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151. The Joy of Spooking by P.J. Bracegirdle


The Joy of Spooking Book One: Fiendish Deeds
Written by P.J. Bracegirdle
Margaret K. McElderry Books, 2008
ISBN: 978-1-4169-3417-2
Age range 8-12



Joy Wells is a 12-year-old resident of Spooking, the dilapidated and creepy old town at the top of the hill above Darlington, a sprawling cookie-cutter city that she loathes beyond words.  With her passion for literary horror, adventure and all things dark and ominous, Spooking is the perfect hometown for Joy, and she revels in the gothic atmosphere and personality of the place.  When she finds out that the city of Darlington is planning to build a mermaid water park over the Spooking bog (which she personally believes is home to a monster and the inspiration for some of her favourite scary stories), she's determined to stop them - but somebody with much darker motivations than waterslides is determined to make sure she doesn't succeed.  With her little brother Byron as her sidekick - and without alerting her parents to what she's up to - Joy embarks on a quest that will turn out to be much more dangerous than she realizes.

Honestly, I loved Joy.  From her distaste for the cheerful colour of her blond hair to her fascination with a dead horror writer, from her bizarre pet frog to the outfits she puts together from boxes of old junk in house's basement, Joy is the kind of truly eccentric female character you don't come across too often in children's books.  She's an original, and it was great fun to follow her through this just-sinister-enough tale of mystery.  Memorable characters paired with the intelligence and dark humour of the writing make this book great.

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152. Monster Lake by Edward Lee

Monster Lake
Written by Edward Lee
Little Devil Books, 2005
ISBN: 1-889186-56-2
Age 9 - 12






Edward Lee is widely known in the horror genre for his incredible ability to write some of the most brutal and disgusting books you can find.  His work is usually found in both the specialty press and mass market paperback sections of your local bookstore, so when we heard that he'd put out a kid's book we were surprised.  It's not an altogether foreign idea for someone known for extreme horror to do a children's book - after all, Richard Laymon did it.  We just had no idea until recently that Ed "Header" Lee had done it too.  We hunted it down and are now bringing it to you, dear reader. 

Terri and her friend Patricia are on summer vacation, looking forward to hanging out as much as possible. They're enjoying themselves immensely - playing games of badminton, drinking from the backyard hose, lazing around in the summer heat, and just having a great time. That is, until Terri sees something outside her bedroom window one night...something huge and terrifying, with big glistening teeth.  Terri quickly finds herself on a quest to find out exactly what's happening to all the amphibians around her home, and why her mother and her Uncle Chuck are acting so

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153. Teaser Tuesday – What Would You Do During A Zombie Attack?

What would you do during a zombie attack? Run? Fight back? How about if you were stuck in the middle of a store like The Gap? Here’s a short teaser from my WIP:

The manager put a key into a slot in the wall and turned it. A gate rolled down in front of the door, locking us in with a handful of people that stood between racks of clothing that always looked better in commercials and on people other than me.

“I’ll be over there,” said Taylor, pointing to a sales rack.

“How can she shop during the zombie apocalypse?” asked Dylan.

“Don’t you know that khaki pants are your first line of defense against the undead?” asked Lucas. “That’s what the guys wore in Zombie Apocalypse Now.”

“Right,” I said, trying not to laugh. “Don’t you remember what happened to them at the end of the movie?”

“Okay,” said Lucas, “scratch the khaki’s then.”

So, what would you do? I think I might go shopping too (after thinking up an escape plan).

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154. Life to Fiction: 4 Problems

How to Write a Picture Book. Ebook, immediate download. $10.

The problem of writing from real life events

I’m still looking for a new story, so I’ve been mining events in my life, just writing. For example, my son had to take a Parenting class in 9th grade and there were at least three hysterical stories from that class, including one egg-baby named Adolf. When I stopped to evaluate what I wrote, though, they were very flat. Fortunately, Thaisa Frank and Dorothy Wall explain why in Chapter 23 of Finding Your Writer’s Voice: A guide to creative fiction. This is what I learned.
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Problems with turning life into fiction

  1. Too faithful a telling. Often writers cling to events because “they really happened.” So what? That doesn’t mean the event will successfully become a fully developed story. To turn life into fiction, you must be willing to turn loose of the “reality” to find the “truth” in the fiction.
    Suggestion: Try to deliberately change one major thing in a story. For example, change the setting. Look for the larger story embedded in the event that keeps you coming back to the event.
  2. Too few details. Sketchy. Because life stories are often told to friends who already know you, your life, your situation, life stories are often told in a shorthand. Fiction, though, must assume an audience who knows nothing beyond what is on the page.
    Suggestion: To change life into fiction, work hard to describe everything in detail. You can edit out some later, but start by giving way too much, so the story is grounded.
  3. Point of view problems. The narrator (you) is also a character in the story. But when you write the anecdote and try to remove yourself, the story is boring; at best, it’s flat. You must find a way to endow the story with fully-developed characters separate from yourself, including the first-person narrator. Developing that first-person character on the page is important and often neglected when telling something that “really happened.”
    Suggestion: Removing the first-person narrator and write it in third person is also an option. Evaluate how well the incident might work as fiction. Or write it from first person, but change something significant about the narrator: age, sex, culture, etc.
  4. Too slight an event, not yet a plot. Sometimes, it’s just a running gag in your family; or perhaps a “cute” moment in your child’s or grandchild’s life. But remove the sentiment and it has no lasting entertainment value and no enduring themes or ideas.
    Suggestion: Look

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155. Words on the craft of writing

Revision update: On chapter 21/22 out of 30. I got chapter 21 done yesterday but wasn’t truly satisfied with it, nor the beginning of chapter 22. Then at the end of the day, when I was walking our dog (a great time to think), I figured out what I think is a solution. So I’ll be trying that today. I’m not sure it’ll be better, but it can’t hurt to try.

The blogosphere has had some great posts on the craft of writing lately, so I wanted to share some of the ones I’m enjoying.

Writer Anita Nolan has been doing a series on writing in scenes, with part 1 on how to write with scenes, part 2 on the elements of a scene and part 3 on scene endings.

Andrea Brown agent Mary Kole has been giving critiques on novel beginnings on her blog. The Workshop Submission posts are really interesting, as Mary shows the writer’s work and intersperses her analysis. I’ve linked to Mary’s first post, but she has five up, so click forward to read them all. It’s very interesting.

Author Larry Brooks‘ StoryFix.com has been writing a great series on what elevates a story to greatness. In his first post, he discusses empowering ways to think about your story; the second is about the power of “arena;” the third, taking the reader for the ride of their life; fourth, your favorite “vicarious” ride; and five, variables to consider.

Write On!


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156. I Kissed a Zombie and I Liked It by Adam Selzer



I Kissed a Zombie and I Liked It
Written by Adam Selzer
Delacorte Press, 2010
ISBN: 978-0-385-73503-2
Age range: 14+


We don't read or review very many young adult books for KinderScares, tending to already run the gamut from baby board books to middle-grade novels.  You have to draw the line somewhere, right?  Besides that, it's not exactly hard to find YA books with horror or paranormal themes - all you have to do is walk into any bookstore.  You (presumably) don't need our help for that.

Despite this general avoidance, we knew as soon as we heard the title that we were going to have to check out I Kissed a Zombie and I Liked It.  We then promptly forgot to pick it up when it first came out, but finally nabbed a copy in a recent book-buying frenzy and bumped it straight to the top of our to-read pile (it's really more of a mountain at the moment...).  I'm really glad we did - and that I was the one to get to it first - because I enjoyed every minute of it.

A few years ago all the post-humans (vampires, zombies, werewolves...) came out of the woodwork and are now settled in as a normal part of society.  Unlike the majority of her high school peers, though, Alley Rhodes isn't impressed by the brooding, emo pers

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157. Trust the Process

I’m still struggling to find a new topic for a novel. I can’t separate the story out of the background of my life right now. That character or characters haven’t popped out of the background yet.

I’ve written about several characters.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/pinkponk/517227033/I’ve tried combining a couple of ideas, and it sorta works, but it’s not jelling yet.
I’ve ignored it for a while and come back to it fresh.
I’ve re-read old failed novels, wondering if I can revise one or more; or more drastic, if I might cannabalize parts of one or another.

There’s a two part solution:

BIC

So far, I’m still in the BIC (Butt-in-Chair) phase and there’s nothing that has captured my imagination enough to commit.

Trust the Process

I don’t consider if writer’s block at all. There’s nothing emotional keeping me from writing and in fact, I’m getting lots of non-fiction written. It’s just that no new characters have grabbed me yet. No plot has fascinated me.

I am reading widely.
I am writing daily.
I am exploring many options.
I am trusting the process; it will come.


Revise with confidence.

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158. March Madness week 2 (new goals)

It’s the second week of the March Madness writing challenge. My goals were to write 25k and check in with the challenge blogs at least 3x a week. So, how did I do for the first week? (FYI, I’m counting the first week + 3 days, since March ends on a Wednesday.)

Week One Stats: I wrote a ton of words, well over 5000 … then cut and revised, rinsed and repeated. After that, I started over with *chapter one again. My final word counts: 3284 on the old ms + 1948 on the new beginning = 5232 My check in totals: more than 3x the first week, then forgot to check in since this weekend. I’ll be checking in again today.

Technically I’m on target to make my goals at the end of the month, but I want to change them slightly. (it’s a writer’s purgative to change her mind, right?)

My new goals are:

1. To write at least one chapter a week, more if I have time. My goal is to write and revise revise each chapter so that it moves the story forward and is semi-polished, instead of focusing on word count (which always gets me in trouble).

2. Continue to check in with the March Madness blogs 3x a week, more if I remember/have time.

March Madness and my original goals are posted here. For more info on the writing challenge or how you can join, head over to Denise Jaden’s blog and read this post.

* I started over because I needed to introduce things in the first chapter so that later pages would make sense. This approach wouldn’t work for everyone, but it does for me, for this manuscript.

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159. The Betrayal of the Blood Lily by Lauren Willig

Once upon a time I went on a bit of a tear reading (and, if truth be told, re-reading) the books in the series that begins with The Secret History of the Pink Carnation. I remain especially fond of books 3 & 4 (The Deception of the Emerald Ring and The Seduction of the Crimson Rose - especially Crimson Rose since I love how she takes an anti-hero and anti-heroine and makes them the main characters, and I love them). Anyhoo. I got to the fifth book, The Temptation of the Night Jasmine, and was . . . disappointed. Didn't love the historical romance, not all that much happened with the contemporary romance either.

But Willig is back on her game with her latest release, The Betrayal of the Blood Lily, which was released in January. In fact, I read it the same day it came out in stores, and just now recalled that I ought to talk about it.

In Blood Lily, we follow Penelope and her ne'er-do-well of a husband, Freddy Staines, to India, whence they've been sent to allow the scandal surrounding their hastily patched-up marriage (after Penelope was "compromised" during a country house party) to die down. Upon her arrival in India, Penelope meets the delicious Captain Alex Reid, who is to escort her and Freddy to their intended destination in Hyderabad. Intellectually and morally Freddy's superior in every way, it is easy to fall for the good captain, who has an understanding of and appreciation for Indian culture that Freddy and his cronies lack.

This one has phenomenal chemistry, a very interesting setting/set-up, and returns us to a feistier heroine than Charlotte was (in Night Jasmine). Penelope is an expert rider, a crack shot, and is bold enough to dive in the river to save someone while her worthless husband stands about. Her unhappiness in her marriage develops in an understandable way and her willingness to pursue other options with Alex makes sense as well.

Although not, strictly speaking, a Pink Carnation book, since that particular spy doesn't appear in the text, it is wonderful to follow Pen's story. The contemporary romance between Eloise and Colin was actually quite satisfying for me in this volume, apart from Willig's almost compulsion to repeat (at least two to three times more than required) that Eloise is still wondering whether Colin is actually writing a spy novel or is, in fact, a spy. Seriously. Trust the reader. You said it last book, and once was enough in this book. We didn't need it in nearly every contemporary chapter. But I digress.

Definitely a return to form. And now I'm wondering who the next hero or heroine will be, since it seems that all of the characters we've been introduced to thus far have been paired off, except for Turnip Fitzhugh. Oh - and looking at the author's site, it would appear that Book 7, The Mischief of the Mistletoe, is indeed going to be Turnip's book - and that Jane Austen will be making an appearance as a character. My squeeish anticipation for October 28th has now begun in earnest!

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160. March Madness

March Madness has started, and this time it’s about writing, not basketball! Denise Jaden started a writing challenge for the month of March. It’s a good way to reach your goals for the month and there will be prizes!

My goals are:

1. Write at least 25k on my zombie WIP (and finish it if possible, though that’s not an official goal).

2. Remember to check in for March Madness at least 3x a week (daily if I can manage it).

There are check-in stations at the following blogs for each week day through the month of March:

Mondays – http://denisejaden.livejournal.com
Tuesdays – http://shanasilver.livejournal.com
Wednesdays – http://jenhayley.com/blog/
Thursdays – http://www.denisejaden.com/Blog.html
Fridays - http://shanasilver.livejournal.com
Saturdays – http://ellestraussbooks.blogspot.com
Sundays – http://jenhayley.com/blog/

For more info on prizes and how to participate, hop on over to this post on Denise Jaden’s blog. It’s not too late to join in!

What are your goals?

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161. A worthy question, answered - Dracula for kids

We were asked recently to suggest a version of Dracula for kids - no easy feat if you're interested in the original story and not a Hollywood approximation.


After some research, we suggest checking out the following two versions geared for younger readers:


and

The Great Illustrated Classics version

The links lead to their Amazon pages so you can take a closer look.  Both are abridged and told in more modern English than the original, and geared toward the 8-12 crowd.  Introduce kids to the classic tale without all the modifications so common in children's literature!

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162. Andrea Cascardi on getting an agent


Andrea Cascardi

Andrea Cascardi

Day two of my reports from the Austin SCBWI conference, and here’s what literary agent Andrea Cascardi from the Transatlantic Literary Agency had to say about getting and working with an agent.

Like fellow speaker Mark McVeigh, Andrea was an editor before she became an agent. She worked in editorial at Houghton Mifflin, Scholastic, Crown/Random House, Hyperion and Knopf. Some of the authors she is now the agent for are Shana Burg and Christine Ford,

As an agent, Andrea said that each author/agent relationship is unique. Agents and authors each have different personalities, tastes, etc., and because of that, authors and agents need to find the person who will be a good match, so they can work together productively for the long term.

Before authors submit to an agent, they should decide what kind of agency they want to be with. Andrea said writers should consider whether they want to be with a big agency or a small boutique, whether they want an agent who likes to communicate by phone or texting, the agent’s experience, whether the agent likes to edit, and what kind of sales the agent has had.

Once writers have decided what kind of agent they want, they can research the agents online, look at blogs and/or Twitter feeds, interviews and deals on Publishers Marketplace.

Andrea also warned that both the agent and author should be passionate about what they’re doing, because in the publishing industry, lows can be extremely low and highs stratospheric. The agent helps the author through both.

She explained that agents are the advocate of their client always, whereas an editor must straddle the needs of the author and the publishing house.

Because of that, authors should trust their agents, because agents have the big picture knowledge of the industry.

With their agent, Andrea said, writers should:

  • Form a plan for submission of the manuscript.
  • Be well informed about contracts.
  • Give agents a heads up before sending in a finished manuscript so the agents can plan.

Honesty is the best policy when working with agents, Andrea said, and if a writer isn’t happy with his or her agent, he or she should talk to the agent about the problems.

Stay positive but realistic, she said.

Great advice.

I talked to Andrea at the conference, and she graciously said she would do an interview or guest post for Day By Day Writer. So, stay tuned for that.

Come back tomorrow to see what Arthur Levine Books editor Cheryl Klein had to say at the conference.

Write On!

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163. Odd and the Frost Giants by Neil Gaiman

Just before bed last night, I finally settled down to read Odd and the Frost Giants, a smallish book by Neil Gaiman, illustrated by Brett Helquist.

There was a boy called Odd, and there was nothing strange or unusual about that, not in that time or place. Odd meant the tip of a blade, and it was a lucky name.

He was odd, though. At least, the other villagers thought so. But if there was one thing that he wasn't, it was lucky.

Thus begins our story, which is set in the land and time of the Vikings, in a world known as the Midgard. Odd's father was a Viking who obtained his wife on a raiding trip to Scotland, along with a herd of sheep. Odd's father died, however, after rescuing one of the valuable ponies, and Odd managed to cripple his right leg in a tree-felling accident, so life for Odd is a bit hard - and harder still after his mother remarries, to a guy named Fat Elfred.

One year, when spring failed to come when it ought, Odd takes off into the woods on his own and meets three unlikely companions: a fox, a huge bear, and a one-eyed eagle, who turn out to be gods under an enchantment. Specifically, Loki, Thor, and the All-Father, Odin. (Are you listening ?) Turns out a Frost Giant has come from Jotunheim, invaded the Alsgard, tricked Loki, put a curse on Loki, Thor, and Odin, and intends to marry Freya. Odd does what any crippled, orphaned hero would do and sets off to put things right.

The book is full of charm and whimsy and forms a wonderful introduction to the personalities of the four Norse gods in question. It is quite fun to read and, judging from the free clip available at Barnes and Noble's website, wonderful to listen to if you're an audiobook afficionado, since Gaiman reads the book himself and, as anyone who has listened to his other books can tell you, he's a marvelous reader.

Here's the book trailer, so you can get an idea of what some of the illustrations look like (although there are only a few throughout the book, and they don't, y'know, move at all on the pages, Hogwarts-like):





This title is on the list of CYBILS finalists in middle-grade fantasy and science fiction. The story was originally penned for World Book Day 2008 in the U.K., where it sold to school children in exchange for £1 book tokens. The HarperCollins edition will run you $14.99 at full price, although it's widely available for less than that. Definitely one for the re-reading pile, in my opinion. And should you be inclined to order it, I hope you'll consider going through the CYBILS site as a portal - no additional cost to you if you do so, but it will get a few pennies for the CYBILS coffers, to help pay for the pens that they give to winning authors as an award, and to pay for the lovely bookmarks they create to be handed to libraries, etc.

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164. Every Boy Needs an Island

At the outset, let me acknowledge that I have no research to back up the statement above. No scientific studies to cite; I haven't even taken a poll. My only authority comes from my having raised seven boys, all of whom, I'm glad to say, are happily married, gainfully employed, and still speaking to me on a regular basis. (I am also the mother of a lovely, intelligent daughter, but her story will have to come at another time.) I acknowledge, too, that not everything I say here will be true of all boys, and that some of my observations will apply to girls too. Still...

When my first child was born, I was disconcerted to learn, as I swam groggily to consciousness, that I had given birth to a boy. Of course, I'd known this was theoretically possible, but since I had no brothers, no neighborhood boys to play with as a child, and had gone to a woman's college, I kind of assumed that God would know I wasn't equipped to be the mother of a boy. Let alone another boy. And then another, et cetera, et cetera, until my sons numbered five (I'll get to the seven part later).

As my sons grew older and their number increased, I made some interesting observations. Number one: No matter what the intended purpose of a toy might be, a boy would immediately consider it something to take apart, to use as a hammer or a drumstick, or to convert into some sort of milita
ry weapon.

Number two: Boys are incapable of holding still. I am convinced that as grade-schoolers, were such diagnoses then available (along with their pharmaceutical remedies), my boys would all have been labeled hyper-active, overly distractible, and possibly of below average mentality. In view of their later achievements and those of a number of boys I have tutored, I've come to the conclusion that boys should always start school a year later than girls, and that they should never be expected to sit quietly for more than ten minutes at a time until they reach the age of maturity, which is usually about forty-six. (Sometimes older)

Number three: Boys occupy at least twice as much space as girls do. Watch a group of three or four girls. They can entertain themselves for hours just sitting on the top of a stoop with books or crayons or dolls. During the same amount of time, boys will need the front and back yards of four or five houses, preferable furnished with trees for climbing, bushes for hiding in, and one or two areas where
digging is allowed.

My oldest son was thirteen and my youngest two when I realized that these boys were not meant for suburbia. They needed space to stretch their burgeoning wings. I thought a house surrounded by four or five acres of woods would be just about right. Unfortunately, acreage of that size in or close to Cincinnati was more than our budget could handle and I couldn't convince my husband of the advisability of a move to Australia where there was still that whole lovely Outback to explore.

We compromised by selling our five room ranch-style house at a loss (something IRS agents found unbelievable - obviously none of them had ever seen what five boys can do to a house), and moving to a three-story Victorian on the other side of town.

For a while, exploring a new neighborhood provided sufficient outlet for the boys' ne

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165. More on query letters


Manuscript update: Still perfecting my query letter and synopsis. I’m attending the Austin SCBWI conference on Saturday — so excited — and hope to have a fantastic, shiny, brilliant query letter and synopsis ready to start sending out to the conference speakers soon after.

Yesterday, I wrote about why it’s important to write the perfect query letter and synopsis, and then I read a really great article on the subject and wanted to share.

One thought before I do: Your query letter and synopsis are supporting players to your manuscript. Ultimately, it’s your manuscript that will get an agent to sign you as a client, so working hard and as long as it takes to make your manuscript perfect is essential. But once that’s done, don’t short-change this next part. Even though the query letter and synopsis are supporting players, they are the first ones on stage, and if they don’t shine with brilliance, your audience won’t stay for the full show. So, take the time, do the work, no matter how frustrating it can be. If necessary, shelve your query letter and synopsis for a few weeks, just as you would your manuscript, to make sure it’s the best it can be before you send it out.

When I was submitting my first novel to agents, I worked hard on my query letter and synopsis, and my first query letter got a good many requests for the full manuscript — the goal — but it also got many no thank yous. Later in the process, I revised the query letter, and my ratio of requests to no thank yous rose enormously on the side of requests. (Ultimately, my first manuscript got back very positive comments about my writing, the story, characters, etc., but the agents I submitted to said they felt it wasn’t right for them right now. As I had finished my second novel and started revising it, I decided to stop submitting my first book and start again with my second, which is what I’m doing now.)

Ok, now for the sharing part. Writer’s Digest just posted a really great article about query letters by literary agent Ann Rittenberg, Basics of a Solid 3-Paragraph Query Letter. Ann gives an example of a query letter that worked for her and dissects the parts of a query letter and how they should be used.

But what I like best about Ann’s article is the statistics she gives at the beginning. They might be daunting, scary even, but they’re the reality, and the way to look at them is as a challenge. Let’s face it, with these statistics, the odds are against anyone getting a request from a query letter, but people do get requests (see above) and books from debut authors are published every year. There’s nothing to say that it can’t be your book or mine, as long as we put in the work that’s necessary.

Read Ann’s article but don’t feel discouraged. Feel energized, charged up that you are now closer to getting that request, closer to being a debut author, because you have something other writers must not: You have the keys that Ann is giving you about how to write a query that will get a Yes.

Coming next, more on writing a brilliant synopsis.

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166. Wrinkled waffles and favorite sins - An Interview With Dale E. Basye

How do you know when you’re on the road to a bizarre and hilarious interview experience?  Well, when your interviewee (in our case today one Dale E. Basye) starts matters off like this, it’s a big clue:


Dale E Basye: Just so you know, I don't answer any personal questions or questions regarding my books, writing (in general), world events, history, new math, new Coke, or the New Deal. Anything else is fair game though.


And if your mental reaction when you read those words goes something like this: Huh.  Well, two can play at this game, sir.  Well, then it’s practically guaranteed:


KinderScares: Luckily for you we don’t like math, prefer Pepsi to Coke, have no interest in Depression-era economics, and pretty much only mention books or writing in the most roundabout of ways.  How about pancakes?  Do you answer questions about pancakes?  There we go, our first question:

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167. Rapacia: The Second Circle of Heck by Dale E. Basye


Rapacia: The Second Circle Of Heck

Written by: Dale E. Basye

Illustrations by: Bob Dob

Random House, 2009

ISBN: 978-0-375-84077-7


We reviewed Heck: Where The Bad Kids Go (go read the review if you’re new to the Heck series!) a couple months ago when we were just getting this blog up and running.  After generally raving about it, we mentioned that we couldn't wait to read the next book.  We wanted it really badly.  And immediately!  We wanted it badly enough to pay for it in hardcover (I know...who does that?).  And then bring it home and fight over it.  And then complain about having to wait for the third book, which we also want NOW.


We’d like to believe it was the subject matter rubbing off on us, because we’re not usually like that (or so we’d have you believe...).  Rapacia: The Second Circle of Heck is all about greed!  Milton has escaped Heck and made it back to ‘the Stage’ (otherwise known as the land of the living).  Left behind, his sister Marlo takes the blame and ends up a little deeper in Heck than she was before - in Rapacia.

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168. What Makes a Good Children's Book?

What makes a good children's book? I'd suppose that's a tough question to answer, otherwise Microsoft would have already written Newbery Notebook 1.0 and Caldecott Creator for Windows. A good children's book is far from formulaic.

It seems, however, that Little, Brown Books has done a pretty good job of nailing some of the more prominently recurring traits of good children's books (both novels and picture books). See the whole list at the Upstart Crow Literary blog (a cool place to peek behind the curtain of the writing and publishing biz).

What use is this list to the average classroom teacher?
  • It may help you understand why some books win with children while others fail. The list explains, for example, why a common literary motif of many children's novels (Harry Potter, Lord of the Flies, Narnia, Holes) is the removal of the protagonist (and other main characters) from adult supervision and control.
  • The individual attributes may help you create some connections between otherwise unrelated texts. One successful exercise with every novel, for example, is looking at how a character grows or changes over time. I've used this approach with Number the Stars, Because of Winn Dixie, Crash, Flipped, and Island of the Blue Dolphins to name just a few. Check out this sample recording sheet.
  • The list can be used a fairly accurate indicator of a book's overall value when teachers must choose just two or three titles for study. Many teachers, for example, complain that their boys just don't "get into" books which fe

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169. Read to write


Revision update: I can always tell the parts of my first draft where I was struggling. This morning, I found one of those parts at the beginning of this next chapter I’m working on, and I found a much better way to get into the story.

One of the many — far too many — blogs in my blog reader is Frenetic Reader, and she had a cool post today called I Would Read ___’s Books Just For ___. As she explains, she would read Beth Kephart’s books just for the writing, Scott Westerfeld’s books for the plots, Maureen Johnson’s books for the charters, etc.

I love this. But it also gave me an idea about research for us writers.

If there’s an area we want to work on — plot, characters, word choices — we can read books that excel in those areas. We can learn something new, something good in every book we read. But, like Frenetic Reader points out, writers tend to be strongest in one or two areas, and the rest follows.

If you want to know what books to read for these different areas, read the reviews. Look at what’s on the bestseller lists and honors lists that are in the genre you’re writing and read what reviewers say. If you’re looking for books strong on plot, read the books reviewers say have a strong plot, or Google search review, your genre and plot and see what kind of results you get.

Most of the books in my must-read list I’ve found through reading about them in blogs, but I was only looking for popular books in the genre I write. From now on, I’m going to scour reviews and let them be my guide based on what I’m looking to build on.

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170. Under the Dome by Stephen King

Stephen King's new novel, Under the Dome, is a tremendously entertaining and often emotionally affecting story about, among other things, cruelty and pity. King has called Lord of the Flies "the book that changed my life", and its influence feels especially strong here, where a Maine town is turned into an island when a mysterious, invisible dome suddenly covers it, and adults begin to behave like the children in Golding's novel. There are political overtones to the book, with the main villain, "Big Jim" Rennie, sounding an awful lot like Big Dick Cheney; with crisis turned into political opportunity; with fear used as a tool for consolidating power; with brutality replacing sense. These connections to the world outside the book are important, sometimes amusing and sometimes even insightful, but they're also obvious (intentionally so, I'd bet). More complex and interesting is the novel's narrative voice and how it relates to the revelation of what created the Dome.

(It is here, dear reader, that you should depart if you have not read the novel and do not want to learn important details of plot and situation, for I shall soon be writing about some of the primary mysteries of the tale........)

One of the ideas propelling the narrative of Under the Dome is that it is a rare person who will not, under the right circumstances, behave in a cruel and brutal way. There's nothing particularly profound about this -- we all know about the Milgram experiments, after all -- but it's one of those ideas that proves particularly fruitful for storytellers. In Lord of the Flies, Golding found a powerful template for such an idea, and King has extended it to the world of adults, although the adults who are self-reflective and try for decency often think back to the shames and cruelties of childhood. Shame for the decent people usually comes as much from complicity as from the commission of crimes: Dale "Barbie" Barbara, the primary protagonist-hero of Under the Dome carries tremendous guilt for having stood by while soldiers under his command tortured and killed a man in Iraq. Barbie's shame mixes at the end with the very different shame of the other protagonist-hero, Julia, who helps evoke a sort of pity from the alien child controlling the Dome by projecting her memories of abasement at the hands of the children who had attacked her in elementary school along with Barbie's memories of Fallujah, and the effect is to cause the alien child to lift the Dome: "She took pity," Julia says, "but she wasn't sorry." The shame wasn't enough to bridge the gap of species and create empathy, but it is enough to evoke pity and a sort of mercy.

There are more implications in the novel's exploration of such emotions as pity, empathy, and remorse, but the one I found most striking was how the reader becomes implicated by the narrative. The people who get their news of the Dome from CNN are observers, just as the aliens are observers, just as we are observers. We take pity and are not sorry, because this is our entertainment. There's a Hitchcockian element to it all -- reading the book, we share some qualities with the aliens who have set the Dome down on the town of Chester's Mill. The Dome is there in the narrative for our entertainment. The characters suffer

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171. Page-Turners: 10 Novels To Sweep You Away

Holiday novels


Odd and the Frost Giants, by Neil Gaiman, illustrated by Brett Helquist, HarperCollins, $14.99, ages 9-12, 128 pages. Twelve-year-old Odd finds the courage to take on an evil giant who's turned mythical gods into animals after losing his father on a Viking expedition and crushing his leg under a tree in this exciting Nordic adventure novella, Gaiman's contribution to the 2008 World Book Day. (View a trailer below!)


The Lost Conspiracy, by Frances Hardinge, HarperCollins Publishers, $16.99, ages 10 and up, 568 pages. When a tribe of shunned Lace people try to fool an inspector into believing Arilou is the next Lady Lost (a venerated woman who can detach her senses from her body), their ruse goes terribly wrong and only sister Haithin can unravel the sinister plot that threatens their enchanted island in this exquisitely written epic.


A Season of Gifts, by Richard Peck, Dial Books for Young Readers, $16.99, ages 9-12, 176 pages. Struggling to fit in and scratch out a living in their new town, a Methodist minister and his family find an unexpected ally in their eccentric, gun-toting neighbor Grandma Dowdel, in this hilarious, heart-warming companion to the Newbery Medal-winning A Year Down Under and Newbery Honor-winning A Long Way to Chicago.


The Magician's Nephew, by Kate DiCamillo, illustrated by Yoko Tanaka, Candlewick Press, $16.99, ages 9-12, 201 pages. A 10-year-old orphan named Peter is told by a fortuneteller that he must follow an elephant to find his long-lost sister Adelle in this luminous story about believing in the impossible by the author of the Newbery Award-winning The Tale of Despereaux.


The Extra-Ordinary Princess, by Carolyn Q. Ebbitt, Bloomsbury Children's Books, $16.99, ages 9-12, 336 pages. After a plague kills the king and queen of Gossling, their youngest daughter Amelia must rescue her three older sisters from an evil spell and fulfill the prophesies of her people before an evil uncle destroys the kingdom in this fairy tale adventure by debut author Ebbitt.


Flawed Dogs, The Novel: The Shocking Raid on Westminster, Philomel Books, written and illustrated by Berkeley Breathed, $16.99, ages 8-12, 240 pages. A show dog falls from grace after he's framed by a vindictive poodle for taking away a baby, then rallies his adorably odd friends from the pound to exact revenge, only to realize that all he really wants is to win over his human again in this heart-warming, hilarious first novel by Pulitzer Prize-winning cartoonist Breathed.


The Shadow o

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172. Teaser Tuesday – NaNo novel excerpt

My NaNoWriMo novel suddenly changed from third to first person (I usually write in first, so not a shock). I also deleted one of the characters. Since NaNoWriMo is all about forging ahead and upping your word count, I decided not to go back and fix/change things. Instead, I’m just jumped in with the tense shift and wrote this bit to explain the character’s absence: 

“It feels like we’re missing something, or someone.” said Lexa. “Didn’t we have another friend before?” 

“Before what?” I asked.

“Before this. Weren’t there three of us last night?” asked Lexa.

“Huh,” I said. “That sounds vaguely familiar. I think you might be right. Didn’t her name start with an I or something?”

“Yeah, I think you’re right.”

Lexa and I stared at each other for a while, trying to figure out who our missing mystery friend was. If we had been on a cartoon, they would have gone to a close up of our faces, then shown what was going on inside our heads. Tiny little hamsters running on wheels, around and around and around and never coming up with the answer to our question.

“I wonder what happened to her,” I said.

“Who?” asked Lexa.

“The girl we used to be friends with, the one whose name started with an I.”

“Good question. Maybe we’ll never know.”

Maybe plowing forward like this would be a good idea when not doing NaNo too. I love to go back and edit/re-edit so much that it’s hard to keep going sometimes. Plus this scene cracked my evil inner editor up so that he didn’t even mess with me. Anything that does that is worth trying again.

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173. week one (4 week novel)

Week One of the 4 Week Novel*: Start writing! Don’t stop, don’t edit along the way. Just Keep on writing! Unless …

… you like to edit as you go, like I do. This year during NaNoWriMo, I’m trying something new. I’m printing out my work at the end of each day. Any editing or notes I need to make will be on the printed pages and not in the computer so I can keep writing. I’ll also have a master document to paste my writing in at the end of each day so I don’t get tempted to edit on screen.

If you are like me and have multiple novel ideas you want to write, pick just one for the 4 week novel. Or pick a main novel and don’t work on the other one(s) until you’ve worked on your main novel each day.

*The 4 week novel tips are designed for NaNoWriMo, but could be used any time of the year if you are trying to fast draft a story. This is the second post. The first one was on prepping for the 4 week novel.

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174. First lines, first impressions


I’m behind on my blogging about the North Texas SCBWI conference from this past Saturday. But I have lots of good stuff to tell you about.

Today, I’m starting with first lines. Editor Lisa Yoskowitz, with Penguin’s Dutton Children’s Books imprint, began her presentation by showing a number of first lines from classic books. These first lines introduce the reader to the book and — hopefully — pull them in. The lines Lisa showed were brilliant, and they made me realize something: This is what I’m striving for in my writing.

Here are two of my favorites from Lisa’s presentation:

“Where is Papa going with that ax,” Charlotte asked her mother as they set the table for breakfast. — Charlotte’s Web

“There was a boy called Eustace Clarence Scrubb, and he almost deserved it.” — Chronicles of Narnia: The Voyage of the Dawn Treader

Both of these are brilliant in different ways, but they both pique interest enough to keep a reader reading.

Here’s what I found so amazing about these two:

Charlotte’s Web:

  • With the ax comment, a reader is immediately interested in what’s going on.
  • Introduces three characters right off the bat and their relationships.
  • Brings the reader smack back into the middle of the action of the story; no need to introduce Charlotte and say she lives on a farm, etc. Just straight to the ax.

Voyage of the Dawn Treader:

  • Introduces the main character and the type of boy he is swiftly and effectively.
  • Intrigues the reader because we want to know why Eustace deserves his name.

With a book, there are lots of first impressions that encourage a reader to spend their money and take the story home: the cover art, the jacket copy, the authors name. But if readers are like me — and I suspect there are a good many out there who do this — no matter how interesting the front picture and jacket description are, they won’t buy the book unless that first page, sometimes first couple of pages, draw them into the story.

That first page begins with that first line, and it should make a great first impression.

These kind of first lines are what we should be striving for in our own work. And then, of course, the rest of the book should live up to that.

What’s your favorite first line of a book?

Write On!

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175. A few NaNoWriMo thoughts and tips

This year will be my fourth NaNoWriMo! Here are some tips to get you through the month and hopefully get to 50k in 30 days.

If you’re an over writer, great! Indulge in every bit of extra description and unnecessary dialog you can think of.

If you’re an underwriter (like me), don’t forget to include description, including what the MC hears, sees, tastes and feels, but don’t add so much that you lose the story. After you’re done with your story, you will probably be short of words. That’s ok. At the end of the story, write all the lavish setting descriptions, backstory, character profiles or quirks, and possible subplot ideas. You can decide later if you want to add this to your story when you revise.

Start on November 1st no matter what. Even if you just put down a couple of words or a sentence. Then add to it every day that you can – try for every day, even if it’s only a couple of words. It’s a lot harder to finish if you only write half the time, although it can be done.

Stay off discussion boards and social marketing sites if it’s keeping you from your work. Actually a good tip even if you’re not doing NaNo, although it’s really hard to do. If it’s helping you, then stay on the discussion boards, etc.

Use NaNoWriMo to your benefit. The traditional NaNo rules or word count might not fit your style or project. Use the dedicated time to finish a project, start something new that’s longer than 50k, or revise/rewrite a manuscript. Whatever you need/want to do, you should do that. NaNo is great fun, although a bit crazy, but if it derails your writing, it’s not worth it. Do what works for you and have a good time. Find a friend or two or three hundred to do it with you. You can each set your own goals and cheer each other on.

Have a plan. A plan doesn’t have to be a detailed outline or even a plot, but if you have an idea for a story or even a character’s name, it will help you to get going right away.

My plan this year – to fix problems in past years. Use my plan if you want. If you do, you’ll need 4 things.

1. Novel info (yours might be slightly different than mine): main character, secondary characters and a basic plot idea. (I also have ideas about the world it’s going to be set in, but no outline or romantic interest … yet.)

2. Daily print outs of what you’ve written, so if you have the urge to edit or make notes, it’s on the paper copy and not taking away from your word count.

3. A master document that you paste your daily writing into. Use a blank document each day to keep you from editing what’s already written. Note: I got the idea for # 2 and 3 from the end of this article.

4. Hand-written notes each night on what’s next in the story or what scenes you want to tackle next. This should help jumpstart the writing each day. They’re hand-written so you don’t have to have them in your document or keep switching between documents.

That’s it, that’s my plan, although I might add a 5th thing – Scrivner. They have a NaNo deal for Mac users and I’ve wanted to try it for a while. More info here -

Here are my previous NaNo stats in case you are interested:

2004 – I went in with a story idea I loved, but no outline or real plot. The novel took a sharp turn into crazy land, but I got to 50k (despite starting late because I was getting ready for a portfolio review – I think I did the whole thing in 2.5 weeks). I’ve tried to rewrite this novel several times since then, but it’s so convoluted it might not be salvageable … unless I can figure out a plot for it.

2005 – I have no idea what happened that year, but I didn’t finish. No doubt I still didn’t have a plot and didn’t start on time due to the portfolio review preparations. (My illustrator’s group has a review every November – usually the second weekend. Getting ready can really take away from writing time.) Then I skipped a few years.

2008 – I had an idea, I had a plan, and I started right away (despite my portfolio review prep). However, then I had my review, and an editor loved some illustrations and was interested in seeing the graphic novel when I was done. So I switched novels for NaNo, and didn’t finish. However, after months of trying to figure out what to do with the graphic novel, I’m finally on track with it and the MC from last year’s original NaNo novel is in my novel this year with a shiny new plot (the one last year stunk).

So, you see, it’s not all bad. What started last year wasn’t ready to be written and could have a happy ending this year.

Here are some other resources and thoughts on NaNoWriMo that I’ve found:

There’s a NaNoWriMo YA contest. The first 250 words of your YA novel could win!

Writer Chuck Wendig’s take on the good and bad of NaNoWriMo.

Elissa Cruz has some brilliant (non-cheating) tricks for NaNoWriMo.

Write your novel on FastPencil.com & get a free copy of your book when you finish!

Happy NaNo noveling everyone!

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