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1. Mask Poems Reprise

Here are the mask poems I posted previously at Wild Rose Reader. I thought I’d include them all in one post in response to this week’s Poetry Stretch—Mask Poems at The Miss Rumphius Effect.


LOOK AT US NOW!
by Elaine Magliaro

The day we hatched from jellied eggs…
We looked like fish.
We had no legs.
We breathed through gills.
We had no lungs.
We didn’t have long sticky tongues.
We didn’t look like frogs…for sure.
But then we started to mature.
And day by day we changed and grew.
To tails and gills we bid adieu.
Now we have lungs and four fine limbs…
And we can croak
and jump
AND
swim!


THOUGHTS OF THE WOLF AS HE DESCENDS THE THIRD LITTLE PIG’S CHIMNEY
by Elaine Magliaro

This Pig’s outwitted me before.
No, I won’t knock upon his door,
Won’t threaten him, won’t huff and puff.
I’m finished with that macho stuff.
WELL…down the chimney here I go.
I’ll get that little pig. Ho, ho!
Can’t wait to taste his tender meat,
His juicy snout, his porky feet.
I’ll serve him up with grated cheese,
Potatoes, parsley, parsnips, peas.
Yeh! That’s my kind of swiney grub.
Uh-oh!
Splish-splash!
Bubble!GLUB!
I guess I’m in hot water now.
Goodbye, cruel world.
I’m piggy chow!


GRIZZLY BEAR
by Elaine Magliaro

I’m grizzly bear. I’m fierce and fat…
And dangerous. Remember that!
My teeth are sharp as sabers.
My curvy claws can cut like saws,
And when I prowl the woods I growl
And frighten all my neighbors.
I rule this land. These woods are mine!
I ain’t NOBODY’S valentine!
Don’t think that you can be my friend…
My dinner?
Yum!
GULP!

The End


JUST A SCENTIMENTAL GUY
by Elaine Magliaro

I’m black and white.
My tail’s all fluff.
I never growl.I don’t act tough.
I wander into yards at night.
I’m really harmless…
I don’t bite
Or snarl
Or scratch
Or kick
Or pounce.
I just dispense scents by the ounce.
That’s how I frighten foes away—
I lift my bushy tail and SPRAY!

I do not need long fangs or claws,
Bulging muscles,
Mighty jaws.
My malodorous defense,
I think,
Makes a lot of SCENTS!

So if you see me take my pose
To ward off predatory foes…
Just stand back and hold your nose!


BLUE WHALE’S BOAST
by Elaine Magliaro

I’m the biggest whale
in the big blue sea.
I’m blubbery big
as a whale should be.

I’m bigger than
an elephant
three rhinos,
a giraffe.

I’m bigger than
ten walruses
twos hippos
and a half.

There’s nothing
in the world
that’s bigger than me…
except, of course,
for the big blue sea!


SNAKE SOLILOQUY
by Elaine Magliaro

I’m a slippery slitherer
silent and sleek
sliding and slinking
through grasses
I sneak...
weaving and winding
legless and low
I slip slyly hidden
wherever I go.
Wending and bending
by stalk, stem, and stone
like a ribbon of muscle
and skin without bone
tongue catching the scent
of a soft, furry prey.
Smells like it’s field mouse
for dinner today!


FOR SALE: FAIRY TALE ARTIFACT
by Elaine Magliaro

My magic mirror is for sale.
It’s such an awful tattletale!
It told me things about my foe
I’d really rather never know.
I MUST be fairest in the land…
Not second best! You understand?
I want to be the most divine.
My reputation’s on the line!

The seven dwarfs are little cretins!
They should be in the dungeon, beaten.
They foiled my plans to kill the lass.
So…now I’ll sell my looking glass
And spend the cash on wrinkle cream,
A nose job, and a health regime,
Two weekends at a beauty spa.
Then I’ll look like a movie star.

I’ll be the fairest in the land!
And Snow White? She can go pound sand!


LETTER FROM THE QUEEN OF BEASTS
by Elaine Magliaro

Dear Lion,

I’m tired of doing the hunting, the preying
While your only job is to watch the cubs playing.
I’m tired of stalking the zebras and gnus
While you lie around on the grassland and snooze.
I’m tired of running, and pouncing, and killing.
I want a career that is much more fulfilling.
I’m tired, so tired. I’m spent to the core.
While I’m hard at work, you just eat, sleep, and snore.
I fetch all the food. You grow stronger…I thinner.
For the next seven days you can catch your own dinner!
I’m going away for a well-needed rest.
I’ll be seeing you soon.

All my love,
Lioness

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2. Leaping Lizards! It's the Year of the Frog

I read Tricia’s post Leap into the Year of the Frog at The Miss Rumphius Effect and found out about the efforts of the Association of Zoos and Aquariums to call people’s attention to the fact that many amphibian species are threatened with extinction. For your information, I have included an excerpt from AZA’s website:

“Frogs are going extinct. So are toads, salamanders, newts, and the intriguingly unusual caecilians. In fact, the World Conservation Union (IUCN) estimates that at least one-third of known amphibian species are threatened with extinction. While the major culprit has historically been habitat loss and degradation, many of the declines and extinctions previously referred to as "enigmatic" are now being attributed to the rapidly dispersing infectious disease chytridiomycosis, which is caused by the fungus Batrachochytrium dendrobatidis (Bd). Bd is causing population and species extinctions at an alarming rate. Can you imagine if we were about to lose one-third of the world's mammals?”


Here is a mask poem I wrote about frogs, which I am dedicating to The Year of the Frog.

LOOK AT US NOW!
by Elaine Magliaro

The day we hatched from jellied eggs…
We looked like fish.
We had no legs.
We breathed through gills.
We had no lungs.
We didn’t have long sticky tongues.
We didn’t look like frogs…for sure.
But then we started to mature.
And day by day we changed and grew.
To tails and gills we bid adieu.
Now we have lungs and four fine limbs…
And we can croak
and jump
AND
swim!

And here’s an excerpt from one of my favorite “point of view” poems. The entire poem is posted on the Poetry Now! page at Joyce Sidman’s website.

From A Frog in a Well Explains the World
by Alice Schertle

The world is round
and deep
and cool.
The bottom of the world’s
a pool
with just enough room
for a frog alone.


You can read the rest of the poem here.


Some Recommended Books about Frogs and Toads

POETRY BOOKS


A Toad by the Road: A Year in the Life of These Amazing Amphibians
Written by
Joanne Ryder
Illustrated by Maggie Kneen
Henry Holt

To read my review of this poetry collection, click here.


Lizards, Frogs, and Polliwogs
Written & illustrated by Douglas Florian
Harcourt

I enjoy all of Douglas Florian’s collections of animal poems. Lizards, Frogs, and Polliwogs is one of my favorites. The rhythmic, rhyming, lighthearted amphibian and reptile poems in this book are full of clever wordplay and are lots of fun to read aloud. This book is sure to be a hit with children and adults alike. The collection includes poems about polliwogs, spring peepers, a glass frog, the newt, the wood frog, the red-eyed tree frog, a bullfrog, and poison-dart frogs.

Here’s an excerpt from The Wood Frog, a poem about a hibernating amphibian:

My temperature is ten degrees.
I froze my nose, my toes,my knees.
But I don’t care, I feel at ease,
For I am full of antifreeze.



Marsh Music
Written by Marianne Berkes
Ilustrated By
Robert Noreika
Millbrook


As night arrives, a marsh comes alive with music. A bullfrog maestro raises a baton and starts to conduct a chorus of different species of frogs as they begin singing:

The rain has stopped.
Night is coming.
The pond awakes with
Quiet humming.

Maestro frog hops to the mound
As night begins to fill with sound.

Peepers peep pe-ep, peep, peep.
They have had a good day’s sleep!

Chorus frogs are hard to see.
Hear them chirping do re mi.

Other frogs and toads join in, including green frogs and American toads and wood frogs and pig frogs. Two leopard frogs pirouette and leap through the air as they dance ballet on lily pads. Even stars “are twinkling to the tune/As they dance around the moon."

Then dawn arrives, the maestro puts down his baton, and the frogs go to sleep. The marsh is quiet…but not for long…because another marsh melody is heard—that of a bird!

The back matter of the book includes a Glossary of Musical Terms with definitions for certain words used in the text—including adagio, moderato, percussion, and woodwinds. It also includes two pages with information about “The Cast” of amphibian performers named in the book: “Maestro” Bullfrog, Spring Peepers, Chorus Frogs, American Toads, Green Frogs, Narrow-mouthed Toads, Wood Frogs, Pig Frogs, Green Tree Frogs, Leopard Frogs, Barking Tree Frogs.


INFORMATIONAL BOOKS WRITTEN IN VERSE



How to Hide a Meadow Frog & Other Amphibians
Written & illustrated by Ruth Heller
Grosset & Dunlap


Here’s how the book begins:

The
GRAY
TREEFROG
is
quite
a
clown.
It leaps about,
then
settles
down.

With suction cups
upon its toes,
it clings to things.
Then off it goes.

Depending
on the
temperature,
the
dampness,
or
the light…
it’s sometimes gray
or
green or brown and sometimes pearly white.

The book goes on to inform readers, briefly, about other “camouflaged’ amphibians: the meadow frog, arum frog, the horn frog, cat-eyed tree frog, green toad, and salamander.



Frogs Sing Songs
Written by
Yvonne Winer
Illustrated by Tony Oliver
Charlesbridge


I can’t find my copy of Frogs Sing Songs at the moment—so here is a review of the book from Booklist:

From Booklist - April 30, 2003
“This lyrical companion to Winer's Birds Build Nests (2001) makes a strong environmental statement about saving frogs, from Africa to the Artic. On each double-page spread, one of Winer's short, simple poems appears under a spot illustration of a frog. Opposite is a full-page, vivid, realistic watercolor illustration of that particular species in its natural habitat. Each of the poems begins with the refrain, "Frogs sing their songs," then the following four lines reveal beautiful details about that frog and the sounds it makes. The book closes with a two-page frog identification guide for each of the 15 species shown in the book, complete with physical descriptions of specific sounds, from an oxlike bellow to a baby rattle. Words and pictures celebrate the varied coloring and sounds and the amazing adaptability of frogs around the world; and children will celebrate the creatures, too.”

Be sure to check out Tricia’s post Leaping Into Books About Frogs (And Other Amphibians) for more book recommendations.

At Blue Rose Girls, I have a great poem by Sherman Alexie entitled Powwow at the End of the World.

Kelly Fineman has the Poetry Friday Roundup.

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3. Metaphor Poems


This week Tricia of the Miss Rumphius Effect challenged us to write metaphor poems for her Monday Poetry Stretch. I wrote some little snippets of metaphor poems as a writing exercise for myself. I’ve also included a poem I wrote for This Week’s Photo/15 Words or Less Poems at Laura Salas’s blog.


Sparks from our campfire—
glowing stars feeding
the hungry night

Campfire sparks wafting
into air…lightning bugs
dancing in the dark


Snowflakes fluttering
from wintry skies…flocks
of white butterflies


Snowflakes…
stars of lace whirling
around in white galaxies


Earthbound astronaut…
goose splashes down on
moon’s reflection

Crescent moon…
silver canoe drifting through
a sea of stars

Cloud boats float across
the pond, ferrying ducks
to the other side

Crows perched on telephone lines…
commas punctuating
a paper white sky

Here is a link to Poetry Stretch Results-Metaphor Poems at The Miss Rumphius Effect.

This is the poem I wrote for This Week’s Photo. The picture brought to mind the surface of Jupiter’s moon Europa. When I looked at a close-up of the photo, the lines/ridges reminded me of yarn. So I wrote the following metaphor poem snippet.


Europa

Net of golden yarn
Cast off by Jupiter
To snare a mighty moon—


Check out my earlier post Book Bunch: Looking at Langston Hughes. It includes a review of Tony Medina's poetry book Love to Langston and links to several poems written by Hughes.

HipWriterMama has the Poetry Friday Roundup this week.

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4. Poetry Friday: A Sledding Poem

Although I grew up on a main street in a city, there were acres of open land across the street from my house. There were hills where my friends and I sledded and ponds where we skated in winter. The property was owned by a large corporation. The company never put up “No Trespassing” signs. A half century has passed since that time and children and parents are still allowed on the property today.

I loved sledding outside in winter until my face and hands and feet had nearly turned to ice. I loved whooshing down the hillsides—the cold wind in my face as the sled runners cut through the snow. This poem is about sledding and childhood and imagination.

I’m sorry I can’t type the end of the poem on Blogger the way it’s supposed to be. That’s okay. I think you’ll get the point that the final lines should be read more slowly as the sled reaches the bottom of the hill.


SPACEMAN

by Elaine Magliaro

Whooshing down the hillside fast
Trees and people blurring past
Runners carving out the snow
Like an astronaut I go
Blasting into outer space
Rocketing at record pace
Through the stratosphere I fly
I’m commander of the sky
Won’t return to Earth until . . .

I reach

the bottom

of the hill.



The Poetry Friday Roundup is at Mentor Texts, Read Alouds & More.

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5. Poetry Friday: Two Centos

I decided to do a little literary exercise this week. I thought I’d try writing a modified cento using book titles as suggested by Tricia in her Monday Poetry Stretch at The Miss Rumphius Effect. I’ve written two centos using the titles of children’s poetry books that I have in my personal collection.

Read Tricia’s Book Title Cento and Laura Purdie Salas’s cento, Why I’m Crazy. Laura also used the titles of poetry books.


HAIKU CENTO
by Elaine Magliaro

Hear the Joyful Noise
Our Fine Feathered Friends
Are Whistling the Morning In!

POETRY BOOKS

1. Joyful Noise by Paul Fleischman
2. Fine Feathered Friends by Jane Yolen
3. Whistling the Morning In by Lillian Morrison



INVITATION: A Cento
by Elaine Magliaro

Hey, You!
Come with Me
Down Rhythm Road.
Dance with Me
To the Street Music
Under a Lemonade Sun
Past Sam’s Place
Past The Ice Cream Store
Past the Worlds I Know
To Where the Sidewalk Ends.
We’ll go Tap Dancing on the Roof
And Knee-Deep in Blazing Snow.

Hey, You!
Come with Me
Out in the Dark and Daylight.
Dance with Me.
I’ve been Waiting to Waltz
In the Middle of the Trees
Under the Sunday Tree

Through Shades of Green
Through The Singing Green
Into the Night Garden.

Hey, You!
Come with Me.

Listen to your Inner Chimes
To Voices on the Wind
To Sweet Dreams of the Wild.
Dance with Me
Where Everything Glistens and Everything Sings
Where The Night Rainbow shimmers in the air.

Hey, You!
Come with Me
To the Moon and Back.
Dance with Me
To The Sound of Poetry
‘Til All the Stars Have Fallen.

The Sky Is Not So Far Away.
Come with Me!

POETRY BOOKS

1. Hey, You! selected by Paul Janeczko
2. Come with Me by Naomi Shihab Nye
3. Rhythm Road selected by Lillian Morrison
4. Dance with Me by Barbara Juster Esbensen
5. Street Music by Arnold Adoff
6. Lemonade Sun by Rebecca Kai Dotlich
7. Sam’s Place by Lilian Moore
8. The Ice Cream Store by Dennis Lee
9. Worlds I Know by Myra Cohn Livingston
10. Where the Sidewalk Ends by Shel Silverstein
11. Tap Dancing on the Roof by Linda Sue Park
12. And Knee-Deep in Blazing Snow by James Hayford (Chosen by X. J. & Dorothy Kennedy)

13. Hey, You! selected by Paul Janeczko
14. Come with Me by Naomi Shihab Nye
15. Out in the Dark and Daylight by Aileen Fisher
16. Dance with Me by Barbara Juster Esbensen
17. Waiting to Waltz by Cynthia Rylant
18. In the Middle of the Trees by Karla Kuskin
19. Under the Sunday Tree by Eloise Greenfield
20. Through Shades of Green compiled by Anne Harvey
21. The Singing Green by Eve Merriam
22. Night Garden by Janet Wong

23. Hey, You! selected by Paul Janeczko
24. Come with Me by Naomi Shihab Nye
25. Inner Chimes selected by Bobbye Goldstein
26. Voices on the Wind selected by david Booth
27. Sweet Dreams of the Wild by Rebecca kai Dotlich
28. Dance with Me by Barbara Juster Esbensen
29. Everything Glistens and Everything Sings by Charlotte Zolotow
30. Night Rainbow by Barbara Juster Esbensen

31. Hey, You! selected by Paul Janeczko
32. Come with Me by Naomi Shihab Nye
33. To the Moon and Back compiled by Nancy Larrick
34. Dance with Me by Barbara Juster Esbensen
35. The Sound of Poetry compiled by Mary C. Austin and Queenie B. Mills
36. ‘Til All the Stars Have Fallen selected by David Booth

37. The Sky Is Not So Far Away by Margaret Hillert
38. Come with Me by Naomi Shihab Nye


Becky has the Poetry Friday Roundup at Farm School this week.

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6. Poetry Friday Potpourri: Winter Poems

I was looking through my files for some old poems about winter to post for Poetry Friday. Here are four poems, including a haiku and an acrostic.

Poems by Elaine Magliaro

Pond in Winter

The meadow pond lies silent, still…
Sealed in tight by winter’s chill.
A downy quilt of fallen snow
Hides a cold, dark world below.
I wonder all the winter through”
“What do fish and turtles do?”



Bedtime in Winter

Dark comes early.
Night is long.
Mommy sings
A bedtime song.
I am snuggled
Down and deep
Beneath soft covers.
While I sleep,
I have my teddy bear
To hold.
He keeps me warm
When nights are cold.



With frosty feet
little mouse prints a message
in the snow: Hello!


Ferns of ice
Rooted
On windowpanes, their
Silver fronds growing in the frigid night
Then melting in the morning light.


The Poetry Friday Roundup is at The Book Mine Set this week.

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7. Things to Do

I am becoming a blog sluggard. I just haven't had the time--or the inclination--to post four or five times a week lately. I have a list with so many "things to do" on it that I just can't decide which thing to do first.

Grace Lin came to my house yesterday. She read through some of my poems--and ordered me to send out a certain manuscript today! I worked on my letter to the publisher this morning. I've promised myself that I WILL put that poetry collection, entitled Things to Do, in the mail this week. In addition, I began working again yesterday on another poetry book suggested by Grace and Janet Wong last fall. I really appreciate all their advice. I owe them both a debt of gratitude.

I have my work cut out for me this week. I also have to prepare a flier for the March event of the PAS North Shore Council of Massachusetts, order books written and illustrated by our March speaker, finish writing a book review that I was supposed to submit in early December, update my children's literature course syllabus, put away all the Christmas decorations...and on and on and on. I still haven't thrown away all the stuff I collected during my thirty-four years of teaching. I promised my husband I would do that last year. Now I must attend to it in early 2008. I retired in June of 2004. I think I've had plenty of time to clean house. Don't you?

I had plans to blog quite a bit right after the holidays--but I have to attend to the things that MUST be done by week's end. I doubt I'll get outside much in the next few days.

I decided to look through some of my old poems so I could post an original for you today. Here's a haiku for you:


Sleet tap-dances on
my roof, clicks its icy heels
on my windowpane


Now I must be going. I have "things to do."

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8. Winter Ballet: A Poem



I haven't been posting much in the past week. I got so busy with cooking and baking for the holidays, with celebrating and eating, with evaluating Cybils poetry books...that I decided to take a little break from blogging. I just had to post on Poetry Friday, though! So...I went looking for a winter poem in a collection of seasonal poetry entitled Tasting the Sun that I've worked on from time to time over the past couple of decades. Here's the poem I selected. It's about the first snow of the season.


WINTER BALLET
by Elaine Magliaro

It’s white snow,

Bright snow,

Soft-as-feathers light snow…

Tiny ballerinas there

Pirouetting through the air

With their sparkly crystal shoes

In their winter dance debuts.




The Poetry Friday Roundup is at Check It Out this week.



Happy New Year to you all!!!

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9. Untitled: A Poetry Stretch

I wrote the following poem for Tricia’s Monday Poetry Stretch—What Words?. The “stretch”—or challenge—is to write a poem that contains all of the following eight words: snow, frozen, wind, evening, woods, lake, village, farmhouse.

I’m not sure my poem is finished. I don’t have a title for it yet. Maybe you’d like to suggest one for me???

UNTITLED
by Elaine Magliaro

A long way from the village,
near quiet woods,
snow settles on a frozen lake.
Burrowed in the mud below,
frogs dream the winter away.
Their larders full,
sleepy squirrels curl up
against the cold.
No wind stirs in the trees
this chill evening.
Everything is still.

In the distance,
a solitary farmhouse stands,
a weathered monument
to the past.
Here, in his lonely lair,
an old man
wraps himself in the silence
and his memories
and hibernates from the world.

Click here to find links to Poetry Stretch Results—What Words? at The Miss Rumphius Effect.


The Poetry Friday Roundup is at AmoXicalli this week.

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10. Candy Cane: A Poem

I wrote the following poem for Tricia’s Monday Poetry Stretch—Something Seasonal.

Candy Cane
by Elaine Magliaro


Wrapped in a cellophane of sound:
a striped stick of sweetness,
red as Rudolph’s nose,
white as Santa’s beard.
Crinkle open your peppermint present.
Let your tongue celebrate
the wintry taste of Christmas.

Click here to find links to Poetry Stretch Results—Seasonal Offerings at The Miss Rumphius Effect.

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11. Happy Blogday to The Miss Rumphius Effect

Today is the First Bloggiversary of The Miss Rumphius Effect. I thought I would celebrate Tricia Stohr-Hunt’s special “blogday” by posting a poem that I wrote in the autumn of 1994 when I was traveling in the People’s Republic of China with a Children’s Literature and Language Arts Delegation led by Professor William Teale. Not so long ago Tricia traveled to China herself—so I thought this poem would be fitting.

A Little Background
My delegation arrived in Beijing on October 24, 1994. We were met at the airport by a tall, handsome young man named Lee Jian-Xin (Mr. Lee). He was to be our national guide. (We also had local guides in the cities we visited.) Mr. Lee was really knowledgeable and had a wonderful sense of humor. We were all smitten!

There I was traveling around Beijing, Nanjing, Suzhou, and Shanghai with Mr. Lee and other teachers, librarians, and professors. We visited schools and universities and children's book publishers. We had roundtable discussions with teachers and professors and authors and illustrators about children’s literature! It was like a dream come true for me! I had the time of my life on that trip.

Mr. Lee told us that the Chinese call autumn the golden season. That inspired me to write a poem, which I dedicated to Mr. Lee before we left on our return trip to the United States.

Today I dedicate my poem to Tricia.

In the Golden Season
by Elaine Magliaro

When autumn comes
The cricket strums
A wishful song—
The echo of a summer gone,
Warm memories to
Dream upon.



This is a picture of a piece of Chinese folk art I bought when I was in Shanghai.


Happy Blogday to you, Tricia!!!


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12. A Request for Blog Courtesy Regarding Use of My Original Poems

Sometimes it pays to Google your own name. A few days ago I did…and what did I find? Well, I found one of my original poems posted at another blog. The blogger did acknowledge me as the author of the poem—BUT changed a word in the first line and the ending of my poem. She admitted to having changed the ending so the poem would “go with” the picture she posted. I copied and pasted (in green print) the blogger’s specific post without the picture. Here’s a link to the actual post at sweetladybug.

LETTER FROM THE QUEEN OF BEASTS
by Elaine Magliaro

Dear Chettah

I’m tired of doing the hunting, the preying
While your only job is to watch the cubs playing.
I’m tired of stalking the zebras and gnus
While you lie around on the grassland and snooze.
I’m tired of running, and pouncing, and killing.
I want a career that is much more fulfilling.
I’m tired, so tired. I’m spent to the core.
While I’m hard at work, you just eat, sleep, and snore.
I fetch all the food. You grow stronger…I thinner.
For the next seven days you can catch your own dinner!
I’m going away for a well-needed rest.
I’ll be seeing you soon.

All my love,
La Chetta

this is actually written from a lioness to a lion...but what the heck, had to go with picture... Sounds like things work the same no matter which specie is involved..:) xxoo

Now, here is my poem with its correct ending. Do you think there’s a difference?

LETTER FROM THE QUEEN OF BEASTS
by Elaine Magliaro

Dear Lion,

I’m tired of doing the hunting, the preying
While your only job is to watch the cubs playing.
I’m tired of stalking the zebras and gnus
While you lie around on the grassland and snooze.
I’m tired of running, and pouncing, and killing.
I want a career that is much more fulfilling.
I’m tired, so tired. I’m spent to the core.
While I’m hard at work, you just eat, sleep, and snore.
I fetch all the food. You grow stronger…I thinner.
For the next seven days you can catch your own dinner!
I’m going away for a well-needed rest.
I’ll be seeing you soon.

All my love,
Lioness

Sure, I should have known that people might copy and paste one of my original poems that I had posted at my blog…but I had hoped, being raised as I was, that people would be more courteous and request permission to use one of my poems before posting it elsewhere. My email is available to anyone who reads my blog. The least a blogger should do is to include a link to the post at my blog where he/she found my poem.

I think what really bothers me is that this blogger changed my poem. SHE may think the poem still works—but I don’t think it does! Her change ruins the rhythm at the end—and the near-rhyme is lost.

REQUEST FROM WILD ROSE READER:
REGARDING THE USE OF MY ORIGINAL POEMS

If you would like to post one of my poems at your blog, please do the following:

Request my permission to use a specific poem via email.
  • Send me a link to the blog post in which you included my poem.
  • In your post, include a link to the post at Wild Rose Reader or Blue Rose Girls where you found my poem.
  • DO NOT change the words of my original poems.
  • Is that asking too much? Let me know what you think.

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    13. Poetry for Halloween

    I’ve already written two posts about some Halloween picture books that are just perfect for reading aloud in October. (Click here to read Great Halloween Read-Alouds for Little Listeners and here to read my review of The Three Bears' Halloween.) I also posted links to several lists of suggested Halloween books. Now, how about some books with POEMS about Halloween, monsters and witches, and other things that go bump in the night?


    BEWARE, TAKE CARE
    Fun and Spooky Poems by Lilian Moore
    Illustrated by
    Howard Fine
    Henry Holt, 2006


    This posthumous collection contains fifteen poems that were published in some of Moore’s earlier poetry books, including Spooky Rhymes and Riddles and See My Lovely Poison Ivy. Beware, Take Care includes poems about ghosts, dragons, monsters, and other spooky subjects. The book is intended for younger children.

    Click here to read the review I wrote of Beware, Take Care last fall at Blue Rose Girls.

    One of my favorite poems in this book is Lost and Found.


    LOST AND FOUND
    by Lilian Moore

    LOST:
    A Wizard’s loving pet.
    Rather longish.
    Somewhat scaly.
    May be hungry or
    Upset.
    Please feed daily.

    P.S. reward.



    FOUND:
    A dragon
    Breathing fire,
    Flails his scaly
    Tail
    In ire.
    Would eat twenty LARGE meals
    Daily.
    If we let him.
    PLEASE
    come and get him.

    P.S. No reward necessary.



    SKELETON BONES & GOBLIN GROANS
    Poems for Halloween
    Written by
    Amy E. Sklansky
    Illustrated by Karen Dismukes
    Henry Holt, 2004


    This collection, which has lighthearted poems about Halloween candy, jack o’ lanterns, a skeleton’s bones, Cyclops, zipping bats, and a haunted house that’s for sale, is a good book of poems to share with preschoolers and children in the early elementary grades as the end of this month approaches. The beaded canvas illustrations are bright and colorful and set a festive tone in celebrating a holiday that usually sends shivers of delight through children.

    Most of the poems in Skelton Bones & Goblin Groans rhyme. Some do not—including the haikus Mummy and Grave. One of the most engaging poems in the book is House for Sale!

    House for Sale!
    by Amy E. Sklansky

    Two fireplaces. Eat-in-kitchen.
    Atmosphere you’ll find bewitchin’.
    Lots of bedrooms. Space galore.
    Slightly creaky hardwood floors.
    Walk-in closets you can fill.
    Stunning view atop a hill.
    Asking price is very good.
    In a lovely neighborhood.
    All in all, just what you wanted.
    (BY THE WAY, THIS HOUSE IS HAUNTED.)


    If you read that poem to children, you know they will be able to provide the final word in the last line.

    Do check out this page at Amy Sklansky website. There you will see a two-page spread from Goblin Groans & Skeleton Bones. It includes the full text of two poems: After Trick-or-Treating and Jack O’ Lantern.


    I’ll end this Poetry Friday post with a witch poem I wrote many years ago.

    THERE WAS A WITCH
    A Poem by Elaine Magliaro

    There was a witch who liked to race
    Her supersonic broom through space.
    At six o'clock last Friday night
    She blasted off at speed of light.
    She whizzed past Mercury and Mars...
    Then headed off toward distant stars.
    Across the galaxy she sped,
    A black peaked helmet on her head.
    An interstellar traveler, she
    Explored the Milky Way with glee.
    She chased swift comets here and there.
    She watched bright supernovae flare.
    She zipped through clouds of cosmic dust…
    A witch bewitched by wanderlust.
    There was a witch, I’m sad to say,
    Flew near a big black hole one day.
    It sucked her in just like a bean.
    You won’t see HER on Halloween!



    Kelly Fineman has the Poetry Friday Roundup this week.

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    14. Poetry Friday: Autumn Leaves



    It seemed autumn had arrived here a few of weeks ago...but summer kept returning now and again for a visit. Few of the leaves have turned in my area of Massachusetts. Nonetheless, I have two poems about autumn leaves for you today: one written by Robert Frost and an original poem I wrote many many years ago for a collection of seasonal poems entitled Tasting the Sun.

    Gathering Leaves
    by Robert Frost

    Spades take up leaves

    No better than spoons,

    And bags full of leaves

    Are light as balloons.

    I make a great noise

    Of rustling all day

    Like rabbit and deer

    Running away.

    But the mountains I raise

    Elude my embrace,

    Flowing over my arms

    And into my face.

    You can read the rest of the poem here.

    AUTUMN CELEBRATION

    by Elaine Magliaro

    In October, colored leaves
    Fall from oak and maple trees…
    Bright confetti shaken down
    From their boughs. All over town
    Trees are celebrating fall,
    Decorating every wall,
    Sidewalk, yard, and flowerbed
    With pumpkin-orange, gold, and red.
    We stand out in the falling leaves
    And catch confetti on our sleeves,
    In our hands and in our hair.
    We party till the trees are bare.



    Here's a link to two more autumn poems I posted a couple of weeks ago.


    Today's Poetry Friday Roundup is at Two Writing Teachers.

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    15. Not Exactly a Spudtacular Poem

    At 7-Imp last Sunday, Eisha listed potato pancakes as one of her 7 Kicks of the week. When I commented that I make great potato pancakes (I learned how from my mother), Eisha asked for the recipe—and so did Jone of Check It Out. Well, ladies, I’m working on it because it’s one of those peel and grate four or five good-sized potatoes (or potatos--spelling a la Dan Quayle) and one medium/large onion, mix in one or two eggs, add some flour…add a little more if the batter is too watery…nothing too exact kind of recipes handed down from grandmother to mother to daughter.

    Placki (platskees as we pronounced our Polish term for potato pancakes) are a really tasty comfort food. They make great eating on a chilly autumn or winter evening. The last time I made them for a Super Bowl party the whole platter was polished off in a matter of minutes.

    I like to serve potato pancakes with sour cream…and sometimes with my homemade plum sauce. When my husband and I decide to splurge and indulge ourselves, I serve the pancakes with crème fraiche and Osetra caviar…and bottle of champagne.

    Here’s a poem for Eisha and Jone until I think I can write up my recipe to be a bit more precise.


    A Potato Pancake Poem
    (For Eisha and Jone)
    by Elaine Magliaro

    Before me on my plate
    six thin, savory circles
    crisped in oil
    edged with brown lace
    sprinkled with salty crystals
    served with mounds
    of silky sour cream.

    I crunch through
    amber crust
    sink my teeth into
    a pancake’s soft center…
    the essence of potato

    flavored with memories
    of childhood.

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    16. Poetry Friday: Autumn Fires

    I love autumn in New England. I love the crisp, cooler days, the colorful foliage, and the smell of apple-scented air. I used to enjoy taking my young daughter to a local orchard in October. We’d visit with the pigs and sheep, select a pumpkin or two to carve for Halloween, watch apples being pressed into cider, and eat delicious warm apple cider donuts. Yum!

    When I was little, I enjoyed collecting shiny-shelled chestnuts…and the sound they made bonking on the ground as they fell from the chestnut tree across the street from my grandparents’ house. We kids used to rake up piles of fallen leaves, jump in them, and iron some of the most brightly colored ones between sheets of wax paper. Our parents--or my grandparents--would set piles of autumn leaves afire and we kids would watch as the smoke floated up into the air and drifted off like a wispy gray cloud. One thing I miss most about the season now is the smell of autumn leaves burning. It’s such an evocative scent.

    Although summer return to New England earlier this week for a last hurrah, I’m ready for fall…and the memory of autumn fires. So here is a classic by Robert Louis Stevenson for this Poetry Friday on the cusp of October.


    AUTUMN FIRES
    by Robert Louis Stevenson

    In the other gardens
    And all up the vale,
    From the autumn bonfires
    See the smoke trail!

    Pleasant summer over
    And all the summer flowers,
    The red fire blazes,
    The grey smoke towers.

    Sing a song of seasons!
    Something bright in all!
    Flowers in the summer,
    Fires in the fall!
    Here is a poem I wrote for A Home for the Seasons, collection about childhood days I spent at the home of my maternal grandparents, Michael Kozicki and Anna Chalupka Kozicka. Michael and Anna came to America from Poland in the early 20th century. They met in Boston, got married, and lived in Peabody, Massachusetts for all of their married lives. (Dzidzi is what we called my grandfather.)


    AUTUMN FIRE
    by Elaine Drabik Magliaro

    Two tall maple trees grow

    in front of my grandparents’ house.

    In late October

    they shed their golden crowns.

    When the fallen leaves

    curl up like little brown bear cubs,

    we rake them into a pile

    at the side of the street.

    As dusk arrives

    Dzidzi sets our harvest afire

    with a single match.

    We sit on wooden crates

    at the sidewalk’s edge,

    watch the brittle leaves

    blossom into golden flames,

    smell autumn’s pungent breath.

    From the pyre summer rises,

    a small gray ghost,

    and drifts away

    into the darkening sky.




    The Poetry Friday Roundup is at AmoxCalli this week.


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    17. A Poem for Robert

    I wrote the poem below for Grace Lin’s husband Robert Mercer in the spring of 2004 when Grace informed me that Robert’s cancer had returned and of their plans for the first Robert’s Snow auctions later that year.

    THINGS TO DO IF YOU WANT TO BE A SNOWFLAKE
    (For Robert Mercer)
    by Elaine Magliaro

    Fashion yourself:

    a bit of lace,

    crystalline,

    spun in space

    of silken ice,

    silvery,

    fine—

    YOU

    C R E A T E

    your

    own

    design.

    I want to send a million thanks to all the artists who created snowflakes for Robert's Snow 2007. Thanks also to those artists who made Robert's Snow 2004 and 2005 such great successes. We couldn't have raised money for cancer research without your help.

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    18. Waxing Poetic about Root Canals

    Did you know that Franki of A Year of Reading is having a poetry contest? Yup! I'm entering a couple of poems today. Tonight is the deadline. Have you ever had a root canal? Then you may want to wax poetic on the subject like me. Check out Franki's post Poetry Friday, Root Canals, and...a Contest for more information.

    Here are my best efforts.

    Root Canal Acrostic

    Root it
    Out!
    Out...out with
    The abscess!

    Cancel the nerves!
    Away with the pulp!
    Nevermore do I want to feel this pain
    Again!
    Let me chew in peace!


    Root Canal Cinquain

    Abscess?
    Oh no! Forsooth!
    I've a pain in my tooth.
    My dental doc must remove the
    Pulp. GULP!

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    19. Backpack: A Back to School Poem


    On Monday in her Poetry Stretch post, Tricia of the Miss Rumphius Effect asked her blog readers to attempt writing a list poem. Here is a list poem I wrote last September. I just made a few changes to it this week.


    BACKPACK
    by Elaine Magliaro


    What’s in my backpack?

    Hmm…let’s see:

    a tunafish sandwich,

    raspberry tea,

    an apple for the teacher…

    and one for me,


    a pair of scissors,

    a stick of glue,

    washable crayons…

    and markers, too—

    three sharp pencils

    my Winnie Pooh


    a bright red folder,

    a paper pad,

    a calculator to help me add…

    and

    a little love note from my dad!



    The Poetry Friday Roundup is at Mentor Texts & More this week.

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    20. LUNES

    It seems I'm always a week behind in posting my attempts at trying out the "poetry stretches" that Tricia has been giving us on Mondays this month at The Miss Rumphius Effect. Last week she challenged blog readers to try writing a lune. You can read more about the lune in Tricia's Monday Poetry Stretch-Lune post and at The Lune: The English Language Haiku.

    I think the lunes I've posted here need a bit more tweaking. I usually write dozens of drafts of a poem before I feel satisfied that it's as good as I can make it. I used to share different drafts of some of my poems with my students to show them that a writer rarely gets a poem perfect the first time around. I know the fact that I wrote poetry helped to make me a much better writing teacher.


    Not Yet Ready for Prime Time Lunes by Elaine Magliaro


    PARTLY CLOUDY

    Rays of sun poking
    Long golden
    Fingers through the clouds



    SUMMER NIGHT SOUNDS

    Mosquito’s whining
    Through the night
    Drowns out cricket’s song.


    END OF SUMMER

    August has grown old
    September
    Waits at the threshold


    SEPTEMBER QUARTET

    Summer still sizzles
    Soon it will
    Fizzle into fall

    Summer's sharp edges
    Smoothed to silk
    By autumn’s cool hand

    Where will butterflies
    Go now that
    Summer has left town?

    September sings as
    School bells ring
    Vacation’s over


    ELEMENTARY ART CLASS

    Bright yellow crescent
    Pasted to
    A royal blue night

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    21. A Found Poem

    Inspired by one of Tricia’s Monday Poetry Stretches at The Miss Rumphius Effect, I wrote a cento about writing and posted it last Monday. Tricia also included a link to an explanation of a “found” poem in her post about the cento. I decided, with the help of Kelly Herold’s extensive blogroll at Big A, little a, to write a found poem about reading using the names of blogs. Unfortunately, I couldn’t incorporate the names of some of my favorite blogs into my poem. To be sure, the poem isn’t terribly poetic—but it is what it is! And here it is:


    Untitled Found Blog Poem about Reading
    by Elaine Magliaro

    Develop A Fondness for Reading
    Become a person who Lives to Read

    Get a book, book, book
    From Charlotte’s Library
    Find A Chair, A Fireplace
    A Tea Cozy
    Not far From the Windowsill

    Settle down and drift away by Sun and Candlelight

    Through the Magic of Books
    Slip Into the Wardrobe

    With Miss Erin
    It’s Worth the Trip

    Go Barefoot!
    In a World of Words
    Quiet Words, Words, Words
    Rustling in The Shady Glade
    Wild Words, Words, Words

    Shaken & Stirred
    Delicious Words, Words, Words
    Sweet as Oowey, Goowey Marshamallows
    Savory as Chicken Spaghetti

    Relish a Readable Feast
    Inhale and bite into a juicy Bookburger
    On Mitali’s Fire Escape

    Step onto the Reading Carousel
    For some grand Adventures in Daily Living
    Be someone who Lives to Read

    So Many Books
    Just One More Book
    Haven’t you heard? It’s All About the Book!!!


    Click here to read Poetic Form: Found Poem at Poets.org.

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    22. Cento

    I was inspired to write the following poem by Tricia of The Miss Rumphius Effect. Every Monday she challenges blog readers to attempt writing a specific form of poem. Last week it was the cento. Here is my cento about students doing creative writing in school. I used just one punctuation mark because I was trying to capture the essence of someone writing a rough draft when the words come fast and furious and the writer doesn't stop to think about spelling or punctuation and just wants to get his/her thoughts down on paper as quickly as possible...before they slip away

    (For an explanation of what a cento is click here.)

    Lying in wait, set to pounce on the page (1)
    While vowels open wide as waves in the noon-blue sea (2)
    We sit and write (3)
    I go to the land of words (4)
    Snatch new words out of nowhere (5)
    Invent words (6)
    Grouping words into sentences (7)
    The bright words and the dark words (8)
    You know how the words slip out and you can’t believe it? (9)
    Blur of words too fast too low (10)
    So fast you can hardly keep up with them (11)
    No more grammar (12)
    I don’t know what will happen (13)
    About what rhymes with what and how (14)
    It is the duty of the student (15)
    To sometimes split infinitives (16)


    From The Joy of Writing by Wislawa Szymborska (1)
    From Inside a Poem by Eve Merriam (2)
    From Difference by Aileen Fisher (3)
    From I Go to the Land by Eloise Greenfield (4)
    From You Have to Write by Janet Wong (5)
    From Letter to a Young Poet by Michael Dugan (6)
    From Winged Words by Joyce Sidman (7)
    From Metaphor by Eve Merriam (8)
    From Fashion Sense by Joyce Sidman (9)
    From Wind by Ralph Fletcher (10)
    From Spring Is by Bobbi Katz (11)
    From Free Writing by Kristine O’Connell George (12)
    From Story by Eloise Greenfield (13)
    From Just Not a Very Good Pantoum for Mom by Ron Koertge (14)
    From Duty of the Student by Edward Anthony (15)
    From Propper English by Alan F. G. Lewis (16)

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    23. Poetry & The Pan-Massachusetts Challenge

    This weekend my husband will be riding for Team Daisy in the Pan-Massachusetts Challenge to raise money for the Jimmy Fund and the Dana-Farber Cancer Institute in Boston. Last year, at the age of sixty, Mike participated in this event for the first time. He and the other proud members of Team Daisy raised $65,ooo!

    Team Daisy is named in honor of my friend Daisy Locke. Daisy is a cancer survivor...and a very brave girl indeed! As I wrote at Blue Rose Girls last November: Daisy has shown the adults in her life what courage is all about.

    If you'd like to make a contribution in my husband's name, go to the Team Daisy webpage and click on Michael Magliaro. You will be taken to his page at the Pan-Massachusetts Challenge website where you can make an online donation. Mike's goal is to reach $3,600 this year.
    NOTE: There is also a Team Daisy page at the PMC website. You can reach my husband's page at the PMC website directly by clicking here.

    DAISY LOCKE

    I have two poems for Daisy today. One is To the Daisy, which was written by William Wordsworth, and one is an original poem I wrote. The word daisy is really a poem in itself: day's eye. I kept that in mind as I penned my poem.

    For Daisy

    by Elaine Magliaro

    Daisies

    burst from their stem tops

    like exploding suns

    lighting green fields

    with their bright-eyed wonder.



    To the Daisy

    by William Wordsworth

    With little here to do or see
    Of things that in the great world be,
    Sweet Daisy! oft I talk to thee
    For thou art worthy,
    Thou unassuming commonplace
    Of Nature, with that homely face,
    And yet with something of a grace
    Which love makes for thee!

    Oft on the dappled turf at ease
    I sit and play with similes,
    Loose types of things through all degrees,
    Thoughts of thy raising;
    And many a fond and idle name
    I give to thee, for praise or blame
    As is the humour of the game
    While I am gazing.

    You can read the rest of the poem here.

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    24. Poetry Friday: Bed in Summer

    Remember when you were little and had to go to bed in the summer while the bigger kids were still outside playing? Remember lying in bed listening to their shouts and laughter? Remember wishing that you were old enough to stay outside and play...after the street lights came on? With these memories in mind, I give you a classic poem by Stevenson and an original poem I wrote many years ago.


    Bed in Summer
    by Robert Louis Stevenson


    In winter I get up at night
    And dress by yellow candle-light.
    In summer, quite the other way,
    I have to go to bed by day.


    I have to go to bed and see
    The birds still hopping on the tree,
    Or hear the grown-up people's feet
    Still going past me in the street.


    And does it not seem hard to you,
    When all the sky is clear and blue,
    And I should like so much to play,
    To have to go to bed by day?



    Here's my poem about Bed in Summer:

    Bed in Summer
    by Elaine Magliaro

    Dark drifts in when I'm in bed.
    Dreams whisper to my sleepy head.
    Ice cubes clink into a glass.
    Our sprinkler whirs and wets the grass.
    Shouts of children still at play
    Spark the night...then fade away.
    Mosquitoes drone, crickets cheep.
    Wrapped in summer sounds I'll sleep.


    I wrote that poem from memory because my computer with all my poetry manuscripts crashed the other day...and I'm too lazy to look through my files of hard copies right now.

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    25. Fireworks for the Fourth of July!

    I wasn't planning on posting today--but I just remembered that I have a poem about fireworks that I wrote for a collection of acrostic poems entitled What's in a Word?--a collection that is unlikely to ever be published. Here is the poem:



    Fiery flowers bloom
    In the night:
    Roses, carnations…chrysanthemums, too,
    Emerald green, red,
    White, and blue. Silvery fountains spill
    Out of the sky.
    Rockets of gold sizzle and sigh.
    Kaleidoscope colors cascading in space,
    Showering glitter all over the place.





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