In my blog post on Reading Day, one commenter wrote, "A good exercise for these writers would be to read critically for craft. I know we're all supposed to do that anyway, and we notice examples of good or bad writing as we read, but I mean that they should read really closely for craft. Do a paragraph-by-paragraph or sentence-by-sentence analysis as they go along. Really dissect each little bit of the writing while paying attention to the overall plot, themes, etc., even if the book at that moment isn't at a high point of tension. I think they'll be surprised how much more time and brain power it takes and maybe gain a better appreciation of what you mean by reading (even if it's not exactly the same)."
I wanted to highlight what this reader said because it is a great exercise and something I frequently recommend to my clients and other writers. If you find yourself struggling with your writing, maybe you’re having trouble developing your characters or the plot, go back and read some of your favorite books in the genre you’re writing in. The reason I suggest you reread your favorites is that you’re less likely to get caught up in the story and better able to read critically when it’s a book you already know.
As you’re reading do exactly as this commenter suggested. Dissect the book and figure out why things are working and how they’re developed. Reading critically like this can help you hone your craft. Listen, I do it. Reading critically like this helps me help my authors write better books.
Jessica
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I was just about to make a comment or two on my Reading Day post when I realized that so many of the questions were so great I’d probably be better off simply writing a new post (or two).
A couple of you made the comparison of my reading day to your beta reading or revisions, and I think you hit the mark exactly. As authors you do know what it’s like to separate your reading side from your critical reading side and read with a different eye. You also know how important it is to step back and not lose yourself in the story as you’re doing so.
Someone mentioned that she once wanted to be an agent because she loved to negotiate. I love negotiating too. There’s an adrenaline rush I get whenever I get to negotiate a contract. It’s one of the best parts of the job.
Someone asked, Do you ever read a MS for "lose yourself in the book" quality and then go back an edit?
I do when I’ve offered representation on something. I first read the book to lose myself in it, and then, if the author accepts representation I’ll read it again to edit. Over the years I’ve been able to know if the book is working and if I can lose myself in it while I’m critically reading. It really comes down to how much I’m thinking and obsessing about the book when I’m not reading. If I’m dreaming about it, it’s a good book.
Jessica

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My childhood home is for sale. (If I bought it, the first thing to go would be that WASPy Wedgewood color scheme, added since we sold the house twenty-some years ago.) The picture is making me think about how we--or I, anyway--create landscapes for the books we read. Unless a book is insisting upon particulars for its setting, and sometimes even despite the most atmospheric writing, I tend to plop the characters down in some place I sketch in my head. But if I step back a bit and look around, I will recognize this created setting as a place I know from personal history. For example, in my head Matthew and Marilla's house in Anne of Green Gables looks, inside and out, just like the home of a beloved aunt. Does everybody do this?

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Claire has a big list and it's all about fun. Let's hope not too much compulsory reading gets in its way.

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Mainly because I could, last night I downloaded the Lord of the Rings to my Baby-Touch-Me iPod. Fourteen bucks from Amazon's Kindle store, not bad.
I'm all for ebooks and read them a lot, but I wonder if the format will encourage the kind of devotion to a text that my friends and I had for the Tolkien books in high school and college. I went through three paperback editions: the Baynes covers (I had a poster based on those, see left), the Tolkien watercolors (pale but evocative) and the Brothers Hildebrandt (fanboy embarrassing). The Baynes were for a boxed set ($3.00!) and in every case, having the books meant as much as reading the books. Digital culture will obviously create its own items of nostalgia (like that damned Myst music) but how will plain text fare?

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I'm quite enjoying The Rights of the Reader, the new Candlewick edition of Daniel Pennac's Comme un Roman, first published here as Better than Life, and I have been pondering Right No. 3, "The Right Not to Finish a Book." Here as elsewhere, Pennac's aphoristic style puts the ooh-la-la in Gallic shrug:
So the book falls from your hands?
Well, let it fall.
Some people can't stand to not finish a book, which has never been my problem. But I notice I am now more likely to . . . drift away from a book that's giving me problems, pretending I'll get back to it someday. Sometimes I find that even my best intentions are defied by the sudden impenetrability of a book I had been thoroughly enjoying but for one reason or another put down. Too much time has passed, peut-être. What was a fun summer read seems vapid in the cool light of hiver. But there is always the problem of giving up too soon: one hundred pages of slogging through the opening days of the Spanish Civil War (which is always hard to keep straight in the first place) put me off C. J. Sansom's Winter in Madrid but Richard just emailed to tell me that the next four hundred pages totally redeem the slow start (he retrieved the book from my I'll-get-back-to-it stack, where it was placed right under The Likeness, which defeated me two-thirds of the way through).
I'm curious to know what rules other people out there might have for Giving Up. (And Fessing Up: how much of a book do you have to have read in order to say that you read it?)

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I've gotten behind on my New Yorkers--I subscribe to the audio edition--and am just now getting through October's issues, which were filled with news and commentary about the upcoming election. It is infinitely more fun to read about this way--leisure to gloat, of course, but also no nervous tension. I'm getting an idea of why my friend GraceAnne DeCandido says she likes to read the end of a book first.

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. . . as we talk about some of our favorite new summer reads for kids. A list of the books we discuss on the podcast can be found here.

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I'm guessing they're too busy to read this but maybe you're not.

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This morning, at an unbearable point in Middlemarch--Dorothea is, I think, about to make a Very Big Mistake--I switched off my iPod and turned my attention to what my fellow Orange Line commuters were reading. It can be very tricky to not be caught staring while waiting for someone to give you a flash of cover. I was idly wondering why I habitually indulge in this particular brand of nosiness and then it came to me: when you know what book someone is more or less absorbed in, it's like you can read their mind. Bwah-ha-HAH!

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Having successfully evaded Middlemarch in college (I thought it was too hard), I am now reading it (via audiobook, with the Modern Library edition at hand) completely enraptured. It reminds me of another reason why children's book professionals need to read books for grownups:
Buyers of the Middlemarch newspapers found themselves in an anomalous position: during the agitation on the Catholic question many had given up the Pioneer--which had a motto from Charles James Fox and was in the van of progress--because it had taken Peel's side about the Papists, and had thus blotted its Liberalism with a toleration of Jesuitry and Baal; but they were ill-satisfied with the Trumpet, which--since its blasts against Rome, and in the general flaccidity of the public mind (nobody knowing who would support whom)--had become feeble in its blowing.
That's not only a long sentence, with a confluence of colon, semicolon and em-dash that even the Horn Book wouldn't let you get away with, it--I'm guessing--entails some aspects of English history about which I know nothing and care less. But I'm a confident enough reader to make peace with my ignorance and keep going, even while I remain defeated by Eliot's epigraphs: "Qui veut délasser hors de propos, lasse--Pascal."
Young readers are put in this position all the time, meeting words, sentence structures, and extra-textual references for the first time. It's salutary for those of us concerned with their reading to put ourselves in their shoes, a circumstance more likely to occur for us in reading books for adults. Hard books, the definition of which being completely self-determined. When we hit a patch of French in a novel, we--at least those of us not educated to the standard Eliot expected of her readers--can look it up or shine it on, but either way we're challenged by a text that doesn't give itself up easily. That choice comes more easily to the veteran reader than to the neophyte who's still underlining each word with a finger. Learning how to skip is just as important to reading as learning how to persevere.
But reading difficult books is not just a reminder of how hard it is to learn to read. The sentences in Middemarch are often enormous but also enormously dense--Eliot uses an awful lot of words but few seem extraneous. You really have to pay attention, especially with the audiobook--let your mind stray for a few seconds and you're lost. But the reward of such required concentration is absorption, a rare and welcome state in a clamoring world.

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Huh? seems to be the main question directed at the Children's Book Council's just-announced Children's Choice Book Awards, an Internet election for "Favorite Books," "Favorite Author," and "Favorite Illustrator." The five nominees, "compiled from a review of bestseller lists, including those prepared by BookScan, The New York Times and USA Today," for each of the latter two categories include the expected names (Rowling, Horowitz, Willems, Brett, etc.). But the "favorite books," with five nominees for each of three age categories are more surprising in that they include no books from any of the favorite authors or illustrators, nor, as Betsy Bird points out, any novels at all among the nominees for the Grades 5-6 category. Maybe the Horn Book really is an ivory tower, but I confess no more than a passing acquaintance with a dozen of the fifteen nominated titles, all 2007 books.
According to the CBC, these fifteen "finalists were determined by the IRA-CBC Children's Choices Program." Watch out for the passive voice, it bites you in the ass almost every time. The Children's Choices program has been around since 1975, enrolling children in schools around the country in a system of book discussion of several hundred books (nominated by their publishers) that results in a list of 100 titles each year. As far as I know, this list has no "top fifteen," so we don't know how these "finalists" were chosen. I suppose it could be that these books are the ones the Children's Choice children did like best, but their relative obscurity prompted the CBC to supplement those choices with ballots for the authors and illustrators who were unaccountably ignored. Ya got me.

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Marc Aronson and I have been talking about Boys Books a lot, and about how boys can be confounded by adult definitions of what constitutes worthwhile reading: usually it means a book, often it means fiction, and when it does include nonfiction, it had better look a lot like a novel.
But I am loving this:
Transit Maps of the World: The World's First Collection of Every Urban Train Map on Earth, by Mark Ovenden (Penguin). Unless you are a boy, you might not think that a collection of subway maps would make for such compulsive reading. It's a kind of reading that often gets dismissed as "browsing," because you don't start at the beginning and work your way patiently through, and because most of the text works as caption, not exposition: "Barcelona's current Metro map (4) is a successful hybrid. While it shows some topographic detail, it manages to retain all the attributes of a schematic." Yeah, baby, talk dirty! But what you're mostly interested in reading is the maps themselves. There are four of the Barcelona system, ranging from 1966 to the present, showing not only the growth of the system but the refinements in graphic design, creating and reflecting changes in how we look at abstract information. The current map is an organized glory of lines and colors and informative dots. Berlin gets fifteen maps, from 1910 to the present, including spooky ones from the 1960s that show the "ghost" stations of East Berlin that the West Berlin trains would shoot right by.
If I were a boy today, I don't know if a collection of subway maps would do it for me, but I bet that I would appreciate the way this book celebrates Facts, especially facts united by a theme but untied to any story save the one they allow me to tell myself.

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Thank you all for the great discussion about adults and children reading. Richard and I are going to New York today to see Elizabeth and other assorted friends and two shows: the revival of Sunday in the Park with George, which was the first show I ever saw on Broadway, and Come Back, Little Sheba starring my favorite cop, Lieutenant Anita Van Buren.
For the Limoliner trip down and back I have the new Denise Mina, Natsuo Kirino's Grotesque, and, on Miss Pod, Ha Jin's A Free Life. Should be a sweet ride.

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I received an email yesterday from a librarian who hated our reviews because she thought they had too much plot summary, but she was really pissed that we "almost always give away the ending."
Her first point is debatable--how much is too much?--but her second is demonstrably false while containing a truth: sometimes, we do give away the ending. As I explained in my response to her, Horn Book reviews are not written for the same people for whom the books we review are intended. The reviews are for grownups; the books are for kids. Sometimes the grownup wants to know if the dog dies.
There's a bigger, probably incendiary, question raised by this particular exchange. How do we feel about grownups who read children's books as if they weren't? That is, people who peruse the Horn Book like another person reads the Times Book Review, looking for a new book to read? As annoying as adults who dismiss children's books as unworthy of attention can be, I also feel my jaw clench when a fellow adult tells me that he or she prefers children's books to adult books because they have better writing or values or stories. This is just sentimental ignorance.
I'm reminded of the ruckus in SLJ some years back when a library school professor wrote that l.s. students like to take children's literature classes because the reading is so easy, "like eating popcorn." You can imagine the heated response, but I think she had a point. While noting the exceptions of James Patterson on the one hand and William Mayne on the other, children's books tend to be easier and thus potentially "fun" for adults in a way they tend not to be for children, an incongruence librarians need to remember, not dissolve. Whatever whoever chooses to read is their business, of course, but adults whose taste in recreational reading ends with the YA novel need to grow up.

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Take a look at – and listen to – this delightful e-card from Barefoot Books: author Amy Tan narrates the poem from the recently-published Motherbridge of Love. Once you’ve heard the poem and been given a glimpse of the lovely illustrations by Jose Masse, you’ll understand why this would be a perfect book to read as a bedtime story, especially but certainly not only if you have adopted children of your own. There’s a special story behind it too, since the author of the poem is unknown: but it highlights the questions an adopted child might have about where they come from and who they are. I was fortunate to be able to catch up with Xinran, founder of the Mothers’ Bridge of Love charity, to whom the poem was sent and to which the royalties for the book will go – you can read the interview here; and here’s a photo of Xinran with Amy Tan, taken when they met recently during Xinran’s whistle-stop tour of the States.
Another recently-published picture-book featuring adoption is Grace Lin’s gorgeous The Red Thread: An Adoption Fairy Tale. It has all the traits of an enduring fairy tale – and love as the overriding principle. It creatively incorporates the “ancient Chinese belief that an invisible, unbreakable thread connects all those who are destined to be together.” This is something that many adoptive parents of children from China become aware of during their sometimes long, emotional journey through the adoption process. Grace has indeed turned it into the stuff of fairytales. She talked about the book in her charming interview with 7-Imps back in May; and Just One More Book featured it a few weeks ago.
Both these books are valuable additions to the slowly increasing number of picture-books which focus on adoption; and each in its own way has those qualities which will keep them special for years to come.
For more books featuring adoption, check out Rose Kent’s great Personal View on the PaperTigers main website: “Three Cheers For Adoption Books – And Why We All Should Read ‘Em”, with her recommendations for children of all ages. Chicken Spaghetti has put together a list of books for National Adoption month, as has Andrea Ross in her revealing podcast Thicker than Water: True Family Ties for Swimming in Literary Soup.
…And don’t forget, the auction of Snowflakes for Robert’s Snow: For Cancer’s Cure is still going on - Auction 2 starts tomorrow! Grace Lin’s own snowflake is featured in the PaperTigers Gallery along with others by artists from around the Pacific Rim…
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This episode is part of our Publishers Showcase, a special series of interviews with children’s book publishers, which we are running during the weeks of July 2 and July 9 2007.
It’s easy to forget that the amazing books we read are the products of publishing companies that exist within what some call a flawed economic model.
On this edition of Just One More Book, Mark speaks with Nancy Traversy, co-founder of Barefoot Books — a company the publishes books to inspire and educate our children as the caretakers of tomorrow — about her decision to pull their catalog from big box bookstores such as Borders and Chapters, and turning Barefoot Books green.
You can learn more about Barefoot Books by visiting their website, barefootbooks.com. (NOTE: the website automatically plays music)
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I have just received this lovely e-card from Barefoot Books , which I would like to share with you all – it’s based on their recently-published Whole World, which not only celebrates the world we live in but reminds us that we need to look after it - something that Barefoot Books are really focussing on with their new “Go Barefoot, Go Global” emphasis on environmental issues.
As well as family favourites like The Emperor who Hated Yellow, The Gigantic Turnip and The Great Race: The Story of the Chinese Zodiac, we love Barefoot Books’ anthologies of stories from around the world. Son Number One has taken The Barefoot Book of Knights out of the library on a regular basis over the last three years. I like its format of the traditional tales being woven into the story of a young steward who is learning to be a knight, although it does sometimes mean reading time goes on for much longer than you intended!
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I've learned to do a query blurb, and a synopsis this way as well. Highlight the key characters and scenes in a favorite book. Pin down the goal, motivation and conflict. Somehow it's easier to do this with someone else's book. Eventually, I had a blurb and a synopsis for my own WIP. Great exercise.
I try to do that as much as I can. A funny after-effect of this practice is that I start writing similar sentences. It only lasts a few days, but it's kind of confusing in the middle of an intense writing spree. May I suggest critical reading is better suited to editing sessions?
Another way to do this, take your favorite current author and a book that is so good it is just like a book you'd like to write. Get three colors of underliners. And choose three elements.
Say, Action, Description, Dialogue.
Underline each element with its own color and see how a master author controls pace, plot, emotion by expertly weaving elements through the story to, in fact, create the story.
It gives you a feel for if nothing else how long you SHOULDN'T spen on description in a given chapter.
An existing novel you just love is the best text out there for how to write.
I've been doing that for years. I'm a rereader and keep my favorite read-them-over-again books in three large bookcases in my bedroom.
When I read a book that completely sucks me in, I'm usually not critical. But, after the first time, I'll be reading it to try to figure out why it works, what sucks me in, what compels me. What works and even what didn't.
Only down side is that it gets harder and harder to slog my way through anything that's not "great" (as my kind of book). If I'm NOT sucked in, I tear it to shreds as I read. Useful exercise, but not entertaining.
I find this really helpful too, I have a couple of books I read that help me point out whats working or not especially since I am targeting a publishing house.
There's no way I could re-read an entire book with that critical eye, because I still read mostly to entertain myself...and my critical eye and entertainment eye don't cross. ;o)
BUT, I have critically read multiple openings to books that sucked me in from the beginning. Those writers obviously knew how to start a story, and I'd be smart to study and figure out how they did it.
As a member of a novel writer's group, I'm forced to read other people's work critically. It's exhausting and we have a high turn-over because of it, but I believe it's essential to making my own writing even better.
This is how I get through tough spots in my own work. I pull out an old favorite and am reminded, once again, why it works and what my WIP is missing. So often it's something very simple--like the romance! LOL...it's so easy to get caught up in the plot and the action, and totally forget the layers of emotion between the protagonists which, when you're writing a romance, is extremely important to the overall story.
Often, I feel as though someone is walking in my head. When I come here it happens quite a bit.
This morning, actually five minutes ago I bought the kindle of someone I want to read for that same reason. Not her story, per se, but the setting and the way she set up her series.
Great advice for anyone who wants to play with genre styles.
Thanks once again :)
Thanks for this post.
I found an amazing book by Nancy Lamb (The Writer's Guide to Crafting Stories for Children - and not isn't just for children's writing). It teaches the art of critiquing while reading.
I've never read a book the same since and it has literally rocked my writing world.
I'm rewriting my novel and it was immediately obvious in my writing. I'm now feeling like a real author.
I do it all the time. There was a famous writer's colony in the l950's...can't think of the name right now...that produced a few bestselling authors. And each morning the writers read from their favorite books before they started working on their own books.
I use this technique often. The more I read, the more I start noticing the way authors do things. How they describe, how they characterize, how they set things up. It's fascinating to me to discover these things in the books I read.
I make notes in the margins of books that I read, in an attempt to learn from them. But there are limits. Recently I decided to try a mainstream book to see how it became so popular. I chose one of James Patterson's more successful novels.
It's just horrible. It's written at about a fifth grade level, with rapid POV shifts and chapters that are only one or two pages long. Characterization is blatant and stereotypical, and the pacing makes no sense at all.
The only thing this book has to teach me is "Popular books are Dumb", and I don't think that's a useful lesson.
@Ben: I've found myself doing the same thing. Your idea of saving this especially for editing sessions is a good one, and it's probably easier to compare and evaluate your own work once you have a draft of the story.
@Tracy: You wouldn't have to do it over a whole novel. It can be really helpful to just read passages from a previous favorite, to see what works or doesn't work. (This was my comment, btw, and I originally made it in the hopes that by doing this for just a short portion of a book, we could understand how the reading agents do for work is different from the reading we all do for fun. It's much more exhausting, even if it can be enjoyable.)
And I'm honored you reposted this, Jessica!
Excellent advice. Much can be learned from novels we *think* we know inside and out.
I also find that reading aloud can be an excellent way to get a new take on certain passages. I think it's safe to say that most of us read more quickly than we speak, so the simple act of reading the words aloud forces us to slow down. What sentences roll off the tongue? What sticks in the throat? What do we stumble over, and what makes us long to give up the reading aloud and race ahead in the story?
We notice rhythm, word choice, the poetry of good prose. Readers might be surprised just how much beauty there is in good writing beyond just enjoyment of the story.
Not only is this a good way to help train the critical reader for published books, it's also a great tool for writers' own manuscripts. You get a completely different view of your own writing, and you can learn a lot from it.
If you want your eyes to bleed, read the new V book that came out, as in the one that continues after the original books. It seems to pay no attention to the series (the original series) but I don't remember that much. It serves as a great example of what NOT to do with a book... except, if you read it, it may damage your ability to write well.
This must be why I'm not published yet. I don't reread many books. I find it hard to keep up with all the new ones that there are to read.
I don't get to read as much as I'd like, but sure to my long commute to work I listen to alot of audio books. Hearing so many books has helped my writing tremendously.
One problem you get is (unintentionally) mimicking that writer's style, esp while you're writing the ms. One author I liked used so much description, adverbs, adjectives and similies that I started sprinkling my ms. with all sorts of description--thus slowing the plot and cluttering the ms. Now I have to go back and take it all out...so make sure you study the best writers, not just best-selling authors.