please excuse the forward nature of my message. the following is written for the writer of 'through rose coloured glasses'.
so .. getting to the point. I believe you should retitle your through rose etc book. the title has a derogatory air to it.
I believe a differing title would make the ... more

please excuse the forward nature of my message. the following is written for the writer of 'through rose coloured glasses'.
so .. getting to the point. I believe you should retitle your through rose etc book. the title has a derogatory air to it.
I believe a differing title would make the book soar. I believe the book deserves to soar. I was going to buy the book.
but the title dissuaded me from doing so. the book has recently been recommended (highly) to me.
I have bought the book. I am yet to complete it.
aside from 'an orchard of dreams' I have no other title to recommend.
I do, however, know a man who might have a apt alternative title: duncan smart.
I apologise for these forward/fumbling messages. I apologise .. but I felt they should be sent.
I send my respectful regards to you and best wishes with your writing endeavours.
If your mind is uncluttered and free .. And you cannot...as such...tell a lie.
You don't need no crack or class b ..You don't need that shit...to fly high.
I send these 4 lines to a lady that can fly high.
may you continue to do so (fly high) .. and may you continue to richly write for the readers whom you serve.
thank you