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I do think aspects of this excerpt are very strong: the world the author created seems contained and sustainable. I could see this being a very popular series, and I think children would enjoy following the adventures of the Jip, Pelt and Saymon. What I do see being a problem for children is the over-abundance of information. We are asked to picture the land, the town, to understand that Grinzles ... More

I do think aspects of this excerpt are very strong: the world the author created seems contained and sustainable. I could see this being a very popular series, and I think children would enjoy following the adventures of the Jip, Pelt and Saymon. What I do see being a problem for children is the over-abundance of information. We are asked to picture the land, the town, to understand that Grinzles have their own language, they look a certain way, they do this or that. While an adult might enjoy such a thorough description and set up, I think it should be handled a bit differently when the target audience is older tween and young teens.

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