I would like to announce that author Sudipta Bardham will critique up to four first pages from the writers who submit a first page using the picture below by Colin Throm for inspiration.
All you have to do other than find a beginning of a story in the picture, is to use the word “Watch or watched” in the first line.
The Deadline for submitting is November 12th. Don’t miss out, you can learn a lot from a first page critique.
Results will be posted on November 18th.

Please attach your double spaced, 12 point font, 23 line first page to an e-mail and send it to kathy(dot)temean(at)gmail(dot)com. Also cut and paste it into the body of the e-mail. Put “November 18th First Page Prompt” in the subject line.
To learn more about Sudipta use this link: www.sudipta.com She will be part of our faculty at our conference in June.
Note: Writer’s don’t miss Illustrator Saturday tomorrow. There will be lots of info on graphic novels, besides amazing artwork and talent.
Talk tomorrow,
Kathy
Filed under: authors and illustrators, opportunity, Writer's Prompt, writing Tagged: Colin Throm, First Page prompt submission, Free Fall Friday, Sudipta Bardham, win critique

Aaaah, so Sudipta is the secret critiquer
Kathy, this is reminding me that we had that other first page thing that I think was supposed to be posted on the 22nd or 30th of October? Did I just miss it? I thought I was keeping up with all your blogs lately! lol I’ll have to go back and check!
Donna