I worked on this story for around two years and finally when it counted, I found the right path for this story to take.
So, the tips of the day: Pay attention to where your writing weak spots are and work on them. If you have to, write a few different scenarios to help you open up. And, if you’re still having trouble with your story, put it away for at least a week and then go back to it; you’ll see it differently, with a newness and awareness. And, listen when inspiration comes a knockin!
One more important tip: Register for the Muse Online Writers Conference. I would need to write another article to explain all the benefits of this conference…OH, wait a minute, I did write an article about it. Check it out:
http://www.dkvwriting4u.com/2009/11/the-muse-online-writers-conference-2010-registration-is-open/
So, back to the title of the post: What's your writing forte?
Oh, and by the way, I AM NOW A 4RV PUBLISHING AUTHOR!!! They accepted my manuscript!
YAH HOO
Until next time,
Karen Cioffi
http://dkvwriting4u.com
http://karencioffi.com
Congratulations on your manuscript.
Great tip, Karen. Congrats again on your book contract!
Yes, 4RV accepted it for more than one reason:
1. the concept was a good one
2. the author takes suggestions and works with them
3. the combination is a good book.
The editor will be working with you through the complete project.
Thank you, Kristi and Kathy, for stopping by.
And, thank you, Vivian. I look forward to working with Gloria!
Karen Cioffi