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A Query is the Rock Breaking the Surface |
The last blog talked a little about how the first 5 pages need to 'hook' the reader; they need to compel him to want to read further. There's an even tighter window of opportunity to grab the attention of an agent or editor to want to read an offered manuscript. It's one thing to write, say, a 50,000 words YA manuscript, and quite another to write that dreaded one-page query, which somehow has to distill all that material into, at most, about 300 words. Helpfully, there is an online forum of writers accessible at www.AgentQueryConnect.com, where a writer may post a draft query and invite critiques. Of course there is an art to critiquing material, and not everyone is so artful, but generally a lot can be learned by careful attention to the sum total of all the critiques.
The opening lines of a fiction query letter always contain introductory details of how the writer chose to contact this particular agent/editor, the title of the completed work, and the genre. Some include the number of words here, and some insist it belongs at the very end of the query. Probably the agent/editor would prefer it up here, so that they can decide whether to read further about any work that has an unsuitable number of words for the genre. Gordon Lish may have been willing to edit down Raymond Carver, but it may be presumptuous of lesser writers to expect such willingness by the editor.
The next part of the query is the 'hook,' two or three lines giving the color of the story and a compelling element of tension about where the story is going. Here was the first attempt for 'General..'
A prepping journey undertaken by teenagers to signal an independence from parents is difficult. If the parents divorce first, prepping is maybe half over. But when the remaining parent is a dominating, all consuming disciplinarian, an Afghan immigrant mother, who also happens to be a one-star general in the US Army, prepping takes on epic proportions.
Most of the critiques commented that the voice wasn't appropriate for YA; too 'preachy;' or too academic. Generally, sitting back and looking at it again, they're right. That's how it's going to come across to the query reader. The actual story doesn't have such academic overtones. It's just the result of laboring to get a whole lot of ideas on the table in a couple of sentences, and using big words to do the job. Here's a later version after the critiques and a couple of revisions:
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by Lauren Appelwick
We’ve made it to Friday, everyone! From now on, you’ll be hearing a lot more from me as I transition into the role of Blog Editor after next week. To let you know a little about myself, Rebecca has graciously let me share some items that caught my attention this week.
Which talk show has the best late night band?
Have 117,000 feet of packing tape? Try this.
Copenhagen is going really, really green.
Is Joshua Ferris a Friday Night Lights fan?
Twitter statistics continue to surprise me.
Can you go without your cellphone, social networks or e-mail?
Here are 9 puzzles to keep you occupied all weekend.
The Karate Kid is back.
Ben Zimmer has a favorite Indian English word.
Who are the best librarians to follow on Twitter?
Is it football or is it soccer?