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A few months ago we were going through our very ancient art archives that date back to the old days when the company fully owned all the illustrations. The archives have been a treasure trove: among other things, we unearthed the complete artwork for a long out-of-print Flicka, Ricka, Dicka book, which we’re reissuing this spring.
And then one day, I was talking with Laura, our archive manager, who was just unwrapping a stack of illustrations that hadn’t seen the light of day in decades. They were pen-and-ink on paper, with tissue paper on top showing where color overlays would be printed. We didn’t know the book, but something about the style looked familiar. Something about that girl in the bonnet…

“Oh my goodness!” I said. “It’s Helen Moore Sewell! She did the original art for the Little House books!” (Which were published by Harper in New York, but if you know me at all, I have something of an interest in those books.)
The artwork we were looking at was for a title called Peter and Gretchen of Old Nuremberg by Viola M. Jones, which we published in 1935.

Little House on the Prairie was also first published in 1935. You can see here that she used a similar style with the color overlays.

It’s really something to see this original art up close, and to see Sewell’s technique. The art on the right is the tissue paper showing the overlays. It must have been photographed and made into color plates.




And the cross-hatching is exquisite!

Helen Sewell’s illustrations in
So last week I talked about how being an editor has helped me as an author. But the benefits of having a double life can work the other way around, too. I learned plenty of things about book editing from my own experience as an author and from the brilliant people who worked on I’m Not the New Me, The Princess and the Peanut Allergy, and The Wilder Life. Here are a few:
Be both the coach and the cheerleader. In other words, be tough, but always be positive, too. The first few times I read emails from my first editor that said things like, “I’m so excited to work on your book!” I figured she was just awfully perky. But the enthusiasm and positive energy was infectious, and it helped my confidence even when she sent me a twenty-page editorial letter full of nitpicks and cruel cuts.
Be a bother, and botherable, too. First-time authors can be meek creatures, afraid to ask reasonable questions about the editorial process for fear of “bugging” the editor. It wasn’t until I fielded a million tiny questions from my own editor that I felt comfortable bugging her back, and now I try to keep the lines of communication as open as possible for my authors.
Break down the work into manageable bits. I tricked myself into writing a whole book by writing 500 words a night. From this experience I learned that just because an author has a 300 page manuscript, it doesn’t mean that they’re ready to deal with all 300 pages at once. And it helped me realize that, as an editor, I didn’t have to work that way either. My job is to see the big picture and help the author understand it—but sometimes that has to happen one chapter at a time.
Next week: Things I thought I would NEVER do once I became an author.
Some of you might know that I lead a double life—children’s book editor by day; nonfiction author by night (and weekends, and early mornings when I’m extra motivated). This means I work on both sides of the editor’s desk. I used to tell people that I did a lot of waiting on one side of the desk, and that I was always swamped with work on the other side. But then, uh, I forgot which side was which. They both involve overwhelming workloads as well as plenty of patience. Suffice it to say, though, that my work and my writing have benefited in plenty of ways. Here’s three things that wearing my editor hat has taught me about being an author:
The ideas can be as important as the writing. You might think this is an obvious point, but you don’t know Wendy the Writerly Writer, the version of myself who lives in my head and loves to show off her brilliant prose in long, artful, descriptive passages to show the world what a genius she is. But Wendy the Editor has spent years having to trim unnecessary in-love-with-one’s-own-words kinds of sentences from manuscripts and has learned to be quite impressed by more plainspoken writers who know how to make a point.
Handle reviews with grace. Reading a disappointing review of a book you’ve worked on is never fun—and it’s an experience I’d had as an editor several times before I ever published my own book. And since as an editor I often see reviews before the author does, I have to find ways to mitigate the bad news (“It’s still good exposure”), or put it in perspective (“Everyone knows that The Shelbyville Gazette is hard on first-time authors”), which have been good to remember when it’s my own book getting slammed.
Don’t be too much of a perfectionist. A lot of my job involves emailing authors to ask things like “How’s that sequel outline coming along?” and “Any progress on the manuscript?” The writer in me is inclined to regard these questions with much dread, and even more procrastination. It wasn’t until I became an editor myself that I understood that on the other end of those horrible emails is a person who can help—one who is a fan of my work and can see through the awful first drafts (newsflash: they’re not that awful, not to a person who regularly reads slush manuscripts written in all-caps Comic Sans fonts) to understand what you’re doing. So buck up and turn in that story already—the editor knows it’s a work in progress!
Next week: what being an author has taught me about being an editor.
They pop up on the internet every year, on bulletin boards or else group blogs like Huffington Post. Sometimes they go viral, thanks to Twitter and Facebook and even good old-fashioned email forwards. They’re collections of book covers, for children’s books that are “creepy” or “bizarre” or “hilarious,” and if you do anything related to children’s books for a living, you’ve probably had links like this one and this one sent to you dozens of times, from acquaintances who think you’ll find them extra funny.
Ah, yes. There they are yet again: the book about poop, and the self-published book about drugs, and the therapeutic book about abuse, and the book where it kind of sort of almost looks like the animals on the cover are doing something indecent with each other, especially if you turn it sideways, and the book about Uncle Somebody, because let’s not forget that cliche about uncles being vaguely inappropriate towards children, haw-haw, and also that book called I Wish Daddy Didn’t Drink So Much. Oh, the hilarity.
Sigh.
Yes, sometimes our older issues books turn up on these lists. Though it’s worth noting that continued sales have also kept them in print all these years. And sometimes the books on these lists approach difficult subjects in ways that might seem a little dated now. (Though, again—often these books are still in demand, which means someone finds them effective.)
But you know what’s “creepy”? When people see children’s books as only one kind of book. And when people are so uncomfortable with the notion that a kid might need a book on a serious topic that their first reaction is to single it out as “bizarre.” If there’s one thing that the recent challenge to My Mom’s Having a Baby! has made clear, it’s that a book that’s appropriate for one child might not be appropriate for another child.
There’s nothing creepy about a world of children’s books that tries to serve as many needs as possible. And there’s nothing funny about snap judgments.
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Like everyone else in the book business these past few months, we’d been wondering about the fate of Borders—whether the whole company would go under, completely taking out one of the major bookstore players. We knew there’d be a big announcement soon, and we’d been waiting for the shoe to drop.
So this week’s news—that Borders has filed for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection and is closing about a third of its stores—wasn’t worst we were expecting, but it’s pretty bittersweet. Galleycat and other sites posted lists of the stores slated to close, and this week on Twitter we watched as the lists circulated and the news hit closer to home—lots of homes, all around the country.
Reading over the list of stores from Illinois, my heart sank as one by one, I recognized the locations. Goodbye to the store on Lincoln Avenue that was such a convenient stop on my way home from work; farewell to the Evanston store that my fiance and I loved to browse after seeing a movie at the Century; so long to the store in the gorgeous old terra-cotta building in Uptown. And goodbye and best wishes to all the dedicated booksellers who worked at all these stores that are soon to be shuttered. Hope they find other opportunities in the world of books soon.
Here in the Chicago area it appears that the store in Oakbrook, Border’s oldest Illinois location, will stay open. I have good memories from that store, too: it was the first Borders I ever visited, just after I got out of grad school. After six years of university life I wasn’t looking forward my stint of living with my folks in the suburbs while I searched for jobs, but that Borders was a terrific oasis for me and helped remind me that people who love books are everywhere.
No matter what happens in the book business, that’s still true.
Years ago, I remember reading a post on children’s writers’ online message board (yes, we editors lurk) about how slow things are at publishing houses during the summer months. “All the editors are at their vacation houses in the Hamptons!” a writer complained.
HA. Here in Chicago, there are no jaunts to the Hamptons for us, only trips to the Lake Michigan beaches. But sometimes we manage to escape to other fabulous Midwest destinations, such as Mankato, Minnesota. I’m a big fan of the Little House books by Laura Ingalls Wilder, so when the first-ever LauraPalooza academic conference and fan fair was announced at Minnesota State University, I knew I had to go.

A LauraPalooza Lecture
The conference was everything I’d hoped it would be and then some, with more than two dozen presentations and a field trip to one of the Little House homesites in Walnut Grove, MN. I met scholars, book authors, independent researchers, teachers, illustrators, librarians, and even a meterologist who gave a great talk on the weather conditions behind The Long Winter. (And yes, I met some people who were wearing sunbonnets, too.)

Betsy's House
As a bonus, the conference offered a free visit to another beloved children’s book destination—the childhood neighborhood of Maud Hart Lovelace, AKA the setting of the Betsy-Tacy books. Of course I couldn’t miss the opportunity to be led around by a Maud Hart Lovelace impersonator (dressed in excellent 1940s garb!) and see where Betsy, Tacy and Tib lived. All this children’s literary tourism is making me resolve to get out to Putnam, Connecticut to see Gertrude Chandler Warner’s home town and the Boxcar Children Museum. (Josalyn is planning a trip there; she’ll report back!)

Dori Hillestad Butler
On my way back from Minnesota I stopped in Iowa City, Iowa, not far from where Dori Hillestad Butler, author of The Buddy Files series, lives.
(Quick quiz: what are TWO things all the authors mentioned in this blog entry have in common?*)
I answered the query letter for Dori’s first book with us nearly a decade ago, and since then we’ve worked on several novels, including The Truth Abou
Okay, while we sympathize with the striking writers in Hollywood, this article made us roll our eyes a little: Strking Writers Turn to Child’s Play.
It’s about television and film writers who’ve suddenly found an “unusual” (!) new calling writing children’s books. Several already have deals with a new imprint of IDW Books, which publishes a number of TV and movie tie-ins, so clearly somebody’s people talked to somebody else’s people, and then they did lunch, baby! Good for them, we say. But if any of those writers ever find themselves seeking out children’s book publishers beyond the thirty-mile zone, we have a few pointers for them, based on many, many years of experience reading the efforts of folks who think that writing children’s books is just like any other kind of writing, except shorter, and for shorter people. Thus:
1.) No snappy dialogue, please. Picture books aren’t “talky,” and they’re becoming increasingly less wordy. Also, kids really don’t say the darnedest things.
2.) We want stories, not pitches. Don’t try to dazzle us with talk about sequels, series, character licensing, animation rights! If you want to rule an empire, go play with action figures. (Which we will not be marketing as a tie-in.)
3.) Children’s books don’t have a laugh track, nor do they come with a remote control for switching channels. So for the love of Cosmo Kramer, don’t try to be HILARIOUS and ATTENTION-GETTING all the time, okay?
4.) Booger jokes are not subversive. Not even when they’re funny.
5.) Carefully read and consider the tone of the following quotes:
a.) “I’m a father of five and often lament the lack of really creative, funny children’s books.” b.) “I’m finding that in good children’s books, the text isn’t just describing the picture but the two are working together to advance the storytelling.” c.) “And, sometimes, there’s also a chance to make a political point.”
Did you get all that? Good. Now you know what not to say in a cover letter.
Anyway, we’ve seen this kind of attitude before, and we sure wish we had a residual check for every time we’ve had to endure it. But it’s nice to know that other folks in the children’s lit world feel the same way we do. And we’ll be glad when the strike’s over. If they could bring back Arrested Development while they’re at it, that would be even better.

My friend, Beverly McLoughland, is a children's poet who doesn't care for the limelight. She doesn't have a blog, a web site or a wikipedia entry. She prefers to focus on her writing, the very act of writing, and not at all on the publicity surrounding it. Her poems are exactingly constructed and lovingly polished, and they have been published, dozens and dozens of them over the years, in literary magazines such as Ladybug, Cricket, Spider, and Highlights. But you won't find many of them on the Internet.
It's not that she isn't computer savvy. She is. And she knows how to call tech support just like the rest of us. One day this month, she called about a problem, and a customer service representative based out of India answered her call. When he took her name, he paused, and then he asked, "Are you a poet?" "I am," she replied. Then he quoted one of her poems to her!
It turns out that he has a younger sister who likes reading poetry out loud to him, and she had been sent magazines from relatives in America, magazines with Beverly's poems in them. He had obviously liked hearing them so much that he had committed them (and her name) to memory.
Here is the poem that found a fan across the world. It traveled by old-fashioned print and by an even more powerful connection: a voice, speaking to someone who knows how to listen.
SUIT OF ARMOR
In its human shape
Of molded steel,
It looks as though
There's someone real
Inside. You knock:
"Hello in there,"
And hear a dull
Echo of air
As though a voice
Were drifting through
The lonely centuries
To you.
---Beverly McLoughland (all rights reserved)
Poetry Friday Roundup is at Chicken Spaghetti today.
P.S. Don't forget that Monday, July 16, is Tell An Author You Care Day.
How thrilling!