Things I wish non-American writers would stop doing: set novels vaguely in America for no apparent reason, and get all of the details wrong.
You can tell when a novel is set in a country that the writer is not particularly familiar with. I do not want to use Fifty Shades of Grey as an example, but it is such an obvious example that I feel it will illustrate my point quite well: it is set in America (I imagine because Twilight is set in America), but the author is English. The characters use phrases that are not used in America, because the author is familiar with how people speak in England. There are impossible uses of geography, because the writer does not know how long it takes to drive between, say, Portland and Seattle, because she lives in England.
Things do not ring true if someone is writing about a place they are not familiar with. I am Australian, and I have never been to America, and I can tell if you are writing a book about this place and you have not actually been there yourself. This is because I have consumed a lot of TV shows and books and movies and everything else that is set in or is about America ('consumed'. I just imagine myself eating DVDs like the Cookie Monster). There is an excess of novels and films and TV shows about America. That's okay. But that doesn't mean you have to set your book there, too, and please, not if you don't know a thing about the place. Then it's just awkward and factually inconsistent.
I am not saying that you are forbidden to write stories set outside of your country, but if you are going to please do it reasonably well. Maybe go to that country for a while, or get someone from that country to read your manuscript and correct you. Set it in a foreign country only if you can write it in a convincing and believable way. And don't set it in America by default if you are non-American. I mean, think about it. Do you not think we have enough narratives about America already? Try to bring something new to the table, please. (Example: Hollywood Ending by Kathy Charles. Australian writer! L.A. setting! But convincing and believable and very well-written, and it wouldn't work set anywhere else. Because the author wrote a novel about a place they love and are familiar with.)
And this is not just a problem with novels set in America. I don't want you appropriating other people's culture and writing a novel set in Imperial Japan if you don't know anything about Imperial Japan. Googling does not count. I REPEAT. Googling does not count. (At least not for very much.)
But this post is specifically about America because there are so, so many novels - particularly of the YA paranormal romance variety - that are set in a vague American setting for no reason. Also cultural appropriation is obviously a much more complicated thing which I do not feel informed enough about to write an entire post on it. Plus everyone writes novels full of white people, what is up with that? Let's talk about this later though. We're talking about badly evoked vaguely American settings written by non-Americans.
So, why are people doing this? Do supernatural creatures only exist in America? (Apart from a brief trip to Italy or Transylvania or wherever.) Does everyone just want their novels to become bestsellers in America, and think Americans will only read about America? Will Americans only read about America? I am sure Americans won't mind if we maybe don't Americanize (Americanise?) all of our culture.
IN CONCLUSION: don't be lazy and set your YA paranormal romance novel in Not-Forks-but-similar-to-Forks, USA, especially if you know as much about America as I do (i.e. not a lot, except for stuff from movies). Research! Maybe go there! Maybe consider bringing vampires to the Gold Coast, Aus! No, bad idea. Too sunny. Write about different places! But research them properly and thoroughly.
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Mental note ... don't go to America, that's where all the bloodsucking monsters are (at least if these novels are to be believed).
I concur. As a reader, I get tired of always reading books set in America. I love finding good books set in unusual, but believable places. When I discovered Barry Jonsberg, who writes really good YA novels set in Darwin, I did a little dance for joy in my library. I grew up there and he writes it so well, I felt like I was back there again.
Yes! I always say when I'm watching a movie (like all the superhero ones) "They're attacking New York again. Poor city has such bad luck." Or exchange New York for some other massive American city that evil-overlord-to-be finds an intense fascination in destroying. Why doesn't anyone want to take over Sydney? Hm.
I base my novels in (or around) Australia. Just. Because. I. Am.
Totally agree! I've never set a novel in the US, and I've only got a handful of American characters - it's my little rebellion against the whole "everything must be set in America" thing.
Well said! I watch a lot of American TV shows and read a lot of books set in the US. I've been there once, and it was A LOT different to how I'd seen it on TV. There was something very different about experiencing it. I suppose because American shows are made by Americans (duh :D) so they don't focus on things that really stood out to me, like how big it was, how far everything was from each other, how many fast food retailers there were, the number of advertisements to do with "showbiz."In short, with the knowledge I had, I wouldn't have been able to write something believable about America.
Steph, you spelled "centre" wrong. Don't you know that in America it's c-e-n-t-e-r? And we obviously spell it right, because we're Americans. Don't you Australians know ANYTHING? *eye roll*
I'm actually really bored of American novels, except for ones in places I'm familiar with (namely New York). I love recognizing places acknowledged in the book.
I love foreign novels. Whether it's a magical school in England, or a few teens in Sydney, or set in an alternative Russia somewhere. (Daughter of Smoke and Bone is apparently amazing. It's in Kiev, I think.) Or Norway. Valkyrie Rising, I think, is set in Norway. Just to throw a few titles at you. :)
But YES. Well said. America can be BORING. Monster go to other places. Spaceships crash into Big Ben sometimes! (I'm a Whovian. It explains everything.)
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I agree. Once I wrote a NaNoWriMo where they road-tripped around America and I have never been to America. Google Maps was the bestest friend I have ever had.
Especially the cold, rainy parts of America. Florida would be relatively vampire free.
It's always New York! A lot of stuff happens in New York! (They do have a big population, but not enough to warrant every bad thing ever always happening to them. I mean, share the evil overlords around.)
What did authors do before Google Maps? How did they all manage to be recluses in the old days? You'd have to leave the house to research stuff.