I’ve been coaching several of my clients through the process of coming up with a good title for their book, so I thought I’d share my tips with you.
Let’s start by acknowledging a few things. The publisher is usually responsible for the final decision on title, and in the query stage, it’s not that important. In fact, some agents have said they don’t pay any attention at all to titles. But at some point, you’re going to want to think seriously about this. Your title is part of the overall impression you’re creating about your book. It can set a tone and create an expectation. Whether you’re pitching to an agent, or your agent is pitching to publishers, I think you want to have the strongest title possible.
Think of it this way: the better your title is, the better your chance that the publisher will decide to use it, rather than changing it.
So here’s what I recommend when you need a title, for either fiction or non-fiction.
First, make sure you know the genre of your book, and identify what kind of feeling or tone you want to convey with the title. Write it down. This is important, as I’ve seen humorous books with dead-serious titles, contemporary books whose titles say “historical romance,” novels that sound like self-help books… you get the picture. Be clear on what your title needs to instantly communicate.
Time to start brainstorming:
→ Find twenty books on Amazon that are in the same genre as yours and whose titles you like. Write down their titles. Try to get a feel for what works with your genre. What do you like about the titles? What don’t you like? Then put the list away for awhile.
→ Sit with a pencil and paper (and maybe your critique group and a white-board) and free-associate, making lists of words related to your book. Put them in columns: nouns, verbs, adjectives. If it’s a novel, list words that describe or suggest the setting. Then think about each of your major characters and write down words that relate to them. Think about the action in the story and write down verbs that capture it. If your book is non-fiction, list words that capture what you want your reader to think, feel or do after reading it. And words that describe what your book is about.
→ Nothing is off limits—write down anything you can think of that conveys anything about your book. Use visual words that suggest a scene. Other words that evoke an emotion. A sensation. A location. A question. You should have at least 100 words.
→ See if any of the words would work as a single-word title. Then start experimenting with different word combinations. Adjective-noun, verb-noun. Keep a thesaurus handy and look up other words. Write down as many word combinations as you can. Try not to self-censor at this stage.
→ From these lists, come up with at least 20 possible titles. Then put them away for 24 hours. Two things will happen: your subconscious may still be working on it; and when you come back to your list, you’ll have fresh eyes.
→ Go back to your title list. Add any new ideas you’ve had. Then narrow it down to three to five possibilities. Run them by a few people. (This may or may not help, depending on if there’s a consensus or the opinions are all over the map.) Take a little more time before narrowing it down to one. If you can, wait another day or two.
→ Remember your list of titles from Amazon? Go back to it. Ask yourself if the title you’ve chosen would fit the list—without being too similar or generic.
A few more questions to ask about your title: Does the tone of the title match the tone of the book? Does it convey the right genre (including time period if applicable)? Would it attract attention? If the book were spine-out on the shelf (so the cover and sub-title were not visible) would it still attract attention? Would a reader have any idea what the book is about just from the title? (Sometimes important for non-fiction.)
Once you’ve made a decision—celebrate!
Q4U: How have you decided on titles for your books? Do you find yourself emotionally attached to the one you’ve been living with since you first thought of the book?
Rachelle Gardner, Literary Agent
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Guest Blogger: Monica Lee
In celebration of the release of Erin MacPherson's The Christian Mama's Guide to Having a Baby, we're doing something totally different! Monica Lee is the illustrator who designed the cover, and I thought it would be fun to hear a little bit about how the process works. Here's Monica.As a professional illustrator, I've designed about 11 book covers so far. Book covers are my favorite type of assignment and when I get that call from a publisher I do a happy dance! I enjoy the process of creating art for a book cover because...wait for it...I totally judge a book by its cover! I know, I know. What can I say? I'm a visual person and it's my livelihood.
Once I finish my happy dance, the art director and I get down to business. For those of you who don’t know this, most authors don’t have much say in their covers. Don’t hate me—but it works best this way. The art directors are great to work with, understand an artist's value and time constraints, and give very concise revisions. It's good to let professionals do their jobs, right?
Occasionally I've read entire manuscripts before beginning, but generally I don’t have the opportunity—bummer. What I do get is a good synopsis and often an in-depth character description (for fiction).
I usually send over quite a few roughs. People like choices and the more good choices you give them, the easier the rest
Blog reader Melanie asked:
How much say does an author have in the final decision regarding the title of a book to be published and in the artwork for the cover? And who are the people that come up with the design/photograph for the covers. Does each publisher have a team of people or a department that does this?
Good question. As with many aspects of publishing, there is no set answer. Remember that there are many different publishers and thousands of different situations, and no two are exactly alike. (This applies to many of the questions I get asked, by the way.)
Typically a first-time author without a lot of clout (i.e. they're not a celebrity or other "hot" property) doesn't have a contractual right to make final title and cover decisions and doesn't have final approval of whatever the publisher decides.
However, most publishers do a pretty good job of at least consulting with the author on title and cover design. I've seen situations in which the author (even a first timer) and agent have gone back to the publisher with ideas for improving the cover/title, and the publisher has been quite willing to listen to the rationale and make changes. I've seen other cases where the publisher has said, "This is what we're going with and it's our final decision" even when the author hated the title or the cover, but those situations are less common.
Who decides the title? Usually a group of marketing people along with the editor, or maybe the editorial team.
Who designs the cover? Larger publishers have art departments with multiple designers who work full time designing book covers and ancillary materials. Small and mid-size publishers still usually have art departments, but they often outsource the actual creation of a book cover to a design group—an outside company who specializes in book covers.
Sometimes authors have very strong ideas about the title or cover they want for their book, and sometimes they have these before the book is even written. I want to caution you against holding too tightly to those preconceived notions if you're pursuing commercial publishing. And definitely avoid sending ideas for cover art along with your query—the time to discuss the cover will be after you have an agent and a publisher.
Q4U: How much thought have you given to your own title and cover? How important is it to you personally? (As opposed to from a marketing standpoint.)
© 2010 Rachelle Gardner, Literary Agent
Lately I've been coaching several of my clients through the process of coming up with a good title for their book, so I thought I'd share my tips with you.
Let's start by acknowledging a few things. The publisher is usually responsible for the final decision on title, and in the query stage, it's not that important. In fact, some agents have said they don't pay any attention at all to titles. But at some point, you're going to want to think seriously about this. Your title is part of the overall impression you're creating about your book. It can set a tone and create an expectation. Whether you're pitching to an agent, or your agent is pitching to publishers, I think you want to have the strongest title possible.
Think of it this way: the better your title is, the better your chance that the publisher will decide to use it, rather than changing it.
So here's what I recommend when you need a title.
First, make sure you know the genre of your book, and identify what kind of feeling or tone you want to convey with the title. Write it down. This is important, as I've seen humorous books with dead-serious titles, contemporary books whose titles say "historical romance," novels that sound like self-help books... you get the picture. Be clear on what your title needs to instantly communicate.
Time to start brainstorming:
→ Find twenty books on Amazon that are in the same genre as yours and whose titles you like. Write down their titles. Try to get a feel for what works with your genre. Then put the list away—you won't need it when you're brainstorming.
→ Sit with a pencil and paper (and maybe your critique group and a white-board) and free-associate, making lists of words related to your novel. Put them in columns: nouns, verbs, adjectives. Start by listing words that describe or suggest the setting of your novel. Then think about each of your major characters and write down words that relate to them. Think about the action in the story and write down verbs that capture it.
→ Nothing is off limits—write down anything you can think of that evokes the feeling of your novel. Use visual words that suggest a scene. Other words that evoke an emotion. A sensation. A location. A question. You should have at least 100 words.
→ See if any of the words would work as a single-word title. Then start experimenting with different word combinations. Adjective-noun, verb-noun. Keep a thesaurus handy and look up other words. Write down as many word combinations as you can. Try not to self-censor at this stage.
→ Frome these lists, come up with at least 20 possible titles. Then put them away for 24 hours. Two things will happen: your subconscious may still be working on it; and when you come back to your list, you'll have fresh eyes.
→ Go back to your title list. Add any new ideas you've had. Then narrow it down to three or five possibilities. Run them by a few people. This may or may not help, depending on if there's a consensus or the opinions are all over the map. Take a little more time before narrowing it down to one.
→ Remember your list of titles from Amazon? Go back to it. Ask yourself if the title you've chosen would fit the list—without being too similar or generic.
A few more questions to ask about your title: Does the tone of the title match the tone of the book? Does it convey the right genre (including time period if applicable)? Would it attract attention? If the book were spine-out on the shelf (so the cover and sub-title were not visible) would it still attract attention? Would a reader have any idea what the b
Yesterday I told you how book royalties work, so today I want to go further and explain a little more about the finances of publishing, this time from the publisher's perspective.
One of the things that's hard to remember is that the publisher makes a significant financial investment in each writer, with no guarantee that the book will sell. It's one of the reasons publishers have to make such careful decisions. There's so much competition out there, and each book costs a substantial amount of cash before your book ever hits the shelves and makes a dime.
But what does that mean? How much will a typical publisher spend on your book before they've sold a single copy?
Here's a hypothetical overview. Keep in mind this is simply an example and the numbers vary WIDELY from book to book, and from publisher to publisher. This is to illustrate that even if a publisher doesn't offer you a large advance (or any advance at all), they're still spending a lot of money on your book, which they may or may not recoup.
Trade Paper:
Editorial: $6,000
Packaging (cover design & production): $4,000
Typeset & Interior layouts: $2000
Printing & binding: $13,000
Marketing: $8,000
Warehousing: $4,000
Sales: $6,000
Author royalty (a typical advance is calculated in this model): $15,000
TOTAL: $58,000
If the cover price is $14.99, and the net price (the amount the publisher actually receives for each book) is $6.75, then the breakeven point for the publisher to recoup their cost is around 8,600 copies sold. (Again, highly simplified for illustration purposes.) Any fewer than that—the publisher is losing money on your book.
Hardcover:
Editorial: $8,000
Packaging (cover design & production): $5,000
Typeset & Interior layouts: $3,000
Printing & binding: $18,000
Marketing: $15,000
Warehousing: $6,000
Sales: $10,000
Author royalty (a typical advance is calculated in this model): $25,000
TOTAL: $90,000
If the cover price is $25.00 and the net price is $11.25, then the breakeven point is around 8,000 copies.
Keep in mind that publishers couldn't stay in business if all they ever did was break even. In fact, they break even on some books, and they lose money on others. You wonder why they're always looking for a big NYT bestseller? Well, they've got to pay their bills somehow. Many publishers count on the success of a few big products to pay for all the others that don't sell as well. To put it more personally (for those of you who complain that publishing is so commercial and everything's about money, yada yada yada...) if you're a first-time author, it's possible those bestsellers are paying for YOUR book to be published, because it's possible the publisher will lose money on your book.
Can you guarantee your book will sell enough copies to pay for itself? Are you committed to participating in marketing so that your book has a better chance of selling? Maybe this makes it easier to understand why it's so crucial for publishers to choose books they think consumers will actually buy, and choose authors who will help sell.
→ These numbers, though they are hypothetical, apply to "mid list" books or those that have not received ginormous advances nor are expected to hit #1 on the bestselle
You did an awesome job on Erin's cover, Monica. I love it!
What a great posting! My daughter was just asked to design a book cover so I will pass this on over to her! Perfect timing!
Erin did a lovely job on this one!
Blessings!
Ann
Excuse me... I mean Monica!! :) I'm sure Erin did a great job on writing the book!
Ann
Rachelle this sparks me to ask. Have you ever had an author, or heard of anyone, that even got a say in the cover design of their book? I know that Lisa McMann took the cover photo for her book Gone. What if the author has extensive graphic design and photography experience (like yours truly)? Is there any room in publishing contracts to build in at least an author veto or final approval for a design?
~Tara
Fascinating process! I love Erin's cover. The pickle on top of the ice cream? Brilliant.
It's so great that you posted about this. Erin was nice enough to guest blog for me and the comments she got were almost all about how great her cover was!
I liked one particular commentor who called it "Awesomesauce". I may or may not have co-opted the term...
How interesting to get insight into another side of the publishing process. A finished book is no doubt a melting pot of numerous talents. That ice-cream on the book-cover looks yum!
Judy (South Africa)
The cover is delicious, and so appropriate. It's neat to have the artist's story about its creation. I saw a two-minute video on the Orbit website a year ago on the making of a cover. It was fascinating to watch, but there was nothing about the thought process that went into it. Thanks for sharing this.
Each time I blog about covers I get a majority of commenters who agree that they do judge a book by its cover. I certainly do. While I understand that for most authors it is best to just let the publishers deal with the cover art, I do think there are some authors who are exceptions and have a truly great idea of what their covers should be. I wish publishers would be more open to those types and allow them more input.
Great to hear the illustrator's part in bringing the finished book to the reader. Brilliant cover, Monica! A good cover on a book always draws me in.
It's amazing how they get the final product to really pop.
I love that you shared all the images, from the rough drafts to the final product. Great job, love the bright colors!
Thank you for sharing your insights!
This is so cool... and I agree with EVERYONE's opinion that Monica did a fabulous, fabulous job. Thanks for the great post, Monica.
I’m a visual person, too and I loved the cover! Great job, Monica. You have a gift with drawing I only pretend to have.
Erin’s book is fantastic. It reminded me of how much I loved being pregnant. Now I’m just having book babies, so The Christian Mama’s Guide made me a wee nostalgic (in a good way).
Cool to see the results of teamwork poured into a project.
~ Wendy
Really interesting to read about the process! And I love the cover! Very cool!
Tara Lindsay Hall and Ted Cross: Most publishers are very good about consulting with the author on the cover. They get extensive ideas from the author prior to ever putting the designer to work. Most do not give the author veto power, but they do take the author's input. Whether or not they'll actually agree to some kind of author control over cover in the contract is another story. With new authors they won't, with established authors they usually will.
As far as authors with special artistic, graphic design, or photography skills - many publishers will take this into consideration. No promises, but some will use the author's artwork if they truly feel it fits the book.
It's sometimes a problem when someone is an amateur artist or designer but they think their work is good enough. It may not be, and it can be hard on the author's ego.
This is great! I wondered how the process worked. Thanks for sharing. The cover is great!
Since you design fabric, let me make a suggestion for you to make to fabric makers.
Writers need writer fabric. We like to make totes that threaten to put someone in our next book, etc.
You did a FABULOUS job, Monica!! I love Erin AND her book, and the cover is GREAT!!
Erin and I have been talking about marketing our books together (mine is called Expecting: Praying for Your Child's Development--Body and Soul). My cover is a photograph, but there are 40 illustrations inside (drawings of a baby in the womb each week of pregnancy), and they're wonderful. Someone else did them! I can't draw a lick, and I'm so thankful for those who can.
What an interesting post! I'm very into book cover art, although mostly science fiction and fantasy. But I love Monica's style, and I love that she gave each of her creations different names -- makes it such a personal process.
Omigosh, Could a girl be any happier this morning? A hot cuppa joe and a bunch of compliments! Erin's book is charming and well written and I think she has a long career in writing. An interesting side note...as she writes MORE books will a publisher help create a "brand" look for her by keeping the same artist for the next covers? It would certainly lead to more happy dances from me?!
What a fun blog, Monica. Can I buy your fabric?!
Good job. The cover seems very appropriate for the book.
Monica,
Super cute cover! Thanks for sharing the process. We actually recently interviewed one of the cover designers at Cedar Fort on our blog and she also gave some fun insights into how she designs covers. I love seeing behind the scenes and watching something go from an idea to final product. Keep up the awesome work.
Laura J.
I always wondered how covers were designed! This one looks great!
And what a GREAT cover!
That was a fascinating post! I really didn't know what went into making a cover (I know I just loooove the ones we have here in the CBA. :). So thank you for giving a behind-the-scenes glimpse! It was great. :)
Aw, pickles and ice cream bring back pleasant memories! Love this cover art Monica!
Since I have zero artistic ability I'm happy to hand my book over to the professionals. Thank God for giving us all our own unique gift!
Thanks for taking us behind the scenes- great stuff.
I LOVE that cover--it's so me right now (I eat two scoops of chocolate ice cream nearly every night due to the pregnancy cravings).
I need to find this book...even though I'm nearing the end of my second trimester, this looks like a fun read!
Awesome artwork, Monica. Nice job. Really stands out. Interesting process. Thanks for sharing.
Love to see your creative process. Thanks for sharing it. : ) Beth
Erin rocks, and that cover is just adorable!!! Thanks for sharing the process, Monica- very cool.
I love these covers. Very cute.
That only thing that worries me in this process is that the cover artist may not ever read the book. She said SOMETIMES she does. But you also said that authors get to put some input into the idea at first? The thing that I'm concerned about are those book covers that end up not making sense according to the story. For example that book, LIAR by Justine Larbalestier that originally had a white girl on the cover when in fact the MC was black.
Do Publishers pay attention to details like that or are they more concerned in having a cover that attracts attention?
Hi Kathryn...I could not agree more. I want to read the books! I have had publishers that just won't give them up...are too busy whatever. Sometimes the manuscript is not done. It's weird. I am so bothered when I read a book that does not match the cover.
Great article Monica, great insight. What advice can you give to authors that self publish?
I recently wrote a book, and had no say at all over the cover. This was strange for me. I wanted to have some input, but since I had no choice, I released this process and hoped that the intent of the book would be clear to the graphic designer....and it was! I love the cover. My co-editor and I got a glimpse of the book cover a month before its was released to the public...and to public opinion. I love it! I could never have come up with the vibe that our graphic designer captured, and from the cover it appears that he took the time to read the book. The book is called Just Moms: Conveying Justice in an Unjust World, and I think it is very ironic that a man and not a mom came up with the perfect cover fit for our book. But, Rachelle, I'd love your opinion. If you'd like to take a peak at the cover and give an initial reaction....please do.
http://www.barclaypress.com/bookstore/product.php?productid=3401
Oh I must add, that we were asked what we thought of the cover, and I think that if Melanie and I had hated it, I'm sure the publisher would have discussed it. But, we both love it! AND, my skills do not lie in the visual arts. I know what I like, but I don't know how to get it out on "paper."